Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
Hi!!Arwa!!
Firstly a big sorry for the late reply...
Now the update was as usual too good.
Naina was totally out of mind...πŸ˜†
Loved the way Raj handled her.πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
BrilliantπŸ‘πŸΌ, you rock dear.πŸ˜ƒ
Continue soon.
Take care.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 6
Naina woke up with a bad headache and her eyes really hurt at first she was surprised 😲 to be in her room as she couldn't remember anything about last night.

Then she moved on her side and was shocked 😲 to find Rajveer sleeping next to her lying on his stomach.

She sat up immediately and then she got an even bigger shock 😲😲 when she saw the handcuffs.

Naina:
Aaaaaaaaaaah!

He woke up with a startle

Rajveer:
huh? 😲 kya huwa? πŸ˜•

Naina: Tum...me...yaha...yeh... (due to shock she couldn't even speak)
Rajveer: to finally tumhe hosh aaheegaya πŸ˜›

Naina: Rajveer πŸ˜” kal raat ko kya huwa?

Rajveer: (grinned 😊 and touched her cheek) wahi jo nahi hona chaheeye tha

Naina: (moved his hand away) 😑 saaf, saaf batao. (shows the handcuffs) yeh sab kese huwa?

Rajveer: ab kya batao Naina. πŸ˜” I mean mujhe nahi lagta tum sun paaohgee.

Naina: (tensed) 😳 Rajveer please! just tell me

Rajveer: theek hai. kal raat ko tum hosh me nahi thee or najaane kya kya karahee thee mere saath. (pretends to be embarrassed) 😳 I mean mene tumhe roke ne kee bohat koshish kee, lekin tum ne to mujhe (pretends to let out a sob) 😭 kahi ka nahi chora.

Naina: nahi πŸ˜’ aisa nahi hosakta

Rajveer: ab honee ko koun taal sakta hai

Naina: tum jhooth bole rahe ho 😳

Rajveer: πŸ˜” kaash ke me jhooth bole raha hota lekin sabse bara saboot yeh hai (shows her the handcuffs) yeh tumne mujhe baandiya taake me bhaag na saku πŸ˜› I mean I never knew you were so wild! πŸ˜‰.

Naina: You dog, 😑 you scoundrel, you.. (begins hitting him everywhere and eventually attempts to strangle him whilst he struggles)

Hopefully Neelu arrived before Naina would have killed Rajveer.

Neelu:
Naina! 😲

Naina: (embarrassed 😳 and quickly hides the handcuffs) are Neelu tu?

Neelu: Thank god tujhe hosh aagaya πŸ˜› or yeh kar kya rahi thee tu kal raat ko?

Naina: 😲 tujhe bhi pata hai kal raat ke baare me?

Neelu: mujhe kya, pure town ko pata hai ke tu kya karahee thee. kal puree dunya ke saamne to dekha diya tune

Naina was outraged 😲😑 whilst Rajveer tried to suppress his laughter. He decided to tease her even further.

Rajveer:
tumne mujhe kahi mooh dekha ne ke laayak nahi rakha πŸ˜† you literally ruined me.

Naina became really angry 😑 and tried strangling him 🀒 once again.

Neelu:
Naina! πŸ˜’ tu is beechaare ko kyu maar rahee hai. galati teree hai or ise saza derahee hai

Naina: Neelu 😲 tu bhi iska saat derahee hai? I can't believe it!

Rajveer: ab jo sach hai oska hee saat degee na πŸ˜›

Naina: just shut up Rajveer! 😑 or ise jaldi kholo (puts the handcuffs up)

Rajveer:
Are wah! πŸ‘ khud chaabhi phek deti ho or phir kehtee ho ke ise kholu

Naina: what rubbish! πŸ˜’ dekho seedhe tarhaase ise kholdo

Rajveer: ab to ise uparwala hee khol sakta hai 😊 lagta hai wo bhi hame ek saat hee bandhe huwe chahta hai πŸ˜› (puts arm around her shoulders)

Naina:
get off me! 😑 mujhe chaabhi do

Neelu: Yeh sach kehraha hai Naina kal yeh khud kholna chahta tha per tu hee nahi chahtee thee isiliye tune chaabi fountain me phek dee.

Naina: kya? oh my god! ab kya hoga?

Neelu: well tune fountain me daal dee per mene wo phirse nikaal dee 😊 (shows the key)

Naina:
or ab bata rahee hai πŸ˜› chal jaldi se khol ise

Neelu: uh, uh πŸ€” itnee asaanee se nahi

Naina: kya kehrahee hai?

Neelu: yeh chaabi me abhi nahi dungee

Naina: to kya hamesha hame aisa rakhegee?😲

Rajveer: not a bad idea πŸ˜†

Naina: Shut up Rajveer! 😑 Neelu dekh yeh khel band kar or chaabi de de 😳

Neelu: jab tak tum dono ek duje ke saat compromise karna nahi seekhte 😊 tab tak me tum dono ke haath nahi kholoongee.

Naina: what nonsense!

Neelu: ab to aisa hee hai. Ab tum dono pe hai, me chalee.

She leaves

Naina:
ruko Neelu! 😑 Neelu stop! (tries getting off the bed but Rajveer's weight holds her down, She's really annoyed 😑 and pulls her hand towards herself)

Rajveer:
ab yeh karne ka koi fiada nahi πŸ˜› wo to chali gayee. Ab to sirf me hu or tum πŸ˜‰ sweetheart πŸ˜†

Five minutes later...

Naina:
Rajveer utho

Rajveer: πŸ˜• kyu?

