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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: yyyy
wow nice concept...it's a good subject..interesting one👏👏👏
👏==thank you very much..
Ah i feel sad for naina and raj..raj had to be in jail just beacuse of ritu..how sad....==yes..they had suffered a lot..

but Raj and naina rishta was a compromise then how come naina was pregnant??==At the beginning of the marriage .it was little bit complicated case..but.. Naina became pregnant after 2 years of marriage

. naina has to go through so much i hope now she gets her share of happiness...and raj too==let's hope for the best..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!==thanks a lot

Naina ki shaadi kisi aur se ho rahi thi aur woh pagal nikla!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲==yes..it's true...😭

Navin is good brother!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Apne bahen ko bacha liya aur bahut gusse mein tha!!!! =Koi bhi Aadarsh bhai aisa hi karega...

Raj aage aaya bachane Naina ko aur unki shaadi ho gayi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Great!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏==Hero ki entry hai..time par hi honi hai..

Raj ke gharwale bhi khush thhe!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊==yes..nice indeed..

Raj pehle se hi Naina se pyaar karta tha magar kuch keh nahi paya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Bechara!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔==Yes ..the silent lover..😭

Aur shaadi karke le jaa raha hai tab bhi nahi kaha dono ne kuch bhi!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒O God!!!! ==it was very normal..

Raj khamokha soch raha tha parivaar apnayenge yaa nahi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Apna hi liya tha naa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==haa..apna lia...😆

Raj ne yeh bhi nahi kaha ke kitna pyaar karta hai Naina se aur Naina bhi kuch aur samaj rahi thi!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 ==Poor Raj..

Dono ke dil mein hi kash-m-kash chal rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==normal baat chhe

Ritu ne kitna tamasha kiya tha!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 Yeh Ritu bhi naa anap shanap bolti hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡==Ritu ka character hi aisa hai..

Naina ne saari baatein sun bhi li!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Mar gaye!!!! ==nahi..zyada darrne ki baat nahi hai...

Yeh bhi sun liya Raj usse pyaar nahi karta jab ki yeh baat sach nahi hai!!!!! ==yaar..aisa hota hai..pyaar me..kabhi kabhi..shaadi hui ..abhi abhi..😛

Yeh Ritu kabhi nahi sudregi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Naina ko marne aayi thi woh bhi tab jab Naina pregnant thi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡==kameeni ..kulta Ritu..

Raj ne Naina ko bacchane ke liye Ritu ko mar daala!!!! Good for him!!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Kitna pyaar karta hai woh Naina se!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳==arre..woh Hero hai..😆

Naina ka baccha mara huya paida huya tha aur Raj bhi tab tak arrest ho chuka tha!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Thats so sad!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 ==yes..sad indeed.....😭

Raj ko sazza ho gayi 3 saal ki!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭But finally woh wapas aa raha hai ish diwali mein!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ==yes👏

Bechari Naina!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Ritu ne usse sab kuch cheen liya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Ish gum mein bhi woh akeli thi!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 ==Naina..sach me dukhi hai..

Logo ko Ritu ka humla karna bhi sahi laga!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Thats disgusting!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡==log aise hi hai..kuchh bhi bolte rahte hai..

Naina ko jeete jee mar diya iske liye koi humdardi nahi!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭==logo ko khaa pee kar aur koi kaam bhi toh nahi hai...😡

I hope Raj aayega toh sab theek ho jayega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==let's hope for the best...

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

SAFAR(THE JOURNEY)

PART 2

Rohini Singh Shekhawat,Raj ki Maa..aaj pure ghar ko sajane ki taiyyari me lagi hain..Diwali se pahle Diwali manai jaayegi Shekhawats' Residence me. Arjun Singh Shekhawat,matlab Raj k Dad gaye hain Mithai ka order dene.. shaam ko bahut se mehmaan aayenge..unka muh meetha karana hai..

