Kuchh Naa Kaho (AR)- unable to continue/ note pg14 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
nice part!!!
Sooo cute!!!

Proposal part is cute n the way u narrated this story is gud!!!

Make the other part sooon!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahahas... thanks u all ji's for replying..
and, yeah... sorry ya all for not posting up parts over the past weeks... i was really busy...
didnt even have time to post the parts up...
too preoccupied with project work, and all...
even that doesnt leave me with much time on my hands, i have very little time to even study anything else, or do project work...
the dry run for my project work is this wednesday or thursday... hopefully after that, i will be able to post a part... on thurs evening... and over the next weekend, i will post 2-3 more parts...
and like i said, armaan will enter the story in the 5th part...
just hopefully, that part will be posted up before next sunday for ya all to enjoy...
thanks for being patient...
sorry for making ya all wait for so long...
and yeah, keep reading my ff...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

hahahas... thanks u all ji's for replying..

and, yeah... sorry ya all for not posting up parts over the past weeks... i was really busy...
didnt even have time to post the parts up...
too preoccupied with project work, and all...
even that doesnt leave me with much time on my hands, i have very little time to even study anything else, or do project work...
the dry run for my project work is this wednesday or thursday... hopefully after that, i will be able to post a part... on thurs evening... and over the next weekend, i will post 2-3 more parts...
and like i said, armaan will enter the story in the 5th part...
just hopefully, that part will be posted up before next sunday for ya all to enjoy...
thanks for being patient...
sorry for making ya all wait for so long...
and yeah, keep reading my ff...