Naina: Rajveer get up quickly 😑

Rajveer: kahi phirse kal raat ka episode repeat to nahi karna? 😈

Naina: (really desperately) Oh just shut up! 😑 mujhe bathroom jaana hai.

She managed to pull him off with her this time and she rushed inside the bathroom leaving him smashed against the door. Unfortunately he couldn't even move out to press his smashed nose and forehead.

Later on both stood in front of the twin sinks whilst they both decided to brush their teeth. As Naina took her brush towards her teeth Rajveer purposely used his left hand to brush and pulled his hand towards himself. That made her spread the paste on her cheek πŸ˜† and she was really annoyed 😑. She stared at Rajveer who was busily brushing. Then she pulled her hand back and resumed brushing.

Rajveer was left half way so he pulled his hand back. They continued fighting until both were finally done. As he washed his mouth he saw how she kept staring in disgust 🀒 so he decided to annoy her even more. He purposely made loud disgusting gargling noises.

she felt sick and to her misfortune she had to stand there and witness it. Rajveer just kept laughing πŸ˜† in his mind.

Then both were sitting on the couch. Rajveer was pretending to read a magazine when Naina was very edgy and tensed. Every so often she stared at Rajveer and became surprised 😲 of how he seemed completely normal with the situation.

Naina:
meree yaha pe halat itnee kharaab horahee hai 😑 or tum araam se bait ke magazine parahe ho?

Rajveer: (looks up) huh? tumne mujhse kuch kaha?

Naina: Don't pretend 😳 ke tumne mujhe nahi suna

Rajveer: offo! πŸ˜” kya problem hai ab? Phirse jaana hai tumhai? (began laughing πŸ˜†)

Naina:
very funny πŸ˜› Rajveer mujhse yeh ab bardasht nahi ho raha. Come on lets go to Neelu 😳 right now.

Rajveer: wo chaabi aise thoree de degee πŸ˜’ bhool gayee kya keh gayee wo

Naina: ha to we'll show we can compromise. Per chalo

Rajveer: hold your horses Naina πŸ˜› wese bhi itnee jaldi kya hai. I mean aaj to koi competition bhi nahi hai, to come on let's relax πŸ˜‰

Naina: Relax? 😑 aise tumhaare saat bandhi hu or tum relax karne kee baat karahe ho? Tumhaaree wajase me aisee hee beithee hu. Tumhaaree wajese me nato naha sakti hu or nahi kapre badal sakti hu πŸ˜”

Rajveer: Oh to yeh problem hai (gets up) to pehle bata na chaheeye tha na Naina. Come on get up.

Naina: 😊 thankyou for understanding

Rajveer: Not a problem. Oh come on Naina ab to tumhe mujhse sharma na band kardena chaheeye πŸ˜‰ kal raat ke baad to... πŸ˜› khair tum apne kapre badal na chahtee ho to badal lo

Naina: Rajveer me kapre kese badal sakti hu?

Rajveer: kyu? πŸ˜• ab kya problem hai?

Naina: me tumhaare saamne kapre kese badal sakti hu?

Rajveer: God you're so shy πŸ˜ƒ theek hai me apnee aakhe band kar deta hu and I promise I wont peek πŸ˜›

Naina: 😑 oh just forget it!

Rajveer: Tum naraaz kyu hoti ho? Don't worry, or wese bhi πŸ˜‰ me kuch aisa to nahi dekhloonga jo maine pehle nahi dekha.

Naina: 😑 Rajveer you...

Rajveer: okay, okay ab nahi badalna tumhe to theek hai. Chalo πŸ˜› me hee change karleta hu

She panicked and didn't know what to do now. She began cursing that moment when she did such a stupid thing as putting the handcuffs on. She kept on dwelling 😍 on the thought that did she really pass all her limits last night.

Naina:
tum mere saamne kese badal sakte ho?

Rajveer: oho Naina, πŸ˜’ mere saamne tumhe badal ne me problem hai or tumhaare saamne mera badal na bhi problem hai. Ab kya karoo me?

Naina: yeh sab tumhaaree wajese huwa hai

Rajveer: ulta chore kotwaal ko daate πŸ˜› yeh saara tumhaara hee idea tha okay. meree sharafat ka bara ghalat fiada uthaya hai tumne

He walked over to the cupborad and took out a pair of his clothes and he was attempting to change when she just turned away from him in a huff 😑

Rajveer: 😈
wese Naina tum chaaho to mujhe kapre badal te dekh saktee ho. I don't mind.

Naina: God, 😑 you're so disgusting!

He cracked up laughing πŸ˜† whilst he began changing with difficulty but managed somehow. Before putting his shirt on he decided to tease her yet once again.

Rajveer:
I'm done.

She blew a sigh of relief and turned around to find him half naked. She shreiked 😲 and turned away again full red with embarrassment. 😳

Naina:
Tumne yeh jaan bujke kiya

Rajveer: What? πŸ˜• mene kaha ke I'm done. mene tumhe dekh ne ko nahi kaha πŸ˜› wese I can understand tumse bardaasht nahi huwa na. You just can't help but to look at me πŸ˜‰

Naina: Mujhe tumhe dekhne ka koi shoke nahi πŸ˜’ (she was lying to her teeth because since she had seen his bare chest she had urged to see it over and over again)

Rajveer:
admit it Naina πŸ˜› you find me irresistable

Naina: kaafi ghalat femee hai tumhe apne baare me. Let me tell you one thing Mr. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat (turned around) πŸ˜› ziada dair sapno me rehna achee baat nahi.