Rohini ne Naina ki khabar li..Naina kamra saja rahi thi..Raj k lia...

"Naina..??"..Rohini ne usko bulaya...Naina ne mudh kar dekha..

Naina--Jee Mummy..

Rohini--sara kaam ho gaya?

Naina--Jee..

Rohini--Tum nahi jaaogi ..usko lene?

Naina--kis muh se jaaoon ..?

Rohini--Tum uski Patni ho Naina..

Naina--Yehi Raj ki sab se badi badnasibi ban gayi...

Rohini--Naina...isme tumhara koi dosh nahi..

Naina--Achha hota..main us din mar hi jaati....

Rohini--Tum ko kyaa lagta hai?Raj Ritu ko chhod deta?

Naina--Apni ankho se main yeh sab aur nahi dekh sakti Maa..

Rohini--Naina,tumne kuchh nahi kia Beti.Agar Raj ne dukh jhela..toh tumne kuchh kum bardasht nahi kia .sab kuchh theek tha..Doctor ne delivery date bhi di thi..sab theek chal raha tha...tumhari Bachchi mar gayi Naina..varna aaj 3 saal ki hoti...tumhare goad me hoti..is tarha aadhi adhuri zindagi nahi hoti tumhari.Logon ki baatein sun kar tum khud ko dosh deti ho...logo ka kyaa hai Naina?Tumhari suni goad kisiko nahi dikhti?

Naina--Agar Ritu se Raj ki shaadi ho jaati..agar Raj mujhe talak de kar Ritu se shaadi karta..tab yeh saari pareshaanian nahi hoti Mummy...

Rohini--Shukar hai Bhagwan ka,k woh ladki Raj ki zindagi me nahi aai. Daayan thi woh..khaa jaati mere bete ko..itna gussa?Yeh tewar?Jaanlewa humla kia tum par..itna nahi socha k tum Maa bannewali thi..Socho kaisi ladki thi..jisne aisi harkat ki thi..

Naina--Par Raj ko toh jail jana pada...

Rohini--Haa..gaya woh jail..3 saal k lia na..haa..bura laga mujhe..Agar Ritu se shaadi hoti..toh zindagi bhar k lia saza bhugatne wala tha mera Raj..

Naina--Mummy..I feel so guilty..

Rohini--Naina..aaj Raj ghar aa raha hai..main nahi chaahti k woh tumhari aisi shakal dekhe..dopaher tak taiyyar ho jana...Raj dopaher ka khana ghar par hi khaayega..

Naina--Jee...

Rohini--Naina..khushi k din aa rahe hain..aur tum aise karogi ..toh socho..Raj ko kitna bura lagega..

Naina--Hmm..

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2003..

Shaadi ko 2 saal ho gaye hain..Zindagi hai..guzar rahi hai..Apne Dad k saath mil kar Raj business samhaal raha hai..Naina ghar me rehti hai..ghar k kaam me Rohini ki madad karti hai.Rohini bahut khush hain,Raj k is faisle se. Naina bahut hi achhi ladki hai.Ritu achhi hai..par..Raj k lia kabhi bhi sahi ladki nahi thi woh..yeh toh Dosti ko rishtedari me badalne ka ek zaria tha.

Naina ki shaadi me Raj k saare gharwalon ko bulaya gaya tha,Raj akele hi gaya tha..par Rohini samajh rahi thi..k kahi na kahi..kuchh toh gadbad hai.. jab se Naina ki shaadi tai hui hai..Raj ka chehra murjha gaya tha..Par ab sab theek hai.Raj ki ankho ki chamak waapas aa gayi hai,chehre par muskurahat rehti hai humesha..Khair..Raj khush hai..toh sab theek hai..

