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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII PRIYA HOPE UR FINE SWEETY................ THE UD WAS AS USUAL AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME DEAR....................... I REALLY ENJOYED IT A LOT WHILE READING..............................................

WONDERFUL.............................
AMAZING.......................................
BEAUTIFUL...........................
SUPERB.............................
AND A VERY ROCKING UD.........................
UD SOON........................
AND PLZZZZZZZZ DO SEND ME A PM..........................
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.

HIIIIIIII PRITI, & THANX A LOT.
LOVE & WISHES
PRIYA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Update was cool...so Naina too likes rajveer but she fears dat..watever has happened with her in past shhe is bound to get affected..Lets see wat happens next...

HIIIIIIII SUHANA,
& MANY MANY THANX DEAR.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: prerna1

hey to Naina ko Raj ki feelings ke baare main pata hain aur vo bhi Raj ke liye yehi sab feel karti thats gr8

par jo bhi kuch uske saath hua uske baad pyaar pe yakeen karna thoda mushkil to hain hi 😔
plz continue soon

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIII PRERNA,
HAAN..........PAR APNA HERO HAI NA USE HANDLE KARNE K LIYE APNE TARIKE SE......
LOVE & WISHES
PRIYA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Beta ye tere hi nahi hum sab k fic k bhi saath hota hai😕😕 ki viewers jyada aur reply dene waale bahut kam😭😭, kya kare ye India hai yahan aisa hi hota hai.😉😉

Rahi baat aap ki fic k is update ki to it was really awesome dear.👏

Ek baat bata mujhe tu is font me kyoun likhti hai😕😕, mai bus suggest kar rahi hoon aage teri marzi:-
1. Paragraph me likha kar.
2. Sentences ko thoda alag alag likh ki pata chale difference.
3. Thoda lenghty likho darling.
Bus aage aap ki iccha.
Raj ka chehra Naina ki aakhon k saamne aa jaa raha hai, how cute.😳
Naina jaanti hai ki Raj us se pyaar karta hai😉😉 par vo kya kare us ki zindagi me pyaar itna negative role dikha chuka hai ki ye obvious hai ki vo itni asaani se pyaar par vishwaas nahi karegi.😲
Ye Pooja ki kya kahani hai kyoun nahi Harshad se kar leti hai shaddi, chode us Rohit idiot ka chakaar.😡
Raj bhi kam nahi hai Naina ko dekhte hi paagal ho jaata hai.😛😛
update soon dear.😃

JO HUKUM...............SARKAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello!!Priya!!!

Very nice dear....
So Raj loves Naina...Naina too feels something for Raj.....
Great...aage dono ek hi office mein....great....
Continue soon....
Take care...
Love
Riya.

HIIIIIIIIIIII RIYA!!!!!!!!!
THANX FOR THE COMMENT SWEETY.
LOVE & WISHES
PRIYA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hello mam, ye accha lag raha hai tareeka.

DHANYAVAAD............. MAHASHYA! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGE BHI AISE HI KRIPA BANAYE RAKHEN.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Priya nice fic and it's parts are awesome dear. 😊

update soon.