She didn't realise but she had come really close to him, so close that both their bodies were pasted together. The deadly eye locking session 😍 began which brought the weird silence between them. Both their hearts ❀️ were racing telling each other to drop all boundaries between them and to just dwell to the high peaks of passion.

Rajveer moved his face closer to hers and lightly laid a kiss under her right eye. Naina closed her eyes to feel the moment. Rajveer looked at her and then repeated the act on her left side. Then as soon as their lips were going to meet a realisation struck Naina which made her open her eyes. Then she moved apart from him quite embarrassed 😳 by her own actions. Then without thinking she struck him on the cheek.

Rajveer: (held his cheek with his hand, quite awestruck 😲 by her behaviour)
Aaaaaaaaw! What was that for?

Naina: 😑 how dare you kiss me?

Rajveer: kya? me wahi karaha tha jo tum chahtee thee πŸ˜›

Naina: me kuch aisa nahi chahtee πŸ˜’

Rajveer:
really? to phir tum mujhse aakh kyu nahi mila paarahee?

Naina: 😳 wo to me...bus yuhi...oh I just hate you 😑

Rajveer:
kamaal hai πŸ˜› kal raat to kuch or hee kehrahee thee mujhe πŸ˜‰

She became red as a beetroot ☺️ as she couldn't remember anything but the way Rajveer had portrayed it she must have said something opposite to what she was saying right now.

Naina:
sawaal yeh nahi hai, sawaal yeh hai ke tumne mujhe meree marzee ke khilaaf kiss kiya.

Rajveer: theek hai (coming closer again) to ab tumhaari marzi se kardeta hu πŸ˜‰

Naina: (pushes him away) 😑 just stay away from me

Rajveer: ab jab tak hum yu bandhe hai tub tak to lagta hai mushkil hai πŸ˜†

Naina: you're right isiliye hum os Neelu kee bacchi ko dhoondne jaarahe hai.

Before Rajveer could protest she seemed to pull him towards the door with her and out in the corridoor.

As they waited near the lifts both of them looked elsewhere but at each other. Then Rajveer noticed some poeple coming towards them so he put his arm around Naina's waist and held her tight.

Naina: 😲
yeh kya karahe ho? (trying to push his hand away but he resisted. Then she saw the other people and just smiled 😊 she realised that Rajveer wanted to hide the handcuffs thats why he did that. instead of feeling annoyed she felt happy).

The people had followed them in the lifts so Rajveer still held Naina by the waist. Being so close to him sent butterflies in her stomach. Soon the guys got off on a floor before their's.

Naina:
ab choro mujhe 😳 wo log chale gaye

He ignored her

Naina:
Rajveer mene kaha choro

He still ignored her

Naina: (managed to push him away) 😑
I said leave me. Maine pehle bhi kaha ke don't touch me

Right then the lifts stopped at their floor and she stomped out pulling him with her of course. He kept getting dragged along without consent but he had no choice.

she knocked on Neelu's door but no reply came. They waited for five - ten minutes but no reply came. She was really frustrated 😑😑 then she noticed a group of people coming towards them.

Naina:
Rajveer kuch log aarahe hai

Rajveer: (oblivious to it) to? πŸ˜›

Naina:
Rajveer hum aise khare hai 😳

Rajveer: It's a free country Naina 😊 I'm sure wo hum per tax nahi lagaenge

Naina: Rajveer please hold me close

Rajveer: kya? πŸ˜• to tum chahtee ho ke me tumhe touch karoo?

Naina: (grinding teeth) ha

Rajveer: really, you want me to touch you?

Naina: yes. 😳 please Rajveer wo log nazdeek aarahe hai πŸ˜”

Rajveer: hmmm...πŸ€” nahi karunga

Naina: Rajveer please

Rajveer: πŸ˜› nopes

She cursed him under her breath and then got worried looking at the people coming near. Just when she was going to close her eyes with embarrassment 😳 she felt Rajveer's hand going around her back and pulling her close. She looked at him and smiled 😊

Person 1:
Hi guys! πŸ˜ƒ congratulations

Naina was confused πŸ˜• and Rajveer pretended to be confused πŸ˜• Both let out a weak smile 😊 and said thanks and watched the guys walk off.

Naina:
yeh sab kya tha?

Rajveer: (shrugged shoulders) perhaps hamaree kal kee performance ke liye

Naina: ab yaha intezaar karke kya fiada πŸ˜” I think we should go downstairs.

Rajveer: Are you sure, tum aisee haalat me jaana chaahogee?

Naina: ab kya kare. Ise chutkaara paane ke liye jaana hee hoga.

Both were in the lifts and then soon were joined by various people.

Person 2:
hi! πŸ˜ƒ congratulations

Person 3: yeh guys congratulations πŸ‘

Naina thought: yeh ho kya raha hai? πŸ˜• zaroor Rajveer mujhse kuch chupa raha hai.

As soon as they stepped into the lobby they were cornered by a herd of reporters bombarding them with questions.

Reporter 1:
Is it true that you guys got married?

Reporter 2: Was this a spontaneous decision or preplanned one?

Reporter 3: what's the reason for this secret marriage?

Reporter 4: What was the reason behind the change of name?

Naina was outraged 😑 with all the attention and she wanted to bury herself in the ground. what the hell were these guys saying. She ignored everyone and just wanted to escape.

Rajveer managed to push everyone aside and escorted Naina away. The hotel security came and gave them protection.

Naina:
Rajveer 😑 yeh sab kya hai? Me jaantee hu ke tum jaante ho. Tell me ke kal raat kya huwa tha? Kya sach me hamne...

