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SAFAR(THE JOURNEY)



PART 4



Naina jaa rahi hai..kyon jaa rahi hai..kis lia jaa rahi hai..usko hosh nahi hai..ab tak sab kuchh theek tha,par jab se yeh pregnancy ki baat saamne aai hai.. Naina apna sara hosh kho chuki hai,ek anajan sa khauff uske mann me ghar bana chuka hai..peechhli baar jab aisa hua..tab Raj ko apni azadi khoni padi ..ab k baar..Raj land slide me fansa hai..jis pal yeh khabar aai Naina k paas.. usne aur kuchh nahi dekha..nikal padi..Raj ki talaash me,par Raj ko dhoondh ne jab baahar nikli..sab gadbad ho gaya..har gali,har road,har theekana ..sab kuchh jaise ulat palat ho gaya...ankho k saamne andhera chhaa gaya..aur anjane kisi raaste ki taraf woh chal padi..


17th August,2004...

Raj Kalka gaya hai...agle din subha lautega..aisa bol kar gaya hai..

Raj ne raat k 8 baje Naina ko phone kia..

Raj--apna khayal rakhna..main kal subha aa jaaoonga..

Naina--kaam khatam ho gaya?

Raj--Haa..aaj shaam ko hi..aaj hi ghar aa sakta tha..par bahut thak gaya hoon..drive kar k ana...mushkil hai..main ata hoon kal...


Naina--shaam ko agar rawana hote..toh..zyada se zyada 10 baj jaate,...

Raj--tum chaahti ho k main ghar aa jaaoon?abhi?

Naina khamosh rahi..

Raj--main kuchh poochh raha hoon..

Naina--jaisa tum theek samjho..bye..



raat k 2 baje achanak ek awaz se Naina ki neend toot gayi..zor se kaanch tootne ki awaz thi woh..Naina darr gayi..uth kar baithi...usne dekha..uski tasveer jo Raj ne banai hui thi..woh geer gayi hai..kisine zor se patak dia hai..



Ritu shuru se jaanti thi..is ghar k logo ki aadat..ghar k kisi naukar ko paise de kar usne duplicate keys banvai thi..Raj k Parents kis waqt sote hain..yeh bhi jaanti hai Ritu,chup chaap ghar k andar aai,aur har kamre ko baahar se bandh kar dia..Naina k kamre me gayi..aur Naina ki tasveer ko dekha usne.. uska dimaag jal gaya..usne deewar se woh frame utaar kar tasveer ko zameen par patak dia..


Naina darr gayi...photo ko utha ne aai..aur us par kisine vaar kia..toote hue kaanch se..Naina ne haath se roka...

Ritu--Raj k saath rahogi??Uski aulad paida karogi??bhool jaao...

Naina--Dekho...maine kuchh nahi kia...


Naina ne zor se pukara..
" Mummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.. Dadyyyyyyyyyyyy ...bachao mujhe koi..."

Ritu--koi nahi aayega...

cheekhne ki awaz se Rohini ki neend khul gayi..woh darwaza kholne gayi.. aur dekha darwaza bandh hai...

Arjun--main darwaza todne ki koshish karta hoon,tum Police ko phone karo...


Rohini--Jee...

pal bhar me pure ghar me hulchul...Ritu ne Naina ko hostage bana lia tha.. koi aage nahi jaa pa raha tha..naukar chaakar sab jaag gaye the...


Arjun--Ritu..yeh kyaa hai..chhodo Naina ko...

Rohini--Ritu...woh Maa bannewali hai..us par taras khaao...


Ritu--aaj yeh kissa hi khatam kar doongi..

Arjun--Police se nahi bachogi tum....

Ritu--Apni bahu ko bacha lo..fir baat karna...

Ritu ne kamre ki haalat toh tahes nahes kar di thi...ab usne Naina k haath par khanjar chala dia...khoon k chheeten deewar par jaa kar lag gaye....Naina ne akhri koshish ki..dhakka de kar bhaagna chaha usne....par daurna uske lia mumkin nahi tha...




