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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

fantastic update👏, it was really sweet and atul's absolutely right, no one can resist armaan's deewanapan for long. hmmmm..............so angie is coming, gr8 now she and atul can be together as well 😉 😆

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

kya???

only 2 replies??? come on.. anju-atul fans, where r u???

comment plz...

anyways..next part wil be up tmr...

i'll try to make it a long one...but i cant promise...

thanks for reading my ff anyways...

keep lovin' me... (wink**)

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

Fabulous part please continue soon.

Kashish

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

OMG thts lovely.... Anjie is coming tht sounds gud.. I'm sure Ridzi will fall in luv with Armaan...... plzz continue.....😊

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

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~~~ Part 11 ~~~

The next day...

The next day goes as per normal. Riddhima gets up early to go to the hospital. Everyone greets her with the usual warmth. The day passes by quickly. Though, sometime in the evening, Riddhima gets this new cute bespectacled patient - Dhairya {played by tt cute hari puttar boy in paanchvi paas}.

He comes in holding his mother's hand. Riddhima greets him and his mother, smiling. Dhairya, who was earlier tensed and scared, smiles in return, when he sees Riddhima's kind and caring face.

{Riddhima >>> Ridz, Dhairya >>> D, Dhairya's mom >>> DM}

Ridz: Good afternoon. Main hoon Dr Riddhima.

DM: Namastey Dr Riddhima.

D: Hi Dr Aunty.

Ridz (smiling warmly at him): Hi beta. Aapka naam kya hai?

D: Dhairya.

Ridz: Accha naam hai.

D: Thank you Dr Aunty.

Ridz (turning to Dhairya's mom): Ji, aap boliye ki aapke bete ko kya hua hai?

DM: Aapko kaise pata ki main apne bete ke liye hi yahaan aayi hoon?

Ridz: Main aapke chehre pe pareshaani saaf dekh sakti hoon. Agar aapke sehat ki baat hoti, toh aap itna pareshaan nahin hoti. Koi bhi maa, apne aap se zyada apne bacchon ke liye chintit hoti rehti hai.

DM: Ji. Aapne sahi kaha. Main Dhairya ke liye hi pareshaan hoon.

Ridz: Ji, boliye kya problem hai.

DM: Problem yeh hai ki Dhairya kuch khata hi nahin. I mean, jo kuch bhi woh khata hai, usse ulti (vomit) mein nikaal deta hai. Saadi-si daal roti ke liye bhi aisa karta hai. Thoda sa paani peene ke baad bhi ulti karta hai. Pet mein kuch khazam hi nahin hota, phir bhi, aksar kehta hai ki woh bhookhi hai.

Ridz: Oh, I see. Aur kuch problem toh nahin hai na? Jaise ki, pet mein bohot dard hona.

DM: Haan. Uske pet mein dard pichle teen-chaar dino se tha, lekin mujhe laga ki maamooli sa dard hai. Lekin, kal jab usko khaane ke baad ulti hone lagi, aur aaj bhi yeh hua, toh main use yahaan le aayi.

Ridz: Aapne bilkul theek kiya. Mujhe kuch andaaza hai ki Dhairya ko kya hua hai, lekin confirm karne ke liye, mujhe usko zaraa sa examine karna padhega.

After Riddhima examines him...

{one thing to tell u guyys...i'm no science student...i'm in the arts stream, so, if i make any mistake when writing abt medical stuff like this, then plz forgive me... and, this illness of dhairya is gonna be smth like appendicitis... i dunno if it exactly is, or is smth different...the same problem happened to my baby bro...when he was 2, and he had to go for an operation... so tt's why he has a scar on his stomach...tt poor little cute baby bro of mine... oohhh... he was really cute as a kid...even cuter than me... if anyone wants to see the pics, then be sure to PM me...hehe...anyways...yeah, after tt operation, he was much better... but, now, at the age of 13...he's such a brat... still cute, or as so my friends find him, coz like non of them have brothers, only sisters, or they are the only-child...he irritates me everyday, but, i still love him, coz of course, he is my bro... anyways...moving back to the story, before i forget what i was planning to write...}

Ridz: Aapke bete ko appendicitis hai.

