Bedtime FF ~Kiss Goodbye~ complete 6/10

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Sonia

@...shona...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#481

i read the last part and i almost started crying when ridzy almost died😭 but i luv the way u desribed armaana nd ashoks relationship was wonderful-😛 i am sad thatn it ended though....................😭

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#482

awww Kat, loved the ending of this ff,

although all ur ff's are my favourites since you are one of my fav writers, this ff, was truly beautifully written

it was so moving, and definitely emotional to read!!

brilliant twist and turns throughout, just loved it

thank u for such a wonderful ff

Sania

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 16 years ago

#483

dii.. i loved it!! kya story thi.. extremely touching!! it was bliss!!

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lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#484

thanxs a lot for the sweet story

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#485

really a sweet one⭐️ so touching😭 for 1 second i think she is no more😭🤢 and im crying😭😭😭 but after going further😊 i'm so happy😛😃😭 i cant explain😭😭 it superb😊😉 ur awesome👍🏼❤️🤗

"NA KOI KISI SA DOOR HOTA HAI...
NA KOI KISI KA PASS HOTA HAI ..
PYAR KHUD CHAL KA ATTA HAI...
JAB KOI KISI KA NASSEB MAIN HOTA HAI." For AR

"One tree can start a forest, one smile can start a friendship. One touch can show you care, one friend like you can make life worth living for." For U

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 16 years ago

#486

hey kat di😛
awesome part as usual👏
👏it was soo heart wrenching that tears were brimming in my eyes😭 but they dint fall😆
seriously after that 9 month leap i thought that she died😲 but wow she survived😛
on whose grave was armi placing the flowers his mom😕
amazing part di
looking forward for the other ffs
update them soon
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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#487

thanks guys ...im so happy u liked it

Love kat

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aravi

@aravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#488

GOSH !!!!!!!!! di u literally gave me a seizure i mean wen i thot ridzy actually dead 😲😲!!!!!!!! but u were SPLENDID N BRILLIANT wid dis one dii👏!!!!!!!!! luved d ending sooo muchhh😳😳😳 n dem adopting priya awww... so cutee😛!!!!!! only u can cum up wid such beautiful parts amazing just beyond words😃!!!!!!!

i totally adore d Childish Armaan here 😳😳man hez changed sooo muchhh n luvess riddhima soo much naa😳😳😳!!!!!!! krishh choooo chweet😆😆😆!!!!!! n d way ashok n armaan fight over ridzy n krishh was adorable😳😳!!!! looking forward to SIN n KISSSS 😉😉😉!!!!!!!!!!

luv

aravi

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 16 years ago

#489

OMG!!!!!! di that was amazing! i was litrally crying! had tears running down my eyes cuz i so though rimmy was dead! your sooooooooo sneaky u know that! gosh cant believe u did that, make us think he went to visit her grave cuz she died, when all along she survived!!!!! but i must say u gave me a good shock! cant think of a better way to end this sweet ff!

im SOOOOO happy u gave it a happy ending! armaan got his baby and his wife! yay! it was really a perfect ending. healthy baby krish and riddhima, they are married and dad is living with them too and now they adopted a little girl! awwwwwww i really liked that u had them adopt a girl, now ridz can give her love to her daughter, even tho its not esha.

really truely loved it! im like so happy right now! that was awsome di, you rock!

ok now that its over, i hope u will continue with every breath. its been a looong time u havent updated that one, hope your planning to cuz the story was really good for that one! and also look forward to Kiss and Sin!

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#490

Hi Kat,

So this one ended too!!!! awhhhhh...it was an amazing journey of emotions on this oen!!

For a moment, I thought Ridz had died, & Arman was talking to her grave..do clarify, whom was he talking too,.....later when she comes, I thought maybe Ashok passed away but he was also alive/.....do note, I am not complaining, just want to get the picture right in my head.....

That Shashak was such a mental guy, can't he see his own daughter going thorugh so much pain, instead of being good to her, he is being mean

Wow! so they adopted Priya & now a princess palace, good, that will clear off Ridz's head that he is after a boy only

thanks Kat, for giving us immense pleasure by writng this wonderful FF

take care, always!