Neelu: tere sawaal ka jawaab yeh hai (shoves a newspaper in Naina's hand)

The headlines -

"Special award couple, secret affair, secret marriage"

Naina read the article and the colour of her face got drained. By the end she threw the paper away with frustration.

Naina: 😑
what rubbish! wo log aisa kese karsakte hai

Neelu: ab jo tune kaha πŸ˜› wahi sab log likhenge na

Naina: Neelu kya huwa tha kal raat?

Neelu: kal nashe me tune pure town ke saamne yeh keh diya ke tune or Rajveer ne shaadi karlee.

Naina: 😲 what?

Neelu: bus itna nahi. balke apne rishte ko naya naam bhi de diya. Mr and Mrs. Dumdhere

Rajveer began laughing πŸ˜† whilst Naina buried her face in her hands. She was on the verge of crying.

Rajveer:
or aage ka to tumhe maloom hee hai πŸ˜‰ (said it mischeivously)

Naina: 😑
oh I'm going to kill you (charges on him but Neelu intervenes)

Neelu:
Naina, yaha pe hungama mat khara kar πŸ˜’ wese bhi kal raat bohat ho chuka. Yeh reporters tum logo ko akele nahi chore ne waale πŸ˜”

Naina: to ab kya kare?

Rajveer: Don't worry. Me sab sambhaaloonga 😊 I'll just go over to them and tell them the truth.

Naina: Thanks Rajveer πŸ˜ƒ

Both of them made their way back to the herd of reporters and soon were gathered around with cameras and mikes.

Rajveer:
okay πŸ˜ƒ I'll like to answer all your questions.

Everyone seemed pleased and waited eagerly.

Rajveer: (in his mind) Naina kal raat ko tumne mujhe bohat sataya. 😈 Itnee aasaanee se nahi chorunga (out loud)
As you all have heard that us two have recently got married. Well the news is absolutely... (looks at Naina) correct. πŸ˜ƒ

Naina was awestruck 😲 and stood with her mouth open. She couldn't believe what he said. Perhaps she made a mistake.

Reporter 1:
What's the reason for the low profile?

Rajveer: Well we didn't really want to make a big announcement.
We just recently won our first award together and the public would have just labelled it as a publicity stunt.

Reporter 2: So why did you guys announce it last night?

Rajveer: Well you see 😊 my wife loves me alot (put his arm around her shoulders and pulled her closer) and she wanted to tell the whole world how much she loves me so how could I ever refuse her πŸ˜‰. Kyu darling? (looking at Naina)

Naina was going red with anger 😑 and she really felt like stabbing Rajveer. Why was he doing what he was doing? she continued struggling out of his grip.

Reporter 3:
What's the mystery behind changing your names?

Rajveer: well you see my wife is quite outrageous and wild πŸ˜‰ (on purpose takes his left hand to scratch his cheek so the handcuffs can be noticed.) She loves doing things out of the ordinary so this name was also her idea. Right sweet heart? πŸ˜›

Naina: Rajveer tum...😑

Rajveer: Are baby not in front of everybody 😳 I mean this is the press and they'll print it (pretends to be embarrassed whilst he laughed πŸ˜† silently)

Naina felt like the world was enclosing on her. This guy was completely ruining everything. now to make it worse he constantly kept displaying their handcuffed hands. She warned him.

Rajveer: (pretended to not know what he was doing)
oops! 😳 I'm sorry guys (pretended to hide the hand) As I said my wife is a bit wild πŸ˜› to well she just likes trying new things πŸ˜‰

That was it, Naina couldn't take it anymore so she pushed through the crowd pulling Rajveer behind with her. He apologised to everyone whilst being pulled like a dog. Once they were in a secluded area she charged on him.

Naina: 😑
what the hell do you think of yourself? mera yu sabke saamne mazaak bana neka tumhe kya haq hai?

Rajveer: Darling yu naraaz mat ho 😊 come on mene to wahi kaha jo tum already kehchukee ho πŸ˜›

Naina: Mazaak band karo Rajveer πŸ˜’ tum nahi jaante ke mujh pe kya beet rahee hai

Rajveer: Relax! tumhe meree biwi banaya hai. Tum to aise react karahee ho jese tumhe apne bache kee maa bana diya ho πŸ˜†

Naina: me tumhe nahi chorungee Rajveer 😑

Rajveer:
yehi to me chahta hu πŸ˜› ke tum mujhe na choro. Phir yeh reporters aake hamaree photos le or phir ek nayee news πŸ˜ƒ

Naina: 😑😑Oh I'm going to kill you(she stangles him and keeps shaking him with frustration)

Rajveer:
Bachao! 😲

She froze at his sudden outburst then noticed a few poeple coming their way so she began walking away with him as if everything was normal.

Rajveer:
(looked at passer bys and began singing) Bachao. aao mere yaaro aao
aao meree jaan bachao, are aao mere yaaro aao
aao meree jaan bachao
Dekha ose me kho gaya
jaane mujhe kya hogaya!!!!!!!

aao mere yaaro aao, aao meree jaan bachao
are aao mere yaaro aao, aao meree jaan bachao


She wanted him to shut up and not to create more attention so she decided to go and sit down somewhere.

Rajveer:
Aakho se jo dekha wo na dekha kabhi khwaab me
maano koi bhiga huwa phool tha sharaab main
He was referring to what he saw last night and she glared at him as she couldn't believe he was describing her

Rajveer: Aakho se jo dekha wo na dekha kabhi khwaab me
maano koi bhiga huwa phool tha sharaab main
Jiska jawaab nahi oske jawaab me!!!!!!!!!


She got up with frustration whilst he confided in strangers.

