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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy guyys...

i know ya all may not have liked this part tt much, especially since its so short... well, sorry for tt guyys, i was really busy, and i tried my very best..

now, i have piano classes to attend, after which i have to come back and do an assignment... if i have time to do post another part today, i sure will, if not, then tmr... sunday maybe one more short part if possible, since i have guests coming over to my home for a diwali party... then monday i will be practicing like hell for my project presentation on tuesday afternoon, so i wont update then...

tuesday i end at abt 5, so maybe arnd 6-7 u'll get a short part, but then after tt, meaning after 9 onwards, i'll be either posting really really long parts, or many many many short parts to make up for it...

then from tt wednesday onwards, u'll be getting 1-2 short parts or a really long part once a day, or if i dont have time, then once in 2-3days at most...

hope ya all will understand my dear yaars...

oh, and also, if u plz, u can read my blog, which i started just this afternoon while i was taking a short break from tt assignment tt i hv been cracking my head over (i didnt have much time, so couldnt update another long/short part, as i normally take time to put the thoughts down...)

here's the link:
oh, and if ur confused as to why i kept my name is nandini, is well, coz it is... i mean, i have 2 names - neha and nandini... but i prefer neha... but then again, all my school friends call me nani/nandu - the nicknames for nandini...
plz comment on my posts if possible
ps... did ya all know tt the girl who is acting in aapko pehle kahin dekha hai, saakshi, is shilpa anand's sister?? i didnt know until i saw a video of one of the movie's songs on star plus while eating my lunch earlier this afternoon... i thought she looked very much like shilpa, then i just googled her in, and found out, they are sister... LOLz... i am kinda slow, aint i?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
cool part;D
finally armaan is here to rock
and the part with his sis was damn cute
haha make armaan nishas neighbour or something
than in that way they can meet more often;D
anyways do cont as soon as you get the time
its kinda understandable that with the amt of work you get and all...its ok if u dotn update that regularly...
love
tanu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
Cool update.... Armaan n Kritz bit was really cute n sweet... Nish aseems to b interesting.. Plzz continue...m jus luving it.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oohhh... i can finally get to continue... though i still have some more documents to submit, i cant do any more changes to them unless i get back the earlier drafts, so right now, i have nothing to do except to update... i know im supposed to be practicing the piano and guitar for my classes, but i thought i wud just take a break for one day, today, and continue tt from tmr...
well anyways, i will try my veru best to post 2 parts before the end of today... first, only the written parts will be posted up, then, when both of them are done with, i will edit them and put pics up too...
so, here goes...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~~~ Part 6 ~~~
Riddhima and Nisha reach Nisha's house, and Riddhima freshens up before they all go out to a dhaba for a quick lunch.
Riddhima orders Aloo Chaat, and a veg biryani set; while Nisha orders Aloo Chaat too, and Aloo Paratha.
Riddhima: Nish! Tum itne aloo khaati ho, kabhi moti nahin hoti?
Nisha: tum toh mujhe pehle se hi jaanti ho, toh phir kyun poochh rahi ho?
Riddhima: Meri toh shaadi fixed hai, lekin agar tumne thoda sa weight put on nahin kiya na, toh koi ladka tumse shaadi nahin karega. Guys hate girls who are too skinny.
Nisha: Haan, haan, go on. Make fun of me. Aur phir main tumse baat nahin karoongi.
Riddhima: Heyy, Nisha. Vaise, tum jaanti ho ki main tumhare saath hamesha mazaak karti rehti hoon, toh kyun itni serious ho jaati ho?
Nisha: Kuchh nahin, aur never mind. Ab lunch break khatam ho gaya hai, aur upar se, I took an extended lunch break. And, I have to get back to the hospital. Toh, tum jadli khaa. Main tumhein ghar drop kar deti hoon, phir i'll go to the hospital. Tum parso se hospitakl join kar sakti ho, if you want.
Riddhima: Aye-aye mam.
Nisha: Accha.. Ab enough mazaak, sach mein, start eating, aur lets go.
