RNBJ-sk pg83(epilogue) pg84(new ff) - Page 6

so bd670816 so u like tht i am back to hotel huh????????????

Hey dear Neelu.. Waise kya tumhara naam Neelam hai?.. Yeh CJ ko kya BB k alawa koi aur word aata hi nahi hai kya.. Hmmmm.. Lagta hai tum abi abi Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab dekh k aaye ho jab usme Katrina ko blo*** orphan kaha tha toh mai bohat rooye thi.. U know what tumhare iss ff ki wajah se mera Aamna craze aur b badd gaya hai qki Aamna k dad nahi hai toh i think kabi nah kabi kisi nah kisi ne usse aise heart breaking words kahe hoge nah.. Aur SK k scene was very cute..



One question yeh "d" kaun hai..

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

Hey dear Neelu.. Waise kya tumhara naam Neelam hai?.. Yeh CJ ko kya BB k alawa koi aur word aata hi nahi hai kya.. Hmmmm.. Lagta hai tum abi abi Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab dekh k aaye ho jab usme Katrina ko blo*** orphan kaha tha toh mai bohat rooye thi.. U know what tumhare iss ff ki wajah se mera Aamna craze aur b badd gaya hai qki Aamna k dad nahi hai toh i think kabi nah kabi kisi nah kisi ne usse aise heart breaking words kahe hoge nah.. Aur SK k scene was very cute..



One question yeh "d" kaun hai..

thanku 4 the comment , love u yaar. my name is Nilanjana yaar. bechare cg ki vocab kam hai yaa kya kare. thanku thanku yaar ye kehne ke lie ki my fic made such a contribution ur life. ek req plz ask ur more sk fan frnds to chk my stry as readers are less yaar. arre yaar 'd' meant dad yaar

Its morning time.

K goes into CG's room to give him tea.

k-sir chai !

he takes a sip.

Cg-[rudely] kya hai ye !

k-[in a carefree manner] chai !

cg-ye to mujhe bhi dikh raha hai ! cheeni kahan hai ismein?

k-chai ke andaar !

cg-zabaan sambhalke baat karo ! [he gets up gusse se]

k-same to you !

cg-aye ladki ! kya samajti hai apne aap ko ! bl**dy raaste ka kidaa ! ek kaam bhi thik se nahi hota !! cant you make even a tea aur ye chai thandi bhi hai!

k-achcha to abb ye chai thandi bhi ho gai! Dekhte hain kitni thandi hai chai!

Pura chai wala tray CG pe udhel deti hai & runs away

CG-AAAAAAAARRRRRG !!!!!!!!!! VEEEEEEEN !!!!!!!! VEEEEEENA !!!!!!!!

Sujal's mom rushes in the room.

CG- I WANT THAT BL**DY ORPHAN CHUCKED OUT OF THIS HOUSE RIGHT NOW !

Saara commosion sunke s also enters as he cant bear anyone specially, his dad shouting at his mom so rudely.

v-paar usne….arre ye aap pe chai !

CG-yehi karaammat hai aapki maharani jii ki !

v-wo bachchi hai aap….naadaan hai…

CG-oh justtttttt shut up! You are a hopeless cade. Koi kaam thik se nahi hota tumse ! wo ladki itni badtameez hai aur tum ho ki…

S intervenes now.

s-fist you shut up! Badtmeez to ap hai jo apni biwi se aise baat kar rahe hain. Apni biwi aw jaise baat karni hai kijie, meri maa se unchi awaaz mein baat galti se bhi mat kariega.

S walks forward, holds his mom & takes her outside the room.

Its night time, sujal is working on his laptop.

K enters.

k-mam ne aapko neeche khan eke lie bulaya hai.

s-hmm

k turns to go.

s-suno!

She turns & looks at him.

s-idhar aao!

She walks to him.

S shuts the laptop. Sighs & looks at her.

s-tumhe aisa nahi karna chahie tha !

k-kya?

s-jo tumne subah kiya, aur tum jaanti ho main kis bare mein baat kar raha hoon. Wo galat tha.

k-aur jo unhone kiya wo sahi tha? Unhe wo karna chahie tha? Wo jo mujse behave karte hain , jaise bolte hain wo galat nahi hai?

s-bilkul galath hai. Maine ye kabb kaha ki wo galath nahi hai. Paar ek galthi ko maat den eke lie kya hum dusri galti karein? Phir to galtiyan badhti hi jaengi !

she is listening.

k-kya ye meri galthi hai ki main anaath hoon , ki mere mummy papa ne mujhe chod dia . [her eyes are brimming with tears]

s-bilkul nahi. Paar ye baa two nahi samajhte, par agar tum aise behave karogi to wo aur nahi samjhenge. Abb tum khud hi bolo jo tumne kiya wo sahi kiya ya galath kiya.

She thinks for a whole minute.

s-bolo sahi ya galath.

She shakes her head in a no. she is gazing the floor.

s-jo bhi ho wo tumse bade hain, aur tumhare boss bhi to boss ko to khush hamesha hi rakhna hota hai naa.

k-lekin wo aise bolte hain to, main kya karun ?

s-kuch matt karo, bass chup raho. Tum chup rhogi to wo bhi kitna bolenge, phir khud hi chup ho jaenge. Don't give him so much importance.

k-kya main unse apologise karun?

s-agar tumhe dil se lagta hai ki tumne bilkul galath kiya hai to karo, nahi lagta hai to bilkul math karo. Aur haan, aisi serious si sroni si suraat mat banao, tumhe daant nahi raha hoon.

She gives a big grin & looks up.

k-thankyou !

he also gives a small smile.

k-arre khana ! arre jaldi chlo thanda ho jaega !

she quickly runs towards the dining area.

He looks a her going, & smiles to himself.

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the title caught my attention :D will read this for sure, i read a few of the updates

Originally posted by: MeghaSRKLover

the title caught my attention :D will read this for sure, i read a few of the updates

really good

thanxs lot yaar. love u. hope u like it. keep commenting

cg deserved it..................kashish ne wahi kiya which i felt she should have done................but her replies to cg were very funny..............i liked the way sujal was there for his mum..................and sujal didnt shout at kashish but made her realise what she did was wrong...................waiting when romance will be in the air between sujal and kashish..................cont soon dear............

no dear, actually i am also sympathy with u.lovely update. loved sujal kashish scenes very much. cont.soon dear.

Hey great update NA..

What Kashish did is amazing.. Sujal ne bohat achi taraf se samjhaya.. Lekin i think Kashish ka aisa hi karte rehna chaheye.. That rude wierdo, usse toh baat karne ki koi tameez nahi hai.. Jab dekho Kashish ke peche haath dhoke nahi pura naha dhoke Kashish ki burai karne mein laga rehta hai that show Kashish ki kitne important hai..
Ok bye..
Take Care..
Love U..
-afreen..-

grt prt dear