Rajveer:
kiska main naam bataoo
kiska main naam bataoo

are aao mere yaaro aao, aao meree jaan bachao


She strangled him again

Rajveer:
Bachao!

She just left him and walked away pulling him with her.

Rajveer:
Band karwaado sab dukaane bazaar me

(took newspaper) jaake yeh khabar chap waado akhbaar me

are band karwaado sab dukaane bazaar me
jaake yeh khabar chap waado akhbaar me

aaj subha ek or maara gaya pyaar me!!!!!!!!!!


(He found a couple with a camera) Meree tasveer lejao, meree tasveer lejao (kept pulling Naina closer to him but she struggled out and elbowed him)

are aao mere yaaro aao, aao meree jaan bachao

(screaams in her ear) Bachao!!!!!

Naina kept searching for Neelu but she was nowhere and Rajveer continued to fool around. Then she found a public phone so she decided to call her but she didn't have any money.

Rajveer:
Mera nahi koi aitbaar bhejo kisee ko
khat likho nayi, nayi, taar bhejo kisee ko


She threw the phone away

Rajveer:
Mera nahi koi aitbaar bhejo kisee ko
khat likho nayi, nayi taar bhejo kisee ko
agle jahaaz se hee yaar bhejo kisee ko!!!!!!!!!!


(Takes the phone) Mere ghar waalo ko bulao, mere ghar waalo ko bulao.

Naina walked back towards the lifts whilst Rajveer pretended he was being tortured.

Rajveer:
are aao mere yaaro aao, aao meree jaan bachao

Naina is standing facing a pillar and is crying. Rajveer is still fooling around but when he saw her crying he stops and becomes serious.

Naina:
😭 tumhaare liye to yeh sab ek mazaak hai na. Tumhe kya, larke ho to izzat kee koi parwa nahi hai πŸ˜” lekin ek larki ke liye oskee izzat hee sab kuch hotee hai

Rajveer:Mujhe bhi izzat kee parwa hai Naina.

Naina: πŸ˜’ agar hotee to yu sab ke saamne tamasha nahi banate. Wo to acha hai ke yeh sab local newspaper me hee hai, warna agar mere gahr waalo ko pata chal jaata to 😲 phir me to...

Rajveer: Tumhe kya lagta hai ke sirf tum hee izzat daar ho? 😑 agar yeh mere gharwaalo ko bhi pata chalega to meree bhi chuttee hojaehgee πŸ˜› samjhee!

she doesn't answer and resumes crying 😭

Rajveer:
Naina I'm sorry, πŸ˜” mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum itnee pareshaan hojaohgee. Mujhe laga ke thoree mazaak me kya hoga. Mujhe nahi pata tha ke tumhe itna bura lag jaehga (made her turn towards him) Yeh lo 😊 ab tumhe azaad kardeta hu.

Takes the key out from his pocket and opens the handcuffs. She is shocked 😲

Naina:
😲 kabse mere saath khel, khel rahe the or me bewacoofo kee tarha idhar udhar bhaag rahee thee. 😑 how could you? How could you be so awful? Tumhaaree wajese aaj meree 😭 yeh haalat huwee hai

Neelu: Wrong Naina πŸ˜’ agar Rajveer nahi hota to phir teree yeh haalat nahi, balke or buree hoti.

Naina stares at Neelu.

Neelu:
Are tujhe to isko thanks kehna chaheeye ke kal puree raat osne tujhe sambhaala, jabke yeh tujhe apne haal pe chore sakta tha. Osne teree her zidd puree kee or tere her nakhre ko uthaya or tu hai ke abhi bhi ise ghalat samaj rahee hai

Naina: 😑 Neelu tu nahi jaantee isne mera fiada kese uthaya hai. kal raat ko isne...

Rajveer: Naina believe me 😳 kal raat hum dono ke beech aisa kuch nahi huwa tha. Kal raat ko jese me tumhe apne kamre me legaya, tum sogayee thee
Or ha yeh saare reporters or newspaper articles sab nakli hai. mene or Neelu ne tumhe chairne ka plan banaya tha. Trust me.

Walks away

Neelu:
Dekha Naina 😊 Rajveer chahta to tera fiada utha sakta tha, lekin osne teree izzat kee izzat kee. Hum dono ne to khel kheldiya πŸ˜” lekin Rajveer ne apnee sharafat nahi choree πŸ˜ƒ. Ab hame yeh khel chore dena chaheeye Naina. I think you should go and apologise to him 😳 Jo Rajveer ne kiya osse saaf zaahir hota hai ke wo tujhe kitna chahta hai. Ja Naina, isse pehle ke dair hojaeh.

Naina runs after Rajveer in the same direction he went and catches up with him.

Naina:
Rajveer! Rajveer! please ruko Rajveer!

He stopped and secretly smiled 😊 as he was expecting her. Then when he turned around he pretended to be upset.

Naina:
Darasal me...me tumhe thanx kehna chahtee thee 😊

Rajveer: πŸ˜’ thanx kehne kee koi zaroorat nahi. Mene wahee kiya πŸ˜ƒ jo mere dil ne kaha.

Naina: phir bhi Rajveer, jo tumne mere liye kiya wo... πŸ˜” I'm sorry for misunderstanding you.

Rajveer: It's okay

Turns around to walk away hoping she will stop him.

Naina:
Rajveer!

He smiled 😊 and stopped.

Naina:
Kya hum dost nahi bansakte? πŸ˜ƒ

Rajveer: Kya tum yahee chatee ho? πŸ˜› (looking at her with a piercing gaze)

Naina: (felt him scrutinizing her which made her blush ☺️ and she tried to hide her true feelings)
ha, me yahi chahtee hu

Both shook hands and Rajveer took her hands near his lips.

