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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit


Hi Arwa

How r u??? - hey Suhana I'm gr8

Update was just too romantic... - thanks alot for loving it

Raj was so hurt when Naina refused to come along with him…But then she realized her mistake n followed him..I think Raj was deliberately ignoring her pleas coz he wanted her to follow him…😉😆 - ab Raj to aisa hee hai ke jaan buj ke hee sab karta hai

He knows how to turn d situation in favour…😊 - he sure does

Naina was so shocked to see the surprise..She loves him more n more…- oh yes she loves him a lot after all who wouldnt after someone does so much

Raj uske sath mazaak kar raha tha par Naina kitni dar gayi😆....She is really strange ek taraf who usse pyaar karti hain n usse darti bhi hai.. When Raj tried to grab her she kicked him hard n now he was wincing with pain. - hehehe ab kya kare Naina bhi kabhi kabhi switched off hojaati hai or khamakha fuzool ka sochti hai.

This line was too funny

"Rajveer: lagta hai tumhaara khandaan undertaker se related hai..My God itnee jore se maara ." Ha ha😆😆 - i'm glad u luved the line

.Naina was so shocked. The situation was too hilarious. Both of dem knows how to make a fool of demselves..😆😉 - they sure do thats why they are one of a kind

Now it wa Naina 's turn to tease him..Raj was so hurt at dis…Naina was so shocked to see the tears in his eyes…He loves her more dan his life.. - ha saare mazaak ek taraf or juda hone ka mazaak ek taraf. Raj cant tolerate it

Raj really loves her n words r always less to express dis emotion.the message that fire works left wud made any girl ecstatic.- yes and Naina was bewildered by it

Rain made that moment perfect…Naina was so scared but Raj was back to his romantic mood.Romance ke beech mein Naina ko khane ki bhookh lag gayi..

Bechara Raj!!! 😆😆😉 - well sometimes things get ruined by pratical things or phir Raj her waqt Naina ko occupied rakta hai ke ose kuch or karne ka moka milta hee nahi to zaahir see baathai ke ose bhook lagegi

But his love is not physical.…He loves her completely... - he sure does as their love is eternal involving their souls

Do update soon

Bye.

When will u update Lost??? - pretty soon




Originally posted by: manatated


hey Arwa!! pretty long time!!!😃

the update was good!!👏 - thank you very much
Raj is one of a kind...
he knows how to mend things his way😆 and was again successful in making Naina follow him!😆 - u sure are correct he sure knows how to have his way all the time
Naina is right....he is like kid and making such demands that need Naina to do so much to accomplish them😳 - hehehe ab baccho ki zidde hamesha maanee bhi to jaati hai
Their act at that lonely place was hilarious!😆😆 Naina kicking him in shin 😆 and then both laughing at it!😆 - it sure was
The surprise was chweeeeet !😃 He really loves her a lot.....not bcoz he give such a wonderful surprise....but the efforts he put in in planning those and making Naina come there...😃 - yes his love has no limits
And wow! the ' Binmausam barsaat ' completed the package!!! 😛 - the perfect gift to wind things up
Arwa now u'r scaring me!!🤢 what's that guest house thingy is all about????🤢 I just hope they are safe there..... - hmmmm well right now they are safe but lets see for how long
Just want to know what will happen next....
Update soon....😃
and yeah....i don't know whether i should say it in this thread....but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
plzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzz update LOST.....I'm dying to know what will happen ther... - dont worry dear ill post that too soon.



Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Dikha diya na Hunger ne apnaa kamaal..............hahahahaha..........bas di......update ko romantic ya unromantic bannane mein yeh hunger hi catalyst ka kaam karti hai.....hehehehe.........- i'm glad u took it in that manner and yes the most unromantic thing it can be.

as usual amazing....excellent....sooo romantic.....ahem ahem thoda warm warm or is it hot hot bhi tha......hehehe....excellent, superb,fantastic,fabulous.....aaaa....etc etc etc etc......- thank you very much for enjoying the update so much

sorry di forgive me for the irregular replies.....its just that the boards are just 3 months away....thats why its loads of work.....u see last working year of school.....hehehe......isliye thodi irregular ho gayi ho.....but i catch each update and do see the like button....if not a reply, i'll definitely click that.....and i promise as my boards finish my replies will compete with ur updates in size......hehehe- its okay i understand as studies are more important. i'll take ur word at that and shall wait till they finish. Good luck for them and do still keep reading.

luv,
rajita......



@rituka7 = Thanks alot enjoying the fic and liking it.

@yyyy= I'm glad u luved the update and Raj's surprise. hmmm well right now the place isnt tha dangerous but there is somethign scary abt it.

