RNBJ-sk pg83(epilogue) pg84(new ff)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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So all my readers here is a new stry on sk 4 u

Let me first give u all some intro

Kashish is an orphan , who lives in an orphanage.She is extremely bubbly,& full of life. Actually, she is an live wire.she ia a bit tomboyish. Ladkiyon jaisi to koi adaa ya koi nakhre hai hi nahi usmein. Her attire includes a cap jisko wo ulta pehenti hai,jisse uski saari khubsurat zulfein uss cap ke andaar aa jae , saath mein ek t-shirt,jiske upar a too big shirt & an ill fillinf loose sa baggy sa jeans. Ye sab pehenke she almost looks lik a 10-11 saal ka chotta sa , pyaara sa, cute sa ladka. At the present moment she is 18 years old

Sujal Garewal is a big business tycoon. Havin a high status & backgrnd. He is 28 years old at this moment. Enjoyin fame , fortune, success & attention of all the gals of her society. But he is too much arrogant & rude to care for anything. He may be arrogant to the world par frm inside he is the sweetest & the most nicest person.

His family include his dad, whom he hates frm the chore of his heart, bcoz he is too heartless, for him nothing exists except money,business & social status. Then there is his mom whom he completely adores, sujal is his real self jst in front of his mom. His mom is a social worker, & a really kind hearted lady & the only person who understands sujal.then, there is sujal?s 18 year old little sister, a complete spoilt brat, ziddi, bigdi hui, usko bass paiso ka gurur hai, usko dad ne sar pe chada rakha hai. She is extremely proudy & a real irritating person.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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In the orphanage-

There is a gal called Maya who is K?s best frnd

Abhi kuch raat ke 11 baj gae hain

Orphanage ke to 9.30 baje hi lights off ho jaate hain

Par aaj k aur maya ne chori chori chup chupate disco jaane ka plan banaya hai

Kyunki aaj raat ko k will be 18, islie unhone celebrate karne ke lie disco jaane ka plan banaya hai

Bohot dino se paise ikkattha karke, don one achchi si outfit li hai

K ne pehli baar make up kia hai , baal khole hain

She is lookin stunningly gorgeous, jaw dropingly beautiful

Abb both of them reach the disco

Sab naach rahe hain wahan, bilkul hip crowd hai

Maaya-chal kashish naachte hain !

k-oye ! nahi nahi! Mujhe ye sab nachnaa- vachna nahi aata, ye ladkiyon ki tarah thumke laga lagake!

m-plz chal naa kashish!

Maaya k ko khinchke le jaati hai to the dance floor both strt dancing

Kuch der naachne ke baad-

k-uff! Baap re! [panting] ye kamar lachka lachka ke to meri kamar mein dard hi ho gaya ! tu naach main aati hun!

K goes out of the dance floor

Tabhi zorrrrrrrdarrrrrrr tarike se kisi se takraati hai

[offcourse its our hero,sujal!]

he is wearin a tight tee, jeans & glares

k-ufffffffffffff !!!!!!!! kya hai dekhke nahi chal sakte kya?? Waise dekhoge kaise , ankhon mein aise kale chashmein pehenke raat ko ghumoge to , aise hi andhon ki tarah logon se takraoge hi naa

he raises an eyebrow in a flirty way, aisi khubsurat haseena saamne dekhkar to hamare hero ji ka bhi mann line maarne ko ho gaya

s-oh I am so sorry! Waise, can I buy u a drink?

k-drink? Kashish kisi se muft ki gaali nahi leti, muft ki drink kya legi !

keheke she storms away

leavin s completely baffled & taken aback

Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Abb raat ko chupte chupate they reach the orphanage

Dono apne apne bed pe lete hue hain

k-waise achcha hua naa kisi bhi sister ne humein nahi dekha warna waat lag jaati hai naa [gives a childish giggle]

m-Happy bday kashish! [she hugs her]

k-thankuuuuuuuuu! Wowwwwwwwww yipeeeeeee I am 18 now!

m-[a bit sad] hmm, par orphanage ke rule ke hisab se tujhe bhi 18 yrs ke baad yahan se jaana hoga naa!

k-haan , I knw paar father mujhe tabhi bhejenge, jab mujhe rakhne ki koi safe jagah dhund lenge , aur wo to hone se raha! Islie no tension! Aur tu ye sab chod, kal orphanage mein hone wale boys ke football match ke bare mein soch! Woooooooohuuuuuuuuuu yippiiiiii!!!!!!!! Maze aengeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!

Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good stry!😛

Edited by RnR:) - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nilu.... welcome bck yaar.... my lady javed-farhan-akthar....u write ekdum wow...