DM: Ji, yeh appendicitis kya hota hai?

Riddhima explains to Dhairya's mother that appendicitis really is, and when she gets scared, Ridz ensures her that nothing will happen to her child - Dhairya will be perfectly fine. Riddhima's confidence calms down Dhairya's mother, and she, taking Riddhima's advice, trusts in the doctors and decides to admit Dhairya to the hospital immediately, to have his operation done. Riddhima goes with Dhairya's mother to admit him, and makes Dhairya lie down on the hospital bed, patting his head. Dhairya's mother sits down beside his hospital bed, as Riddhima gets the anaesthetist to give him an injection so that he goes to sleep, and then the operation, which will better if done as soon as possible, can be done faster.

{like i said...i dunno if the hospitals work like this...so if i make a mistake plz forgive me}

While taking the injection, Dhairya gets scared, and wants his mother to be with him, but as she is filling up some more forms, Riddhima stays with him, assuring him. As Dhairya holds Riddhima's hands while getting the injection from the anaesthetist, the his mother comes in, and smiles seeing Dhairya and Riddhima. Before she leaves, Riddhima talks to Dhairya some more.

Ridz: Vaise Dhairya, main tumse ek baat poochoon?

D: Haan, zaroor Dr Aunty.

Ridz: Tum itne chote ho, aur tumhare pet mein itna dard ho raha hai. Tumne abhi tak ek aasoon nahin nikaala.

D: Nahin. Meri mummy aur papa ki kehte hain ki bade bacche nahin rotey. Aur main toh big boy hoon, na?

Riddhima smiles at Dhairya's innocent answer, and ruffles his hair. As she turns to leave, Dhairya's mother stops her, leaving something to ponder over.

DM: Dr Riddhima.

Ridz (turning back): Haan ji...?

DM: Aap bacchon se bohot pyaar karti hai na?

Ridz: Haan. Bacche hi aise hote hain. Bohot pyaare. Jaise ki aapka beta.

DM: Thanks.

Ridz: Vaise, aapne kyun poocha?

DM: Bas, aise hi. Kyunki aap pehli woh pehli doctor hain jisse Dhairya ne khulke baat ki. Varna woh doctors se darta rehta hai.

Ridz: Don't worry. Aksar sab chote bacche doctors se darte hain.

DM: Haan, yeh toh pata hai. Lekin main yeh kehna nahin chahti thi. Mere kehne ka matlab yeh tha ki, jis tarah se aapne Dhairya se baat ki, usse examine kiya, vagerah-vagerah (etc.-etc.); aur pehle bhi aapke jab hum aapse milne aaye the, aapne meri pareshaani ki vajah jhat se dhoondh nikaali, main aapko bataa sakti hoon, ki jab aap maa banegi na, toh aap duniya ki sabse acch maa hongi.

Ridz (blushing): Ji, shukriya.

Riddhima then leaves from the room where Dhairya is, pondering over what his mother has just said.

Meanwhile...

Armaan is shown in the cricket field, playing the last of the matches - the finals. His team wins the toss, and being the captain of the team, he choses to bowl first. In the 20-20 over match, his team bowls quite well, giving the opposing team only about 5 extras. The opposing team, batting first, makes 146 runs.

Armaan is worried, because during half time, one of his team's best players suddenly gets really bad leg cramps and so cannot play. The substitute player is called, but not being as good as the other players, Armaan is worried for him, and his team. Plus, Armaan's team players are more bowlers than batsmen.

Soon, half-time is over, and the game resumes. The match soon progresses forward, going quite smoothly, with the other players hitting well. There a few sixes here, and another few fours there, and Armaan's team does manage to catch up with their opponent. Armaan's team score is 140, and they have 7 runs to make in 3 balls. Armaan is quite confident that he will win this match.

