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Posted: 16 years ago

RECAP:- Shalini Naina ko batati hai k Rajveer ne kaise us k sath mandir main mazak kiya tha.

Lekin aakhir main Rajveer ne bataya k us k India aane ki wajah kya thi.....lekin us ne end tak Naina ka naam nahin liya.
(PART:- 6)
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*PART:- 7*
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12:00 A:M
Rajveer ko neend nahin aarahi thi. Tabhi us ka ph. ring hua, us ne bina no. dekhe apna phone kaan se laga diya.
Rajveer:- "Hello.......
Other side:- "*****************************************"
Rajveer:-" What............!!!!!
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Rajveer:- "What rubbish...........
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Rajveer:- "Kya bakwas kar rahe hain aap?????"
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Rajveer:-" Dekhye mr.! yeh worng no. hai!!!!!"
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Rajveer:-" Aap ko mera naam kaise maloom hai?"
Other side:- "*********************************************"
Rajveer :-" Stop all these nonsense........................
Rajveer gusse main phone ko off kar deta hai.
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" Pata nahin koun tha woh idiot, jo iss tarah se..." Rajveer aapne aap se kahta hai.
Aur apne bed main se uth kar baith jata hai. Pas hi bed side table par rakhi hui ek bahat hi khobsurat si photo frame main Naina k tasveer thi, woh use dekhta hai.
Roz subah Rajveer ka yahi to kam hota hai k us frame se Naina k tasveer ko nikalna aur aapne mom aur dad k tasveer ko us frame main rakhna. Aur raat ko woh sone se pahle phir se us frame main Naina k tasveer wapas rakh deta hai.
Badi hi mushkil se us ne Naina ki yeh tasveer chhup kar liya tha, society k ek marriage reception party main........
Rajveer us photo frame ko utha kar apne kareeb lata hai...........aur kahta hai.................................
"Nahin janta tumhare dil main mere liye kya feelings hai.......!!!!! Lekin Naina......maine tumhare aankhon main ek dard mahsoos kiya hai......ek sunapan......aur sach main Naina.........tumhare aankhon ka woh sunapan.....woh dard .....mujhe chain se sone nahin deta. Main bardast nahin kar pata tumhare ankhon ke us dard....................... us sunepan ko .......kash Naina.....main tumhre sare dard apne ander samet pata..........................."
Rajveer Naina k tasveer ko kiss karta hai, aur use pakad kar apne balcony main aa jata hai. wahin par pade hue ek easy chair par baith kar us tasveer ko apne seene se lagata hai, aur aashman ki taraf dekhta hai.
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Subah subah Rajveer apne dad ki car lekar nikalta hai. Last night kafi barsaat hui thi, isi liye jagah jagah pani bhara hua tha.
Rajveer society k pichewali gali se jana chahta tha, kyoun k wahan se main road tak jane ka short-cut root tha. Subah ka waqt tha, aur rashte par jyada bhid bhi nahi thi.
Rajveer ko speed drive karna pasand tha, woh apni car ko us gali k taraf mod deta hai.
" Oh......God!......Yahan par to pani bhara hua hai." Woh apne aap se kahta hai.
Us choti si gali main pani bhara hua tha......aur road k dono taraf thoda thoda rashta khali tha, jahan par kuch bade bade patthar rakhe hue the. Jis par log apne pair rakh kar dhire dhire se bahar ki aur jate the.
Rajveer ne notice kiya k philhal us gali main koi nahin hai. Isiliye us ne apne car ki speed phir se badha di, aur pani ko kat te hue us k car aage k aur badh ne lagi. Pani dono taraf se uchal kar gir rahe the, aur Rajveer apne driving main busy tha.
Tabhi use gali k dushre taraf se ek ladki aati hui dikhai di. Us ladki ne baby pink colour k ek salwar suit pahni hui thi. Aur woh bade dhyan se ek k baad ek patthar par apna pair rakh kar age badh rahi thi.
Tabhi us ladki ne Rajveer k car ki awaz suni, aur us ne chounk kar age k taraf dekha. Rajveer kafi tezi se apni car chala raha tha,aur car k dono taraf pani bahat upar tak uchal kar niche k taraf gir rahe the.
Us ladki ne dil hi dil main socha k " Abhi to mere is naye dress ka ho gaya satyanash, aur sath main is mitti bhare pani se nahana padega woh bhi muft main..... is idiot ko bhi yahi rashta mila tha ane k liye!!!!!!"
Us ladki ne apni ankhen jor se band kar k ek patthar par apne pair rakh kar side wale diwar se sat kar khadi ho gayi, aur us car k driver ko dhire dhire awaz main gali dene lagi" Idiot .....Stupid...Ullu ka pattha.......Gadha...... Bewakuf.........."