Raj...hawa me udta hai.Naina ko apni aankho k saamne dekhta hai humesha ..Pura din Naina kaam karti hai..ghar ka..Raj se thodi bahut baatein kar lia karti hai..pahle jab dost ki bahen thi..tab bahut kuchh kehti thi..ab Biwi hai.. choop hi rehti hai..Raj ko kabhi kabhi aisa mehsoos hota hai k Naina usiko dekh rahi hai..par nazre milte hi nazre choora leti hai..shaadi ko 2 saal ho gaye hain,par doorie hai is rishte me..aksar aisa hota hai..k Naina Raj k paas me so jaati hai..aadhi raat ko Raj ki neend toot jaati hai..tab yeh dekhta hai..k Naina sofa par soyi hai.

22nd November,2003

Raj Dharamshala gaya tha..Shimla k paas hi hai yeh shaher..kisi Client se milna tha..jab shaam ko waapas laut raha tha..tab usne ek baar apne Saw Mill k Manager se milne ka socha,paas hi me jungle hai..achanak..Naina dikhi usko...

Naina usko dekh kar muskurai...

Raj--tum ,is waqt ,kaha gayi thi?

Naina--Aise hi...davai dene aai thi..ek mazdoor ka Beta bimaar hai..paise nahi the inke paas..maine paisa nahi dia..davai aur khaane ka saman de kar aa rahi hoon..

Raj--Doosri Car kharab hai kya?

Naina--nahi toh..

Raj--Toh tum Driver ko bol sakti thi...

Naina--nahi ,theek hai..paidal hi aai..

Raj--Is tarha nahi ana..jungle hai..hadsa ho hi sakta hai...

Naina--main toh bachpan se yehi aati hoon..jab mera mann bahut achha hota hai..

Raj--mann bahut achha hota hai..tab jungle me aati ho?

Naina--nahi..jab mann kharab hota hai..tab bhi yehi aati hoon..

Raj kuchh der Naina ko dekhta raha..khamosh khada tha Raj..

Naina--kyaa hua?

Raj--kuchh bhi toh nahi...chalo..ghar chalo..shaam ho rahi hai...

Naina--haa..chalo...

dono Town pahuche...tab 6 baj chuke the..

Naina--mujhe zara..milna hai..us dukan me jana hai..main jaaoon?

Raj--haa..main yehi intezar karta hoon...

Naina dukaan k andar gayi...aise me Raj k Mobile par phone.Maa ki tabiyat kharab hai.Raj daur kar dukaan me gaya..

Naina--kyaa hua?

Raj--main Doctor ko lekar Maa k paas jaa raha hoon..unki tabiyat kharab hai...

Naina--par..mera ..woh ..Manju yaad hai tumko?bahut musibat me hai... mujhe usse milna hai..

Raj--kitna waqt lagega?

Naina--adha ghanta...

Raj--achha..main chala...tum ghar jaldi ana..OK?

Naina--haa..

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raat k 8 baje jab Naina ghar pahuchi..tab pata chala..k Mummy ko kuchh khaas nahi hua hai..bas..sardi lag gayi hai..Raj unke paas baitha tha..

Naina--Tum jaao..fresh ho jaao..main hoon..Mummy k paas..

Raj--achha..aur mujhe bahut zor ki bhookh lagi hai...

Naina--khana kamre me bhej doon?

Raj--Thanks..

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"Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuu...Nainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..??"Rohini Naina ko bula rahi thi..

Naina ka dhyaan toota...usne aawaz di.."aaaaii..Mummy..."

khabar achhi nahi hai..Raj dopaher tak nahi pahuch paayega...land slide ki wajah se rasta bandh hai..4 ghante toh lag hi jaayenge ..road clear hone me.. Naveen ne phone kia tha...Raj ko lekar hi aa raha hai woh...

Raj Naveen k saath baitha hai...ek road side Dhaabe me..

Raj--Naina kaisi hai?

Naveen--theek hai..

Raj--Ritu ki wajah se sab kuchh barbad ho gaya...mujhe jail jana pada..is baat ka afsos nahi hai mujhe..par main Naina ko bacha nahi paya..

