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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Wow.....Sujal talked so nicely to Kashish....kitne achhe se samjhaya usse....and then CG ko bhi chup karwaya.....I just luved him all the more in this part.....and the SK scene was extra cute. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Thankgod u r back.. Missed u & ur update soooo much..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

K is assigned work to clean up sanjana's room.

She enters the room with a broom & all.

Room bilkul bikhra pada hai. Har jagah kapde, cosmetics etc

k-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuffffff !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [she takes a deep breath] shuru ho jaa kashish !

she strts clening the room.

Room saaf karte karte , she comes across some of books of sanjana , jo usne patak rakhi hai.

She flips some pages of the books.

She always wanted to study, always wanted to attend a college. She loved her books. She loved to gain knowledge, to know, to know everything, her thirst for knowledge was unending.

But her fate restricted her from studying beyond her high school.

She forget everything in the world coming across her love, her books. She was drowning in them.

She wanted to read them all, absorb them.

S enters the room , suddenly!

s-sanj.. !

he stops, seeing kashish there.

She freezes after looking at her.

s-tum?

k-emm..main..emm..[she is trying to hide the book]

she thinks that s usko daantega ki wo time waste kar rahi hai & is not doing her work.

S looks at what she is hiding.

s-tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

k-emm..main..emm..k..kuch nahi..saaf..safai kar rai thi…

s-hmm…ye sanjana ki kitaab hai naa, tumhare haath mein.

Looks at her hand, in shocking way s if usko pata hi nahi ki uske haath mein kitaab kahan se a gai.

k-haan..ye..wo..main…

s-tum iske saath kya kar rahi thi?

k-k..kuch nahi..kuch bhi to nahi…

he raises an eyebrow.

s-kuch nahi kar rahi thii?

k-n..nahi to..kuch nahi…

s thinks to himself that waise to she is such a bold girl, but phir abhi jhooth kyun bol rahi hai. Sach kyun nahi bol deti.

s-hmm…aur panda chahti ho?

K looks at him, her eyes twinkle with joy.

k-aur??? Haan !...paar…

he had got his answer so he doesn't wait to hear more.

S was getiing ready to go to office.

There is a knock at the door.

s-come in !

k comes in .

k-ye lo! Pocket se paise nikle , kapde dhulne ke lie de rahi thi.

S takes the money.

k-saare note dhul jaate, kisi kaam ke nahi ho !

before s could say anything, she exclamates looking at the money

k-arreeeee !!!!!!! ye to..ye to foeighn ka hai naa..ye to dollar hai..maine filmon mein dekha hai.

S cannot help but give a small side grin at her kidish excitement.

s-haan ye dollar hai.

k-wooooooooow !!!!!! real wala dollar maine kabhi nahi dekha ! main isko touch karlun?

s-[he smiles] haan, tum isse rakh sakti ho !

k-nahi !!! mujhe bass touch krna hai

she touches it a sif its some unusual thing.

k-ye to bohot mehenga hota hai naa, one dollar is equal to 48 rupees.

He nods.

She has that enchanting innocence , that can spell bound anyone.

k-ek baat puchun?

s-haan

k-main isko aaj ke lie rakh lun, wo kya hai naa main aaj pintu se milne jaa rahi hoon, aur maya se bhi wo meri orphanage ki friend hai, main unko ye dikhaungi, unhone bhi kabhi real mein dollar nahi dekha naa, aur phir laake de dungi. I promise main nahi khoungi, main sambhalke rakhungi

s hass raha hai uski baatein sunke.

s-haan , haan le jao !

she gives a big happy ear to ear grin.

k-thankuuuuuuuuu !!!!!!!

jaldi se wo dollar leke runs out of the room khushi se.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
awesome update! was really cute!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
hi, u r back.missed u & ur update so much. lovely update.loved it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
hey dear its good to have u back...............very nice and cute part.............kashish is full of fun and sujal is very sweet.................kashish loves books hmmm sujal should help in someway...................now keep on updating fast dear..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Hey nice part Neelu..

Yaar tumne mere Kashish ko sweeper bana diya yaar.. Bechari ke komal haato mein woh broom..ah mujhse toh dekha nahi jaa raha kaash mai uski help kar sakti lekin kya karu mera khudka kaam mujhe dusre karke dete hai..but uske liye anything..
She wants to study..i guess that's becoz usse pata nahi hai nah..Study=boaring life..
Sujal ko kab hoga usse pyar.. Mujhe toh bas ussi pal ka hai intezaar..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
ms writo is bck n wit a bang :D
fullto hatke kashish hai..ekdum different..i jst strted readin..luvin da new kashish :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

k-arrey idhar to aao maya pintu , dekho main kya lai.

p-arre aisa kya laai di

k-dekh to! Dekha hai kabhi aisa ! [shows off the dollar] real American dollar !

maya & pintu exclaimate together.

Wooooooooooooooooowwwwww !!!!!!

m-kisne diya ! tere paas kahan se aaya?

k-arre wo wahan pew o sir hai naa, unhone diya!

m-sir? Kaunse sir?

Wo Richie rich?

k-haan wohi!

m-arre wah! Wo ab sidha sir bann gaya! Kya baat hai!

k-nahi yaar, wo bohot hi achche hain!

m-tujhe pasand hai?

k-haan!

m-aare wah hamari kashish uss Richie rich ke saath, kashish weds sir!

k-aare nahi aisa kuch nahi hai! Wo mujse pata hai pure 10 saal bade hain! Uski hogi koi g-shi-f.

m-nahi bhi to ho sakti hai. Ho sakta hai wo tujhe pasand karta ho

k-haan bilkul puri duniya chodkaar usko main hi milungi pasand karne ke lie.

m-bolnaa tujhe kaisa lagta hai, sach sach batana.

k-emmmmm……he is cute..cute hain..bohot cute hain..[she smiles in a dreamy way]..itna bhi nalayak nahi hai..nek bhi hai…job hi hai wo the sujal garewal hai , samjhe ! chalo mujhe late ho raha hai main chalti hoon bye !

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Shaam ka waqt hai, sanju ke exams are approaching, so s has decided ki usko saamne baithke usko padaega jisse wo thik s epadai kare aur phir se fail naa ho jae.

Sanju is getting full bored, mauka dhund rahi hai kaise bhaage wahan se. uske expression aise hain jaise s ne uske sar pe banduuk taan rakhi ho.

S wahin dining table pe, sanju ke opposite wali chair pe baithke laptop pe kaam kar raha hai aur tirchi nazar se is keeping n eye on her

K wahan pe dusting & cleaning kar rahi hai.

K wahin idhar udhar ghum rahi hai, as she is very keen to see ki sanju kya pad rahi hai.

She is peeking into her book.

S dekhta hai ki sanju is not paying even a percent of attention on her studies, he thinks of another way to make her study.

He snatches her notebook & scribbles something on it.

s-solve this question

sanju takes a look at the question.

Usko to uska kuch sar pair hi samajh nahi aa raha hai, she is scratching her head.

s-i want its answer in 5 min.

5 min ho jaate hain, all the time sanju is blankly staring at the question.

s-ans !

sanju-wo bhai! Bhai wo iska ans wo..ye..wo..actually..wo..

k ka pet phatta jaa raha to give its answer, it is such a basic question.

k-arre iska answer to 56 hoga!

S looks at k.

Sanju-haan iska ans 56 hai.

S uthke chala jaata hai wahan se.

Sanju ko chain ki saans milti hai ki bhai ke changul se to bachi.

K wonders ki, maine kuch galat kia jo aise uthke chale gaye wo

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part dear
pls cont soon
Edited by pinky901 - 15 years ago

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