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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: yyyy
nice update.=Thanks a lot😳

rohini is very understanding MIL..=Very true😃

naina should now stop feeling guilty she should try to be happy with raj..after all after 3 yrs he is back if she sees naina this way he feel bad....==Yaa..Naina should overcome her grief

Naina seemed to be quite uncomfortable with raj after her marriage..i am eager to know how will these 2 get together.==hmm..keep reading..you will get to know..😉

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: prerna1
hey this fic is superb
plz continue soon

yes..I will continue soon...😊

thanks for loving my fiction..😳

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
👏👏👏

Firstly thnk u for starting new fic....==Thanks to you for reading and loving my fiction..😃

dis 1 as usual is different frm ur all other fic.....both d updts wer awesome==Many many thanks..😊

loved it....cont soon==Yes...will update soon..😆

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!==Thank you

Raj ke ghar mein toh jashn ka mahol hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳==Isn't that obvious??😆

Naina Raj ko lene nahi ja rahi hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Woh khud ko hi doshi thera rahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔==Yes..she must over come her guilt😕

[Rohini is very nice!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She is comforting Naina!!!!

Naina ke dukh ko woh samajti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rohini samajti hai ke agar Ritu se shaadi hoti toh Raj ki zindagi barbad ho jati!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Uska jail jana teen saal ke liye Ritu se shaadi karne se behtar hai!!!!! ]==Rohini is very nice by heart...😊

Naina aisi rahegi toh Raj ko kitna bura lagega!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔==Haa..Raj ko bura lagna hi hai..😭

[Toh Rohini ne tabhi realise kar liya tha ke Ritu Raj ke liye sahi ladki nahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur Raj ke faisle se bahut khush thi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ki shaadi tai hote ki Raj ka chehra murjhaya huya rehta tha aur Rohini had smelt a rat!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj toh ab bahut khush rehta hai Naina uske nazaron ke saamne jo rehti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😃 😃 ]=
yes..woh Maa hain..Beta kis baat se dukhi hai..kis baat se khush hai..bahut achhe se samajh sakti hain..😉

Naina chup rehti hai aur nazre churati hai ,ab tak dono mein duriyan hai in dono ke beech mein!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 ==Kaafi normal baat hai..Naina aur Raj ki shaadi jis situation me hui thi..aur shaadi k baad bhi jo hua..Naina toh uneasy feel karegi hi..

Naina jab mann bahut accha hota tab jungle mein aati hai aur jab kharab hota hai tabhi jungle mein aati hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==Naina ..ki thodi si..khiski hui hai..😉😆

Raj ko aane mein der hogi!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!! ==Hota hai..Hilly region me land slide..normal baat hai..

Raj ko Naina pe jo beeti uska afsos hai usse jail jana pada uska nahi!!!!!! Kitna pyaar karta hai Naina se!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳==haa..pyaar karta hai..agar pyaar nahi karta..toh yeh fic likhne ki zaroorat kyaa thi??😡

Ritu ki wajah se sab barbad ho gaya!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She is a witch!!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡I hate her!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡==I also hate her...

Raj ko Naina se baat karni hai ab!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Great!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==Bechainaaaaa..Betabiaannnnnnnnn..etc etc..mushkil bada...yeh pyaar hai..😆
😉😉😉

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Hey Anu update was really very intersting. 👏

Pehli baat to Raj ki maa vakai me bahut acchi hai aur Naina ko kitna pyaar karti hain vo.

