Kuchh Naa Kaho (AR)- unable to continue/ note pg14 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
awww kritika is soo cute, hmmm wonder who ridz bumps into
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
hey
gr8 parts
um soorrrry for not commenting all this while was quite busy with coll
superb story line
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Hi Friend 😊

That was very cute part. The kheer incident was very sweet. Showed the way Armaan, Atul and Kritikka is bonded with each other.
Now at the end, who was the person Riddhima bumped into???
Very well done... Keep it up dear.

aww...thank u so much ji... yeah, and the kheer incident is like one of my favourite's...it happened with me and my cousin's too...so i kinda took inspiration from tt...
oohhh...and u wanna know the person who ridz bumped into...well, tt's for me to know, and for u to find out...hehehe😆😆😆 anyways, u will find out in the next part...if the next part is not a long part, it will be 2 or 3 short ones...

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

very ncie part........

thanx for pm

thank u ji...hope like i pm u, u will continue to read to ff, and love it as always...

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

awww kritika is soo cute, hmmm wonder who ridz bumps into

hmmm...let's see...ridz bumps into...well, let me describe...but first, lemme ask u...ever heard of miss swan?? if not, then go on youtube and watch her videos first...then u may get why i will say what i'm gonna say next...
so anyways, back to describing tt man... well, he...looka lika man...hehehe...LOLzz...😆😆😆
sorry ji...at this point of time, i'm really suffering from the miss swan syndrome... u see her videos, then u'll get what i'm talking abt...

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey
gr8 parts
um soorrrry for not commenting all this while was quite busy with coll
superb story line
update soon

