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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was so good really zor ka jhtaka laga
but i was thinking that he is going to propose her

byt anyways nice part

plz continue soon

HIIIIIII PRERNA, RAJ KO NAINA K HATHON SE PITBANA CHAHTI HO KYA? ITNI JALDI PROPOSE KAREGA TO NAINA TO USE 😡😡😡. BY THE WAY, PHIL HAL USE NAINA KO PAYANE TO DO.

LOVE & WISHES

priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: pritib0
HII PRIYA KAISE HO DEAR? THE UD WAS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME....... REALLY MARVELLOUS.................... WONDERFUL.................................... BEAUTIFUL.................................. I ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT SWEETY......................... U R REALLY DOING A FANTABULOUS JOB..................... KEEP IT UP.......................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

HIIIIIIIIIIIII PRITI, KAISE HO, NAHIN PUCHUNGI! MERI FRIEND HO, ISLIYE BAHAT ACCHI HOGI.........JANTI HOON😃. WELL, TUMHARI TARAH NAHIN LIKH PATI HOON, BAS KOSISH KARTI HOON...........

LOVE & WISHES...........PRIYA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!
thank u sweety........

The song was very nice and very apt that Raj was singing!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

yahhhhhhh.................u r right

K.K. Raj ke peeche pad gaya par Sudha ne bhi aakar unki bolti bandh kar di!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆ab raj apne dad k baat nahin manta , to woh to uske piche padenge hi lekin sudha ji hai na..........😆

Raj toh shock ho gaya hoga Sudhaji ki bahu waali baat sunke!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

yeh baat to sun kar to koi bhi shocked hoga na dear!!!!!!!!!!

Bechare Raj ko Naina ke ghar ka chakkar adhe ghante tak katna padhta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 Pyaar mein kya kya nahi karna padhta!!!!😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 yeh to kuch bhi nain hai dear, aage aage dekho woh aur kya kya karta hai😉😉😉

Raj ka smile dekhkar Naina ke andar bhi kuch hota hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳are yaar.......naina ko kya raj ki smile se mujhe bhi kuch kuch hota hai😆😆😆

Raj ko Naina ke office mein job mili hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great news!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊yahhhh.....that's true.

Yehi woh jhatka tha jo Raj Naina ko dena chahta tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ka reaction toh dekhne layak tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Pehle kehti hai nahi phir haa!!!😆 😆 😆 😆

But she is confused about her feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊haan............ woh to hai! ab main dekhti hoon k main us k liye kuch kar pati hoon k nahin???????????????

The song was very nice and so touching!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

thanks for the comment dear................PRIYA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

First i would say u are really a sweet heart ;the song u choosen is one of my fav yaar.🤗

I really love the song and emotions in this song.👍🏼

Good accha jhatka tha Naina k liye ki ab Raj aur Naina ek hi office me kaam karenge superb.😛

Update was really cool.👏

Raj kitna shaitaan hai jab us k dad us ko bhasan de rahe the to us ne un ko ishare se bata diya ki us ki mom peeche hi khadi hain.😆

Aur to aur us ki mom ne kaha ki beta bahu se milne jaa raha hai to Raj kaise shock ho gaya tha ki mom ko kaise pata chal gaya.😉

He is sooooooooo naughty.😛

Kaise 16 saal k ladko k jaise Naina k ghar k chakkar laga raha tha, how sweet.😳

update soon.

thank u dear &🤗to u toooo.............priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: aarsow
hey simply super sweety,hats of 2 u,

do contn fast,

awesum n wonderful

Aarthi

thank u sweety..............priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi
lol jhatka zor se parra 😆 😆 😆 ... so my Raju is going to work in the same office as Naina's woopie!!!!! 😃 that's a great news .... Raj really loves her doesn't he ....

aur yeh KK humesha mere Raj ke piche kyn parre hain ... i guess he'll be happy once he finds out that Raj has a job 😃 and i love his mom, how she shouts at KK and how KK gets scared 😆 😆 😆

sweet update hun 👏 👏

take care 😃

yasmin

THANK U YASHMIN...............PRIYA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985
Hi!!!dear.
Firstly a biiiig sorry for the late reply....

Now theupdate was mind blowing.......

Raj and Naina in the same office!!!wow!!now this is going to be interesting!!!!

Brilliant.

Continue soon dear.

Take care.