Rajveer:
lekin me πŸ˜‰ sirf dosti nahi chahta

She blushed ☺️ and ran away from there too shy 😳 to face him at that moment. She was on cloud nine.

Next day

Naina was playing volley ball on the beach with Neelu and other girls from their group. There was competition participation today either. Continuously she kept thinking about what Rajveer had said to her yesterday and everytime she hit the ball she saw him cheering for her and smiling 😊 she just blushed ☺️ and tried stealing glances away from him.

Soon Archie came over with her group of friends and stared at Naina with menancing 😈 eyes.

Archie:
Hey Naina! how about a game?

She was going to refuse but Neelu told her to go for it.

Neelu: (whispers)
😑 yehi sahi moka hai is churail ko sabak sikhane ka.

The game begins where both the teams are equally passing the ball for the first few mintues when Naina hits the ball and Archie misses it. She drops on the floor and see's how Naina is rejoicing πŸ‘ she fumes 😑 and gets up then the game begins again. After a while Archie hits the ball quite hard which hurts Naina's hand whilst attempting to hit the ball.

Neelu:
Archie 😑 yeh sirf ek game hai, koi competition nahi

Archie: ha, tum dono ke liye game khelna nayi baat thore hogee πŸ˜›.

Neelu: matlab?

Archie: Oh don't pretend Neelu. Me achi tarhase jaantee hu yeh Naina itne dino se kya karahee hai. ache, ache bahaane dhoondhe hai Raj ke kareeb jaane kai.

Naina: (adrenaline rush) 😑 Shut up Archie! khel khelna tumharee fitrat me hai, isiliye hee to oske saamne hamesha ku,ku, ki,ki πŸ˜› kartee phirte ho

Archie: tumhaaree tarha to nahi hu ke chaal, chal ke ek hee kamre me reh kar oske saat puree raat guzaaru. 😑 you're nothing but a cheap slut Naina and I'm warning you 😳 stay away from Raj.

That was it, Naina punched Archie in the face so hard as if the anger from so many days had finally come out.

Archie charged on Naina and in turn Naina defended herself and began pulling her hair.

Eventually it lead to a cat fight where Neelu and others tried to intervene but Archie and Naina were not ready to let go.

A couple of guys came and tried to stop it and luckily Rajveer was amongst them. He immediately seperated the two wild cats before they killed each other. He managed to pull away a struggling Naina whilst Archie was being pulled by another guy.

Naina:
😑 chore do mujhe, aaj me is kutya kee aakhe noch loongee

Archie: isse pehle me tere 😑 haath hee tore doongee you b***h.

Naina pushed Rajveer away 😑 😑 and charged on Archie again pulling her hair like a maniac.

He came quickly and lifted Naina away from there whilst she kicked her legs in frustration.

finally he put her down when they were away from the crowd.

Rajveer:
yeh sab kya tha Naina? kyu os beechaare πŸ˜’ ko maar rahi thee?

Naina: beechaaree? 😲 Are os 😑 bhootnee kee yeh himmat ke wo mujhe kahe ke me tumhaare peeche paree hu. Jab ke wo kabse tumhaara peecha karahee hai.

Rajveer: isme itna bharak ne kee kya zaroorat thee?

Naina: How dare she tell me 😑😑 ke me tumse dhoore rahoo. Oskee aukaat hee kya hai, crazy slapper osko to me...😑

Rajveer: wese tumhe kya farak parta hai πŸ˜›

Naina: Farak parta hai 😑 kyu ke tum sirf mere ho or bardaasht nahi karsaktee koi or tumhe haath lagaye

Rajveer: Acha πŸ˜‰ mujhpe haq jamana shuru bhi kardiya?

Naina: kyu na karoo πŸ˜’ me bigree, tum bigre. Me jhagree, tum jhagre lekin aaj to pyaar kartee hu na (she bit her tongue πŸ˜› as she realised what she just said to him in excitement)

He stared at her intensely 😍

She became shy 😳 and began walking off but he grabbed her wrist and embraced πŸ€— her from the back.

Rajveer:
Agar pyaar kee baat hai πŸ˜‰ to ek baar phir pyaarse kaho na (buries his face in her hair)

She is too embarrassed 😳😳 so pushes him away and runs away feeling ecstatic. Her heart was beating really fast and all the hairs on her body had shot up. She could smell his fragrance in her hair which gave butterflies in her stomach.


In the evening the tour group have gathered outside in the hotel grounds and are just sitting, chatting and having fun. Rajveer and Naina are sitting opposite and every so often steal glances at each other. Whenever Rajveer catches her looking at him she turns red ☺️ and immediately turns her eyes below with embarrassment 😳

Person 1:
hey guys lets do something for time pass.

Person 2: Yeh, I know πŸ˜ƒ chalo antakshari khelte hai

Everyone cheered πŸ₯³ in unison with Naina and Rajveer smiling 😊 at each other.

Person 1:
to chalo teams karte hai. Let's have Rajveer vs Naina

Person 3: sounds great πŸ˜ƒ

She is not happy πŸ˜” because now she didn't want to be in competition with him, but to be with him.

Naina:
Mujhe nahi khelna.

Person 1: Oh come on Naina πŸ˜” don't be a spoilt sport

Person 2: sab log apnee teams choose karlo. Me to 😊 Rajveer ke saath hu

Everybody divided themselves into either Naina's group or Rajveer's.

Naina:
πŸ˜” guys mujhe nahi khelna hai

Person 2: Naina, come on na...