Rajveer ne dur se us ladki ko is tarah se dekha , aur use hanshi aa gayi. Us ne apni car k speed kam kar di, aur dhire se apni car ko us ladki k samne se cross karwa diya, jaise k us ladki par ek boond pani bhi na pade....
Apni car ko us ladki k samne se cross karwate samay us ne us ladki ko ek nazar dekha.
Subah ke taza phool k tarah us ladki ka chehra chamak raha tha. Us ka chehera pareshan tha, magar ek attraction tha us chehere main, jo Rajveer k dil ko choo gaya.
Rajveer soch raha tha k kisi ka chehera itna attractive kaise ho sakta hai?????
Us ladki k mathe par halka halka sa pasina tha. Bina lipstic k bhi us ke honth kafi gulabi the, chote chote aur bahat pyare.....jis main se woh Rajveer ko gali de rahi thi ahishta ahishta se.....us ladki ki aankhen band thi, magar badi badi aankhen thi, yeh pata chal raha tha.
Woh ladki jyada khoobsurat nahin thi, lekin ek ajeeb sa chamak tha us k chehere main..... Rajveer ne socha k " Log sahi kahte hain k sacchi khoobsurti saadgi(simplicity) main hi hoti hai."
Us ladki k chehre ki saadgi bhari khoobsurti Rajveer k dil ko choo gaya tha. Usne ek halka sa smile karte hue us ladki ko cross kar k chala gaya.
Us ladki ne apni ankhen kholi, aur dekha k sab kuch thik hai. Phir woh us car k taraf dekhne lagi.
Rajveer side mirror se us ladki ko dekh raha tha. Woh ladki ne bhi Rajveer ko dekhne ki koshish ki, magar Rajveer thoda age chala gaya tha aur car k ander tha , isi liye woh ladki Rajveer ko nahin dekh payi.
Us din.......din bhar us ladki ka chehera Rajveer k ankhon k samne chaya raha.
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After one week of that incident................................
Rajveer subah subah utha, jog karne k liye.
Subah ka waqt tha, isi liye rashte par jyada bhid nahin thi, bas wahi log the jo jogging karne aaye the.
Jogging karte karte Rajveer us society k park k pas aa gaya. Park k pas bhi jyada bhid nahin thi. Park k railing par usne apna sar rakh kar thodi der k liye rest liya, kyoun k tab tak woh kareeb 3 k.m daud chuka tha.
Usne apne hath, pair aur apni puri body ko thoda stretch kiya, aur wahin par thodi der khada raha.
Road k dushre side par ek bus khadi thi. Jis par likha hua tha...."Sahara Old-age Home".
Woh bus roz subah is park k pas aakar rukti thi. Aur us main se kuch senior citizens nikalte the, us park main thodi der ghumne k liye.
Us samay ek ek kar k sare inmates wapas us bus main ja rahe the. Sayad un sab ne apne subah ka walk khatam kar diya tha.
Lekin un logon main se kuch logon ko bus main chadhte hue pareshani ho rahi thi. Kyoun ki bus ki pahli seedhi kafi upar k aur tha.
Rajveer ne socha k woh ja kar un k help karega. Isiliye woh jaise hi road cross kar k dushri side par jane k liye aage badha, to ek maruti van bahat tezi se us k samne aa gaya.............................................
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END OF PART:-7
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HIIIIIIIIIII friends! Plzzzzz comment karna mat bhulna. Aur agla part aapko milega 17th oct ko after 11:30P:M.
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
fanatic 21 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
dis was a very nice part............i'm eager to know who was dat gal???
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Posted: 16 years ago
HII PRIYA SWEETY KAISE HO TUM?
I AM REALLY SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY DEAR...............
PLZZZZZZ DO FORGIVE ME DEAR......................
I HOPE KI TUM MUJHSE NARAAZ NAHIN HO DEAR................
WELL UR UD WAS..............
ROCKING.................
SUPERB.....................
AMAZING................
WONDERFUL..............
MINDBLOWING................
EXCELLENT......................
BEAUTIFUL..................
FANTASTIC...............
FANTABULOUS................
OUT OF THIS WORLD...........
JUST TOO GOOD....................
TAKE CARE................
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Update was cool..👏
So it was all flashback na when Raj doesn't know abt Naina...😃He is indeed madly in love with Naina
Do update soon n pls inform me abt the update dear
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello madam aap mujhe pehle ek baat bataiye ki is story me Raj aur Naina k alawa kisi aur ko lane ki kya jaroorat thi batao.😡Mujhe nahi accha lagega ki un dono k beech me aur koi aaye is tarah.