HELLO VARSHITA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANX ...........YAAR.
LOVE & WISHES
PRIYA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP:-Naina apne feelings ko avoid karna chahti thi, aur Pooja apne prob. le kar Naina k pas aayi thi...............................................................
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PART:-5
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Bus main se bahar nikal ne k baad Naina barshat main bhigte hue ghar k taraf aa rahi thi, aur use barsaat main bhigna accha lag raha tha.
Jab woh Rajveer k ghar k samne se gujri, to usne dekha k Rajveer apne car se bahar aa raha tha.
Rajveer ne jab Naina ko dekha to............... to bas dekhta hi rah gaya.......
Rajveer ko iss tarah se dekhte hue dekh kar Naina ko sharam aa rahi thi.
kyoun k woh barish main puri tarah se bhig chuki thi aur uske kapde uske body k sath bilkul lipat chuke the.
Use bahat saram aa rahi thi. Us ne aapni nazrain jhukate hue thoda sa smile kiya aur Rajveer ko cross kar k chali gayi.
Lekin tab tak Rajveer apne car se bahar aa chuka tha. Woh pahli baar naina ko iss tarah se dekh raha tha.
Barsaat main bhigi hui Naina use bahat khoobsurat lag rahi thi. Rajveer ko aisa lag raha tha jaise yeh barsaat sirf Naina k liye ho rahi thi.
Aur woh soch raha tha k.........kash.........waqt tham jaye.........hawa ruk jaye.........aur is pal main woh sirf aise hi Naina ko dekhta rahe..............
janmon........janmon tak...........................................................................
Woh uske kareeb jaye...........Uske saanson ko mehsoos kare....................
Uske dil k dhad kan ko mehsoos kare........................................................
Uski khosboo ko apne saanson main basa le.............Aur use yeh bataye k woh use kis hadh tak pyar kar ta hai.....................................................
"Yeh mere dil k tammna hai aakhir
Tu mere sath rahe har kadam dua k tarah"
Rajveer usi tarah se road k bichion bich khda tha., aur Naina jis direction main gayi thi, usi taraf bina palak jhapkaye , barish main bhigte hue khada ho kar dekh raha tha.
Tabhi K.k ji apni car le kar ghar se bahar nikle, club jane k liye. Aur iss tarah Rajveer ko road k bichon bich statue k tarah khada hota hua paya.
K.k ji apni umbrella le kar car se bahar aaye.Aur Rajveer k pas gaye. Rajveer jis taraf dekh raha tha,unhone bhi usi taraf dekhna shuru kiya k aakhir Rajveer itne dhyan se kya dekh raha hai?...................................
Lekin tab tak Naina ja chuki thi.Lekin Rajveer to jaise hosh main hi nahin tha . Pata nahin koun si duniya main tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Phir K.k ji Rajveer k samne aaye,aur uske samne 2/3 bar apna hath hilaya......tab bhi Rajveer apne hosh main nahin aaya.............................
To unhone kaha......"Yeh kya pagal pan hai Veer!Is tarah barish main bhig kar rashton k bicho bich kyoun khade ho?"
Rajveer kuch nahin bola , woh sirf k.k ji ko dekhe hi jaraha tha.
K.k ji ne phir kaha:- " Haan......samjha.....taki tum bimar pad jao, aur sab tumhari seva main jut jaye! Tumhe yaad hai na.... k kal tumhari office ka pahla din hai?
K.k ji najane kya kya kah rahe the, lekin Rajveer ko kuch sunayi nahin de raha tha. Woh to jaise apne hosh main hi nahin tha..............................
Woh aab k. k. ji ko ghur raha tha ...........use aab k.k ji Naina k tarah dikh rahe the.
Barsaat main bhigi hue Naina.......bahat khoobsurat dikh rahi thi Rajveer ko.
Woh K.k ji k aur kareeb aaya. Iss bar K.k ji chunk gaye. Rajveer k aankhon main Naina k liye bahat pyar bhara hua tha............................
Us ne apne right hand se Naina k (means K.k. ji k) left cheek ko touch kiya.
K.k ji ne use ek jor se THAPPAD maar diya..........................................
K.k. ji :- " Kya kar rahe ho?"
Rajveer ko aab hosh aa gaya tha. Lekin use thoda time laga sab kuch samajh ne main.................................................................................
Phir usne notice kiya k uska hath aabhi tak uske dad k cheek par hi hai.
Usne hath hata liya.
Aur kahne laga:- "Kya dad........aap k gaal par mitti lagi hui thi, main use nikal ne k koshish kar raha tha, aur aapne mujhe thappad mar diya!..... Rukiye......main aabhi ja kar mom se kahta hoon k aap bilkul nahin chahte k main yahaan rahoon! Isiliye to aapne rashton k bicho bich mujhe thappad maar diya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rajveer ek fake anger look de kar aapne ghar k taraf bhaga. Aur K.k ji bhi bhage aapni car k taraf, taki Sudha ji k aane se pahle woh yahaan se nikal jayen.............................................................................................
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Us din raat bhar barsaat hoti rahi. Naina ko lag raha tha k sayad yeh barish kabhi khatam hi nahin hogi!
Barsaat k wajah se power cut ho chuka tha. Aur Uday apne pet dog 'Mighty' k sath chilla chilla kar khel raha tha.
Lekin Naina in sab se dur kisi aur khawalon main gum thi,aur uska dil baichain ho raha tha. Uday un k ghar main sab se chota hai, aur high school main padhta hai.
