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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jia..

lmao vampires??? hehehe....wow u updating right?/ i am eager....as usual.

yeah dont ask,....... arm hurt!!
Bye all....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hmmm title says complete..but where is the completed part anticipation ke maare I am having a hard time drinking my coke afraid it might leak right out of me😆
*edit* ahem anticipation ke maare I had lost my mind...was checking the last page for the update when I know you posted it on the first page..see Kat and you call your self sick...here I am loosing my mental balance over your FF for godsakes...HELPPPPP someone get me Dr. Phil🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing kat di
loved it a tonnnn
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Posted: 16 years ago

Awwwwwwwww *sniff sniff* you know Kat every time you finish a FF my heart just breaks but after reading the beautiful endings it leaps with joy that for days I go on thinking of your stories. Your writing really touches the soul you know and you have to be such a meanie and write such heart wrenching stuff…your stories are always so deep and distressing but you always manage to show a light at the end of the tunnel.

I am sitting here at work breaking out in a cold sweat, I told you anticipation drives me mad. My hands are like ice as I type this little review but it's all worth it! How unfortunate that Ridzie never could bond with her real father but ironically I am actually very glad because in return Riddhima received a better and more loving father in the form of Ashok.

Chirag turned out to be a pleasant surprise wow! Staying for a month with a new born at his own home, that is indeed called friendship!

No mention of Atul and Anji towards the end, I guess I was hoping to see Anji reach out to her sister but I guess not, well at least they share a cordial relationship unlike the one Ridz & Shashank.

Priya's entry was such a sweet turn of events she would complete the family portrait!

Well this is another FF of yours which has to be crossed off from my list of "FF updates to watch out for" but to my luck you have started another one all thanks to the one and only Jia! I am now eagerly awaiting "Baba Maaf Karin main Sin Kita" (ahem I have changed the name for my own selfish reasons and will henceforth address it in this manner)

Your little mention of working on Kiss had me flying off my seat…Yippee I love Kiss and am keenly awaiting to see how the story will unfold…the royal romance drama with action excites me to the core!!!

now with that I shall conclude my essay and apologize for sometimes being a pain in the arse regarding the updates. I hope you have a good weekend and come out feeling healthy and cheery and perhaps squeeze in a update for Kiss, BUT only if you are feeling up to it! See how kind and thoughtful I am, it's not my fault that an old hag like you is having a hard time recovering..he he (just joking you know I lub ju!)

Seriously I know I need to stop this review is a page long! Ta-Ta

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww!!! so she made it huh!! thtz nice...such a cute lil happy family tey are!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: simran1285

Awwwwwwwww *sniff sniff* you know Kat every time you finish a FF my heart just breaks but after reading the beautiful endings it leaps with joy that for days I go on thinking of your stories. Your writing really touches the soul you know and you have to be such a meanie and write such heart wrenching stuff?your stories are always so deep and distressing but you always manage to show a light at the end of the tunnel.

Simmy for me this was an experiment ....i wanted to see if i could write a heartwrenching piece...U know i told Jia i was in tears writing this ...when i written Esha out of the ff...and then there where other parts in the ff....i would like be cryin writing... I guess i write what i feel other words i cant connect to the writing... i think i get to involved in all of them i guess...and then i like take my time with them....hehe.... I guess i like living in hope and that light is always there but we just need to see it at times as it goes dim...

I am sitting here at work breaking out in a cold sweat, I told you anticipation drives me mad. My hands are like ice as I type this little review but it's all worth it! How unfortunate that Ridzie never could bond with her real father but ironically I am actually very glad because in return Riddhima received a better and more loving father in the form of Ashok.

Chirag turned out to be a pleasant surprise wow! Staying for a month with a new born at his own home, that is indeed called friendship!

No mention of Atul and Anji towards the end, I guess I was hoping to see Anji reach out to her sister but I guess not, well at least they share a cordial relationship unlike the one Ridz & Shashank.

Priya's entry was such a sweet turn of events she would complete the family portrait!

Well this is another FF of yours which has to be crossed off from my list of "FF updates to watch out for" but to my luck you have started another one all thanks to the one and only Jia! I am now eagerly awaiting "Baba Maaf Karin main Sin Kita" (ahem I have changed the name for my own selfish reasons and will henceforth address it in this manner)

Hehe no matter sweetie... lovin the punjabi kuris flare😆

Your little mention of working on Kiss had me flying off my seat?Yippee I love Kiss and am keenly awaiting to see how the story will unfold?the royal romance drama with action excites me to the core!!!

now with that I shall conclude my essay and apologize for sometimes being a pain in the arse regarding the updates. I hope you have a good weekend and come out feeling healthy and cheery and perhaps squeeze in a update for Kiss, BUT only if you are feeling up to it! See how kind and thoughtful I am, it's not my fault that an old hag like you is having a hard time recovering..he he (just joking you know I lub ju!)

Seriously I know I need to stop this review is a page long! Ta-Ta

Love u too Simran....i will have something posted on Kiss soon...
Love Kat😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey kat....another end....oh well that has to come, for us to be able to see the luved happily ever after n for u to keep giving them more twists....all was good in paradise n it made a good read....i duno why but i kep thinking u might muskaan back, if for nothing bad then just to like sign off her loop here, but guess u decided to abandon her long ago lolzzzz um happy though u dint get her back to play the vamp lolzzzz...moving part, like emotionally, n well paced...n i loved him, i mean krish saying dadaaaa!!!/...n rimaaa!!!lolzzz...its was cute n sweet....as alwaz...kudos!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spln

hey kat....another end....oh well that has to come, for us to be able to see the luved happily ever after n for u to keep giving them more twists....all was good in paradise n it made a good read....i duno why but i kep thinking u might muskaan back, if for nothing bad then just to like sign off her loop here, but guess u decided to abandon her long ago lolzzzz um happy though u dint get her back to play the vamp lolzzzz...moving part, like emotionally, n well paced...n i loved him, i mean krish saying dadaaaa!!!/...n rimaaa!!!lolzzz...its was cute n sweet....as alwaz...kudos!!

I was goin to bring her in then thought NJ would kill me😆.... but muskhan was not a vamp here i dont think she gave up on 'them' ....as Ridz and krish need him...sometime we just walk away and never look back...
Rambling now ....
Love Kat
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh, i was scared thr. wow kat, tht was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Aww Kat!

It was the perfect ending to this amazing venture..I swear!
For a second, I though Riddhima died and I was like shocked...but YAY--you didn't kill her! !
The whole scene with her in the hospital was heartwarming..I loved the chirag-armaan scene also..Kudos Kat...I loved the whole update...
My fav dialogues..

"Its all you fault any way…. Shouting Rimmy and he like picking up all these bad habits from you.." Armaan looked at her and beamed in delight.

"Like Father like son!" he beamed looking at her frowning at him.

God Kat, I know you are a busy woman and all but how do manage to find time to pen down these amazing concept...where do you get the insipiration to think of such amazing concepts? Answer those questions for me please--I would love to know..lol,..
Lovely end! With them adopting Priya---So cute!
Looking forward to SIN and Kiss and Breath--
Hope you are feeling better Kat!
Love, Anita

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