Naveen--Naina theek hai...

Raj--Apni bachchi k bina?nahi...woh theek nahi..yaar..main nahi tha..agar humari Beti hoti uske saath..toh akeli nahi hoti..ek toh itna bada hadsa..yeh accident..mera jail jana..upar se mari hui bchchi paida hui..kabhi kabhi sochti hoon..Naina ne itna sab jhela kaise?

Naveen--Yaar,waqt to haath se gaya nahi,fikar mat kar,tum dono ko bachcha hoga..don't worry...bahut ladkion k saath hota hai..pehla bachcha..

Raj--doosri wajah se..par sab theek tha..aur sab barbad ho gaya..Ritu...maar dala maine usko..zinda rehti..toh Naina ko zinda nahi chhodti..

Naveen--shaant ho jaa..kismat k likhe ko tu ..badal toh nahi sakta...

Raj--Aaj meri zindagi alag hoti..main aur Naina..humari Beti...3 saal ki hoti aaj woh....Ritu...that witch..

Naveen--Cool down...ghar jaa kar aise tewar mat dikhana.Naina darr jaayegi..

Raj--hmm..chal Naina ko phone laga...

Naveen--Abhi toh tune Aunty se baat ki...

Raj--Naina ko phone laga...

Naveen--achha..theek hai...tu khana khaa..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

awsome Di

yes, Ritu ki bacchi, i hate her,satti witch ekta

darun kintu tomar eii fic ta

exceptional,jodio tomar sab concept e different hoy

fatafati

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404_NotFound

@404_NotFound

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

nice update..rohini is very understanding MIL...naina should now stop feeling guilty she should try to be happy with raj..after all after 3 yrs he is back if she sees naina this way he feel bad....

Naina seemed to be quite uncomfortable with raj after her marriage..i am eager to know how will these 2 get together.

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

hey this fic is superb

plz continue soon

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

👏👏👏

Firstly thnk u for starting new fic.......

dis 1 as usual is different frm ur all other fic.....both d updts wer awesome

loved it....cont soon

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj ke ghar mein toh jashn ka mahol hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳

Naina Raj ko lene nahi ja rahi hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Woh khud ko hi doshi thera rahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Rohini is very nice!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She is comforting Naina!!!!

Naina ke dukh ko woh samajti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rohini samajti hai ke agar Ritu se shaadi hoti toh Raj ki zindagi barbad ho jati!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Uska jail jana teen saal ke liye Ritu se shaadi karne se behtar hai!!!!!

Naina aisi rahegi toh Raj ko kitna bura lagega!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Toh Rohini ne tabhi realise kar liya tha ke Ritu Raj ke liye sahi ladki nahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur Raj ke faisle se bahut khush thi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ki shaadi tai hote ki Raj ka chehra murjhaya huya rehta tha aur Rohini had smelt a rat!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj toh ab bahut khush rehta hai Naina uske nazaron ke saamne jo rehti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😃 😃 😃

Naina chup rehti hai aur nazre churati hai ,ab tak dono mein duriyan hai in dono ke beech mein!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina jab mann bahut accha hota tab jungle mein aati hai aur jab kharab hota hai tabhi jungle mein aati hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko aane mein der hogi!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!!

Raj ko Naina pe jo beeti uska afsos hai usse jail jana pada uska nahi!!!!!! Kitna pyaar karta hai Naina se!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ritu ki wajah se sab barbad ho gaya!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She is a witch!!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡I hate her!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ko Naina se baat karni hai ab!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Great!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sania_58
awsome Di==Thanks a lot😳
yes, Ritu ki bacchi, i hate her,satti witch ekta==Ek dom shotttiiii..😆

darun kintu tomar eii fic ta==Oshesh dhonnyobad..

exceptional,jodio tomar sab concept e different hoy

fatafati==baap re..thaam ..r praise naa korai bhalo..😛