Sab se bada hai Deepak , us k baad Nandini, us k baad Alekh (jo k Naina se pure 15 min. bada hai), aur us k baad Naina.
Bua ji k death k baad, uncle ji ne second marriage kar li thi. Isi liye Naina k parents ne Shalini aur uske 4 1/2saal ke chota bhai Uday ko unke ghar le aaye the.
Tab se Shalini aur Uday is ghar ka hissa ban chuke hain. Naina k parents ko woh bhi maa , baba kahte hain, aur woh bhi unhe apne bacche k tarah pyar karte hain. In fact, Uday Naina k maa ka sab se jyada ladla hai.
Jab Shalini aur Uday is ghar maib aaye tab Uday to kafi chota tha , is liye use kuch yaad nahin hai, aur woh Naina k parents ko apna parents samajhta hai ,lekin Shalini sab kuch janti thi aur sayad isi liye woh jyada time chup chap rahti thi. Lekin Naina se bahat pyar karti thi, aur us se bahat batain karti thi.
Nandini k death k baad Deepak aur uski wife Anita ne yeh ghar chod diya tha. Unhe laga k ghar main kuch jaroorat se jyada log rahte hain, aur un dono k puri salary woh paraye logon par kharch kar rahe hain.
Un dono k jane k baad Shalini ne pura ghar sambhal liya tha. Tab Naina aur Alekh 1st year main the. Shalini ghar k paas hi ek N.G.O main accountant k job bhi kar ne lagi thi.
Naina aur Alekh ne bhi apne studies khatam karne k baad job kar na shuru kar diya tha. Magar Alekh k 'angry young man' attitude ki wajah se woh kisi bhi job main jyada time nahin rah pata tha.
Alekh pahle aisa nahin tha, lekin Nandini k death aur Deepak k ghar chod k jane k baad woh aisa ban chuka hai. Lekin woh kabhi kisi se kuch nahin kahta...........................................................................................
Lekin Naina se bahat pyar karta hai aur Shalini aur Uday ko apni duty samajh ta hai aur unhe bhi bahat pyar karta hai. Use sirf is baat k prob. hai k woh apni feelings kisi k bhi samne bayaan nahin kar pata.............
Pata nahin ek din Alekh ne kya socha , aur police force join kar lia, ab woh training main hai.
Shalini ko kuch din pahle us ne phone kar k bataya k us ki training ab khatam hone bala hai, aur woh 2/4 dino main ghar wappas aa jayega.
Naina yeh soch rahi thi k pata nahin, Alekh jahan par posted hoga , wahan par criminals ki kya halat karega!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Naina apne khawalon k duniya se bahar aayi aur kitchen k aur gayi.
Shalini dinner k liye khana bana rahi thi. Us ne Naina se pucha,
"Tu yahaan kyoun aayi? Main soch rahi thi k jald se jald apna kaam khatam karoon, taki tere sath baith kar baatain kar sakoon!"
Naina:- "Akeli bathe baithe bore ho rahi thi di! Mujhe bhi kuch kar ne de na......Phir dono baith kar batain karenge."
Shalini:- "Thik hai main vegitables nikal deti hoon ,tu unhe kaat le. Tab tak main roti bana leti hoon."
Kuch der chup rah ne k baad, Naina veg. kat te hue boli:- "Tujhe pata hai di.........................Rajveer mere hi office main join kar raha ........kal se."
Shalini hairan ho kar puch ne lagi:- "Usne to Canada main M.B.A kiya tha na, to phir yahaan kaise? Matlab, use to wahan par hi acche acche offers aye honge na?"
Naina:- "Haan............woh to hai! Lekin pata nahin kyoun.............woh India main job karna chahta hai!"
Shalini thoda sa smile kar te hue boli:- "Well.............sayad main janti hoon........k woh yahaan kyoun job kar na chah ta hai?"
Naina chunk gayi. Phir boli:- " Kyoun.............."
Shalini:- "Tujhe to pata hai na , k main roz subha mandir jati hoon...."
Naina:- " Haan.............to!!!!!!!!!"
Shalini:- " To us din.........................
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END OF PART :-5
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FRIENDS.......................PLZ COMMENT KARNA MAT BHULNA........
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
that was so good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello Priya mam,😊😊😊
Really superb update.👏👏👏
Rajveer mera dear darling, kitna pyaar karta hai vo Naina se na😳😳😳; pata nahi kab bol paayega us ko i love u.😕😕😕
Baarish me Naina ko bheegte hue dekh kar Rajveer ko kaisa lag raha tha oh my god.......................😉😉😉he has just lost himself in Naina.😍😍😍
Kitne pyaar se vo Naina ko dekh raha tha aur Naina jis tarah se sharma rahi thi Raj k dekhne se us se ek baat to clear ho jaati hai ki Naina ko bhi pata hai ki Raj us ko pyaar karta hai ☺️☺️☺️bus Naina apne saath pechli zindagi me hue hadson ki wajah se Raj k pyaar se dar rahi hai na.😭😭😭
I love the scene jab Raj Naina k jaise baarish me bheeg raha😛😛😛 tha aurNaina k jaane k baad us raaste par khada ho kar dekh raha tha............🤪🤪🤪aur to aur apne dad ko bhi Naina samjh raha tha so funny🤣🤣🤣.Fir us nejab apne dad k cheeks ko touch kiya aur us k dad ne us ko slap kiyatab kya solid bahana maara hai Raj ne.😆😆😆
To humare Alekh ji police force me hain aur jaldi hi wapis aa rahe hain good yaar👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼. Shalu bhi kitne intelligent hai na😉😉😉 kyounki jab us ko Naina ne bataya ki Raj us k hi office me job karega ab to us ne guess bhi kar liya itne aaram se ki kyoun nahi vo India se bahar jaa kar kaam karna chahta hai...
update soon dear.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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