Sach me koi aur aurat hoti to shayad Naina ki galti na hone par bhi Naina ko kosti ki us ki wajah se un ka beta gaya hai jail. Par vo bahut hi samjhdaar hain jaanti hai ki sahi aur galat kya hai.😛

I love her character.😃

Naina ka apni jagah aisa sochna sahi hai 😔😔😔,😔😔kyounki us ko lagta hai ki har baat ki wajah vahi hai jab ki aise koi bhi baat nahi hai.😕Rohini ji ne sach hi kaha ki agar Raj ne saja paayi hai to Naina ne bhi apni bacchi aur apna pati dono kho kar bhi kam saja nahi jheli hai.😭Ab Raj wapas aa jaayega hope so ki sab theek ho jaaye jaldi hi aur Naina ab ki baar poore man se Raj ko apna le.😊

Ek baat jo nahi samajh me aayi ki Raj k saath 2 saal tak rehne k baad bhi Raj aur Naina me pati patni k realtion nahi bane😕, aisa kaise ho sakta hai?🤔

Man ki doori itni jyada thi kya?😒

Raj ko ab kam se kam Naina se bata to dena hi chahiye ki vo pyaar karta tha us se🤗.🤗Raj ki mom ko bhi lagta tha ki Naina ki shaddi fix ho jaane k baad Raj dukhi rehta tha vaah.😲Par jab us ki shaadi ho gayi Naina se to vo khush rehne laga hai kya baat hai.😉Sach hi kaha Raj ki mom ne ki really Ritu was witch😡, poore ghar ka satyanaash kar deti vo;accha hua ki Raj se shaadi nahi hue us ki.😳

update soon darling.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago

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saivarsha

@*Rajeevian*

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

nice ud👏.cont soon.....

Edited by *Rajeevian* - 17 years ago

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*
nice ud👏.cont soon.....

Yes..I will update soon..

Thanks for the comment..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hey Anu update was really very intersting. 👏
Pehli baat to Raj ki maa vakai me bahut acchi hai aur Naina ko kitna pyaar karti hain vo.==haa..daily soap ki Saas nahi hai..Mere Fiction ki Saas hai..😉

Sach me koi aur aurat hoti to shayad Naina ki galti na hone par bhi Naina ko kosti ki us ki wajah se un ka beta gaya hai jail. Par vo bahut hi samjhdaar hain jaanti hai ki sahi aur galat kya hai.😛

I love her character.😃==You bet..daily soap ki Saas kyaa karti Naina k saath...!!!!!

Naina ka apni jagah aisa sochna sahi hai 😔😔😔,😔😔kyounki us ko lagta hai ki har baat ki wajah vahi hai jab ki aise koi bhi baat nahi hai.😕Rohini ji ne sach hi kaha ki agar Raj ne saja paayi hai to Naina ne bhi apni bacchi aur apna pati dono kho kar bhi kam saja nahi jheli hai.😭Ab Raj wapas aa jaayega hope so ki sab theek ho jaaye jaldi hi aur Naina ab ki baar poore man se Raj ko apna le.😊

Ek baat jo nahi samajh me aayi ki Raj k saath 2 saal tak rehne k baad bhi Raj aur Naina me pati patni k realtion nahi bane😕, aisa kaise ho sakta hai?🤔

Man ki doori itni jyada thi kya?😒==hota hai..Naina felt uneasy..they were not totally detached ..but..still..there were some problems...which affected their physical intimacy..

Raj ko ab kam se kam Naina se bata to dena hi chahiye ki vo pyaar karta tha us se🤗.🤗Raj ki mom ko bhi lagta tha ki Naina ki shaddi fix ho jaane k baad Raj dukhi rehta tha vaah.😲Par jab us ki shaadi ho gayi Naina se to vo khush rehne laga hai kya baat hai.😉Sach hi kaha Raj ki mom ne ki really Ritu was witch😡, poore ghar ka satyanaash kar deti vo;accha hua ki Raj se shaadi nahi hue us ki.😳==jo hota hai achhe k lia hota hai...

update soon darling.==yes..sure..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

SAFAR ( THE JOURNEY)

PART 3

22/11/2003

raat k 1 baje.....

Rohini ki tabiyat ab theek hai...

Naina kamre me aai...night suit pehna usne..aur chup chaap sofa par so gayi. Naina bhi sone ka bahana kar rahi hai..udhar Raj bhi jaag kar sone ka naatak kar raha hai..Naina jab Maa k paas thi tab Ritu ka phone aya tha.

Raj--Hello...

Ritu--Biwi ghar pahuch gayi tumhari?