Love

Riya.

it's ok............ late ho jao, koi baat nahin . magar ........yaar comment karna mat bhoolna............PRIYA

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Posted: 16 years ago

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RECAP:- NAINA CHUNK GAYI THI YEH SUN KAR K RAJVEER USKE OFFICE MAIN JOB KAREGA.........{IN PART:-3}

PART:-4 ****************

Naina bus main baithi hui thi, apne office jane k liye. Aur window screen se bahar dekh rahi thi........aur Rajveer k bare main soch rahi thi........

Ab us se Rajveer k feelings us se chupe hue nahin the. Rajveer k dhudhti hui ankhain Naina se kya kahana chahti thi woh samjhti thi, aur janti bhi thi..........

Magar Naina ko ab in sab main koi interest nahin tha, kyoun k pyar k jo do rup naina ne Nandini aur Deepak main dekhe hain, uske baad use sacche pyar par yakeen aana kam ho gaya hai.

Ek waqt tha jab woh pyar ko zindagi main bahat unchi jagah deti thi, magar aab..........sab se pahle nandini ne apne pyar k liye apni jaan de di aur uske baad Deepak ne apne pyar k kahne par, apne parivaar ko chod diya...........

Naina sochti hai k "is duniya main saccha pyar bahat kam logon k naseeb main hota hai, aur un kam logon k catagory main meri koi jagah nahin hai."

Rajveer ko Naina pasand karti thi.......usko samne dekh kar uske dil k dhadkan hamesha badh jati thi........ajeeb sa ehsaas jagta tha Naina k dil main.

woh apne aap ko bahat kamjor mahsoos karti thi..........aur woh yeh bhi acchi tarah se janti thi k Rajveer us se pyar karta hai, lekin......................

Roz subah Naina jab office k liye nikalti hai, woh Rajveer ko apne balcony main khada pati thi.

Woh aachi tarah se janti thi k Rajveer us k intezaar main wahan khada rahta tha..........lekin hamesha Naina anjan ban kar chali jati thi.

Pata nahi us k ander kuch aisa tha jo Naina ko us k kareeb jane se rokti thi..

jab k Naina ka dil kuch aur hi kahta tha..................

IN BACKGROUND {for naina}

"Raah chalte hue aakshar yeh guman hota hai(2)

woh nazar chup k mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise(2)

koi fariyad tere dil main dabi ho jaise

tune aankhon se koi baat kahi ho jaise

jagti jagti ek umaar kati ho jaise

jaan baki hai magar saans ruki ho jaise"

Nandini di ne apne pyar se dhoka khane par aapni jaan de di aur Deepak bhaiya ne tab humain chod diya jab humain unki sabse jyada zarurat thi.

Deepak bhaiya ne love marriage kiya aur aapne wife k kahne par humain chod kar aapne in-laws k sath rahne chale gaye.

Pyar to deta hai kuch chinta nahin hai........lekin is pyar ne Nandini se uski zindagi aur naina k parivar se unka Deepak chin liya tha .

Naina sochti hai k woh kabhi kisi se pyar nahin karegi. kyoun k aagar use bhi apne pyar main Nandini k tarah dard mile to.......

Uska STOP aagaya tha. woh bus se utri aur aapne office k taraf jane lagi. office k main door k paas khade ho kar us ne dil hi dil main kaha-

"Chalo phir se 7 hours k gulami shuru. " itna kah kar usne ek gahri saans li aur phir apne aap se kahne lagi ,

"WAHI BATAIN RAH RAH KAR YAAD AATI HAIN

JINHE BHUL JANE KO DIL CHAHTA HAI"

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Lunch hours main Pooja us se milne aayi. Pooja, Naina aur Alekh 9th std. se sath main padhte the. Naina aur Pooja best friends hain aur pooja ka office bhi naina k office k building main hi hai.

Pooja Naina se boli;- "bahar chal, tujh se kuch baat karni hai."

Naina aur Pooja bahar corridor k taraf aakar khade hogaye . Naina ne notice kiya k Pooja ro rahi thi.

Naina pucha - " kya hua Pooja! tu ro kyoun rahi hai?"

Pooja rote rote boli- " papa chahte hain k main Harshad se shadi kar loon! lekin tu to janti haina...k main Rohit se pyar karti hoon...........to phir main yeh shadi kaise kar sakti hoon?"

Naina uski aanshoo pochte hue boli- "tu uncle, aunty se is bare main baat kyoun nahi karti?"

Pooja:- "maine mamma se baat ki thi, lekin woh kahti hai k agar Rohit bhi tujh se pyar karta hai, to uski family k sath aakar shadi k baat kyoun nahin karta? Waise bhi Naina! papa aaj kal bahat bimar rahne lage hain, isiliye woh chahte hain k meri shadi jald se jald ho jaye. Magar..........main kya karoon yaar....?"

