Kuchh Naa Kaho (AR)- unable to continue/ note pg14 - Page 7

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Wild.Aimee thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Dear Friend 😊
Fist of all thanks a lot for the PM. Now i did read your FF a long ago, thereafter i lost the track. But i will followup now on again. Armaan & Riddhima are my FAVORITE on-screen couple. I simply adorably love them. And i am so glad to become another story related to them.
As i said the concept of your FF is very nice. I am looking forward to it.
Your story is really cute. And i liked Atul & Armaan's relationship, that how they can understand each other without even words.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Ur FF is great, pls continue soon (put more scene of AR)

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Cool update.... really liked the relationship between Atul n Armaan... Uld luv to c more of AR scenes.. Plzz continue soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
Just finished reading your ff and I have to say I really love your concept so different ⭐️ , so hats off to you gurl 👏. And the way you developed the storyline is equally fantastic 😊. Each character is unique and so well-etched and the way the plot is moving forward, it truly grips the reader. I can't wait for the next part, and you deserve a special mention for the beautiful way you've depicted Armaan especially😳.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
gr8 part
can u put more scenes of ar
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

aww very nice part.......

loved it
thanx for pm

really???
thank u ji... i really appreciate it...
keep on reading my ff, when i update, i will pm u again...
enjoy

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Hi Dear Friend 😊

Fist of all thanks a lot for the PM. Now i did read your FF a long ago, thereafter i lost the track. But i will followup now on again. Armaan & Riddhima are my FAVORITE on-screen couple. I simply adorably love them. And i am so glad to become another story related to them.
As i said the concept of your FF is very nice. I am looking forward to it.
Your story is really cute. And i liked Atul & Armaan's relationship, that how they can understand each other without even words.

hi dear dost too... glad to here, tt u will continue to read my ff... its sure gng to get more interesting later on (hopefully, acoording 2u...)
angad and kripa were my favouritest couple, but since, kripa has been paired up with shabd as mahi in maayka, i feel tt is a better jodi, and, armaan and ridz seem more fun to like... dmg is also a non-kekta mai show, with less rona-dhona and more masti...
yeah... i like atul and armaan too... their friendship is really cute, in this ff as i made it, as well as in dmg too... besides for armaan's and ridz's jodi, i watch the like the show for his and atul's dosti... its the best ever...

Originally posted by: kashishk

Ur FF is great, pls continue soon (put more scene of AR)

Kashish

thanks u ji... i shud be able to post up abt 1-2 parts today...
just to tell u, AR will meet in the next part, and when they meet, they will become friends...
and thus there will be more AR scenes...
so, just be patient, wait, and read on...
enjoy!!
;-)

Originally posted by: swetha10

Cool update.... really liked the relationship between Atul n Armaan... Uld luv to c more of AR scenes.. Plzz continue soon...😊

thank u ji... i will continue asap... atul-armaan scenes are one of the plus points of this ff, along with the AR relationship being one of them too...

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

Just finished reading your ff and I have to say I really love your concept so different ⭐️ , so hats off to you gurl 👏. And the way you developed the storyline is equally fantastic 😊. Each character is unique and so well-etched and the way the plot is moving forward, it truly grips the reader. I can't wait for the next part, and you deserve a special mention for the beautiful way you've depicted Armaan especially😳.

thank u ji... wow, u really like my ff, dont u?? (i just love the praise)😉😆
i am not tt sure abt the uniqueness of each character, as i get ideas for them from different storylines - for example, the character for armaan has been inspired from the movie iqbal and dmg itself, while atul has been inspired from the movies K3G, dosti, and the dmg show, while the armaan-ridz jodi has been inspired from kuch kuch hota hai, kya love story hai, and kal ho naa ho...
so, u can see, my characters are not exactly original... but u can say, my storyline is.. infact, this storyline came to me in my dreams, when i was asleep one night in early september, but instead of armaa-ridz, i had imagined myself with (someone i cant tell, but this person is sm1 who i really really like, and have been liking for more than 3 quarters of my life)
well anyways, as long as the plot still grips u, and my other readers too, i am satisfied... keep on enjoying it, and reading it...
i bet ya, infact... i bet everyone cant wait for the next part... coz tt is the part when armaan and ridz are going to meet, and start their beautiful journey...
and, thank u too, for believing in me tt i deserve a special mention for depicting the character of armaan so beautifully... well, what can i say.. but, the character of armaan is such tt one cannot describe it in any other way... and, armaan himself if so beautiful (meaning, handsome, hot, and a hunk of a guy)... LOLzzz😉😆

Originally posted by: cutie13

gr8 part

can u put more scenes of ar
cont soon

thank u ji, for commenting...
sure, i will add more AR scenes... starting from the next part itself, coz tt is when AR will finally meet and come face-to-face...
and, continue soon too, i will... with at least 1-2 more parts posted up today...
continue reading, and enjoying, and i will continue posting...
enjoy!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
hey sweety
aww dear awesome parts
the armi-atul bond is simply adorale i like the way the gel with each other
loved
it
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ superb😊 so sweet😛😉 plz continue it😊

"If u are a chocolate you are the SWEETEST,
If u are a teddy bear you are the most HUGGABLE,
If u are a star you are the BRIGHTEST,
and since you are my friend...U R THE BEST !!!"