Raj--Ritu??

Ritu--shukar hai..meri awaz nahi bhoole tum..toh main kyaa keh rahi thi?? Haan..Naina ghar pahuch gayi?

Raj--haa..kyon..aisi kyaa baat ho gayi..?

Ritu--nahi..aaj..usko bahut kuchh sunne ko mila mujhse...

Raj--What?

Ritu--maine dekha..tum usko market me chhod kar chale gaye..woh kisika intezar kar rahi thi...maine bhi mauke ka poora faida uthaya...aisi jali kati sunaai hai usko...ek pal k lia toh main bhi nervous ho gayi thi..k kahi agar usne suicide attempt kar lia..aur mera naam lia..toh main toh gayi...

Raj--Ritu..aaj ek baat dhyaan se sun lo..humare gharwale humari shaadi k bare me soch rahe the..personally..mujhe koi interest nahi tha tum me..isi lia.. logo k saamne yeh jatana bandh kar do..k maine tumhare saath jeene marne ki kasam khaa kar tum ko dhokha dia hai..maine kabhi tumse pyaar nahi kia..

Ritu--Naina se kia tha pyaar?

Raj--Haa..maine Naina se hi pyaar kia tha...main Naina se hi pyaar karta hoon ...varna is puri duniya me koi kuchh bhi kare..kisi bhi haal me rahe.. mujhe kyaa?Agar Naina se pyaar nahi hota..toh usse shaadi nahi karta ..

Ritu--Naina ki zindagi abad karne k lia tumne meri zindagi barbad kar di...

Raj--tumhari zindagi barbad kaha hai?aisa toh nahi k..humari sagai tooti thi.. infact sagai hui hi nahi..shaadi k mandap me bhi chhod kar nahi bhaga tha tumko..aur agar tum sochti ho k Naina ki zindagi bachane k lia maine yeh sab kia.,..toh tumko toh samajh jana chahie..jab Naina aur tumhari zindagi me se kisi ek ko choose karna tha..maine Naina ko choona...toh zaahir si baat hai.. meri zindagi me humesha se Naina ki ehmiat thi..and I am very much thankful to God that I got married with Naina ,not with you..meri toh zindagi barbad ho jaati..

Ritu--Raj...tum jaante nahi main kyaa kar sakti hoon..Naina ko humare beech me se hatane k lia...

Raj--kaan khol kar ek baat aur sun lo...agar..Naina se kabhi koi badtameezi tumne fir se ki...toh tumhari haalat main bigaad doonga..

Ritu--I will kill her..I can kill that bitch...

Raj--Shut up..and..usko ek kharonch bhi aai ..toh main tumse jaan se maar daloonga..and that's a promise..

Raj ne phone rakh dia...gusse se uska dimaag jal raha tha....Naina ne kuchh nahi bataya..iska matlab toh yehi nikalta hai..k ..ise pahle bhi Ritu ne mauka dekh kar bahut kuchh kaha hai Naina ko..

Raj bistar se utha...Naina deewar ki taraf mudh kar soyi thi...actually woh ro rahi thi...bina awaz kie ro rahi thi...kuchh der baad Naina ne mehsoos kia k uske paas aakar koi khada hai...Naina uth kar baithi,...Raj se uski nazre mili.. Naina k ankho se abhi tak ansoon tapak rahe hain..naak laal ho chuki hai.. ankhe toh pahle se hi laal ho chuki thi..

Raj bahut der tak Naina ko dekhta raha..Naina buri tarha se ro rahi hai...

Raj--Main kaun hoon?

Naina chauk gayi...Raj ki awaz me gussa hai..

Raj--Main kaun hoon?batao..

Naina--Raj..

Raj--malum hai..par tumhare lia kyaa hoon?

Naina--Mere Pati..

Raj--Thanks...tumko yaad hai...

Naina apni ankhon ko apne blanket se saaf karne lagi..

Raj--Pati ka matlab jaanti ho?

Naina--haa...jisse shaadi hoti hai..

Raj--Shaadi ka matlab jaanti ho?

