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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

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HELLO FRIENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maine jab yeh fic start kiya tha, to us time par apne script ko dhyan main rakhte hue maine iss fic ka naam "EHSAAS...feelings for someone spl." rakha tha. Waise bhi lrl forum main iss title ka koi fic nahin tha (sayaad.......!!!!!!).

Lekin yahaan FAN FICTION forum main "EHSAAS" title ka ek aur fic hai. Of course woh AK fic hai, RN fic.nahin hai. Aur mera RN fic hai.

Magar mujhe daar lag raha hai k mere ff k readers kahin mis-guide to nahin honge na!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Iss liye main aap sab se yeh puchna chahti hoon k,

" kya main apne fic ka title change kar dun ya nahin........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ FRIENDS , DO SUGGEST.

WAITING FOR U R REPLIES,

WITH LOVE & WISHES

PRIYA

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

No we wont b confused..let it b dis EHSAAS only..But do inform us when u update

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hinal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

yeah please dont cahnge the name

just let us know when you UD

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

nooooo plzz dont do it.........besides ur readers know d difference.....

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: srojaleen
Important note
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HELLO FRIENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maine jab yeh fic start kiya tha, to us time par apne script ko dhyan main rakhte hue maine iss fic ka naam "EHSAAS...feelings for someone spl." rakha tha. Waise bhi lrl forum main iss title ka koi fic nahin tha (sayaad.......!!!!!!).

Lekin yahaan FAN FICTION forum main "EHSAAS" title ka ek aur fic hai. Of course woh AK fic hai, RN fic.nahin hai. Aur mera RN fic hai.

Magar mujhe daar lag raha hai k mere ff k readers kahin mis-guide to nahin honge na!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Iss liye main aap sab se yeh puchna chahti hoon k,

" kya main apne fic ka title change kar dun ya nahin........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ FRIENDS , DO SUGGEST.

WAITING FOR U R REPLIES,

WITH LOVE & WISHES

PRIYA

Madam Priya aap ko mai batana chahti hoon ki The Destiny naam ki jo fic maine start ki hai us naam ki bhi ek fic hai yahan par maine nahi change kiya us ka naam.

Hum ko pata hai ki kaun si RN fic hai aur kaun si nahi so pls don't change the name pls.😛

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOO FRIENDS!

SOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY,k main sab kcomments ko alag se reply nahin kar parahi hoon. Kya karoon yaar.....studies ka pressure kuch jyada rahta hai. I hope k aap sab meri condition ko samajhte hue mujhe maaf kardenge, aur apna dil saaf kar lenge😛.Main sab k commts.ko yahaan par ek sath reply kar rahi hoon. THANX......

@PRERNA 1:- Hiiii prerna, & thanx a lot dear.

@MAHAK SINHA:- Hiiii Vertika! Hope u r fine yaar! & obviously.....dear Naina janti hai k Raj us se pyar karta hai. Magar use yeh sab accept karne main thoda time lagega. Aur agar kuch gadbad hui bhi to main hoon na! Are yaar hum writers hain....jab chahe pyar karwa sakte hain aur jab chahe ladai.

Thanx for the sweet comment yaar.

@fanatic 21:- Hiiiii LIPI, kaisi ho??? Maine tumhe pahli baar iss tarah se hanshte hue dekha, aur sach mano...mujhe

bahat accha laga. THANX DEAR.

@varshita:- Hiiii Varshita! Hope u r in good tune. In fact jab main bhi raj aur us k dad k scene ko likh rahi thi to mujhe bhi us scene k bare main soch kar maza aaraha tha. I m.......so happy k tumhe woh scene itna accha laga. THANX.

@PRITI:- Hiiii Priti, tum to kuch likhne k liye chodti nahin ho... yaar. Itna tarif mat kiya karo yaar... i m just😳😳.....aur kya kahoon... THANX DEAR.