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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
~~~ Part 8 ~~~
Armaan misses meeting Riddhima, at Kritikaa's school, and he goes home disappointed. On the way back home, Atul notices Armaan's sadenss, and afterwards has a heart-to-heart talk with him, during which Armaan realises that whoever this girl is, he seems to be falling for her, fast, and hard. That night too, Armaan thinks of Riddhima, and goes to sleep, with her coming in his dreams again. However, this time, she is real, she is there with him. Armaan's dream with, and about Riddhima is so beautiful, and perhaps self-fulfilling too, that Armaan wakes up with a smile on his face, and the hope in his heart that Riddhima is meant for him, and him only.
Anyways, the next day...
Riddhima wakes up earlier than her usual, to make sure that she is ready before Nisha leaves, so that she too can leave with her, and thus, start her day at the hospital, early too, and with a fresh mind. She has a hot but quick shower, and comes out of the bathroom wearing
{note: Ridz is wearing the same salwar suit, but she is played by Shilpa, not Sukriti}
Riddhima and Nisha finally leave for the hospital, where Riddhima will begin working. They decide to walk the distance, instead of taking any vehicle, as it is quite early too. Soon, they reach Sanjiveeni - the name of the hospital. Nisha introduces Riddhima to everyone, and they all seem to take an instant liking to her. Her friendly, bubbly nature, her sweet smile, and her ability to charm anyone within the matter of just a few seconds of meeting them, makes them like her, almost immediately. Dr Rahul, and his girlfriend Dr Muskaan, both of them orthopedic surgeons, become good friends with Riddhima.
Even Dr Kirti, the main-in-charge doctor, is impressed with the way Riddhima works with whatever patients she has on her first day here, at Sanjiveeni, and seems to be praising her, non-stop.
Even as Riddhima finishes off early, after seeing the last of the patients, and heads out of Sanjiveeni, for a stroll, to spend her time before Nisha too finishes, both the interns, and professional doctors can't seem to stop saying good things about her. Hearing what they have to say, Nisha beams, happy for her friend, and the praise she is getting. {this may be stretching it a bit too far, but, i'm really tired, and as i said, i have some family "tragedy" to take care of, so if i make any mistakes, plz forgive me...}
Meanwhile, Armaan and Atul are shown playing cricket, in the same field as the previous day, with Kritikaa cheering them on. Armaan's and Atul's team, won the toss and chose to bat first. In this 20-20 match, Armaan and Atul's team scored 210 runs, with only 4 wickets down, and 4 more to spare. Now, the opposing team is batting, and they still have 5 runs to win. Atul, who is the bowler, bowls the ball well, but the opposing batsman, hits the ball hard, sending it high into the air, though not so far.
Eventually, the ball does start to descend, coming down right near the boundary, where Riddhima is now shown to be walking. Armaan, quickly moves backwards, to catch the ball, and capture the wicket too. Capture both the ball and wicket, he does, but in the process of doing so, he jumps slightly backwards, and smack right into Riddhima, who was walking peacefully.
Riddhima falls down, and Armaan too falls down beside her, though almost on her legs. Armaan has not seen "his victim" yet, but, when he turns to Riddhima to see if she is indeed fine, and if not, to help her, and in both cases, to still apologize to her, he finds himself gazing at her. Intently. Riddhima, finally gains sense as to what has happened to her, and clears her head, sitting up and gaining composture. However, Armaan, from his spot of lying down on the grass, continues to stare at Riddhima, not believing his luck, that his dream lady is finally here, in front of his eyes.
On the other hand, Riddhima stares at him too, but for a different reason.
{heyy again guyys... sorry for leaving u at this crucial part, but kya karen?? i know i promised to update, but i'm very tired...plus, what happened in my family in the past week is kinda weighing down on me...plz forgive me guyys... but, whenever i do get the time, which is probably soon, i will definitey continue...thanks for understanding guyys...}
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey

i m new to ur ff but its just fantstic i loved it i fell so sad that armaan cant speek i realy loved it luv nruti

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