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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
nice part liked the way sujal spoke to kashish gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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next morning k is ordered to go to bade sahib that is sujal's father & serve him tea.

To k holds the tray with tea & takes it to his room.

CG is talking on the ph.

She enteres.

k-sir! Aapki chai!

He is still talking on the ph, doesn't respond & gives her a rude stare.

She doesn't understand what is she supposed to do.

To wo tray ko table pe rakhke turns to go.

CG-aye ladki ruk!

She turns

CG-tameez nahi hai kya? Andhi hai kya? Dikhta nahi I was talking on ph, aake bolne ki kya zarurat thi. Chai rakh deni thi.

k-mujhe nahi pata tha aap ph pe…

CG- zabbaan ladati hai ! mere saath! Bloody orphan! Kude mein padi hui gandagi !

Her eyes strt to get filled with tears, her heart is pinching woth every word of his.

CG- maa baap ka to aata pata nahi! Ankhen bhi kaam nahi karti kya b**tard! Get out now!

K couldn't take more insult.

He had hurt her where it hurt most.

She runs out of the room sniffling.

On the way she collides with sujal who as walking past the corridor.

She passes him without a word.

He looks at her go.

He thinks ki isko kya hua, ye ro kyun rahi hai. Then he thinks hua hoga kuch mujhe kya.

She was passing the hall as raat ko pyaas lag gai usko .

Jab usko sujal ki awaaz sunai deti hai, jo ki kaafi gusse mein lag raha hai.

She peeps from behind a pillar.

s-kya time ho raha hai????? Ye koi waqt hai ghar aane ka?????

She ses a girl standing in front of him sar neeche karke.

She looks of her age only, she looks 18.

She looks quite differerent from her though.

Her hair is coulered red, she wears a nose ring. she has her eyebrow pierced.

'aaau that must have hurt'

Kashish thinks.

She looks more heavier than her too.

She has weight on all the wrong places.

But who is she? Kashish wonders.

s-tumhara college hai naa , sanju ! aur tum kisi ko bina batae chali gai ghumne !

sanju-par bhaiya , saare friends gae the !

s-saare frnds kue mein kudogi to tum bhi kund jaogi? Tumhe maine kya samjhaya tha? Sab bhul gai tum ? kya vaade kie the mujse? Unka kya? Jaanti ho naa kitni mushkil se admission hua hai tumhara college mein ! padhai nahi karogi to exam kaise clear karogi! School mein to fail hote hote bachi ho! Hamari family ka naam naa hota to, bass school mein baithi hoti tum!

Sanju-bass bhai lecture sunana band karoge please ! bohot raat ho gai hai!

s-wohi to bohot rata ho gai hai, aur ye waqt hai aapke aane ka. Tum jaisi ladkiyan so jaati hai iss waqt!

Sj-aap bhi to jaage ho!

s-kaam ke lie ! matar-gashti karne ke lie nahi!

Sj-bhai aapko nahi pata , aaj ka youth aisa hi hota hai. Aap jab mere umar ke the aapne bhi to ye sab kia hoga.

s-haddon mein rehke, apne zimmedaari aur future ka dhyaan rakhke.

Sj-oh please ! don't give me this crap! Aur waise bhi aapko to yaad bhi nahi hoga. Aapko mere umar se guzre hue pure dussssssssssssss saal jo ho gae hain!

s-sanu..u…!!!!!!

'kya ho raha hai ye'?

S turns towards the voice.

Sj-oh dad!

She hugs him

d-how is my beta?

Sj-I am fine dad ! how r u?

d-great ! sujal, itni rata ko kya tamasha laga rakha hai ! so kyun nahi jaate !

s-aapko to har sahi baat tamasha hi lagti hai! Aapko dikhta nahi aapki beti kis raah jaa rahi hai!

d-ye paisa kiske lie hai, tum logon ke lie naa, wo to bachchi hai , zindagi mein mazze karne do use.

s-dimag se bachchi hai , sharir se nahi!

Sj-bhai stop being over protective & orthodox !

Sujal's anger has reached a red alert level seeing his dad & hearing his brainless sister argue, so he decides to better leave from there.

He storms away from the room.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Hey nice part.. Aur woh CG ko toh mai kya kahu dictionary b kam pad jayege is liye bure word dhundne k liye.. Aur usne Kashish ko gaali di.. Isko toh mai.. Joh usne Kashish ko kaha woh hai woh.. Joh Shahid Kapur ki new flim aayi hai uska title name uspe suit.. Aur aur nah.. Chodo is waqt mere dimaag mein kuch aa nahi raha hai.. Sujal ki behen ek taraf se sahi b hai.. It's our generation aur yeh saare bade log apne time mein toh maza karte aur jab humara time aaya toh lecture dene aa jate hai.. But yeh Sujal ki behen kuch zyada hi bigadi hui lag rahe hai aur sab CG k wajah se..