@vvdn:- Hiiiii Namita, kaisi ho dear?I m happy k mujhe ek aur friend mil gaya. Aur haan... hamesha yeh mat likhna k ud was good...kabhi kabhi bura bhi likh diya karo , taki main accha likh sakoon.

Yaar.... sayad woh lrl forum lock karne wale hain, aur sayad isiliye unhone hamare sare fics ko yahaan bhej diya hai. Aur sach kahoon....to mujhe bhi apne fav. fics ko padhne k liye kafi mahnat karni pad rahi hai. THANX for the comment dear.

@litika:- Hiiii Litika....wow....ek aur nayee dost. & thanx for the comment dear & keep reading.

@aarsow:- Hiiii Aarthi..... thanx sweety,aab tum sab ke comments se hi to hum writer accha likhne k liye inspire hote hain. So plz yaar aise hi comment karte rahna & thanx a lot.

@Rajeevian:-Hiiii dear, & thank u so much. Tumhara fic bhi bahat aacha hai, main use regularly padhti hoon.

@riyaa-1985:-Hiiiii Riya, kaisi ho dear? Ab office main kya hoga, yeh to mujhe bhi nahin pata!Let's hope k mere is saitani dimag main kuch aacha khayal aa jaye.😆😆 & thank u so much.

@shaina_b:- Hiiii shaina, tumhare comments k bare main kuch nahin likhungi......kyoun...... tum janti ho!!!!!!!!! thanx a lot dear.

@quietrajpri1623:-Hiiii friend, Yeppiiiii... new friend...

& thanx a lot dear. Waise kahte hai na 'simplicity is the best beauty' isi liye maine is fic ko thoda simple banaya hai, lekin jan kar aacha laga k u likes it a lot. upar se itne sare ( 👏....)thoda kam karo....yaar, itni tarif se agar indigestion ho gaya to ud post karne main late ho jaungi.

LOVE & WISHES

PRIYA

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Prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

no plz dont change name of this fic

it just apt for this fic and plz continue soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

PROMO ************
WOH WAPAS AA RAHI THI K KISI NE PICHE SE US KO DHAKKA DE DIYA.... WOH MOOH K BAL GIR NE WALI THI K KISI NE US KA HATH PAKAD KAR PICHE K AUR KHINCH LIYA.

USNE THANX KAHNE K LIYE PICHE K AUR DEKHA TO.............!!!!!!!!!!

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Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#99

No ways this title is very nice aur waise bhi jo fic padhta hai woh janta hai!!!!

Ek naam ke kayi fics hote hai sometimes on the same pair!!!!

Yeh toh phir bhi different pair pe hai!!!!

Thsi title is very nice!!!!

Don't change it!!!!

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#100

RECAP:- Naina k pyar main pagal Rajveer ko ek thappad padta hai us k dad se. Aur hosh main aate hi Rajveer ek solid bahana banata hai , aur aapne dad ko blame kar k bhag jata hai.

Naina Shalini se kahti hai k Rajveer aab us k office main job karega.

Aur Shalini yeh kahti hai k woh janti hai k Rajveer India main kyoun job karna chahta hai.

(IN PART:-5)

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Shalini:-"Haan.... mujhe pata hai, k Rajveer India main kyoun job karna chahta hai!!!!!"

Naina chaunk gayi, aur puchne lagi :-" Kyoun!!!!!"

Shalini:- "Tujhe to pata hai na k main roz mandir jati hoon!!!!!"

Naina:- "Haan......to!!!!!!!"

Shalini:- "To us din.........

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FLASHBACK

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Shalini k mother k death k baad woh apna jyada tar waqt Bhgwan k pas bita thi.Aur thoda jyada superstitious ho gayi thi.

Hafte main aisa koi din nahin hota tha jis din us ka koi BRAAT na ho! Aaj is bhagwan k liye to kal us bhagwan k liye.........aur haan.. mandir bhi roz jati thi. Chahe aandhi aaye ya toofan....

To us din................................................................................