Police pahuch chuki thi..Ritu Naina ko ghar k baahar lawn me le aai..ghasit te hue...Police warn karne lagi..par koi faida nahi hua..aur fir goli chali...


sab ne dekha..Raj ne goli chalai...Ritu par..kab woh peechhe se aa gaya tha.. Ritu ne nahi dekha..

pahle yeh hadsa..aur fir goli chalne ki awaz...Naina geer padi..

Police k saamne Raj ne goli chalai..Raj ko giraftar kia gaya..Naina ko hospital lekar gaye..

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Naina ka operation karna pada..premature delivery hi karani thi..par Naina jhel nahi paai..


Jab hosh aya..tab Raj ko dhoondha usne..Raj nahi tha..Doctor ne kaha.."be strong.."

Naina--mera Beta yaa Beti?

Doctor--Beti thi..


Naina--thi????

Doctor--bacha nahi paaye usko..

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Doctor ne permission nahi dia Naina ko Court jaane ki..par fir bhi Naina gayi..

29th September,2004..

Raj k khilaaf murder k charges..

Raj--Ritu ko maine maar dala..mujhe is baat ka koi afsos nahi..agar usko nahi maarta..toh Naina ki jaan jaati..

Procecutor--aap unke leg par yaa arms par shoot kar sakte the..

Raj--kyaa hota?zinda rehti..aur fir Naina par humla karti..ho sakta hai..mere bachcha bhi uske nishaane par hota...


bahes hone lagi...par koi nateeja nahi nikla...


Ritu ki Maa ne aise me Case ka rukh badal dia..

"Jab se Naina se Raj ki shaadi hui thi..tab se Ritu jalan k maare sab ka jeena haram kar rahi thi..uska violent nature baahar aa raha tha..jab usne suna..k Naina pregnant hai..tab se woh aur zyada violent ho gayi..maine usko ek Psychriatist k paas treatment k lia bheja..Raj ne goli chalai hai..maanti hoon.. kyonki Ritu ne bahut baar pareshaan kia hai Naina ko..bar bar..Ritu ko zinda chhod dia jata..toh woh fir se humla karti...infact uske is violence se main bhi darrne lagi thi...Mujhe afsos hai..k Ritu ki wajah se Naina k saath yeh sab ho gaya..Raj ne haalaat k haathon majboor hokar goli chalai hai.."



fir bhi,,,Raj ko saza mili..kyonki..Raj ne 4 golian chalai thi....Procecutor ne yeh kaha..k jaha par Ritu k pair me goli chalai jaa sakti thi...waha par Ritu k peeth par 4 goli lagi..haalaat chaahe kuchh bhi ho..it's a case of Murder..

Raj ko 3 saal ki saza hui aur Raj ne khud hi apna jurm kabool kar lia,yeh kaha ..k Ritu ko woh jaan se maarna chaahta tha..Naina aur Raj k beech Ritu bar bar aa rahi thi..


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Raj ko jail le kar jaa rahe hain..haath me hathkadi..


Naina Raj ka haath nahi chhod rahi hai...Raj ko nahi jaane degi...Naina ro rahi hai...Rohini samhaal rahi hai..Naina paagalon ki tarha ro rahi hai.Raj ka haath nahi chhod rahi hai....finally lady Police ne Naina ko chhudaya..

Raj ko jail le gaye...



logon ka kyaa hai?Gossip karne ka koi topic toh chahie...log fir se purani baatein uchhalne lage..wahi purani baatein..


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Pakdandi se Naina guzar rahi hai...ek jagah rook gayi...

"Excuse me..are you alright??" ek Foreign tourist ne poochha...


Naina--Yaa..I am fine..

"Can you tell me where can get a Car to go to Chamba..?"

Naina--yes..here is the way to Shimla Town and Market...you go there..you can contact the ITDC Office also..they will arrange everything...