@prerna1= thank you for loving the update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry dear kitne der se padha maine part 30, abhi padha yaar and it was really funny n romantic. - it's okay and thanks for finally reading and commenting

Raj ne socha ki chalo Naveen se help le li jaaye aur Naveen ne clear mana kar diya, par Raj bhi na kam nahi hai. Aise mauke vo apne haathon se itne asaaani se nahi jaane deta hai. - of course aakhir wo kabhi haar nahi maanta

Well timming bhi bahut sahi thi na us ki aakhir jaise hi vo disappoint hua saamne Ritu mil gayi aur us ko pata chal gaya ki saale sahab k kya plans hain? To mauke ka fayda accha uthaya Raj ne.- for sure he did as anmol moka mila ose

Accha hua ki in logon ka mazak yahin khatam ho gaya varna mujhe to laga tha kahin sahi me jab Rajveer Naveen ko hospital le jaaye tab jaa k maanega vo. Good emotinal blackmailing by Rajveer. - hehehe i'm sure that wud have been a scene to see where Navin wud have been tortured. Raj sure knows how make people dance to his tunes

Last part was sweet too, Alekh ne vakai me kaafi acche arrangments kiye the na Neelu k liye aur baaki sab bhi apne romance me busy the. Selection of song was nice n g8 part. again.
- yes he sure surprised Neelu a lot. I'm glad u liked the song and romance was int he air so couldnt think of better song.



Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

romantic...n beautiful...- thank you very much for loving it Priya

yeh raj toh aisa na tha...matlab maine kabhi is fic me raj ko itne gusse me nahin dekha...!!! voh toh kitna calm, quite n loving tha...hann naina k sath kabhi kabhi nautanki karta tha, par kabhi bhi is tarah se...i mean maine pahli baar dekha aisa...!!! lekin chalo dono love birds phir se ek ho gaye...!!! - hmmmmm Raj ka ghussa hai to khatarnaak and i did show in his fight with Huda but i guess u never saw him fight with Naina like this to yes it was the first time.
vaise raj ne baht hi khubsurat sa surprise diya naina ko. par meri samaj me nahin aaya ki naina darr kar bhagi kyoun...??? matlab raj pahli baar us k kareeb toh nahin aa raha tha na...phir pata chala ki naina undertaker k khandaan se realated hai...isiliye us ka dimag ulta ghum raha tha...!!!😆 - hehehe are yaar dono kuch hadd tak cracked hai isliye yeh sab huwa.
naina ko sahi tym par bhuk lagi hai...😆!!! vaise mujhe bhi yeh guest house kuch thik nahin lag raha hai...!!! - for sure ab dekhte hai ke yeh jage kitnee safe hai
do ud fast.



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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow....why is Raj so cute??? Dam...iss sawal ka shayad hi koi jawab hai....but the part was very sweet....Raj n Naina's teasings n romance....all together was just amazing!!! Gr8 part Dii....realy luved it. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
the update was very romantic
Raj ne naina ke liye bahut hi romantic suprise plan kiya tha.
Naina is surprised to see the depth of Raj's love and all she can hope is that she will be able to love him as much in return
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Nice part..>!!!

Rajveer really knows how to get his work done...!!!
And his plannings are always the best...!!!

Pls try to update lost also...!!!



Thanks alot Dhara for loving the part and enjoying it.

Ues je sure does know how to get his way all the time and here also he succeeded.

Yeh ill do it soon.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow....why is Raj so cute??? Dam...iss sawal ka shayad hi koi jawab hai.... - correct koi jawaab hai hee nahi 😆

but the part was very sweet....Raj n Naina's teasings n romance....all together was just amazing!!! Gr8 part Dii....realy luved it. Pls continue soon.
- thanks alot for enjoying the part.



Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

the update was very romantic - thank you

Raj ne naina ke liye bahut hi romantic suprise plan kiya tha.
Naina is surprised to see the depth of Raj's love and all she can hope is that she will be able to love him as much in return - yes for sure she was surprised and now she doesnt want to loose him ever