Friday tha, yani k Shalini k Santoshi mata ke braat ka din. Us din woh subah jaldi nikli mandir k liye, taki jaldi puja khatam kar k ghar jaldi se aa jaye.

Lekin us din mandir main kafi bhid thi. Phir bhi woh bhid ko kat te hue aage badhi, aur puja kiya.

Wapas aahi rahi thi k kisi ne use dhakka de diya, woh mooh k bal girne wali thi k.......... kisi ne us ka hath pakad kar piche k aur khinch liya.

Shalini thanx kahne k liye piche k aur dekha to Rajveer khada tha.

Rajveer:- "Kya kar rahi thi? Abhi gir jati tum!"

Shalini:-" Woh kisi ne dhakka de diya tha....isiliye... by the way....thanx...."

Rajveer hairani se puchta hai:- "Thanx .....thanx kis liye? Tumne 'Maine Pyar Kiya ' movie nahin dekhi hai kya! So friendship main no sorry aur no thank u."

Shalini:- " To kya main Bhagyashree aur tum Salman khan hain?"

Rajveer:-" Bilkul nahin...... haan..philhaal main Salman Khan k character main hoon, lekin tum Renuka Shahane k character main ho. Aur hum dono is waqt ' Hum Apke Hain Koun' movie k situation main hai."

Shalini ko hashi aa gayi. Woh mandir k sidhiyon par baith kar hash ne lagi. Kyoun k woh Rajveer k dil k baat ko janti thi. Naina k liye Rajveer k dil main kya feelings the yeh baat Rajveer k aankhon main Shalini dekh leti thi hamesha, aur samajh bhi leti thi.

Rajveer bhi aakar us k paas baith gaya. Shalini ne use prasad diya . Aur Rajveer prasad khane k baad kah ne laga

:-"Haan.....mujhe iss k shaqt jaroorat thi & now wish me luck!"

Shalini:-" Kyoun?"

Rajveer:- "Are... aaj mera interview hai! Aur tumhe pata hai yeh job aagar mujhe mil gaya na....to manzil mere samne hogi."

Shalini:- "Accha...to isi liye subha subha mandir aaye ho, bhagwan ko mashka laga ne!!"

Rajveer hashne laga, phir bola:-" Haan...yahi samajh lo!"

Shalini:-" Ok......wish u all the luck."

Phir kuch der baad Shalini ne pucha:-" Tumne to Canada main M.B.A kiya hai na! To phir yahan kaise? Mera matlab hai k jyada tar log jo abroad main studies complite karte hain , woh wahin par job karna pasand karte hain.....!!!! Phir tum yahaan kaise.....?"

Rajveer kuch der Shalini ko dekhta raha aur sochta raha k kya kahe,phir bola:-"Sach kahoon Shalini....to kisi k yaadain mujhe yahaan tak khinch layi."

Shalini samajh rahi thi k Rajveer kis k bare main baat kar raha hai, phir bhi woh boli:-"Kis k yadain?"

Rajveer:- "Ek masoom sa magar pyara sa chehre, us k jheel jaisi aankhen, us k kahe hue kabhi gusse bhari batein to kabhi pyar bhari batein........ kabhi chidhti hue batein to kabhi takrar bhari batein.....us k yadon main bahat kuch aisa tha , jo mujhe wapas lane k liye kafi tha."

Shalini Rajveer k mooh se Naina ka naam sun na chahti thi. Isi liye us ne phir pucha:-" Aisa koun hai, jis k liye tum wapas aa gaye? Main janti hoon kya use?"

Ab Rajveer bhi samajh gaya tha k Shalini kya chahti hai. To us ne kaha:-" Haan...tum janti ho use....!!!"

Shalini usi tarah mushkurate hue boli:-"Accha...koun hai woh?"

Rajveer thoda udaas ho gaya, aur kahne laga:-" Jane do Shalini...aab to us k shadi bhi ho chuki hai."