i understand about the amount of work you have...I guess many of the singaporean students will since we all go thru it...haha nad yea I live in singapore too...was born here😃
and you should definitely read the other three books when you get the time...but of course the first is alwaes the best...and I dont even remember which friend I lent my book too until they tell me about it...its super insane...I have 5 more people to lend the book too now...but yea my partner completely hates edward coz I go on and on abt him whole day long...so to irritate me she calls him edward anthony medicine cutlery😆
and you are in JC right? then it must be more tough on you...since I am in secondary and I feel so stressed out..with O level preps and all, sigh so which JC do you study in...I am from cedar girls😛
haha anyways do cont when you get the time... cant wait for the fifth part...when armaan will enter the story😳
love
tanu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
yo ppl... thanks for waiting patiently... u know, what..??!!!
well, i tried writing this part 4 abt many many times... it was a bit long, for my usual standards at least... first time i typed it all out, my laptop's battery died, and all i typed was lost, just before i cud post it... the 2nd time, the internet connection got disconnected, and all the info and typing was lost again... and i'm not gna write everything a third time over, so i'll basically just give a summary of what i wud have written, if all i had didnt get lost... besides, i am waiting, myself, to get to the part when armaan enters the story...
~~~ Part 4 ~~~
Riddhima enters, and sees a man there, whom her parents are hugging and congratulating. Her parents say that they have fixed her marriage with the son of that man. Riddhima refuses at first, but it turns out that the son is Kannav, and her parents knew about her's and Kannav's relationship from the beginning itself. They all hug each other...
A six months leap takes place, and Riddhima and Kannav are shown sitting in a cafe, arguing. Riddhima has got an internship posting at a village called Gorakhpur in Uttar Pradesh, at some new hospital there. She has to stay there for 2 years minimum, helping out with patients. At first, she refuses to go there, but finally agrees, when Kannav convinces her.
Two weeks later, Kannav is shown seeing off Riddhima at the train station. The next day, she reaches Gorakhpur. The train stops, and as she gets down from it, onto the platform, a gust of wind blows her hair, and she gets a wierd sensation, like there is some sort of connection of her to this place, which is otherwise entirely new to her. She then turns back, and reaches for her suitcase. Riddhima then looks for someone, particularly, her friend, Nisha, who is supposed to have come and fetched her.
On the other hand, a guy is shown to be entering the train station, with a little girl in tow. The girl, when she sees someone she knows, alighting from the train, rushes towards that person. The guy runs after her.
Riddhima, who meanwhile seems to have seen her friend Nisha, waves out to her, and tries to weave her way to her friend through the crowd. The guy, running after the little girl, is comming nearer to Riddhima. He walks by her, she walks by him, but they don't see each other. But, what does happen is that, Riddhima's dupatta brushes against the guy's shoulder, and he, feeling some sensation, turns around and tries to see the person, but by that time, Riddhima has already gone from his sight.
Now, we see that guy's face. He is none other than...
I bet ya all guyys can guess by now who that guy is. But, u will have to wait for the next part for me to completely reveal him, but i ensure u, u wont be disappointed...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
OH cool.. Obviously The guy is one and only ARMAAN............. I luv this update.. short n sweet... jus enjoyed it.. PLzz continue soon....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
thank u ji shweta ji for commenting... to all other readers, plz dont forget to comment, and read and enjoy my ff too...
the next part will be up soon, hopefully... im typing it right now... and am trying to make it extra long...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
Ok!!!!!!!!!!

atlast Ammy enter the show!!!!!!!!

so after a sweet fragrance of emotions bet AR
eagerly waiting 4 next part!!!!!!!

make it soooooooon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
yay ammy is entering the FF now
cant wait for the next part...
though we all know its ammy
it will be still fun to read it;D
so do cont as soon as you can yea?
love
tanu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
damn... again no time to continue...
sorry guyys...
now, me very busy until friday afternoon... so only then can i update... then, weekend i maybe will or maybe wont update... then monday again not updating, but, tuesday night i will post a biggg longgg part, same for wednesday...
then thursday onwards, one part per day, hopefully...
thanks for ur patience and kindness...
keep on reading my ff, and enjoy it too...
most importantly, dont forget to comment on it...
thanks once again...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP: Riddhima reaches Gorakhpur station, and waits to be picked up by her friend Nisha. Meanwhile, a guy has also come to the train station to see someone. Ridz's dupatta brushes off on the guy's shoulder, and he turns around. Now, we see that guy's face. He is none other than...
~~~ Part 5 ~~~
The guy turns around, and he is none other than our very own dear Armaan (as u all wud have already guessed...)
[lolz... i found a better sexier photo of karan, but didnt know whether i shud put it here coz he's supposed to be a simple village guy... anyways, moving on...]
Armaan is about to go after Riddhima, when suddenly, he remembers that he has to find that little girl. To be precise, his little sweet pyaari but naughty and nathkhat sister Kritikaa, aka Kritz...
He runs around looking for her, worried. He is almost reduced to tears, and is just about to go to the station master to lodge a complaint, but then, he feels a light tug on his shirt. Armaan looks down to see that it is his sister, Kritz.
Like mentioned in the storyline, Armaan cannot talk, but whatever he says in signals, his sister understands...
So, says...
Armaan: Kritz. Tum kahaan thi? Main tumhare liye kitna pareshaan ho raha tha, maaloom hai? (oh really? at one pt of time, u almost forgot abt her coz u were waiting to see Ridz instead...)
Kritz: Sorry bhaiyya. Mujhe chocolates chahiye thi, aur...
Armaan: Oh, toh isiliye tum mujhse bhaagi chali gayi? Ab kaho, tumhara bhaiyaa tumhare liye important hai, ya phir chocolates?
Kritz: Ummm... Of course aap bhaiyya.
Armaan: Aww! Ab mujhe galey nahin lagaaogi?
Kritz: Bhaiyya, I love you.
Armaan: Main bhi.
Meanwhile, Riddhima spots her friend Nisha. Nisha, is a few years older to Ridz, but they have been best friends since they were babies. Nisha, a general practioner, had chosen to move back to Gorakhpur, the place where she was born, after getting her degree, and, also after the passing away of both her parents. She decided to start up her own clinic, to help the villagers there, and when her own clinic became so successful that sometimes people from nearby villages came by for checkups, resulting in overcwording, she decided to close down the clinic and open up her very own hospital to cater to more patients. She was quite a regarded student of the medical college where she and Ridz both student, and she only requested the hospital in Mumbai, where Ridz was working earlier to send Ridz here - because she knew that with Ridz helping her, burden will be taken off her hands more, and with Ridz capabilities, her hospital will also probably gain popularity; plus, it has been a really long time since both friends even saw each other, and she really wanted to spend with the person she consider more family than friend.
Well anyways, Ridz spots her friend, and they both run and hug each other, screaming and excited. They part, and now, you see Nisha.
(she's wearing the same clothes as in this pic...)
Nisha: Oh my god, Ridz! Tum bilkul nahin badli. Itne saalon ke baad bhi.
Ridz: Haan, aur tum bhi vaisi ki vaisi ho.
Nisha: Pata hai. Not much change, na? The same boring old me.
Ridz: Boring? Definitely not. How can my best friend be boring?
Nisha: Haha. Accha, yeh chodo. Ab bataao, yahaan aane mein itni der kyun lag gayi? Sunaa tha ki tum yahaan nahin aana chahti thi.
Ridz: Yeah. I know, lekin Kannav ne mujhe convince kiya.
Nisha: Kannav, tumhara boyfriend?
Ridz: Nahin.
Nisha: Toh phir? Main toh ek hi Kannav ko jaanti hoon. Yeh vahi Kannav hai na?
Ridz: Haan.
Nisha: Then what? Kya woh tumhara borfriend nahin raha? Did you break up with him? Did he dump you?
Ridz: Relax Nisha. Woh aur main abhi bhi saath hi hain. Lekin woh mera boyfriend nahin raha kyunki humari sagaai ho chuki hai. Toh ab woh mera mangetar hai.
Nisha: Haan. Kya?!!! Really?!! Oh, Ridz. I'm so happy for you. Toh usne tumhein yahaan aane ko convince kiya?
Ridz: Haan. (in mute Ridz thej tells what happened at the cafe, hw Kannav finally convinced her to go...) Aur phir usne mujhe bataaya ki jo hospital shuru kar raha hai, woh aur koi nahin, balki tum hi ho. Toh, main yahaan chali aayi.
Nisha: Oh, toh yeh baat hai....
And, Nisha and Ridz talk some more as they take Ridz's suitcases, and all other stuff, and head towards Nisha's house, where she lives with her only 2 relatives alive still - her maternal grandpa, whom she calls naanu, and her twin sister, Natasha.
Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 16 years ago

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