Soon, Riddhima and Nisha finish eating, and leave from the dhaba. As said, Nisha drops off Riddhima at her home, then goes off to the hospital. Riddhima has a quick nap, before she decides to have a stroll in the village.
While walking along, nicely, peacefully, Riddhima chances upon an open space, where a few kids trying to fly kites.
Suddenly, one of the kite-flyer's kite gets stuck in a high branch. The girl who the kite belongs to, looks around, trying to find an adult, or at least, someone tall enough to untangle the kite. The girl, is Kritika, and seeing Riddhima, approaches her.
At first, Riddhima doesn't notice her, but when Kritika actually starts pulling lightly on Riddhima's kurti, then she does. Riddhima looks down, to see a small-si cute-si girl.
Riddhima (bending down): Hello. Aapka naam kya hai, aur aap mera kurta aisa kyun odh rahe hain?
Kritika: I am Kritikaa, lekin jo log mere dost hain, woh mujhe Kritz kehlaate hain.
Riddhima: Oh. Toh, kya main tumhein Kritz bulaaoon?
Kritz: Nahin, aap meri dost nahin hai na.
Riddhima: Toh kya hua? Main toh tumhari dost ban sakti hoon na?
Kritz: Haan, ban sakti ho. Lekin, pehle, aap mere liye please mera kite laa sakte hain, uhmmm...
Riddhima: Riddhima.
Kritz: Riddhima didi?!
Riddhima: Sure, why not?! Tum mujhe didi bulaa sakti ho. Ab chalo, apna kite dikhaao, kahaan hai?
Riddhima helps Kritikaa get back her kite. They talk some more, and Kritikaa finally accepts Riddhima as her friend. After quite some time, as the sun starts to set, Riddhima and Kritikaa walks toward their respective residences - Kritikaa to her home, and Riddhima to Nisha's - they both realise that they're staying directly opposite each other.
Riddhima, after having safely dropped off Kritikaa at her home, goes back inside Nisha's then gets ready for dinner, while Nisha comes back from the hospital; Natasha from her work; the grandmother is already at home, in the kitchen, working.
After dinner, Riddhima decides to talk to Kannav, as she is missing him, so she walks to the room she has been given. Her room opens out onto the aangann, where at one end, there is a tulsi plant; another end, there is a mini garden, with flowers; another end, an open space, with just grass and some paved walkway. All this has been "barricaded" a low-lying wall.
As she talks on the phone, Kannav requests her to sing a song, any one of his favourites. She then starts singing Ishq Hua (from Aaja Nachle)
Hulchal hui, zaraa shor hua
Dil chor hua, teri ore hua
Hulchal hui, zaraa shor hua
Dil chor hua, teri ore hua
Aisi chali jab hawaa
Ishq hua hi hua
Haan...
Aisi chali jab hawaa
Ishq hua hi hua
While she is singing, she gets into the mood, and starts dancing too. She is really absorbed in her own world. Happy, content, satisfied. Little does she know, however, that someone is watching her from the "wall", and that someone, whom she will meet sooner or later, will change her life. Forever. That person will love her so deeply, that she couldn't even have thought about it. That person will give her all the happiness in the world, and will think of her as his world, sacrificing wherever necessary. That she too, will one day come so close to that person, that she will begin to wonder why a Kannav even came into her life, if she was meant to get closer to another person.
Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh👍🏼 its awesome⭐️ so sweet😊 too gud😛 so she has arrived😳 and now she is going to meet armaan😊😉 so excited plz continue it soon😊

"You may find someone better than me, important than me, dearer than me, but not the one who loves you more than me."

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part!!!!!!
now only i happend 2 c ur 5th n 6th parts!!!!!!!

i loved them already!!!!!!
loved the last lines which r very interesting

Little does she know, however, that someone is watching her from the "wall", and that someone, whom she will meet sooner or later, will change her life. Forever. That person will love her so deeply, that she couldn't even have thought about it. That person will give her all the happiness in the world, and will think of her as his world, sacrificing wherever necessary. That she too, will one day come so close to that person, that she will begin to wonder why a Kannav even came into her life, if she was meant to get closer to another person.

and telling how interesting will b the next parts!!!!!
nice move in the story!!!!!!!

make the other part ASAP!!!!!!!