"Thanks Ma'm.."

Naina--Welcome..



Naina fir se chalne lagi..par usko hosh aya ab...woh ghar par nahi hai..ghar se kyon nikli woh??Raj toh ghar aa bhi gaya hoga..usiko dhoondh raha hoga...Naina yeha kyaa kar rahi hai?achanak usko mazdooron ki baatein sunai di...paas hi me Saw Mill hai..haa..Raj hi maalik hai iska...


Naina gayi udhar...

"Namaste Bibijee.."

Naina--tumhara Beta kaisa hai ?usko toh bukhar tha na?

"Jee??Jee nahi.."

Naina--Main hi kal hi davai de kar gayi usko..


"Bibijee..kyaa bol rahi hain aap??"


Naina--haa..main kal hi toh aai thi..tumhare ghar..fir tumhare Saab k saath main yehi se ghar gayi..

"Kal..?Bibijee...Saab ko jail gaye 3 saal ho gaye hain,kal kaise aa sakte hain. Aap baithie...baithie yeha..main aapko ghar pahuchane ka intezam karta hoon.."


woh admi gaadi ka intezam karne gaya..waapas aya..dekha..Naina waha nahi thi..



Naveen Raj k ghar aya ..Taxi pakad k..

Rohini--Raj kaha hai??

Naveen--aapne kaha ..k Naina ghar pe nahi hai..woh Naina ko dhoondhne gaya hai...mujhse yehi kaha..k Naina ko lekar hi lautega...



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shaam hone hi waali hai..Raj dekh raha hai..har road par..har modh par..par Naina nahi mil rahi hai..



Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey dear... excellent part..
naina puri paagal hi hai... agar ghar par hoti toh raj se aasani se mil sakti thi.....
nyways hope they meet soon... life hasnt been fair to them!!
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
too good dear
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina ke dil mein darr ghar kar gaya hai jab se woh phir se pregnant huyi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aisi haalat mein woh Raj ko dhundhne gayi hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Ab uski ankhon ke saamne adhera hai aur pata nahi woh kis taraf chali gayi!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Ish haalat mein aise yahan waha jana nahi chahiye tha usse!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj bahar gaya tha aur phone karta hai toh Naina kehti hai agar shaam ko nikalte toh aa jata!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Lagta hai Naina chahti hai ke Raj uske paas jaldi se aa jaye!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj bhi yeh baat samaj gaya tabhi toh pucch raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ritu ne Raj ki banayi huyi tasveer ko dekhkar gusse mein usse patak diya!!!!

Ish Ritu ko sab kuch pata hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Woh kitni asani se ghar mein ghus gayi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Ritu ne Naina ko pakad rakha hai aur koi kuch nahi kar paa raha hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!

Yeh jab tak hero nahi aata koi kuch nahi kar sakta kya??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Ritu ne Naina ke haath par khanjar chala diya magar Naina daur bhi toh nahi sakti ish haalat mein!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Police for a change time pe aayi hai magar kuch kar nahi rahi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Useless!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Ab police kuch nahi karegi toh Raj ko hi goli chalani padegi naa!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ush haalat mein bhi court gayi!!!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne bhi kabool kar liya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Kya zaroorat thi aise bolne ki ke woh Ritu ko marna chahta tha!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Kam se kam Ritu ki maa ne toh favour mein gavahi di!!!!

Naina toh Raj ko chhodna hi nahi chahti thi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Poor Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina toh ush waqt mein wapas chali gayi hai jab Raj usse jungle mein mila tha!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina waha se bhi gayab ho gayi aur Raj usse dhundhne gaya hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Ab kya hoga??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕


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Posted: 16 years ago
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bahut hi badiya part tha.................


ritus part ws very exciting 1
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: yakkudimag





SAFAR ( THE JOURNEY)


PART 3



22/11/2003

raat k 1 baje.....


Rohini ki tabiyat ab theek hai...