please continue soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi arwa.
the update was rocking as always.......really its an awesome one
raj pehle upset hogaya jab naina ne uske saath jaaneke liye mana kiya.......but he surely knows how to turn the situation in his favour
raj surprise is soooooo romantic.....naina bhi na raj ki mazak ko seriously le li aur dar gayi....aur wo bhi kam nahi raj ko usne bhi tease kiya na
raj n naina truely love each other so much
what is the guest house ka chakkar......mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki ye jagah kuch tikh nahi........raj aur naina ko kuch mat hone dena plz
waiting for the next part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey really nice update yaar, 👏 👏 👏
Raj ne itne acche arrangements kiye hain Naina k liye ki shayad Naina ne bhi nahi socha tha. Raj ne jab Naina se saath chalne ko kaha to itna naraj hone waali kya baat thi? Theek hai ye ki us ko baar baar jhooth bolna accha nahi lagta par Raj ka bhi to kuch hak hai na us pe aur fir ye us ka pyaar hi to hai na jo Naina ko humesha apne pass dekhna chahta hai.
Finally mam maan hi gayi, and Raj kitne romantically le k gaya na Naina ko apne saath aur kitna beautiful surprise diya na us ne. Sab e jyada funny to vo portion tha jab Naina ko Raj filmy Villan style me dara raha tha aur Naina ne socha ki all of a sudden Raj ko kya ho gaya abhi tak to theek tha. Par sach me Raj k pyaar ki gehrai ka ehsaas kar paana hi mushkil hai Naina k liye.
Raj to kabhi sun bhi nahi sakta hai ki Naina us se pyaar nahi karti hai. Kitna beautiful surprise diya na fat 12 Raj ne Naina ko. Kya sahi time pe barish hue hai na. Raj bhi khush ho gaya tha, par accha hua vo room mil gaya varna na jaane kya hota? RN were so romantic there but sab se jyada maza aayi jab Naina ne kaha ki us ko bhookh lagi hai. Sach me Raj kitna pyaar karta hai na Naina se not physically but by everything.
continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi arwa.

the update was rocking as always.......really its an awesome one- thanks very much

raj pehle upset hogaya jab naina ne uske saath jaaneke liye mana kiya.......but he surely knows how to turn the situation in his favour- yes he certainly does

raj surprise is soooooo romantic.....- Ab Raj ka hai to romantic hee hoga na

naina bhi na raj ki mazak ko seriously le li aur dar gayi....aur wo bhi kam nahi raj ko usne bhi tease kiya na - dono ek duje jese hee hai kya kare

raj n naina truely love each other so much - yes they do

what is the guest house ka chakkar......mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki ye jagah kuch tikh nahi........raj aur naina ko kuch mat hone dena plz - hmmm lets how how creepy it gets. for now its not particularly safe.

waiting for the next part

plz continue soon



Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey really nice update yaar, 👏 👏 👏 - thanks alot for appreciating

Raj ne itne acche arrangements kiye hain Naina k liye ki shayad Naina ne bhi nahi socha tha. - yes she also never expected this and was overwhelmed.

Raj ne jab Naina se saath chalne ko kaha to itna naraj hone waali kya baat thi? Theek hai ye ki us ko baar baar jhooth bolna accha nahi lagta par Raj ka bhi to kuch hak hai na us pe aur fir ye us ka pyaar hi to hai na jo Naina ko humesha apne pass dekhna chahta hai. - ha wo haq se hee to hamesha ose kehta hai kuch bhi karne ko per Naina bhi majboore hai to dono taraf mushkile hai

Finally mam maan hi gayi, and Raj kitne romantically le k gaya na Naina ko apne saath aur kitna beautiful surprise diya na us ne. Sab e jyada funny to vo portion tha jab Naina ko Raj filmy Villan style me dara raha tha aur Naina ne socha ki all of a sudden Raj ko kya ho gaya abhi tak to theek tha. - ha sach me Raj bohat hee romantic hai. I'm glad u found it so funny as it was a comic timing.

Par sach me Raj k pyaar ki gehrai ka ehsaas kar paana hi mushkil hai Naina k liye. - for sure mushkil hee hai

Raj to kabhi sun bhi nahi sakta hai ki Naina us se pyaar nahi karti hai. - ose itna pyaar jo karta hai.

Kitna beautiful surprise diya na fat 12 Raj ne Naina ko. Kya sahi time pe barish hue hai na. Raj bhi khush ho gaya tha, - yes everything had the perfect moment that night

par accha hua vo room mil gaya varna na jaane kya hota? - yes pata nahi kya hota

RN were so romantic there but sab se jyada maza aayi jab Naina ne kaha ki us ko bhookh lagi hai. - hehehe for sure maze kee hee baat thi aakhir romance ka kabara jo kardiya

Sach me Raj kitna pyaar karta hai na Naina se not physically but by everything. - yes their love is eternal.

continue soon.


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Posted: 15 years ago
very sorry for late reply......

totally amazing updt....

rn were absolutely awesome.....


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
the update was very nice
Raj wanted to spend time with naina asn so he thought that he would take navin's help.
Navin ki naa sunkar raj wahan se jane hi wala tha ki use pata chalta hai ki navin khud bimari ka natak kar raha tha ritu ke saath time spen karne ke liye. the whole scene was too funny...acha hua navin maan gaya nahi toh raj use hospital le jata.
The last part was also very nice. Alekh ne party ke arrangments bahut aachi ki thi. all the couples are romancing around and having a good time.
Raj gets very angry and upset when naina refuses to come with him. Naina see that he is very hurt and so agrees to go with him. Them too getting caught in the park was very funny,
please continue soon

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