PS ... I happend 2 c ur blog !!!!!!!!
i liked it!!!!!!!
update ur blog with something more interesting!!!!!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy guyys... sorry for not updating over the weekend.. i know i was not really tt busy, but i had kinda a family tragedy to deal with... i'll try my very best to update now.. hopefully i can concentrate... and sorry if there are any mistakes or its not tt enjoyable...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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(just a little note b4 i start ji...) heyy ji... how all my viewers/readers doing? hope ya all like my ff so far... keep reading, and reply too... even if u like it, or dont like it, plz still reply to me, then i will know where i went wrong and can improve from there... its kinda impt for every ff author to know that his/her ff is actually being read and enjoyed by ppl.... thanks ya all... now, for today's part...

~~~ Part 7 ~~~

Armaan hears Riddhima singing, and is mesmerized. He tries to go closer to that he can see her face, but is still unable to. Suddenly, a gust of wind comes and blows Riddhima's dupatta off her neck. But she doesn't notice it because she is busy talking to Kannav. The dupatta instead blows over to Armaan, and lands on his face.

Armaan moves the dupatta away, and tries to at least catch a glimpse of the girl's face. Finally, he is able to see her.
As Armaan looks at Riddhima, he just does not keep on looking, but, he imagines her with him. Singing to him, swaying to the music, just as she is now. Riddhima finishes talking to Kannav and goes inside the house. Meanwhile, Armaan who was in sort of a trance, snaps awake, realising that she is not there, in front of his eyes anymore.
He manages to climb over the wall, and goes over to the door where Riddhima went in. He tries knocking on the door, hoping that Riddhima herself will come and open it sometime soon. After some time of knocking, someone does come and open the door. However, that someone is not Riddhima, like Armaan has hoped. Instead, it's Nisha.
Looking at Nisha, Armaan gets disappointed.
Armaan (thinking to himself): Arre. Yeh toh Nisha ka ghar hai. Mujhe yeh baat yaad kaise nahin rahi? Iski toh ek hi behen hai. Woh bhi judwaa. Shayad main us pari si ladki ko apne hi sapnon mein dekh raha tha. Lekin yeh dupatta, jo mere haath mein hai? Haan, shayad Nisha ke ghar ki kisi khidki se udh gaya hoga.
Nisha is looking at Armaan, waiting for him to say something, but he is busy in his own thoughts. She gets tired of waiting for him, so she takes the dupatta from his hands, and that movement wakes him up from those thoughts.
Armaan points at the dupatta, then at Nisha, in his way of asking her if this dupatta is hers. Nisha replies with a "yes", unsure of what he is asking, and why he wants to know whose dupatta it is. Armaan disappointed, goes back to his home.
Yet, he still keeps thinking about that "angel" he had seen earlier, singing so beautifully, that even he was so encaptured by her melodious voice, perhaps way before her beauty did the same. As he goes to sleep, he even dreams about her, waking up in the middle of the night, and hence thinking that he is dreaming. And dreaming about some stranger that is, and thus, going mad.
But little does Armaan know that, love is also a type of madness, and a disease, whose bug has already bitten him.
The next day...
Armaan is sleeping peacefully, when his best friend, and adopted brother, Atul, comes bounding into the room.
Atul: Armaan! Armaan! Utho!
Armaan doesn't get up, instead making whatever noises he can, showing his disapproval of Atul waking him up so early.
Atul: Chal mere bhai! Aaj cricket ka match hai. Humein khelna hai. Agar hum aaj ki match jeet gaye, toh kal bhi khel sakte hain. Come on!
After a lot of pushing, pulling, and tugging her and there, Armaan finally gets up, showing complete annoyance at Atul for waking him up from such a beautiful "dream" in which he saw a beautiful face - a dream, and a face that could have almost been real, lasted longer, for his enjoyment, had Atul not woken him up.
But, getting up and ready, that, Armaan does, though quite unwillingly. He and Atul head over towards a quite large enough, but bare and rough field, on which they play cricket with the other village boys, their age, and also younger, and older.