Chalo koi baat nahi par dhyan rakhna is baat ka aage se.🥱

Update was really good Raj ne sach me show kar diya ki vo kitna pyaar karta hai Naina se 😳us ki photo ko kitne aaraam se badlata rehta hai suabh shaam.😆

Par vo aadmi kaun tha jis ne Raj ko phone kiya tha raat ko?😕

Aur vo ladki kaun hai?😕

Do update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Rajveer ko kiska phone aaya tha??😕 😕 😕 😕Aur woh kya kehe raha tha ke woh itna gussa ho gaya??😕 😕 😕 😕
Rajveer apne bedside table par Naina ki photo rakha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Aur subah uthkar ush photo frame mein apne mom dad ki photo dal deta hai aur raat ko phir se Naina ki photo jo usne bahut muskil se ek reception party mein li thi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Kitna pyaar karta hai woh Naina se!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Rajveer Naina ki photo ko seene se laga kar kehta hai ke kaash woh uske saare dukh apne mein saama leta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Raj ki gadi jaa rahi thi toh Naina ko laga uski dress gayi aur usse dhire awaz mein gali deni lagi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
Magar Raj ne gadi ki speed kam kardi taaki uspar pani ki ek boondh bhi naa lage!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj ne jab usse dekha toh bas uski sadgi bhari khudsoorati uske dil ko choo gayi aur usse socha ne khubsoorati sadgi mein hi hoti hai!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Magar Naina usse nahi dekh payi!!!!😊 😊 😊
Aur ush din din bhar uska chehra Raj ki ankhon ke saamne chaya raha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaaiiiii!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Raj ki taraf ek car aa rahi hai tezi se!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so good
plz continue soon and sorry for late replying
but next time plz pm me for the update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

dis was a very nice part............i'm eager to know who was dat gal???

Hiiii lipi, & thanx ......us ladki ko tum janti ho.......just wait some time.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello!! Priya!!!
Sorry for not being regular....got busy a little bit...

Well loved the update....whole of it.....
Very nice dear....waiting eagerly to know who's that girl....
Take care.
Continue soon....




love
Riya...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII PRIYA SWEETY KAISE HO TUM?

I AM REALLY SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY DEAR...............
PLZZZZZZ DO FORGIVE ME DEAR......................
I HOPE KI TUM MUJHSE NARAAZ NAHIN HO DEAR................
WELL UR UD WAS..............
ROCKING.................
SUPERB.....................
AMAZING................
WONDERFUL..............
MINDBLOWING................
EXCELLENT......................
BEAUTIFUL..................
FANTASTIC...............
FANTABULOUS................
OUT OF THIS WORLD...........
JUST TOO GOOD....................
TAKE CARE................
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.

Hiiiii priti.......thanx a lott....glad u like it.

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