Naina:- "tune Rohit se baat ki ?"

Pooja:- "haan............. lekin woh kahta hai k woh civil service k liye taiyaar ho raha hai, aur in sab k bich woh shadi k bare main soch bhi nahin sakta.........

aur ab main aapne parents se kya kahoon Naina?"

Naina:- " tu to Harshad ko janti hai na.....to phir tu us se baat kyoun nahin karti ?"

Pooja:- "haan...........par.............main kuch karti hoon............aacha Naina main tujh se baad main milti hoon. bye.............."

aur Pooja chali gayi.

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Sham ko office hour khatam hone k baad naina office se nikli aur bus stop k taraf chalne lagi. Bus stop par jyada bhid nahin thi........woh wahan khadi ho kar bus ka intezar karne lagi.

Pata nahin kyoun jab bhi woh kuch soch ne k koshish karti hai tab uske ankhon k samne Rajveer ka chehra aa jata hai.....

Woh aapne in khawalon ko avoid karne k nakaam koshish kar rahi thi...........

Lekin bar bar uske aankhon k samne Rajveer ka chehra aa jata tha....aur uski yaad aa jati thi.

Naina ne apne aap ko relax karne k liye idhar udhar dekhna shuru kiya.

Usne notice kiya k us se kuch hi duri par ek aadmi khada tha. Kareeb 45 saal ka lagta tha........us aadmi ne wahin par ek hair brush nikala aur comb karne laga, phir usne chota sa pond's powder ka box nikal kar aapne face par lagaya, phir ek mouth freashner nikal kar aapne mouth par spray kiya ,

phir ek chota sa perfume k bottle ko aapne upar kareeb 2 min. tak spray karta raha...................................................

Yeh sab dekh kar Naina ko hansi aagayi,

Kyoun k yeh aadmi 3 bacchon ka baap tha. Lekin roz sham ko woh isi tarah se bus main chadne se pahle taiyar ho jata tha............Kyoun k us time main bus main jyada bhid hoti hai.

Khas kar k ladkiyon k...................kyoun k koi office se laut raha hota hai toh koi college se..............aur yeh sahab aapne aap ko SHAHID KAPOOR samajh kar bus main chad jate hain unke bich main. Yeh soch kar k koi to phasegi...............

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Naina bus se utri aur apne ghar k taraf chal di. Thodi thodi barish ho rahi thi.

barish main bhigte hue naina aapne ghar k taraf ja rahi thi. Aaj use barish main bhigne ka kafi maan kar raha tha, isiliye woh bhigte hue aapne ghar k taraf chal di.

Use aaj bahat aacha lag raha tha........pata nahin kyoun.........................!!!!!!!!!!!!

Magar use thik se yaad nahin hai k woh aakhr baar kab khus hui thi??????

Rajveer k ghar k samne gujrte hue usne dekha k Rajveer apne car se bahar nikal raha tha. Aur jab Rajveer ne Naina ko dekha to..........................................

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END OF PART:4

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HIIIIIIIIIIII FRIENDS, har baar main notice karti hoon k mere ff k viewers to kafi hote hai , lekin rply. kam milta hai...............plzzzzzzzzzz friends dua bhejiye ya phir bad-dua lekin kuch to bhejiye.......................

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Rajveer ki ankhon se Naina Rajveer ke dil ki baat janti thi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar Nandini aur Deepak mein jo pyaar ke roop usne dekhe hai woh pyaar se dur bhaagti hai!!!! Thats so sad!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Rajveer ko dekhke use kuch hota hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 Uski dhakane badh jaati hai aur woh kamzor ho jaati hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳She knows that Rajveer loves her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Par yeh Naina yeh kyun manti hai ke woh mein senahi hai jinhe saccha pyaar milta hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina sab kuch janti hai magar anjan banti hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Uska dil Rajveer ke paas jana chahta hai magar usse kuch rokhta hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The song was very nice and very apt for Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊

The line was very nice which Naina thought to herself!!!😊 😊

Pooja ke parents uski shaadi Harshad se karwana chahte hai magar she loves Rohit!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Pooja bhi problem mein hai!!!! Mujhe toh yeh Rohit kuch theek nahi lagta!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Pooja ka bhi wahi problem hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔That four letter word again!!!!!

Naina ko hamesha Rajeev ki yaad aati hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Uska chehra uski ankhon ke samne aa jata tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳

That man seems quite a character!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina aaj khush ho kar baarish mein bheeg rahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Aur Raj ne usse dekha car se nikalte waqt!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