Archie: (from out of nowhere) Me Raj ke saat hu

Naina's face immediately went red with anger 😑
Naina thought: Yeh chipkali 😑 yaha kya karahee hai?

Neelu:
Or me Naina ke saat hu 😳 yeh khelegee.

Everyone cheered πŸ‘ whilst Naina complained to Neelu but she gave her a sharp 😳 look to just go along.
Now they start the antakshari with Naina beginning.

Naina: (looking at Rajveer)
Aap Jaisa Koi Meri Zindagi Mein Aaye
To Baat Ban Jaaye, Haan Haan Baat Ban Jaaye ...

Phool Ko Bahaar, Bahaar Ko Chaman
Dil Ko Dil, Badan Ko Badan
Har Kisiko Chahiye Tan Ka Milan
Kash Mujh Par Aisa Dil Aapka Bhi Aaye
To Baat Ban Jaaye ha baat ban jaaye


Rajveer: (smiled and stole glances at Naina whilst pretending to concentrate on Archie)Ek larki chaheeye khaas khaas
per ho wo MA pass, pass
Laakhon me ek haseena ho
her waqt rahe mere aas paas
Oska standard bhi high chaheeye
Mujhko aisee hifi ek lugayee chaheeye
mujhko aisee, hifi ek lugayee chaheeye


Naina: (puts arms around Neelu and another girl's shoulder sitting next to her and pretends to ignore Rajveer)Yeh larka hai allah kesa hai deewaana
kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhaana
ke dheere, dheere dil bekaraar hota hai
hote, hote, hote pyaar hota hai.


Rajveer: (takes Archie's hand and both stand up and he looks at her intensely but is referring to Naina)Hum tumhein chahte hai aise
Marne waala koi, marne waala koi, zindagee chahta ho jese.
Hum tumhein chahte hai aise


Naina: (hides behind Neelu so Rajveer can't see her)Seene me dil, dil me dharkhan
Dharkhan me kya hai teree pyaas hai
har pyaas mein dard hai sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas hai.


Rajveer: (tries locating her)Hasratein hai bohat magar, tumse kya me kahoo
leke baaho me, me tumhe
pyaar karta rahoo.
Hasratein hai bohat magar, tumse kya me kahoo


Naina: (comes out, stands up and confronts him)Humko hameese churalo
dil me kahi tum chupalo
hum akele, kho na jaaye
dhoore tumse hona jaaye
paas aao gale se lagalo
Humko hameese churalo
dil me kahi tum chupalo


Rajveer: (takes a guitar and begins playing a tune walking around her)lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai
ho lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai
khwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hain, khwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

Naina: (stood with her eyes towards the ground) Hum dil de chuke sanam, tere hogaye hai hum
teree kasam
ho, hum dil de chuke sanam, tere hogaye hai hum
teree kasam


Rajveer: (comes closer to Naina and holds both her hands. Then looks at her intensely)Mere rang me, rang ne waali
pari ho ya ho, pariyo kee rani
ya ho meree, prem kahani
mere sawaalo ka jawaab do


(takes both her hands and kisses them) Do na.

Naina: (gets shy 😳 and runs away to a distance and catches her breath) Na jaane mere dil ko kya, hogaya.
abhi to yahi, tha abhi, khogaya
Na jaane mere dil ko kya hogaya
abhi to yahi tha abhi, khogaya


Neelu: (comes and teases her)Hogaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
laakh karle tu inkaar sajna
are hogaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
laakh karle tu inkaar sajna, dildaar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna.


Rajveer: (begins dancing) Na hira na moti, na sona chahoore
me to tere dil ka khilona chahoore


Archie: (comes and puts arms around his neck)na chanda na suraj
na taara chahoo re
tere jesa larka kawaara chahoore


Naina: Rag Rag Mein Is Tarah Tu Samaane Laga
Jaise Mujhiko Mujhse Churaane Laga


(runs towards him but stops midway and catches Neelu) Ho, Dil Mera Le Gaya Loot Ke
Chori Chori Chupke Chupke, chori, chori, chupke, chupke


Rajveer: (came closer to her and again kept walking around her) Ek me or ek tu
dono mile is tarha
or jo tan man me horaha hai
yeh to hona hee tha


Naina: (turns towards him)Thora sa pyaar huwa hai, thora hai baaki
Thora sa pyaar huwa hai, thora hai baaki
hum to dil de hee chuke
ho, hum to dil de hee chuke
bus teree haa hai baaki
thora sa pyaar huwa hai
thora hai baaki


Rajveer: (staring deeply into her eyes) Kaise me kahoo tujhse
rehna hai tere dil me
kaise me kahoo tujhse
rehna hai tere dil me


Naina: (really excited and runs off dancing )Mujhe tumse mohabbat hai, deewaanagee kee had tak
deewaana mujhe banoa na
deewaanagee kee hadd tak
eh sanam mujhse poocho, kitnee chahat huwee hai
eh sanam mujhse poocho, kitnee chahat huwee hai
mujhe tumse mohabbat hai
deewaanagee kee hadd tak
deewaana mujhe banao na
deewaanagee kee hadd tak

Rajveer: (finds Naina trying to hide from him) Khullam, khulla pyaar karenge hum dono. Is dunya se nahi darenge hum dono.