thanks for enjoying my ff...
and as for not commenting all this while, its actually ok... i understand tt ur busy with college...infact, even i'm quite busy with college too, that's why i dont update tt regularly...but, since i've holidays now, i try to update as much as i can, except when i have to go for dance and music practice...
now, for ur comment abt my storyline... thanks for liking tt too...hope ya continue to like it, when i add more twists and turns...
and, i will update soon...asap...dont worry...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
hi. i read your ff in one sitting and i must say that i love it. :] please do continue soon and if you could pm me whenever you update, i would really appreciate it.
thanks,
mona :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
Amazing update.. Kheer wala scene was really cute... I'm sure ridzi uld hve bumped into Armaan.. Plzz continue asap......😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~~~ Part 14 ~~~
As Riddhima walks out of the locker room, she bumps into someone. When she looks up to see who it is, she is surprised.
Riddhima: Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho Armaan?
Armaan points to Kritikaa, whom he is carrying.
Kritikaa: Ouch..Ridz didi...mere pet mein dard hai...Ouch...bohot dard...
Riddhima: Oh. Yeh, achaanak?
Kritikaa: Achaanak??..aaj maine...bohot zyaada...Ouch...kheer khayi...
Knowing Kritikaa, and her cute but naughty nature, Riddhima smiles to herself. She leads Armaan to a room, and instructes him to put Kritikaa on the bed so she can examine her, properly, to see if there are any further problems. Thankfully, there are no problems, and, after giving Kritikaa the initial dose of medicines, Riddhima goes back to Armaan, to explain to him Kritikaa's "sickness", and the treatment.
She does so, and not long after, hears Kritikaa calling her and Armaan. Riddhima turns to go to Kritikaa, but instead, her foot trips, and she falls down. However, Armaan is able to catch her on time. As Riddhima, scared, closes her eyes, Armaan is busy looking at her, or rather, as you can say, staring with love and admiration. Riddhima, once she realizes she is safe, opens her eyes, and finds Armaan looking at her. Unknown to her, she also starts staring back, that is, until the moment Kritikaa calls them again.
Soon, Armaan and Kritikaa leave, and Riddhime is left to wonder - what exactly happened between her and Armaan just a few moments ago?
Riddhima (thinking to herself): Mere aur Armaan ke beech mein kya hua? Haan...shayad kyunki main Kannav ko itna miss kar rahi hoon, isliye Armaan ke kareeb aa rahi hoon...
Riddhima is interrupted in her thoughts by Nisha, who comes in the room. Later, as she and Nisha walk home together, she forgets about this incident that happened.
Next day...
Armaan seems to be in his own world, dreamland the whole of the next day. {dunno why...but as i say this, i am thinking of that part in kal ho naa ho...the one where saif says welcome to lala land...oh god...that movie na...i miss the kanta ben parts...hahaha...lolz.😆😆..anyways,....back to the ff}
The whole day, he thinks about Riddhima - the incident that happened with them in the hospital the day before, the day they first met, the first time he saw her when she was singing so beautifully in the aangann, basically everything...
Even during a friendly cricket match he, Atul, and a few other close friends are having, Armaan is not able to concentrate properly. When he is batting, he just happens to see Riddhima's face in the ball {lolzzz...dont ask me why...even i dunno😆😆😆} He doesnt hit the ball, but, the ball does end up hitting the wicket. And, when Armaan it is Armaan's turn to bowl, he ends up giving 2 wides and one no ball in the same over. Plus, the opponent scores two boundaries.
Atul, who has been observing Armaan for quite some time now, calls off the game, and they decide to continue tomorrow. He then decides to go to Armaan and have a heart-to-heart talk with his best friend.
Atul: Heyy buddy. Aaj tumhein kya hua? Theek tarah se khel bhi nahin rahe.
Armaan (in signs): Oh. Sorry.
Atul: Kya yaar, yeh sorry. Aaj hum match haar hi jaate, agar main use call-off nahin karta. Bole tujhe kya hua.
Armaan: Kuch nahin.
Atul: Kuch nahin ka kya matlab? Mujhe pata hai ki zaroor kuch na kuch baat hai. Kal raat, hospital se aane ke baad bhi tum kuch distracted lag rahe ho. Kya hospital mein kuch hua?
Armaan (blushing...and still talking in his sign language): Haan. 😳
Atul: Oye hoye, Armaan. Tum sharmaa rahe ho. Kya hua hospital mein, Riddhima ke saath?
Armaan: Kya matlab Riddhima ke saath? Tumhein yeh kaise pata?
Atul: Well...Jis tarah se tum aise laal-laal tamatar jaise (hehe...i know...i always say this very same to my dialogue to my bestest friend ever...i wont mention her name though...but, i will tell u tt...she and this guy have had a major crush on each other since like..forever...well, maybe not forever😆😆 but at least for the past 7+ years or so...and, whenever she talks abt him, i like to tease her saying she is so red...more red than a tomato...plus...Armaan seems to blush a lot na? well...dont worry, ridz will also soon be doing the same...soon enuf...though dont ask me how soon😆😆...oh, and one more thing...just to share with u, since ur all my friends...i also blush like this...whenever i think too much and hard abt this guy i really really really like...have been liking him for abt 13 out of 17 years of my life...u all know him... if anyone wants to guess, feel free😆😆😆 i'll be happy to give u guyys a clues if u need...well anyways...again back to my story...i seem to be getting distracted a lot na??)
