Kuchh Naa Kaho (AR)- unable to continue/ note pg14 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ superb😛 so sweet😊😉 so he cant able to meet her😆😆😳 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

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Waar Karte Hain Aur Haath Main Talwar Bhi Nahi
Chup Chup K Humara Deedar Karte Hain Wo
Aur Poocho Tou Kehte Hain K Pyar Bhi Nahi. ."



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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy guyys... sorry ki i didnt update for some time, like i promised...
ab main monday till update nahin kar sakti... sorry guyys... but i will be very busy till monday, with tuitions and all, since normally weekdays the tuition teachers are not tt free... plus, i have a relative in hospital, and one of my distant relatives too passed away recently, due to (as to what i suspect) the mistake of some stupid doctors and nurses (not tt i wanna offend anyone, but tt's just how i feel it is...)...thanks for understanding...see ya all soon enuf (i hope!!)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow, i wish i had ridz's luck, there'snothingi would have loved more than our own hot armaan falling on me 😉 😆 and u're quite lucky urself to have someone so special in ur life, unfortunately in the 20+ yrs i've been on this earth, i've never managed to fall in love, sad isn't it??? worse than drew barrymore in "never been kissed"
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Posted: 16 years ago
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However, Armaan, from his spot of lying down on the grass, continues to stare at Riddhima, not believing his luck, that his dream lady is finally here, in front of his eyes.
On the other hand, Riddhima stares at him too, but for a different reason.
NOTE: no pics in this part, coz i just didnt think it wud be tt necessary...
~~~ Part 9 ~~~
Angry, Riddhima gets up, in a huff, and puts her hands on her hips. She can be seen, practically steaming from her ears, eyes red and popping out, glaring with anger at the stranger man who knocked her down, and now is busy staring at her instead of apologizing.
Armaan, on the other hand, is still staring at Riddhima. Armaan tries his best to get at least the word "sorry" out of his mouth, but cannot do so. Riddhima gets even more angry, and finally opens her mouth to scold him, to get him to apologize.
Riddhima: Yeh toh battameezi ki had hi hui. Ek toh tumne mujhe giraaya, aur upar se sorry bhi bol rahe ho. Accha! Shayad tumhein pata nahin hoga ki yeh sorry shabd kya hai. Sorry ko hum hindi mein kehte hain - maafi maangna. Ab tum mujhse maafi maango. Tumne mujhe giraaya, neeche zameen pe. Dekho, mere kapdon pe mitti lag gayi hai. Ab kya tumhari maa mere kapdon ko saaf karegi? Haan?!! Bolo...
All this while that Riddhima is scolding Armaan, he is busy staring at her. He does hear and understand everything Riddhima is saying, but he is too busy staring at her, and dreaming about her to pay attention to the fact that she is actually scolding him. Whatever words come out of Riddhima's mouth seem like honey to him. However, Riddhima now thinks of Armaan as a total idiot, an irrespectful man, who even after knocking down someone does not bother to apologize to her.
Riddhima: Tum kuchh kyun nahin bolte? Kya behre ho, ki go kuch main keh rahi hoon tumhein sunaayi nahin deta? Ya phir andhe ho, ki tum mujhe dekh nahin sakte, aur yeh bhi dekh nahin sakte ki tumne mujhe giraa diya?
Armaan, knowing as he cannot speak, and afraid that Riddhima may misunderstand him, tries to make some signs with his hands, that will make Riddhima understand that he is asking for forgiveness from her. However, Riddhima does misunderstand, and starts shouting at him again. By now, most of the cricket players have gathered around Armaan and Riddhima, in a circle, trying to intervene, yet, scared to say something fr the fear of thy young lady, who may shout back at them instead.
Meanwhile, Kritikaa, who has also heard the commotion, comes near the small crowd gathered there, sees her brother, and someone shouting at him, and intervenes. When she comes near, and sees Riddhima's face clearly, she is shocked.
She pulls on Riddhima's dupatta, and Riddhima bends down to see Kritikaa, and talk to her. Kritikaa solves the misunderstanding that Riddhima has for Armaan, explaining his situation, and that her brother has been a mute since young itself. When he was born, he had difficulty crying. The midwife {coz the village did not have a hospital at that time} did their best to make him do so, right after he was born, but there was some problem with his vocal cords and all, and then when he contracted tonsilitis soon after, this made the problem worse. Now finally, or rather, hopefully, that a hospital has opened up, Armaan is going for treatment, to help him in his speech, so that hopefully, after remaining silent for so many years, he will be able to express his own opinion, through his own mouth, rather than having someone explain it for him.