Naina kamre me aai...night suit pehna usne..aur chup chaap sofa par so gayi. Naina bhi sone ka bahana kar rahi hai..udhar Raj bhi jaag kar sone ka naatak kar raha hai..Naina jab Maa k paas thi tab Ritu ka phone aya tha.


Raj--Hello...


Ritu--Biwi ghar pahuch gayi tumhari?

Raj--Ritu??

Ritu--shukar hai..meri awaz nahi bhoole tum..toh main kyaa keh rahi thi?? Haan..Naina ghar pahuch gayi?

Raj--haa..kyon..aisi kyaa baat ho gayi..?

Ritu--nahi..aaj..usko bahut kuchh sunne ko mila mujhse...

Raj--What?

Ritu--maine dekha..tum usko market me chhod kar chale gaye..woh kisika intezar kar rahi thi...maine bhi mauke ka poora faida uthaya...aisi jali kati sunaai hai usko...ek pal k lia toh main bhi nervous ho gayi thi..k kahi agar usne suicide attempt kar lia..aur mera naam lia..toh main toh gayi...

Raj--Ritu..aaj ek baat dhyaan se sun lo..humare gharwale humari shaadi k bare me soch rahe the..personally..mujhe koi interest nahi tha tum me..isi lia.. logo k saamne yeh jatana bandh kar do..k maine tumhare saath jeene marne ki kasam khaa kar tum ko dhokha dia hai..maine kabhi tumse pyaar nahi kia..


Ritu--Naina se kia tha pyaar?

Raj--Haa..maine Naina se hi pyaar kia tha...main Naina se hi pyaar karta hoon ...varna is puri duniya me koi kuchh bhi kare..kisi bhi haal me rahe.. mujhe kyaa?Agar Naina se pyaar nahi hota..toh usse shaadi nahi karta ..

Ritu--Naina ki zindagi abad karne k lia tumne meri zindagi barbad kar di...

Raj--tumhari zindagi barbad kaha hai?aisa toh nahi k..humari sagai tooti thi.. infact sagai hui hi nahi..shaadi k mandap me bhi chhod kar nahi bhaga tha tumko..aur agar tum sochti ho k Naina ki zindagi bachane k lia maine yeh sab kia.,..toh tumko toh samajh jana chahie..jab Naina aur tumhari zindagi me se kisi ek ko choose karna tha..maine Naina ko choona...toh zaahir si baat hai.. meri zindagi me humesha se Naina ki ehmiat thi..and I am very much thankful to God that I got married with Naina ,not with you..meri toh zindagi barbad ho jaati..

Ritu--Raj...tum jaante nahi main kyaa kar sakti hoon..Naina ko humare beech me se hatane k lia...

Raj--kaan khol kar ek baat aur sun lo...agar..Naina se kabhi koi badtameezi tumne fir se ki...toh tumhari haalat main bigaad doonga..

Ritu--I will kill her..I can kill that bitch...

Raj--Shut up..and..usko ek kharonch bhi aai ..toh main tumse jaan se maar daloonga..and that's a promise..



Raj ne phone rakh dia...gusse se uska dimaag jal raha tha....Naina ne kuchh nahi bataya..iska matlab toh yehi nikalta hai..k ..ise pahle bhi Ritu ne mauka dekh kar bahut kuchh kaha hai Naina ko..



Raj bistar se utha...Naina deewar ki taraf mudh kar soyi thi...actually woh ro rahi thi...bina awaz kie ro rahi thi...kuchh der baad Naina ne mehsoos kia k uske paas aakar koi khada hai...Naina uth kar baithi,...Raj se uski nazre mili.. Naina k ankho se abhi tak ansoon tapak rahe hain..naak laal ho chuki hai.. ankhe toh pahle se hi laal ho chuki thi..

Raj bahut der tak Naina ko dekhta raha..Naina buri tarha se ro rahi hai...

Raj--Main kaun hoon?