Strt hi itna aacha hai..... aaghe aaghe kya irrada hai aapka.... nilu yaar?
🤗big huggie 4 dis!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh here i am with my comment.........it was lovely intro......i loved it completly...........plus what a great combo of tomboy and rus businessman........very interstring.............feeling something is going to happen that is a big move in kashish's life.............omg there first meeting was wowwwwwwwwwww..............i mean in disco............thats cool......i loved it completly..........now coming to my guess........i think sujal's mom is going to orphan house as a guest of honor at football match and she will like kashish so she will want to take her to her home........and than story will progress..............but ple ple ple continue........thanks for another mindblowing sk ff............
love
kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hmmm...new storyyy 👍🏼 niceeeee..kashish ka tou naya hi roop hai yahan lol hmm zarur ye kuch kary ge..lol acha laga👍🏼 sujal ko kashish atay hi pasand bi agai hmm ab ye kesy milen gay.. Yesss kashish sujal k pas rahey ge hostel se ja k :D :D good starting:D plzzz continue kroooo..tc byeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sunday ka din hai-

S is lazin in his living room

Tabhi his mom comes

s-arre ! mumma aise taiyaar hoke? Aap kahin jaa rahi hain?

m-haan beta, wo ek chotte se orphanage mein aaj football match hai, dekho naa beta charity bhi ho jaegi aur problem bhi solve ho jaegi

s-problem? Kaisi problem?

m-arre, wo ghar ke lie ek nayi maid ki zarurat hai naa sochti hun wahan pe koi ladki mil jae to achcha ho!

s-oh I c

m-sujal,waise tub hi chal naa!

s-main? Main jaake kya karunga?

m-kya karega kya? Mere saath chal! Waise bhi tu yahan baitha kya kar raha hai, isse achcha hai tu chal hi le!

s-ok mumma jaisa aap kahen!

Idhar orphanage mein kashsihs madam subah se hi ready hai football match ke lie

In her usual attire of cap, baggy jeans, t shirt & uske upar loose shirt resembling a 10 year old chotta sa ladka

Aur gale mein ek cardboard box kaatke rassi se latkaya hua jiske andaar kuch nimbu paani , jal jeera etc ke bottles hain

Father sees her ,aur dekhke ek smile aati hai unke chehre pe

f-arre kashish, ye kya kar rahi hai?

k-kya kar rahi hun? Waise aapne kaha boys ka match hai to mujhe to khilaya nahi,aur ye saare to thehre nikamme , kuch nahi aata inhe, sab harenge, islie maine socha main hi apna faida karlu, islie maine chalu kar lie fresh refreshments ka business. Oh no, match chalu hone wala hai,father aap bhi naa, jaana hai mujhe

she goes shouting

? cold drink le lo, jal jeera lelo, thanda thanda nimbu paani pilo !!!!!! ?

Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Tabhi wahan s & his mom reach

Both of them r standin in the crowd watchin the match

Tabhi his mom excuses herself sayin she has to speak to the father & goes

& s is leaft alone thr

he is watchin the match

udhar se k apni cold drink bechte bechte aa rahi hai, & shoutin saath mein match dekhte hue

k-arre arre sab harenge, kisi ko kuch nahi aata!

Tabhi she sees s

k-arre kuch peene veene ko le lo naa !

s-nahi chahie! Jaa yahan se ! [he is thinking k as a 10 yr old kid, wok al wali ladki hai usko pehchaan mein hi nahi aa rahi]

k-arreeeeeeee tu to wohiiiii hai!... abbey kaisa hai tu!...........[she hits s on his back zor se]

s-aaye kahan naa ek baar jaa yahan se!!!!!

s halka sa k ke kandhe ke wahan seen eke paas shakelta hai,jaise koi chotte ladke ko hatathe hain

k-aayeee!!!!!!! Kahan kahan chuu raha hai????? Ladki ke saath badtzmeezi karta hai sharam nahi aati!

s-achcha! Ladka hoke ladki hone ka natak karta hai,jhuth bolta hai sharam nahi aati!

k-arre main ladki hun!

s-haan haan bilkul [sarcastically,rolling his eyes]. Jaa yahan se bheek nahi deta main!

k-bheek nahi maang rahi hun main, thanda bech rahi hun, lena ho to lo!

s-ye kya 'rahi hun, bech rahi hun' laga rakha hai. Abb tu ladkiyon ki tarah bhi bolne lag gaya!

k-arre ankh ke andhe akal ke andhe, meri awaaz se pata nahi lagta ki main ladki hun!

s-tere umar ke ladko ke, aise 9-10 saal ke ladko ki awaaz aise hi hoti hai ! abb band kar apna apna jhuth!

k-arre main sach much ladki hun!

S is not listenin dusri taraf mooh kar leta hai

K ko gussa aa raha hai

She turns him & strts shakin him gusses se uska collar pakadke

k-main ladki hun! main ladki hun! main ladki hun!

s bhi self defence mein halke se uska kandha pakad leta hai,usko peeche karte hue

aise s ko hilate hilate, k ki cap gir jaati hai

& her beautiful tresses are now open to the world to see

s bhauchakka sa jaata hai

s-arre tere to bade bade baal hai!

S peche ho jata hai,haath hata leta hai

s-tum to sach much ladki ho!

K also leaves him at last

k-haan aur wohi ladki hun, jispe tum kal disco mein fultu line maarne ki koshish kar rahe the! Kuch yaad aaya ! akal ke dushmaan!

Zor se s ke per pe per maarti hai

s-aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!

Usse pehle ki s sambhalta

K wahan se rafoo chakkar ho gai hai

Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting FF
do cont soon
love tanasha

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