However, during the third-last ball, a player gets bowled out, and the substitute player is called. The substitute player, too gets out, but by his own mistake whereby he is run-out. Now, Armaan groans, and is really scared of winning the match - meaning, he badly wants to, but is not sure he will.

So looks up to the sky, asking God to give him some confidence, and help him play well and win the match. He closes his eyes, too, for a while, and when he opens them and looks back at the ground, he sees Riddhima sitting at the stands, beside Kritikaa, watching him. He looks up again, thanking God for sending Riddhima there, to have her watching his match finals.

Besides taking God's name, Armaan also takes Riddhima's name. Then, thinking in his mind that this is one way he can really impress Riddhima, by batting well, and helping his team win, or even is he does not win, show her that he is so good at something; he finally hits the ball that his bowled at him by the opposing team's bowler.

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 16 years ago

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Armaan is so cute... trying to impress Ridzi....😉 luved the update.. Plzz continue soon... plzz do PM...........

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#87

~~~ Part 12 ~~~

Armaan closes his eyes, taking Riddhima's name. He opens his eyes again, and when the bowler hits throws the ball, Armaan hits it with all his might. Everyone, including Riddhima, wait with awaited breath, hoping that Armaan does score. And indeed, he does.

The ball soars high in the sky, and lands more than 20 metres away from the field. The referee puts his hands up - it's a six. Everyone in Armaan's team, especially, screams in happiness. Armaan's team has won - by 3 wickets.

Armaan shakes hands with members of the opposing team, before those in his own team come and hug him, congratulating him. Soon, the crowd thins out, and Riddhima and Kritikaa are at Armaan's side. Riddhima congratulates Armaan, hugging him. As she does, Armaan feels an electric current going through his whole body.

Riddhima: Congrats Armaan, tum match jeet gaye.

Armaan (in signals): Shukriya.

Kritikaa: Bhaiyya aapko thank you keh rahe hain.

Riddhima (smiling at Kritikaa): Haan, yeh mujhe pata hai. Tum sach mein kitne acche khelte ho, Armaan. Main sach mein, is baat se impress ho gayi.

Armaan (blushing): Shukriya.

Riddhima: Arre, phir se thanks?!! Is mein thanks ki kya baat hai? Ab toh hum dost hain na?

Armaan nods his head.

Riddhima: Toh kya aapne sunaa nahin? Dosti mein no no thank you, no sorry.

Armaan, elated that Riddhima called him her friend, just smiles in response - he can't even find the proper words to explain his feelings.

Riddhima: Heyy, Armaan. Hum walk ke liye chalen?

Armaan looks at Kritikaa, wondering if she will also come along. Riddhima understands, and nods in response.

Riddhima: Haan, Kritikaa bhi humare saath aa sakti hai, aur Atul bhi.

Armaan looks behind his shoulders, to see Atul jogging towards them. Atul joins them for the walk. Riddhima comes beside Armaan to talk to him as they walk. Atul is on the other side of Armaan, helping sometimes to translate Armaan's signs for Riddhima to understand better, if she does have any difficulty. Kritikaa on the other hand, is bouncing ahead of them, as always, her usual and happy self. This day again, ends on a happy note.

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 16 years ago

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#88

~~~ Part 13 ~~~

The next day...

Armaan's mother is shown in the kitchen, making some kheer for Armaan's and Atul's success in the match. Kritikaa, comes into the kitchen smelling the oh-so-wonderful-smell of her favourite mithaayi.

Kritikaa: Oh, maa. Yeh khushboo kya kheer ki hai?

{i forgot the name of their mom, so for now, i'll just write it as maa}

Maa: Haan, beta. Lekin yeh kheer kiske tere liye nahin hai.

Kritkaa: Toh kiske liye hai?

Maa: Yeh kheer maine khaas tumhare Atul aur Armaan bhaiyya ke liye banayi hai. Kal ki cricket match unhone jeet li na, isiliye.