Naina--kyaa kehna chaahte ho?

Raj--Mujhe itna paraya samajhti ho..mujhe malum nahi tha Naina..koi bhi airi ghairi ladki tumko kuchh bhi aakar bol kar chali jaati hai..aur tum chup chaap sun kar chali aati ho!!Aur ghar aakar bhi chup rehti ho..mujhe kuchh nahi batati ho..kyon?

Naina aur zor se rone lagi...

Raj--I swear Naina..agar Ritu abhi mujhe mil jaaye na..toh main uski haalat bigaad doonga..

Naina aur rone lagi...

Raj--arre,tum kyon ro rahi ho?main usko peetne ki baat kar raha hoon,tumko kuchh nahi hoga..Naina..suno...

Naina ka rona bandh nahi ho raha hai....

Raj uske paas baitha...kuchh der usko rone dia Raj ne..aur fir..Naina ko apni taraf modha Raj ne..

Raj--Meri taraf dekho...Naina..

Naina zor se apna sar hilaane lagi...woh Raj ki taraf dekhna nahi chaahti...

Raj--NAINA...LOOK AT ME...

Naina ne dheere dheere Raj ki taraf dekha..

Raj--mujhse humesha doorie kyon banaye rakhti ho?

Naina--haan?

Raj--Mujhse door kyon chali jaati ho?

Naina--nahi...woh..

"shhhh..kuchh mat kehna ab.."yeh keh kar Raj ne Naina k honthon par apna index finger rakha..Naina chauk gayi....Raj pahle bhi uske kareeb aa chuka hai..par..is waqt ki baat kuchh aur hi hai..

Raj ne thoda waqt aur dia..Naina ko sab kuchh samajhne k lia..aur fir..Naina k ansoon pochhe Raj ne..Naina ka chehra Raj k haathon me tha...kuchh der usi chehre ko Raj dekhta raha..Naina ne apni nazre neeche kar li..

Raj ko aisa laga..k Naina ko pasand nahi..Raj ka is tarha kareeb ana,yeh pehli baar nahi hai..jab Raj Naina k kareeb aaya hai..par har baar ek hi baat Raj ne mehsoos kia hai..Naina yeh nahi chaahti.Raj ne jab bhi usko gale se lagaya hai..Naina uski baahon me pighal nahi gayi..bal k..baraf ki tarha jam gayi..Raj k chhoone se Naina ka badan thanda pad jata hai..uska jism sakht ho jata hai..

Raj uth kar jaane laga aur fir usne mehsoos kia,uske haath ko Naina ne pakad rakha hai..Raj chauk gaya..pehli baar Raj ka haath pakda hai Naina ne ...Naina ki ankho me Raj ne woh dekha jo ab tak dhoondh raha tha Raj.. woh chaahat..woh tadap...

Raj ne Naina ko apni baahon me bhar lia...Naina ne Raj k honthon par kiss kia..aur yeh silsila yehi par nahi rooka..bahut aage tak gaya...

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23/11/2003..

subha jab Raj ki ankhe khuli..Naina uske paas thi...bahut paas...

Naina k gaal par Raj ne kiss kia..Naina neend me muskurai..

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15th December,2003...

Naina k janamdin par Raj ne usko ek painting gift ki..jo Raj ne hi banai hai...

Naina--yeh..tumne banaya hai..mujhe yakeen hai..par kab banaya?

Raj--aisa kyon poochh rahi ho?

Naina--tasveer ko dekh kar nahi lagta k abhi ka hai..aur sab se badi baat..I don't look like a married girl..

Raj--sahi hai..bahut pahle banai gayi tasveer hai..tab toh maine tumse shaadi bhi nahi ki thi...

Naina--iska kyaa matlab?

Raj--ab bhi nahi samjhi?

Naina--nahi...

Raj--iska matlab yeh hai..k tumse shaadi kar k,maine koi ehsaan nahi kia tum par..

Naina--kyaa?

Raj--Us din agar tumhari shaadi ho jaati..main toh..maine bahut pyaar kia tumse..aur..tum kisi aur ki hone jaa rahi thi...

