SAFAR..RN FIC..LAST PART,09/10 - Page 9

hi

Originally posted by: varshita

Sorry yaar mai poore week nahi hi thi yahan par so i missed it a lot.

Really hat's off to you.👏

U write damn well.😛

Finally Naina aur Raj ka ek doosrek diltak ka safar poora ho gaya aur dono k beech me ki doori bhi khatam ho gayi.😉

It was short but really excellent fic i ever read.😊

Keep it up n start a new one soon. 😃

Originally posted by: yyyy

wow it was short and sweet..thank god finally naina found her brains...and RN are happy together that's so nice...

Originally posted by: saridena

hi

thks for the pm dear==Thanks to you dear..

it is simply very emotional ff yaar==I am honoured..😳

the way u expressed were mindblowing==Thanks for the compliment..

couldnot have missed it

mainly feeligs were expressed throught this ff

keep writing ff

luv soumya

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I will send you the link..if I write some other short stories in future..thanks again..

Originally posted by: prerna1

too good dear really very emotional fic

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

IT WAS WONDERFUL FIC.............👏👏==Thanks..

THIS PART WAS BEAUTIFUL ...........DIALOUGES N D DISPLAY OF EMOTIONS WER ABSOLUTELY AWESOME........==I got emotional too..while writing..

UR DIS FIC TOO AS USUAL WAS AGAIN A MARVELLOUS1 FROM UR SIDE......⭐️==thanks..😆

PLZZZ DO WRITE SUCH GR8 FIC N ==I will..

WAITING FOR ANOTHER SUCH FROM UR COLLECTION==I will inform you..

Originally posted by: rituka7

too good
the last part was awesome
the concept of fiction is good

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Anu,

my SAFAR with Raj n Naina is very exiting....it's been rollercoaster ride of emotions for me...i luved this Safar...n not able to forget...👏




hey m commenting because this is last part from now on m exams r stating so wait for my comment....

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

I have finally read the whole FF....thanks for letting me know....i would not want to have missed reading this.....and what can i say except that each part was.....

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME......................

MINDBLOWING......................

SUPERB.................................

ROCKING................................

AMAZING................................

JUST TOO GOOD....................

LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT........................

EXCELLENT.......................

FANTABULOUS.....................

Always keep writing.......

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Ye raha part 5 ka reply:-

Ye Raj bhi na aise daata jaata hai kisi ko😡 us ko bd k din galat baat hai na ek to Naina itni dukhi thi aur uper se Raj ne us ko aur jyada daat diya😭. Kuch had tak Raj ka aisa kehna bhi sahi hai vo bhi kya kare bechara😕 Naina ka chehra dekhe bina reh nahi sakta hai vo 😃aur saamne jab aati hai vo to bhi un dono me doori itni jyada hoti hai ki vo doori Raj ko saddiyon ki doori lagne lagti hai😉 aur vo pal pal Naina se door rehne k liye apni strength collect karta hai to is haalat me us ka aise respond karna samajh aata hai. Isiliye Naina Raj se milne bhi nahi jaati hai kyounki us ko lagta hai ki is tarah vo Raj ko week kar degi jo vo bhi nahi chahti hai.😒

Pata nahi agal bagal k logon aur humare samaj k so called thekedaaron ko kya problem😔hai na khud chain se jeete hain na kisi ko jeene dete hain😳😳😳.😳Sab k sab apna kaam chod kar doosre k tensions me jyada maza lete hain🤢 irritating ppl of our society😈.😈😈😈 Naina ko kuch kehne se pehle Naina ki haalat nahi dekh sakte bus bola karenge faltoo,😲 baithe baithe koi gossip k liye mudda jo chahiye na.😡

Vaise kuch bhi ho Raj se accha Naina ko shayad hi koi samjh lekyounki jahan jahan Raj ko laga Naina jaa sakti hai sach me un sab jagaho par gayi thi😛 Naina ye alag baat hai ki milli nahi vahan , vahan se nikal gayi thi ye alag baat hai.🤔

Wonderful update.👍🏼

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Ye raha last part ka reply:-

Accha hua time rehte hi Raj ko pata chal gaya varna pata nahi sach me is baar bhi kahin kuch ho jaata Naina ko to pata nahi kya hota😕? Raj to poori tarah se toot hi gaya hota na😭, bhala ho jo photo rakhi hue thi Naina ki purse me to Naina ko dhoondhne me asaani hue😛.Naina bhi na kitni paagal hai aise haalat me pahaad par chadne ki kya jaroort thi😲? Us ko kya laga ki apni zindagi khatam karne se sab theek ho jaata hai😡 pagal kahin ki.