Kritikaa: Oh. Toh phir bhi, kya mujhe thodi kheer mil sakti hai?

Maa: Nahin.

Kritikaa: Please, maa?

Maa: Yeh baat tum apne dono bhaiyya se pooch lo.

Kritikaa runs, bounding out of the kitchen, just as Armaan and Atul are coming in. She bumps into them, and they have to literally catch her, before she falls down, and brings them down with her. She asks Armaan and Atul if she can have a share of their kheer, and they agree.

Armaan and Atul then go out of the house, after wishing their mother good morning, to collect their usual flowers, for the pooja (morning prayers), giving them to the panditji at the local temple, before heading back to their home.

They come back, tired of walking, because today, the panditji was not at the temple, and they had to practically go around the whole village looking, searching, until they finally find him, and after a quick wash, basically of their hands, sit down at the dining table, to eat the delicious kheer that their mother has made.

However, to their shock, when they open the lid of the utensil that their mother has made the kheer in, they find it empty. Curious, and slightly angry, as to who could have finished the kheer meant for them, they turn around, to find Kritikaa behind them, with an empty bowl in her hands, along with a spoon too, and some slight remains of the kheer around her mouth.

She looks guilty, but still naughty as ever. Armaan and Atul finally realize what Kritikaa has done, and, getting up from their chairs, they start chasing Kritikaa around the house.

But that small child, seems quite clever from them. She goes under chairs, which they possibly cannot, simply because they will get stuck there. Then, Kritikaa runs, though almost flying, out of the house, and into their "aangan" {you know...like the one where Ridz was singing and dancing when Armaan first saw her...well, just to tell u again...Armaan's home's aangann is separated from the one in nisha's home by a low wall}.

That actually turns out to be a mistake, as far as Kritikaa is concerned. Kritikaa, upon entering the aangann, looks around for somewhere to hide. She sees that low wall, separating her aangann from Nisha's, and tries to jump over, when she sees Armaan and Atul running towards her from behind.

However, Atul and Armaan manage to catch her. Armaan carries her into their home, and sets her on the sofa in the living room. Then, Armaan and Atul both look at each other, nodding and winking, before they set upon Kritikaa, tickling her. Unable to hold the laughter in her, Kritikaa bursts out, laughing.

{armaan talks in signs again...remember tt guyys...}

Kritikaa: Bhaiyya, rukiye na.

Armaan: Kyun?

Atul: Haan, bolo, kyun?

Kritikaa: Kyunki main sorry hoon.

Armaan: Nahin us baat ke liye nahin.

Atul: Hum kyun is baat ke liye pooch rahe the ki tumne humara kheer kyun khaya?

Kritikaa: Bhaiyya, main apne aap ko ruk nahin paayi.

Atul: Kya matlab?

Kritikaa: Mera matlab yeh hai ki maa itni acchi kheer banati hai. Aur jab maine aapse poocha ki kya main aapke kheer kha sakti hoon, aur aapne haan kaha, main toh kheer khane lagi. Lekin, ek baar khaane ke baad bhi pet nahin bhara, aur khane ka mann kar raha tha.

Armaan and Atul laugh at Kritikaa's cute but naughty childish behaviour. Well, Atul laughs, but Armaan, knowing that he cannot speak, just smiles.

Sometime later, in the evening, at the hospital...

Riddhima is shown to be having fun with some of the children at the hospital. She is handing out balloons to them, to cheer them up. Seeing their favourite Dr. Aunty, all the kids run to her, and claim their balloons.

When the kids go away, to play among themselves, Riddhima sees that there is just one balloon left.

This, she decides, to give to Dhairya - the cute bespectacled boy who was one of her absolute favourite kids, right here in the hospital. Dhairya thanks Riddhima, by giving her a kiss on the cheek. And Riddhima, tells him to rest well, as he just had an operation. Dhairya smiles in return.

After that, Riddhima goes to the locker room in the hospital, to pack the stuff she left in one of the lockers. She finishes, but just as she comes out of the locker room, she bumps into someone...