Naina--toh mujhse kaha kyon nahi?

Raj--bata deta toh kyaa karti?

Naina--tumhare saath bhaag jaati...

Raj--kyaa?

Naina--haa...

Raj--main tumhe bhaga kar nahi le jata..

Naina--Ritu ka dil toota is jhamele me..

Raj--dekho..akhri baar bol raha hoon..maine koi pyaar mohabbat ki kasme nahi khaai..k usise..yaar..log bolte the as we belong from the same caste..I was least interested about her..

Naina--aisi koi baat nahi..par..

Raj--par kyaa?Tum yeh chaahti thi k us Chudhail k saath ..main apni saari zindagi..My God..

Naina--She is beautiful Raj..Chudhail nahi hai woh..

Raj--By nature ..she is a Monster..Witch...

Naina--Agar Ritu ne tumhare muh se aisa keertan sun lia..

Raj--nahi darrta usse...

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21st March,2004

Raj aur Naina k bedroom me ek badi si poster lagi hui hai..

Naina is expecting..sab kuchh theek raha toh September k First week me hi Delivery ho jaayegi..

Naina k k Parents khush..Naveen khush..Raj k parents toh sab se zyada khush..Naveen har hafte ata hai..kuchh naa kuchh lekar hi aata hai..

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15th July,2004..

Naina ki goadbharai.....bahut bada jashan..

Naina--Kya hua?Aise kyaa dekh rahe ho..?

Raj--Sapne kis tarha haqiqat me badalte hain..wahi dekh raha hoon..

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achanak Raj ka dhyaan toota..

10/10/2007..

Naveen--arre..Naina apna phone nahi utha rahi hai..ghar par hi phone karta hoon..

Ghar par phone kar k pata chala..k Naina ghar par nahi hai..phone bhi ghar par chhod gayi hai..Raj ne phone lia Naveen k haath se...

Rohini--Yeh ladki na..isko kitni baar samjhaaoon??

Raj--bata kar nahi gayi?

Rohini--bata kar jaati toh aisa kuchh hota?Jab se usne suna hai..k tum land slide me fanse ho..tab se ..pata nahi usko kyaa ho gaya hai..

Raj--Naina ki tabiyat kaisi hai?Doctor ne kyaa kaha?

Rohini--Doctor k kahne se kyaa hoga?Agar khud hi naa samjhe toh koi kyaa kare?Ek baar hadsa ho chuka hai,usko toh aur bhi savdhaan rehna chahie .. Bhagwan ki kripa hai hum par..k usko doosra bachcha hone wala hai....par usko toh samajhna hai...

Raj--hmm...

Aaj k baat agar ki jaaye..

toh Naina ko 5 maheene 16 din aur 19 ghante ki pregnancy hai..

May,2007..

Rajveer k Chhote Chachu ki maut ho gayi..koi aulad nahi thi unki, unhone shaadi nahi ki thi..unki yehi ichha thi k Raj hi unka antim sanskar kare..

Raj ki saza k din pure honewale the,achhe bartav ka record bhi tha.Is antim sanskar k lia usko Court ne 15 din k Parol par chhoda.Antim Sanskar aur Shraddh k lia.

Rajveer ghar aya tha..Naina k saath tha..humesha Naina uske aas paas rahe.. yehi chaahta tha Raj..ek pal k lia Naina ko chhodna nahi chaahta tha...

July,2007..

Raj jail me hi tha..usko khabar mili..k woh doosri baar Baap bannewala hai.. Naina is two months pregnant...

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Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Awesome part....it was so nice of rajveer to support naina..a perfect husband material..ritu is a witch ..raj is right she is a monster....

Oh my god naina is pregnant again..that's a good news but why is this gal still sad..she needs to be happy na..is everything alright b/w RN..why do i feel their rishta is still a compromise 4 naina..hey i am not blaming naina i just had that feeling..so am i wrong?

I wish naina had said those three magical words for raj....

Edited by yyyy - 17 years ago