Listening to Kritikaa explain all this to her, Riddhima gets sad, and when she realizes her mistake, apologizes to Armaan. Armaan, who this time fully understands what she is saying, just smiles in response, then, turning to Kritikaa, makes some hand actions. Kritikaa once again turns to Riddhima, to explain what Armaan just said to tell her.
Kritikaa: Bhaiyya ne mujhe aapse kehne ko kaha ki usse tumse maafi maangni chahiye, ki usne aapko giraaya.
Riddhima: (to Armaan) Nahin, its okay. Infact, mujhe aapse maafi maangni chahiye. Maine aapko kya kuch nahin kaha, aur aapne kuch nahin kaha.
Kritikaa (conveying Armaan's message): Par main toh bachpan se hi kuch nahin keh sakta.
Riddhima: Haan, par sun toh sakte ho. Main itna kuch buraa keh rahi thi, mujhe thappad (slap) hi maar liya hota.
Kritikaa: (conveying Armaan's message) Koi kitna bhi buraa kahe, main kisiko nahin maar sakta. Maa ne hi aisa sikhaya.
Riddhima: Toh isiliye tum bohot sanskari ho. Aur sorry haan. Main bohot gusse mein thi, aur ghar bhi miss kar rahi thi, isiliye tumpar kuch zyada zor se chillayi.
Kritkaa: (conveying Armaan's message) Rehna do. (now to Riddhima) Ab Ridzi didi, maafi maanga khatam ho gaya ho, toh main aapko apne pyare se bhaiyya se milaa loon?
Riddhima (slightly laughing): Haha. Theek hai milaa do.
Kritikaa: Ridzi didi, yeh hai mere Armaan bhaiyya. Aur bhaiyya, yeh hai Ridzi didi. Naam hai Riddhima, lekin usne mujhe use Ridzi didi kehne ko kaha. Vaise, yeh Nisha didi ki dost hai, aur humare ghar ke saamne hi reh rahi hai, Nisha didi ke saath.
Armaan (thinking to himself): Oh! Toh, jo main us raat dekha, woh sab sach mein ho raha tha. Riddhima hi mere sapnon mein aayi thi, aur woh hi meri dream girl hai. Toh Atul bhi sach keh raha tha. Main Riddhima ko pehli nazar se hi pyaar karne laga, varna use dekhte hi meri saasein aise atak nahin jaate.
Riddhima, smiles in return, and sticks her hand out to Armaan, for a handshake, which indicates the start of friendship. Armaan, takes Riddhima's hands in his, and immediately feels electricity running through his whole body. Later when Riddhima goes, and the crowd also disperses, Atul comes towards Armaan, lightly patting his shoulder, and smiling.
Meanwhile, Armaan thinks to himself "Mujhe usse haath milaana nahin chahiye tha. Usse dekhti hi meri saasein tham si jaati hai. Phir, usse chooh ke ek pal ke liye meri dhadkan bhi ruk gayi thi." {Translation: I shouldn't have shook hands with her. Just seeing her took my breath away. Now, touching her, made my heart stop, even if for a moment.}
Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Hey fabulous part, keep it up, continue soon and PM me of possible

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Hi Friend 😊
Nice update. The overall scene between Armaan and Riddhima was very nicely put up. And i am liking the way Kritikaa supports Armaan. Hope Riddhima too falls in love with Armaan, sooner or later.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved the part, especially the convo b/w Armaan and ridz. Omg!!!! Armaan is such a gentleman and sooo charming. If I was ridz I would have fallen for him right then and there.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Hey there ... good ff. And liked your concept very much. Well, Armaan ko waise bhi bolne ki zyada zaroorat toh nahi hai ... his eyes are sufficient to convey all his thoughts.

I read all parts in one go today. And looking forward to read your updates. Request you to PM me whenever u update.

Cheers,
Suvarna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP: Armaan and Riddhima finally come face-to-face. There is first some small misunderstanging between them, but it clears up, and they shake hands - signalling the start of a beautiful friendship.
NOTE FOR THIS PART: No specific AR scene, but... someone is gna be introduced today...and i'm giving u guyys a clue... AA fans be ready... oh, and...this part is kinda short coz i dont have much time to type out all i had planned for this part... the rest will be posted up in another part, tmr...
~~~ Part 10 ~~~
Riddhima goes back to the hospital, to wait for Nisha. As she goes, Armaan remains behind, staring after her as she goes. Soon, everyone also leaves, only Armaan, Atul and Kritikaa are left behind. Kritikaa walks ahead, of Armaan and Atul, as they head towards home.
{Armaan again talks in various signs, but for u all to understand, and to make things easier, i'll just write down everything he "says"}
Armaan: Mujhe yakeen hi nahin ho raha hai, ki main usse mila.
Atul: Haan, yaar. Tum toh bohot lucky ho.
Armaan: I know. Ab toh hum dost bhi ban gaye. Aagey raastey main, shayad usse bhi mujhse pyar ho jaayega.