Anways contd soon.. Aur mujhe PM bhejna matt bhulna.. Well agar nahi b bhejogi toh b mai apna boaring comment se tumhe boar karne pohach jaogi.. Hehe..
See Ya..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
That was nice....Sujal is protective towards his sis....but how can a father not think abt his daughter's safety?? How stupid of him!!! And he also shouted at Kashish for no reason....is he brainless or wat??

Anyways, pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
grt going dear
pls do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Next day-

K was doing dusting of the room aur s sofe par baithkar koi file gaur se pad raha tha.

As she was dusting she was singing.

k-chigy..wigy..oh..chigy..wigy..chigy wigi chigi wigy

she was swaying with her own beats.

k-dhain tainaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!

s looks at her & raises an eyebrow.

s-apna ye radio band karne ka kya logi?

K turns & looks at him.

k- five thousand million dollars !

s rolls his eyes.

s-i am getting disturbed.

k-so ! kahin aur jaake padlo !

s-ye mera ghar hai !

k-maine kab kaha Goerge Bush ka ghar hai! Waise bhi kaam –vaam karne ka jee to tumhara karta nahi, ho hi tum nikamme, chale aaye mujhpe blame lagane!

s-zabaan sambhalke baat karo!

Jibh nikalti hai.

k-meri zabaan to sambhli hui hai!

Durr se uss ghar ki head servant chillake puchti hai

Head servant-arre kashish !!!!!! sab gandagi saaf ho gai kya ?

k-haaaaaaaaaaaan ! [now lowers her voice] sivae ek ke jo sofe par baithi hui hai!

S gives a hard stare to her , but she could care least.

Sujal ko gussa aa raha hai uspaar , par saath hi mein he is in a awe of her courage & frankness.

Pehle to gussa aata hai, par uska bachpana dekhke ek halki si muskurahat bhi chaa jaati hai.

At the breakfast table-

Sujal, his mother & his dad are sitting on the dinning table & kashish is serving them.

Mom- sanjana aai kal ? mujhse mili bhi nahi. Abhi so rahi hai kya?

S-aur kya? Har kaam to ulte hi hai naa. Maine usko samjhaya ki…

Dad-please sujal subah –subah negative baatein karna band karo!

s-negetive baatien nahi, isko apno ke lie care kehte hain. Par ye baat aap nahi samjhenge, kyunki ye aapne kabhi kiya hi nahi naa !

k is looking at everything silently .

d-sujal tum…

k cuts in between.

k-sir! Parathe aur doon?

d-shut up! Cant u keep quiet ! koi manners nahi hai, bl**dy orphan !

k's face loses all the sheen.

sujal & his mom look up.

d-ye hai natijaa app dono maa beti ki care ka. Khairaat mein le aae in bhikaariyon ko, aur apni beti aur beheno pe bandishe lagate hain ! pata nahi kahan kahan se paida ho jaate hain, kiska ganda khoon hai ! arre iske maa baap ne phek dia inko, tum kyun sametthi rehti ho ! hogi iski maa koi dhanda karne wali aur baap koi awaara !

k ke ankhon se asoo chalak jaate hain.

Sujal's mom cant take more wo uthke chali jaati hai.

d-ufffff pura din kharab kar dia !

he also gets up from the table.

S is sitting alone on the table aur k side mein khadi hoke dheere dheere ro rahi hai.

He knows wht his dad said was wrong & she must have been hurt.

But he doesn't knw what to see. How to console her, or whether to console her or not.

Should he get up too or not.

But wont that be rude.

So what if it is rude, she works there !

But whatever, but she is crying.

s-emm…emm…wo..ek…ek parantha aur dena !

k looks at him.

She rubs her eyes & puts a parantha on his plate.

s-emm…chai nahi hai !

k-[her voice is chocked] emm…haan..hai…deti hoon…

s-yeah!

He haves his breakfast, usko better feel karane ke chakkar mein sujal ne aaj thoda zyada hi khaa liya.

As he couldn't find anything more to speak, so wo 'parantha do' aur 'chai please' wali line kaafi baar repeat kar di thi.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
hey dear am sooooooooooooooooo happy u continued this ff................thanks a lot dear.................
cg is disgusting in this ff...................how can he say all those things to kashish........feel very sorry for her....................and sujal is a very protective brother but his dad is useless..............sujal is trying to make his sister understand but his dad is spoiling her to the worst.................

and the previous part i just lovedddddd it very much................kashish's reply to sujal and she singing the song and her arguments with him by god twas very awesome...................kashish tried to stop the argument but got worst things heard from cg.................oh i felt like why dont kashish put all the breakfast on his head.................but i liked sujal he tried to make her forget what happened...................cont soon dear....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awe....that was actually sweet....Sujal ko kuch baat karni thi....isiliye parathe bhi zyada khaye...how cute!!! But mujhe uske baap se bahut nafrat ho rahi hai.....uff...mad man!!!

Anyways, pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hey, i read ur ff now. it was awesome.i loved every updates.
cont.soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i am going back to hostel tomorrow.

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