Armaan explains the whole incident that happened between him and Riddhima at the hospital, to Atul. After he finishes, Atul is looking over at him, with a sort of jealousy. Armaan does happen to notice this, and he asks Atul what the matter is.
And, Armaan listens to Atul complaining about his boring love life. {well, if he ever had one in the first place😆😆} After Atul does so, Armaan tells him not to worry. He assures Atul, that like how Riddhima, his dream girl, came into his life, like a breeze, Atul's dream girl will also come soon. Atul then says he also hopes the same.
On the other hand...
As Armaan is thinking about Riddhima, she is, well, not thinking about him😆. Infact, she is so busy, she doesn't even get time to think about anyone else, but her patients. She does finish her duties quite late, later than usual. But, since Nisha is not yet done, Riddhima decides to walk it home by herself.
As she steps out of the hospital, she sees Armaan waiting there for her. She smiles as she goes up to him. Armaan, seeing her approaching, smiles in return.
Riddhima: Armaan.. Tum yahaan, hospital ke baahar kya kar rahe ho? Aur woh bhi akele? Atul kahaan hai?
Armaan, trying the best he can, tells Riddhima that he and Atul were passing by the hospital, when Armaan decided that he wanted to wait for Riddhima, but since Atul was feeling tired, he went ahead by himself.
Thankfully, Riddhima does manage to understand Armaan. She says so, and Armaan smiles in response, again, to indicate that he is glad for that.
Armaan and Riddhima walk home - in silence, as far as Armaan is concerned, partly because he can't talk, and also partly because he is too busy looking at Riddhima with such intensity and love, when she is not looking at him; and, friendly chatter where Riddhima is concerned, as she talks, and Armaan responds to her in sign language, and also laughter, when Riddhima sometimes does not get what Armaan is trying to say.
During that walk to their homes, they come to know a lot about each other, and find out, that they do have quite a lot in common. Their favourite food - maa ke haath ka khana. Their favourite actors and actresses - Shahrukh Khan and Rani Mukherji. Their favourite colour - black; but if told to chose a more light colour, then baby pink.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
thank u ji sea_nyx...
oh, and msg for my other readers... plz plz forgive me... these past few days, i was packing by suitcase...me gng to mumbai... to stay with my grandparents... plus, i have to visit my late granduncle's family too... i'll be gng away for a month...so i dunno when i will be able to post the next part...
i'm coming back on 5th jan...but on 12-16th jan i have tests...so, i cant post until 16th jan...but, i'm leaving this friday night...so before i leave, i'll just try to type a few more parts...
i hope u guyys understand...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
Hey very weeet update dear.
Hope Armaan could find a better way to communicate with Riddhima. No, just kidding, its very cute to read him trying to make himself understand. Vvery nice keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
heyy ji...
i have good news and bad news for u guyys...
owing to a very heavy study load (I HAVE MY A LEVELS THIS YEAR!!), i am unable to update this topic any more... i cant continue this ff anymore, and i'm truly utterly sorry for that ji... any one who is willing to continue this ff is very welcome to do so... just PM me or smth, and i will PM u back the basic storyline i have for the ff... or, if any of u guyys who wants to continue, has a better idea, then tell me...
anyone is free to continue...
{another reason i am unable to update: i had actually written some parts of this ff and saved on a pendrive, but my brat of a brother did smth and the pendrive got corrupted...so everything is lost, and i have no time to re-typre everything...}
HOWEVER.....
as soon as my A Levels get over, i will post up a fresh new ff... infact 2 new ff's... one will be on Armi-Ridz, and other minor couples... another will be something like the Darna Mana Hai types, except that it will be about 7 couples meeting in a jungle like in darna mana hai, but instead of ghost stories, they will tell their love stories, as in how they met fell in love, and what they are doing in the jungle, etc...
for the one on Armi-Ridz, i have already started typing all the parts, and am now upto part 5 or so... this maybe quite a long-running ff, and later into the story i will introduce other couples (such as shahi, kripangad, mayur, sajan...)... if this Armi-Ridz ff is successful, i will extend it, and i may also add a rebirth story, but that may not happen also... i still am planning out the whole ff...
anyways.. yeah, the basic point is that i will not continue Kuchh Naa Kaho anymore... anyone else who wants to continue can do so, u have my full permission... but the new ff's will be much much better than this one, i ensure u... they will be first posted up somewhere during mid-nov... when my exams finish... the day they finish, i will post up promos, and whatever else... one week after that, i will start the ff's... i will tell ya all the date my exams fiinish when i get the timetable, so if i dont do what i said this time, u can come over to my house and clobber me... LOLz
thanks ya all...
hope ya understand

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