Naina chauk gayi...Raj ki awaz me gussa hai..


Raj--Main kaun hoon?batao..


Naina--Raj..

Raj--malum hai..par tumhare lia kyaa hoon?

Naina--Mere Pati..

Raj--Thanks...tumko yaad hai...

Naina apni ankhon ko apne blanket se saaf karne lagi..

Raj--Pati ka matlab jaanti ho?


Naina--haa...jisse shaadi hoti hai..


Raj--Shaadi ka matlab jaanti ho?


Naina--kyaa kehna chaahte ho?

Raj--Mujhe itna paraya samajhti ho..mujhe malum nahi tha Naina..koi bhi airi ghairi ladki tumko kuchh bhi aakar bol kar chali jaati hai..aur tum chup chaap sun kar chali aati ho!!Aur ghar aakar bhi chup rehti ho..mujhe kuchh nahi batati ho..kyon?

Naina aur zor se rone lagi...

Raj--I swear Naina..agar Ritu abhi mujhe mil jaaye na..toh main uski haalat bigaad doonga..


Naina aur rone lagi...


Raj--arre,tum kyon ro rahi ho?main usko peetne ki baat kar raha hoon,tumko kuchh nahi hoga..Naina..suno...

Naina ka rona bandh nahi ho raha hai....


Raj uske paas baitha...kuchh der usko rone dia Raj ne..aur fir..Naina ko apni taraf modha Raj ne..

Raj--Meri taraf dekho...Naina..

Naina zor se apna sar hilaane lagi...woh Raj ki taraf dekhna nahi chaahti...


Raj--NAINA...LOOK AT ME...

Naina ne dheere dheere Raj ki taraf dekha..

Raj--mujhse humesha doorie kyon banaye rakhti ho?

Naina--haan?

Raj--Mujhse door kyon chali jaati ho?

Naina--nahi...woh..

"shhhh..kuchh mat kehna ab.."yeh keh kar Raj ne Naina k honthon par apna index finger rakha..Naina chauk gayi....Raj pahle bhi uske kareeb aa chuka hai..par..is waqt ki baat kuchh aur hi hai..



Raj ne thoda waqt aur dia..Naina ko sab kuchh samajhne k lia..aur fir..Naina k ansoon pochhe Raj ne..Naina ka chehra Raj k haathon me tha...kuchh der usi chehre ko Raj dekhta raha..Naina ne apni nazre neeche kar li..


Raj ko aisa laga..k Naina ko pasand nahi..Raj ka is tarha kareeb ana,yeh pehli baar nahi hai..jab Raj Naina k kareeb aaya hai..par har baar ek hi baat Raj ne mehsoos kia hai..Naina yeh nahi chaahti.Raj ne jab bhi usko gale se lagaya hai..Naina uski baahon me pighal nahi gayi..bal k..baraf ki tarha jam gayi..Raj k chhoone se Naina ka badan thanda pad jata hai..uska jism sakht ho jata hai..



Raj uth kar jaane laga aur fir usne mehsoos kia,uske haath ko Naina ne pakad rakha hai..Raj chauk gaya..pehli baar Raj ka haath pakda hai Naina ne ...Naina ki ankho me Raj ne woh dekha jo ab tak dhoondh raha tha Raj.. woh chaahat..woh tadap...


Raj ne Naina ko apni baahon me bhar lia...Naina ne Raj k honthon par kiss kia..aur yeh silsila yehi par nahi rooka..bahut aage tak gaya...


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23/11/2003..


subha jab Raj ki ankhe khuli..Naina uske paas thi...bahut paas...

Naina k gaal par Raj ne kiss kia..Naina neend me muskurai..



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15th December,2003...


Naina k janamdin par Raj ne usko ek painting gift ki..jo Raj ne hi banai hai...




Naina--yeh..tumne banaya hai..mujhe yakeen hai..par kab banaya?

Raj--aisa kyon poochh rahi ho?