Atul: Shayad nahin. Zaroor ho jaayega.
Armaan: Tumhein kaise pata?
Atul: Yeh tera tera deewana-jaise-pehli-nazar-mein-hi-pyaar hai na?!... (At this point, our dear Armaan blushes...) Yeh ek na ek din uska dil zaroor jeet lega. Aur vaise bhi, pyaar ki shuruaat dosti se hi hoti hai, aur ab toh tum dono dost ho.
Armaan: Haan. Aaj main bohot khush hoon. Mujhe meri dream girl aakhir mil hi gayi, bas uska dil jeetna baaki reh gaya hai.
Atul: Haan, yeh baat toh sach hai. Aur tu sach mein bohot lucky hai. Tujhe toh apni dream girl mil hi gayi, mujhe kab milegi?
As Atul says this, Riddhima, who is entering the hospital again, gets a call on her cell-phone. {The person on the other line is just shown as a shadow}
Riddhima: Hello! Kaun bol raha hai?
Other line: Main!
Riddhima: Kaun, main?
Other line: Main, main!
Riddhima: Kya? Kaun bakri baat kar rahi hai? Bakri bhi phone kar sakti hai kya? Vaise, main bhi kitni buddhu hoon, ki bakri se baat kar rahi hoon. Ab phone rakh rahi hoon. 😆 {personally, i found this part quite funny - as i wrote it, i was laughing at the same time too}
Other line: Arre, Ridz... Phone mat rakh... Sorry...
Riddhima: Oh, toh madam ab sorry bol rahi hai.
Other line: Haan. Sorry.
Riddhima: Ok. Apology accepted. Vaise bolo, itni der baat hi meri yaad aayi? Pehle phone kyun nahin kiya?
Other line: Main busy thi. Aur vaise bhi, tumne bhi phone nahin kiya mujhe.
Riddhima: Karti kaise. Aap ek toh out-of-town gayi thi. Doosri baat yeh ki aap hamesha apna cell khoti rehti hai. Main har baar aapka naya number yaad nahin kar sakti.
Other line: Accha, baba. Ab maaf kiya na?! Toh argument khatam. Vaise, mere paas tere liye good news hai.
Riddhima: Kya? Kaisi good news?
Other line: Main, vahaan aa rahi hoon. Tumhare paas, kuch mahino ke liye rehne.
Riddhima: Really?!! (Ridz gets really excited when she hears this news, and her response is as enthusiastic too...)
Other line: Haan. Paanch din ke andar.
Riddhima: Lekin aapka kaam?
Other line: Bhaad mein gaya mera kaam. Itne saalon mein maine ek bhi holiday nahin liya, toh ab le rahi hoon. Vaise, main apni hi boss hoon, toh koi mujhe fire nahin kar sakta. Aur kuch samay ke liye, yeh office waale mere bina kaam sambhaal sakte hain. Agar koi problem hui, toh vaise bhi, papa hain na? {ok guyys...at this pt of time, i dont exactly remember what she does for a living, but i'll change it tt she has taken over her dad's business, and is succeccfully running it, too...and who is the she??? well...read on a bit more to find out...}
Riddhima: Haan, yeh toh sach hai. Accha di, ab main hospital mein hoon, aur Nisha mujhe bulaa rahi hain. Aapse baad mein baat karti hoon? Theek hai?
(ok...by now u shud have guessed who is this new person...)
Other line: Ok. Bye Ridzi.
Riddhima: Bye Di.
Riddhima cuts the call, and so does the person on the other line. As she keeps the phone back on its rack, they show her facial profile again. Her head, eyes, nose, lips, eyes again; and then her full face - she is none other than Anjali (Sunaina Gulia... and i really luv her...so pretty, esp in this pic...)
The scene shifts back to Atul and Armaan, as they enter their house, with Kritikaa bouncing right ahead of them.
Atul: Haan, Armaan. Tum theek keh rahe ho. Jaise tumhein apni dream girl mili, vaise mujhe bhi milegi. Pata nahin kab, kaise. Lekin, us waqt ka mujhe besabri se intezaar hai.
Armaan pats Atul on the back, wishing him luck in finding his dream girl. They both part ways, go to their various rooms to freshen up, before coming back out to have their dinner again. After which, they talk a while before going to sleep. Both their individual minds are thinking about their dream girls.
Armaan's mind -
Atul's mind - LOLzzz... coz, of course...he is still awaiting his dream girl...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hmmm ... Anjie coming in picture now. How I wish here also AA pair up.
Armaan is chooo chweet ... just being acquainted with her has made him so happy ... damn, how can he love Riddhima so much???
Thanks for the PM and read from you soon!!!
Cheers,
Suvarna

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