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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaar koi comment hi nahi karta ! kya faida likhne ka?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awesome. kash is mast
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Posted: 16 years ago
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bye ppl u hav dissapointed me, pehle to main hoti nahi hun mahino tak jab hoti hun mera comp prob de raha hai uske bavjud bhi i write to no1 comments or reads, kya faida meri mehnat ka! its better not to ever write here!😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Abb idhar andaar s mom & wahan ke father r talkin-

S mom-father mujhe wo aapke orphanage se ek ladki, wo aapse baat?

Father-haan haan, I knw mrs garewal, ek ladki hai kashish thodi shararti hai,thoda bachpanaa hai paar..

S mom-nahi nahi wo sab thik hai vishvaasi honi chahie

f-tht thing u don?t worry

s mom-father, can I meet the girl ?

f-sure sure

father calls k

k comes in her tht usual attire ,running & jumpin in her usual manner

f-this is kashish!

K looks at the mom, eyebrow a bit raised

Mom is lookin at k with full astonished eyes, her eyes r bulging with surprise, she never expected this kinda gal

k-kya? Diamond button aise kya dekh rahi hai?

f-kashsih!!!!!!!! Speak properly, go frm here

k goes sayin-

k-sorry mam, I apologise, don?t mind job hi mujhe ghurke dekhta hai main sabko diamond button hi kehti hun, aap mujhe dekh hi aise rahi thi as if I am the 8th wonder of the world

sayin k goes

listenin to k?s sweet apology & childish innoscence a smile comes onto mom?s face

m-I?l take her to my house

f-thanku mrs garewal,but she will be able to come to ur place after 2-3 days as I have to tell her abt the news & she wld also need time to make up her mind

m-its ok take ur time father

sayin s ki mom goes

Edited by belanila - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Now nxt morning-]

K's frnd maaya was doin something in her room

K comes thr runnin, holds her hand & strts puuling her

k-maaaaaaayaaaa, come.lets go!!!!!!!! Come with me!!!!

m-wht? Wht is it?????? Whr r u takin me????

k-I'l tell u come with me first!

K takes maaya to a four lane road & makes herself & maaya hide near a tree

m-wht? Wht is it? Wht r u doin kashish?

Thr is a bucket full of water & mop kept thr

& gives her a box

m-wht r all these?

K opens the box

The box is full of eggs

m-wht???????????? Eggs?????????

k-no, this is our new business. Egg business!

m-egg business???????????? [all confused]

k-look, I'l tell u. wht we will do is, we will throw eggs on the cars passing on the road hidin frm here & then we will go & clean the cars with the mop, c 1 egg costs rs 2 & we will ask rs 10 frm the car owner for cleanin so 8 rupees profit! Din mein yahan pe kitneeeeeee cars jaati hai to soch din mein kitna profit ho sakta hai!

m-haan paar kisi ko pata chal gaya to!

k-tu befikr reh, u r with me naa! Koi aye to saamne kachumbar bana dungi!

Abb they strt there process, egg maarte hain,phir apna pontla uthae chal padte hain, saaf karne uss car ko

Aise 7-8 car pe hamla bol chuke hote hain

k-oye saamne dekh wo black car, chal maaya uspe nishaana laga hain!

They throw an egg car ke sheeshe paar

S ke sheeshe par naajaane kahan se ek egg aake sham! Girta hai

s-[baffles & confused] arre ye anda..kahan?

tabhi k & maaya come thr to clean the car

k-chalo chalo saab aapki car hum saaf kie dete hain!

S apni window kholta hai

K ko dekhta hai

s-tummmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!

k-tummmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K bass bhagne hi jaati hai ki iss baar right moment mein s holds her hand

s-aaj tumhe to main chodunga nahi!

Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!!!!!.....this time I'm finally commenting coz ur story is jus too great n funny...I enjoyed reading it a lot.....continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haha kashishs business idea is one of a kind
cute part loved it
wonder wat sujal will do now?
love
tanasha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so sorry for replying late...........i hope u understand........ok first it was very good atmoshphere on sunday......and OMG Kashish si soda keeper.............and plus the fight between SK......it was cute...........and sujal is such a stupid how can u misunderstood kashish as a boy......comeon u can tell .........but anyways finally he got to know that kashish is girl and more very attractictive girl............kashish needs to learn manners .........i mean how to talk to adluts........she is 18 now......god knows whats is in her destiny.........poor mom will have a hard time to teach kashish how to be a proper garewal bahu pretty soon.........but i like it the way she took kashish..........and kashish and maya......what r they thinking about........and for heaven shake why it is alwyas sujal...........oh god i hate egg on my car bcoz it is so hard to get rid of it..........but i am glad that sujal notice that it is kashish who is doing to him............i wonder what will happen between them in the garewal house...........war as love.........love as war..........ple ple ple continue soon..........cant wait any more......thanks
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kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this was soperb. pls cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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veeerrryyyy sssooorrryyyyyy 4 late reply..............................but ur story is ttooooo good.👏.....................buhat acha concept hai👏..................i like kashsih character...............kitne childish hai aur tommy boy😳...............all part were superb.........................kis tarah woh bar bar sujal key samne aathi hai aur phir koi sharat kar kay chali jati hai🤣🤣🤣.......................while reading all parts i can't control my laughing.......................plz con't soon

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