Naina--tasveer ko dekh kar nahi lagta k abhi ka hai..aur sab se badi baat..I don't look like a married girl..


Raj--sahi hai..bahut pahle banai gayi tasveer hai..tab toh maine tumse shaadi bhi nahi ki thi...

Naina--iska kyaa matlab?

Raj--ab bhi nahi samjhi?

Naina--nahi...

Raj--iska matlab yeh hai..k tumse shaadi kar k,maine koi ehsaan nahi kia tum par..

Naina--kyaa?

Raj--Us din agar tumhari shaadi ho jaati..main toh..maine bahut pyaar kia tumse..aur..tum kisi aur ki hone jaa rahi thi...

Naina--toh mujhse kaha kyon nahi?

Raj--bata deta toh kyaa karti?

Naina--tumhare saath bhaag jaati...

Raj--kyaa?

Naina--haa...

Raj--main tumhe bhaga kar nahi le jata..


Naina--Ritu ka dil toota is jhamele me..

Raj--dekho..akhri baar bol raha hoon..maine koi pyaar mohabbat ki kasme nahi khaai..k usise..yaar..log bolte the as we belong from the same caste..I was least interested about her..


Naina--aisi koi baat nahi..par..

Raj--par kyaa?Tum yeh chaahti thi k us Chudhail k saath ..main apni saari zindagi..My God..

Naina--She is beautiful Raj..Chudhail nahi hai woh..

Raj--By nature ..she is a Monster..Witch...

Naina--Agar Ritu ne tumhare muh se aisa keertan sun lia..

Raj--nahi darrta usse...

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21st March,2004


Raj aur Naina k bedroom me ek badi si poster lagi hui hai..




Naina is expecting..sab kuchh theek raha toh September k First week me hi Delivery ho jaayegi..


Naina k k Parents khush..Naveen khush..Raj k parents toh sab se zyada khush..Naveen har hafte ata hai..kuchh naa kuchh lekar hi aata hai..


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15th July,2004..


Naina ki goadbharai.....bahut bada jashan..

Naina--Kya hua?Aise kyaa dekh rahe ho..?

Raj--Sapne kis tarha haqiqat me badalte hain..wahi dekh raha hoon..



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achanak Raj ka dhyaan toota..

10/10/2007
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Naveen--arre..Naina apna phone nahi utha rahi hai..ghar par hi phone karta hoon..


Ghar par phone kar k pata chala..k Naina ghar par nahi hai..phone bhi ghar par chhod gayi hai..Raj ne phone lia Naveen k haath se...


Rohini--Yeh ladki na..isko kitni baar samjhaaoon??

Raj--bata kar nahi gayi?

Rohini--bata kar jaati toh aisa kuchh hota?Jab se usne suna hai..k tum land slide me fanse ho..tab se ..pata nahi usko kyaa ho gaya hai..


Raj--Naina ki tabiyat kaisi hai?Doctor ne kyaa kaha?


Rohini--Doctor k kahne se kyaa hoga?Agar khud hi naa samjhe toh koi kyaakare?Ek baar hadsa ho chuka hai,usko toh aur bhi savdhaan rehna chahie ..Bhagwan ki kripa hai hum par..k usko doosra bachcha hone wala hai....par usko toh samajhna hai...

Raj--hmm...


Aaj k baat agar ki jaaye..


toh Naina ko 5 maheene 16 din aur 19 ghante ki pregnancy hai..




May,2007..

Rajveer k Chhote Chachu ki maut ho gayi..koi aulad nahi thi unki, unhone shaadi nahi ki thi..unki yehi ichha thi k Raj hi unka antim sanskar kare..


Raj ki saza k din pure honewale the,achhe bartav ka record bhi tha.Is antim sanskar k lia usko Court ne 15 din k Parol par chhoda.Antim Sanskar aur Shraddh k lia.


Rajveer ghar aya tha..Naina k saath tha..humesha Naina uske aas paas rahe.. yehi chaahta tha Raj..ek pal k lia Naina ko chhodna nahi chaahta tha...