Naina: (shies away 😳 and covers her face with her hands) Na Milo Na Milo
Na Milo Humse Zyada
Kahin Pyaar Ho Na Jaaye
Kahin Pyaar Ho Na Jaaye
Kahin Pyaar Ho Na Jaaye
Ooo, Milne Se Darta Hai Dil
Iqraar Ho Na Jaaye
Milne Se Darta Hai Dil
Iqraar Ho Na Jaaye
Na Milo Na Milo
Na Milo Humse Zyada
Kahin Pyaar Ho Na Jaaye
Kahin Pyaar Ho Na Jaaye
Kahin Pyaar Ho Na Jaaye


Rajveer: (begins dancing pointing towards his heart) Yeh dil aashiqaana, yeh dil aashiqaana
Yeh dil aashiqaana, yeh dil
Diljalon ka hai yeh thikaana
Yeh mohabbat ka hai deewana
Aake is mein phir tum na jaana, ho
Yeh dil aashiqaana, yeh dil aashiqaana
Yeh dil aashiqaana, yeh dil.


Naina: (covers her head with her red dupatta)laal dupatta, or gaya re bairee hawa ke jhokese
tujhko khuda ne bhejdiya haire dhoke se
maana ke tujhe dil dega wo
magar apnee jaan dega wo
maane ke tujhe dil dega wo
magar apnee jaan dega wo


Rajveer: (comes to her and hold her hand)Waada raha, pyaarse, pyaar ka
ab hamna honge juda
waada raha, pyaarse, pyaar ka
ab hamna honge juda
yeh meree dharkhane sun raha hai Khuda

Naina's too shy 😳 again so she escapes out of his grip yet again. Neelu comes to tease her.

Neelu: Dekh le
aakhon main aakhen daal
seekh le
har pal main jeena yaar
soch le
jeevan ke pal hain char
yaad rakh
marna hai ek baar
marne se pahle jeena
seekh le
(Naina buries her head in
Neelu's shoulder out of embarrassment 😳)

Rajveer: Laal, laal hoto pe gori kis ka naam hai
dil me koun rehta hai, kis ka mukaam hai
are laal, laal hoto pe gori kis ka naam hai
laal, laal hoto pe bole kis ka naam hai


Naina goes out of his sight and he goes searching for her. Then out from a group of people she walks out towards him.

Naina: Hote pe bus, tera naam hai
tujhe chahana mera kaam hai
tere pyaar me dhoobi hu me subho shaam
Janam, I love you, you love me
Janam I love you, you love me


Automatically she is in his arms resting her head on his chest. All of a sudden there's silence as everyone is surprised 😲, especially Rajveer. He is lost for words as finally Naina said what he was waiting for. He couldn't continue so Naina's group cheered πŸ‘ and rejoiced that they won.

That broke the trance for Naina and she realised what she did, so she slowly moved apart and looked 😍 at a grinning πŸ˜ƒ Rajveer.

Person 2:
hey guys come on, its getting pretty late now.
Everyone walked off in their respectable directions and Naina and Rajveer did too. Both of them stared at each other and wondered that will this be a new beginning for them or the end.
End of part.






Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: varshita

the funniest fic dear.

I like the way of ur writing.
update soon.

thanks very much dear for aprpeciating
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!Arwa!!

Firstly a big sorry for the late reply...
Now the update was as usual too good.
Naina was totally out of mind...πŸ˜†
Loved the way Raj handled her.πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
BrilliantπŸ‘πŸΌ, you rock dear.πŸ˜ƒ
Continue soon.
Take care.
Love
Riya

hey Riya its okay
thanks for enjoying the part and yeh Raj is the only one who can handle Naina.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
hey arwa.... u r jus the best yarr!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
awesum n simply super,

this part is very intrerstn funny n also wel written,

lovely lovely lovely,




Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
hey that was so cool
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
wow arwa it's simply superb..i loved their cute fight....finally they confessed..so cute....waise neelu's idea of handcuffs was interesting....
Thank god in this update there was no huda or archie...though archie was there she did a good job today by making naina confess her feelings.....πŸ₯³

Are naina and raj a celebrity??Are u ending it😭..please continue little bit na
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Deeya

hey arwa.... u r jus the best yarr!!!!

Thanks a lot Deeya.

Originally posted by: aarsow

awesum n simply super,

this part is very intrerstn funny n also wel written,

lovely lovely lovely,




Aarthi


Thank you Aarthi
I'm glad u found it funny and entertaining

damn cool
update soon

thank you very much
yeah I'll udate soon

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

simply cool n awesome

thank you very much

Originally posted by: prerna1

hey that was so cool

plz continue soon

thanks a lot for appreciating

Originally posted by: yyyy

wow arwa it's simply superb..i loved their cute fight....finally they confessed..so cute....waise neelu's idea of handcuffs was interesting....
Thank god in this update there was no huda or archie...though archie was there she did a good job today by making naina confess her feelings.....πŸ₯³

Are naina and raj a celebrity??Are u ending it😭..please continue little bit na

thank you
I'm glad that finally u were happy abt this part and enjoyed their cute fights.
yeh Neelu is the clever one and really wants the two to get together
hmmm i thought of saving u all from the hateful Huda and Archie and yeh Archie did play a big hand in ehr confessing her feelings.
Im not ending it yet there are stil la few more parts dear so dont worry.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
hi arwa....

wonderful updates dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...

so finally they have confessed their love😳😳...well good for them...and the best part of this update was that there was no hudaπŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ.

the anthakshari part was nice too...all the songs were very apt....

now i wonder what will happen next...i mean i am pretty sure it is not going to like 'and they lived happily after' coz i think u must be having some twist planned for the next parts.....

may be archie is goiing to create some problem or probably huda or may be naina finds out the bet or an entirely new twist... ok i better stop with my guessing marathon before u decide to bash meπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰...

seems like raj ke naughty days chal rahe hai...he has become pretty naughty both here and in lost...but it is fun to read....

very eager to know how the story is going to proceed now...good going....

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