Armaan, who usually bats well, scoring quite a few runs, and bowls even better, hardly giving any extras to the opponent team, and bringing down quite a few wickets too, in a single match; this time, gives more-than-usual extras, and scores less-than-usual wickets and runs.
Atul, does know this is happening because he is distracted, so halfway during the match, when there is a break, Atul takes Armaan aside, and tries to ask him why he is not able to concentrate and do as well as his usual. Armaan tells his all about the previous night, and Atul, in turn, explains everything to him; that he could not have just imagined her, if not, she would not have just appeared in his dreams, especially if he was wide awake, and suddenly, not exist anymore.
{guyys... plz remember tt throughout, Armaan is talking in sign language, but since neither you nor i know sign language that well, i'll just write the dialogues in normal (hindi) so tt it's easier for us all to understand...}
Atul: Armaan, woh ladki sacchi mein hai.
Armaan: Pata hai woh ladki sacchi mein hai, lekin sacchi mein mere khwaabon mein hi hai.
Atul: Nahin, woh is duniya mein sacchi mein hai. Woh ek zinda insaan hai, Armaan.
Armaan: Toh, woh mere khwaabon mein aakar har waqt mujhko sataati kyun rehti hai?
Atul: Kyunki ab tak tu usse milaa nahin. Armaan, this girl does exist. Bas, yahaan, sirf tumhein, aur woh bhi tumhare khwaabon mein dikhaayi deti hai, kyunki bhagwan tumhein koi ishaara de raha hai.
Armaan: Kya ishaara?
Atul: Shayad yeh ishaara ki tumhari dream girl aa rahi hai. Shayad yahi ladki tumhari dream girl hogi.
Armaan: Atul, tum mazaak karna band karo. Aarkhir bolo, kaun ladki chahegi ki uska pati, ya uska pyaar, goonga ho?
Atul: Woh samajh jaayegi. Aur woh tumhari haalat jaanne ke baade bhi tumse pyaar karegi.
Armaan: Yeah, right!
Atul: Armaan, main sach keh raha hoon. Yeh ladki, jaisa bhi uska chehra ho, jo koi bhi ho woh, usse bhagwan ne tumhaare liye, aur sirf tumhare liye banaya hai. Wohi tumhari jeevan saathi banegi.
Armaan: Lekin, woh mujhe milegi kaise? Kahaan? Kab?
Atul: Thoda intezaar karo! Aakhir, sabra ka fal meetha hota hai. Agar tum intezaar karo, toh shayad woh tumhein aaj ya kal hi mil jaaye.
Armaan is still not convinced that such a girl actually exists, but by whatever Atul said, he is convinced by this fact that, whoever this girl is, whatever she may actually look like, she is made for Armaan only, and is and and him are meant to be soulmates, for ever.
Whatever it is, and may be in the future, Armaan, for the time being, leaves his thoughts aside, thinking it is better to concentrate on this game, something that he loves and is able to relatively easily achieve, rather than thinking about that "girl", whom he saw last night, whom he does love too, but possibly may not achieve.
Later...
Kritikaa is shown at her school, in an open-air assembly of some sorts, where she, and the rest of the students, are waiting for a doctor, from the local hospital, to come and talk to them about some certain health related matters. Finally, the doctor does arrive, and the doctor is none other than Nisha.
However, Nisha is not alone, as Riddhima has accompanied her, since she may also have to give such talks later on. Anyways, moving on to the end of the talk - when it ends, Kritikaa decides to stop Riddhima, and talk to her, as well as to Nisha, asking her a few more questions. So she gets talking, and both Nisha and Riddhima enjoy her company, as well as curiosity in learning more, and have quite a heartfelt talk with her.
Meanwhile, as they are talking, Armaan and Atul are seen leaving the cricket ground, and walking towards the village school, to fetch Kritkaa back home. Armaan and Atul finally reach the school, and Armaan stops, freezing on the spot, when he sees Riddhima there, very much existing, and alive, talking to his own sister, with Nisha there too. He nudges Atul, in her direction, and Atul understands what Armaan is trying to say.
Atul too, nudges Armaan to move forward, to approach her, and introduce himself. However, just as Armaan begins to set his foot ahead, after having stared at Riddhima for quite some time, Riddhima moves off, with Nisha, and Armaan feels he has lost "his girl". Again!
Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww very nice part.......
loved it
thanx for pm

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