July,2007..

Raj jail me hi tha..usko khabar mili..k woh doosri baar Baap bannewala hai.. Naina is two and a half months pregnant...



Sorry mai late ho gayi Anu.
Ye raha is update ka reply.
Naina ne Raj ko sach me lagta hai apne paas aane nahi diya kabhi🥺, us ne apne charon taraf ek khol bana liya hai jis ki wajah se dono k dilon me itni doori aa gayi hai.😔
Raj us ko ye yakeen dilana chahta hai ki vo humesha us k saath hai😛 par Naina apne khalayon se bahar hi nahi aana chahti hai😒, pata nahi kyoun.
Abhi bhi us ko lagta hai ki Raj ne ehsaan kiya hai 😲us par agar aisa nahi hota to vo kam se kam Ritu k baare me Raj ko batati jaroor 🥱ki Ritu ne kaise sab k saamne insult ki us ki.😳
Accha kiya Raj ne ki Ritu ko clearly samjha diya ki jaisa vo soch rahi hai aisa kuch bhi nahi😉 , na hi vo Ritu se pyaar karta😃 tha na hi shaadi karna chahta tha to Ritu sab k saamne Raj ko sanam bewafa dikhana bund hi kare ab sach me she is brat.😈
Naina bhi bus ansoon bahaye jaa rahi hain kuch bolti nahi hain.😕
Bolna chahiye na kuch ladna tha Ritu se aur us ko us ki aukaat to yaad dilani thi kam se kam.😡
Raj ne realise kiya Naina ka dard aur console bhi kiya us ko.😭
Phir apne pyaar ki muhar bhi laga di Naina par🤗aur Naina ne pehli baar Raj ko vo realise karaya jo vo dekhna chahta tha Naina ki aankhon me.☺️
☺️
Naina dubara maa ban ne waali hai too good.
Raj ne Naina ko us ki banayi hue Naina ki hi painting gift ki vow g8.😛
Ab pata chala na Naina ko ki Raj pehle se pyaar karta tha Naina se aur us ne Naina par koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai.😉
Ab ki kuch na ho aisa jaisa last time hua tha.
superb update darling.👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Pata chal gaya ki Ritu kitni badi kameene thi 😡shuru se hi Naina k peeche padi thi aur bus chalta to pata nahi kya kya karti aage 🤢aur,
accha kiya Raj ne jo maar diya us ko.👏
Raj ko kam saja Ritu ki maa ki wajah se hue na kyounki un ki gavahi
Raj k favour me gayi.
Ye achanak Naina ko kya ho gaya?😲

Kahan chali jaa rahi hai aise vo kisi ko bina bataye?😕

Paagal jaise behave kar rahi hai par us ne Torurist ko pata to sahi bataya tha na.🥱

Raj bhi kamal hai ghar aaye bina jaise hi pata chala ki Naina nahi hai ghar me seedhe chala gaya us ko dhoondhne.😛
Naina ko kahin aisa to nahi lag raha hai na ki is baar fir se kuch aisa ho jaayega aur Raj fir se us se kahin door chala jaayega.😭
Us ko abhi bhi lag raha hai ki 3 saal pehle ka waqt chal raha hai beech ki baatein bhool gayi hai vo.😔
Ab jab vo aadmi ghar jaane k liye arrangement karne gaya hai to vo vahan se bhi gayab ho gayi, ye ho kya raha hai?😕
update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Deeya

hey dear... excellent part..==thanks a lot

naina puri paagal hi hai... agar ghar par hoti toh raj se aasani se mil sakti thi.....==ha..Naina ki satak gayi hai..😛
nyways hope they meet soon... life hasnt been fair to them!!==yes..they had suffered a lot...
continue soon==of course..




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#49


thanks a lot..keep reading..


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Originally posted by: prerna1

too good dear

plz continue soon



thanks a lot..I will update soon..


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