Shalini chaunk gayi.Woh ander hi ander sochne lagi k "Main to samajh rahi thi k yeh Naina k bare main baat kar raha hai........ lekin yeh to kisi aur k bare main baat kar raha hai."

Shalini:-" Koun hai woh?"

Rajveer usi tarah udaas ho kar kah ne laga:-"Janti ho Shalini....... main us se bahat pyar karta tha, lekin phir bhi.............main Canada jane se pahle us se kaha bhi tha k tumhe mujh main aur Abhishek main kisi ek ko pasand karni padegi!"

Rajveer thodi der ruka , phir bola:- " Magar jab main India wapas aaya to suna k us ne Abhishek se shadi kar li thi.."

Rajveer bahat dukhi dikhai de raha tha. Shalini ne use console kar ne k liye kaha:-" I m sorry."

Rajveer:-" Are.... nahin....... nahin! Sorry for what! Abhishek mujh se better option tha us k liye. & really...i m very happy for them. Waise bhi yeh shadi un dono k career k liye kafi accha bhi hai! Dono ek hi profession main hain na....isiliye!"

Shalini:-"Profession....!!!!!!!"

Rajveer:-" Haan....profession.......acting un ka profession hai na!"

Shalini:- "Kya.............

Rajveer:-" Haan..... main Abhishek Bachhan aur Aishwarya Rai k bare main baat kar raha hoon....!!!!! Tum ne kya samjha tha?"

Itna keh kar Rajveer jor jor se hash ne lagta hai. Aur aab ja k Shalini k samajh main aata hai k , Rajveer ab tak us k sath mazak kar raha tha.

Rajveer:-"Ok.....ok....I m sorry ......Main mazak kar raha tha!"

Shalini:- "Aur tumhe pata hai, k main kitna serious ho gayi thi?"

Rajveer usi tarah hashte hue kahta hai:-" Janta hoon... tumhara chehra bata raha tha."

Thodi der chup rahne k bad Rajveer phir kahta hai:- "Ok.... Shalini...Ab sach kahunga....Promise!!!"

Rajveer:-" Waise India wapas aane ka mera pahla reason bilkul sahi hai..Mujhe sach main kisi k yadon ne wapas aane par majboor kar diya........Ok ....Aab chalta hoon... Bye."

Phir jate jate kahta hai:- " Kya yaar.... Shalini... kitna bak bak karti ho tum......mujhe late kara diya!!!"

Shalini ko hansi aa gayi kyoun k sare time to Rajveer batein kar raha tha, lekin Shalini se kah gaya k woh jyada bak bak kar rahi thi.

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Shalini se sab sun ne k baad Naina jor se hansh ne lagi.

Naina:- "Sach main di!.....Tujhe ullu banana kitna asan hai!"

Shalini:- "Are...Main kya karti......Us ne itni seriously kaha k mujhe us k baat par yakeen aa gaya."

Phir Shalini kuch der chup rahne k bad boli:-" Waise.... us ne jo kaha k.... use kisi k yadain yahaan tak khinch laya hai......!!!!! tu janti hai kya k..... woh kis k bare main baat kar raha tha?"

Naina ne apni nazrain jhuka li, aur kahne lagi:-" Mujhe kya pata.......!!!!! Aur phir us ne kaha na.....k woh mazak kar raha tha."

Shalini:-" Nahin....us ne kaha k yeh sach hai k use kisi ki yadon ne India wapas aane par majboor kar diya."

naina:-"To......mujhe kya pata....k woh kis k bare main baat kar raha tha!!!!"

Shalini:-"Kya sach main tu nahin janti..........!!!!!!"

Naina kuch kahna chahti thi, magar kuch nahin boli, aur chup chap vegitables kat ne lagi.

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12:00 A.M.

Rajveer ko neend nahin aa rahi thi. Tabhi us ka phone ring hua. Us ne bina no. dekhe phone ko apne kaan se laga diya.

Rajveer:-"Hello.........................................................

Other side:-"............................................................."

Rajveer:-"Whatt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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