Bedtime FF ~Kiss Goodbye~ complete 6/10 - Page 50

Originally posted by: aravi

GOSH !!!!!!!!! di u literally gave me a seizure i mean wen i thot ridzy actually dead 😲😲!!!!!!!! but u were SPLENDID N BRILLIANT wid dis one dii👏!!!!!!!!! luved d ending sooo muchhh😳😳😳 n dem adopting priya awww... so cutee😛!!!!!! only u can cum up wid such beautiful parts amazing just beyond words😃!!!!!!!

i totally adore d Childish Armaan here 😳😳man hez changed sooo muchhh n luvess riddhima soo much naa😳😳😳!!!!!!! krishh choooo chweet😆😆😆!!!!!! n d way ashok n armaan fight over ridzy n krishh was adorable😳😳!!!! looking forward to SIN n KISSSS 😉😉😉!!!!!!!!!!

luv

aravi

Originally posted by: Robin_M

OMG!!!!!! di that was amazing! i was litrally crying! had tears running down my eyes cuz i so though rimmy was dead! your sooooooooo sneaky u know that! gosh cant believe u did that, make us think he went to visit her grave cuz she died, when all along she survived!!!!! but i must say u gave me a good shock! cant think of a better way to end this sweet ff!

LOL....i was going to kill her off....but then knew AR fanz would kill me hehe.... hehe sneaky yep😃

im SOOOOO happy u gave it a happy ending! armaan got his baby and his wife! yay! it was really a perfect ending. healthy baby krish and riddhima, they are married and dad is living with them too and now they adopted a little girl! awwwwwww i really liked that u had them adopt a girl, now ridz can give her love to her daughter, even tho its not esha.

really truely loved it! im like so happy right now! that was awsome di, you rock!

ok now that its over, i hope u will continue with every breath. its been a looong time u havent updated that one, hope your planning to cuz the story was really good for that one! and also look forward to Kiss and Sin!

Originally posted by: sweet=me

Oh wow...I don't know what to say...To say that it was a brilliant or even spectacular part, would be an understatement..I was actually crying while reading it,first from sorrow and then with happiness....Perfect ending to an awesome ff...

At first,I honestly thought that Ridzi had died when I read that little graveyard scene.Thank God she didn't..Loved Ashok and Armaan's childish squabbles.Awwww....Krish sounds like such an angel!!! Cho chweet!! Plus I'm glad that that little girl Priya will complete their family now.

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic..Thanks alot for writing it...

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Kat,

So this one ended too!!!! awhhhhh...it was an amazing journey of emotions on this oen!!

For a moment, I thought Ridz had died, & Arman was talking to her grave..do clarify, whom was he talking too,.....later when she comes, I thought maybe Ashok passed away but he was also alive/.....do note, I am not complaining, just want to get the picture right in my head.....

It was his mom.....😳....i left the for the readers to figure out ....and to keep u lot on ur toes😆

That Shashak was such a mental guy, can't he see his own daughter going thorugh so much pain, instead of being good to her, he is being mean

Wow! so they adopted Priya & now a princess palace, good, that will clear off Ridz's head that he is after a boy only

thanks Kat, for giving us immense pleasure by writng this wonderful FF

take care, always!

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Kat,

Thanks for the clarification, I knew you had got Esha next to his mom but I just didn't put everything togather, am quite pessimistic in that manner.....

It was a great read!

I waited 4 u 2 finsh writin ths FF so I could read it all at once 😆 I jst finishd readin da FF n it was gr8 👏👏👏 wen Armaan was talkin 2 da graves it was heartbreakin 😭 n thn wen i kept readin it I was so 😲 loved da endin 😃