Raj jab parol par aaya tha Naina k paas 😉, aaya tha main to Naina se milne hi 😆ye alag baat hai ki reason chacha ka antim sanskaar hi tha par Naina ka gusaa jhelna pada na. Vaise bhi kisi ko itna daat kar hum kaise umeed kar sakte hain ki vo fauran maan jaaye🤢.Raj bhi na kam nahi hai Naina ko mana bhi liya sorry bhi bola aur apni chahat bhi poori kar li jo pichle kai saalon se adhoori thi.☺️

Naina ko dar tha ki kahin pichali baar ki tarah se is baar bhi vo Raj ko na kho de🤔 par aisa nahi hua is baar😊. Us k dil me jo dar baith gaya tha ab v humesha k liye nikal gaya aur Raj aur Naina ka pyaar ka naya safar shuru ho gayaand i am very happy for that. Naina k do bacche ho gayeaur vo bimaar bhi pad gayi😒thi par ab theek hai.😃

Party me bhi dono ek doosre ko hi dekh rahe hain😛 k kitne dino baad dono ki zindagi me khushi laut kar aayi hai.😃

Hat's off to u for this Durga Pooja special fic.👏

Aise hi v hope for a Diwali fic too.😉

Superb👏, outstanding⭐️ , awesome👍🏼, mindblowing🤗and history fic😎.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!!

Naina kya kar rahi hai??😕 😕 😕 😕Kahi bhi jaa rahi hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Aur ish haalat mein pahad chad rahi hai!!!! Pagal ho gayi hai!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj shaanti se jee paye isilye Naina jaa rahi hai!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Usko lagta hai isse Raj ki zindagi asan ho jayegi!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj hamesha apne paas Naina ki photo rakhta tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj samaj gaya ke Raj fansa huya hai isilye Naina yeh kar rahi hai!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina toh Raj se theek se baat bhi nahi kar rahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Woh Raj ke paas nahi aana chahti!!!!

Magar Raj usse dur nahi jaana chahta!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊!Ghar mein hai toh har pal uske saath bithana chahta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne gale lagaya aur yeh sab kaha par Naina par toh koi asar hi nahi ho raha hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj kareeb aaya toh Naina khudko chudane ki koshish karne lagi!!!! Naina Raj ke ush baat ke liye naraz hai isliye??😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne maafi maangi tab rone lagi!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Phir sab theek ho gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally dono saath thhe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Rohiniji ko shaque huya toh pata chala!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina is really strange!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Usse in sab baaton ka bhi dhyan nahi hai!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina was two months pregnant aur ish baat se sab kitne khush ho gaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj toh uchhal pada lekin Naina ghoon soom ho gayi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔And she started having nightmares!!!!

Naina ki tarah car aayi toh usse laga usse marne aa rahi hai aur woh peeche hatne lagi!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O God!!!!

Magar woh geerne se pehle hi Raj ne uska haath pakad liya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛And he hugged her and Naina fainted!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina theek hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj ne ish baar Naina ko bacha liya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Woh waqt pe pahuch gaya!!!!!

Raj hamesha Naina ko bachata aaya hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Bas ek baar der ho gayi thi!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Sab theek hai par abhi bhi Raj ulta sidha soch raha hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina ko hosh aaya and she hugged Raj!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ab sab kuch ek bura sapna jaisa lagta hai aur aaj woh raat khatam huyi aur Raj uske saath hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin ne finally shaadi karli!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏Toh janab bahut choosy thhe!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛

Rahul aur Rimjhim Raj aur Naina ke do bacche!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ek saath dodo!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats just great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

In bacchon ke paida hone ke baad Naina bahut bimaar padh gayi thi!!!! Thats sad!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Isbaar Raj aur Naina ke sapne pure ho gaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Great choice of cast for Arjun and Rohini!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Raj aur Naina ab saath hai aur unhone ek dusre ke dil tak ka safar pura kar liya hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj aur Naina ka naya safar ab shuru huya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