Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#371

Hey bhagwaan ye Naina ko itne sharab peene ko kis ne kaha tha?😲 Kuch bhi karne se pehle sochna nahi chahti hai ye mujhe to lagne laga hai.😉 Sab k saamne announce kar diya ki Raj us ka pati hai offo 😳 , pata nahi Raj na hota to kya hota madam ka 😛? Neelu bhi pareshaan ho gayi thi us se. 😡

Us ne nashe me Raj se keh hi diya ki vo pyaar karti hai 😉 us se aur ye Huda bhi na har jagah Naina se chipakne ki kosish karta rehta hai.

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#372

wahi huana hosh aate hi Raj se najrein chura rahi thi 😆 ye kaho ki Neelu thi to koi problem nahi hue. 😃

Nice romantic updates dear .😛 Raj ne accha gana gaya Naina ko patane k liye aur Naina maan bhi gayi.😉

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07
Hey bhagwaan ye Naina ko itne sharab peene ko kis ne kaha tha?😲 Kuch bhi karne se pehle sochna nahi chahti hai ye mujhe to lagne laga hai.😉 Sab k saamne announce kar diya ki Raj us ka pati hai offo 😳 , pata nahi Raj na hota to kya hota madam ka 😛? Neelu bhi pareshaan ho gayi thi us se. 😡 - well yeh she did do it impulsively and ended up messing up big time, hehehe yeh it was funny how she did that per Raj tha jisne sab kuch sambhaal liya.
Us ne nashe me Raj se keh hi diya ki vo pyaar karti hai 😉 us se aur ye Huda bhi na har jagah Naina se chipakne ki kosish karta rehta hai. - yes aakhir me dil kee baat zubaan tak aaheegayee.

hmmm ab kya kare Huda to buri bala hai

wahi huana hosh aate hi Raj se najrein chura rahi thi 😆 ye kaho ki Neelu thi to koi problem nahi hue. 😃 - heheh true say

Nice romantic updates dear .😛 Raj ne accha gana gaya Naina ko patane k liye aur Naina maan bhi gayi.😉 - thanks alot for appreciating. im glad u appreciated it all.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#374

Hey sorry for the late reply...raj was busy annoying naina and she slapped him ..wow ...i wish i could see raj's face..hehe..and i love their reunion scene at the terrace..so sweet na....

Raj wanted to take naina on date but they landed in a police station🤣.🤣🤣🤣..can anything get worse than this..the scene reminded me f DMG ...

finally sam bailed them out..so sweet of her..

continue soon

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: yyyy
Hey sorry for the late reply...raj was busy annoying naina and she slapped him ..wow ...i wish i could see raj's face..hehe..and i love their reunion scene at the terrace..so sweet na....

Raj wanted to take naina on date but they landed in a police station🤣.🤣🤣🤣..can anything get worse than this..the scene reminded me f DMG ...

finally sam bailed them out..so sweet of her..

continue soon

hey thanks a lot

im glad u appreciated the whole part and had a laugh

yeh what a date? hehehe poor them. and yeh it was similar to DMG as i got inspired by it.

finally im glad u liked it all over.

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varshita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#376

i'm in hurry will comment in detail soon.

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 17 years ago

#377

sry arwa for replying soooo late...hv been busy with certain things but i had read d ud d day u pmed me.... anyways...wat a date😛..i mean saare kiye karaye pe paani fir gaaya..😆😆😆..

now pls ud asap ...cant wait to know d surprise....

Dhara...

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arwa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: crackpots86
sry arwa for replying soooo late...hv been busy with certain things but i had read d ud d day u pmed me.... anyways...wat a date😛..i mean saare kiye karaye pe paani fir gaaya..😆😆😆..

now pls ud asap ...cant wait to know d surprise....

Dhara...

hey dhara thanks a lot

its ok i understand

im glad u appreciated the part and yeh wat a date it was

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Posted: 17 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!! - thanks alot

Raj aur Naina spend most of their time together even though they had to mingle with the others!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes they have to live with the formalities

When they were apart tab bhi ek dusre se nazar nahi hatti and they are just eager to be together again!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - cant live without each other now

Raj is teasing her so much and holding her close to him making her feel uncomfortable and uneasy!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 - badmaash jo thera

No wonder Naina is so mad and wanted him to leave her alone!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔But Raj is thinking she is just pretending to be angry and kept persisting!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 - yes coz he knows Naina cant stay angry with him for long

Naina accidentally slapped him and both of them were shocked!!! Very bad!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Aur Raj bahut gussa ho gaya aur chala gaya!!!! - yeh to hona hee tha

Naina wants to apologize magar woh toh Naina ki koi baat nahi sun raha hai aur kamre mein bandh kar liya hai apne aap ko!!!! Ab Naina bhi kya kare usse suddenly hogaya bina soche samjhe!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 - ab to waake me bohat ghussa hai per wat Nain did was wrong to kya kare

Naina is almost in tears magar Aalekh kehta hai ke Raj bachpan se hi aisa hai!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Haan aur ab tak bada kaha huya hai woh!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe true in some sense

Magar ek ghanta wait karne ke baad bhi woh nahi aaya aur Naina ke liye toh ek ek second beetana muskil ho raha tha!!!! - sad i know

Aalekh aur Neelu se help maangi toh dono aapas mein hi ladne lage!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Yeha Hum Tum ki ladayi shuru kardi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - dono kabhinahi sudgrenge 😛

Aalekh usse room dhundh raha hai magar Raj is not to be seen aur sliding doors have been locked as well!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Woh toh yaha hai unke peeche and they are shocked to see him and he is still looking displeased!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - ab have to carry on the facsade

Raj toh muh fula ke chala gaya and Naina is smiling at his innocence!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ne kaan pakda toh Raj maan gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab jab dono baacho jesee harkate karenge to ab dono ko hasee to aaheejaeehgee na and Raj was pretending anyways.

Akhir Raj bhi kab tak Naina se naraz rehta!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊His smile made Nainas heart melt aur kehta hai ke dubara aisa kiya toh woh mar hi jayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - haii isee baat pe hee to wo fida hai

Naina ne usse rok liya aur kaha ke bina Rajveer ke Naina ka koi moul nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiiiii!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes of course. koi moul hai hee nahi

The hugged each other and held tight!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Aalekh and Neelu were glad to see everything back to normal!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - finally it was back to normal

Raj is right ke itna sab kuch hogaya and he has not taken her out on a date!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔He hasn't even proposed to her properly!!! - basics rehgaya or osse aage ka qadam uthaliya

Naina kehti hai usse bhool gaya toh aur Raj kehta hai woh uska aakhri din hoga jab woh Naina ko bhool jayega!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat kahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - pyaar karen waala ho to aisa

Raj ne Naina ki family ko backward kaha toh Naina naraz hogayi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Waise Raj ka sasural hai woh uske baare mein aisa bol hi sakta hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - heheeh sach kaha to ose bura laga.

Naina is right ke Raj se toh zyada der tak koi naraz bhi nahi reh sakta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - wo hai hee aisa pyaara

Raj ne toh Naina ke saath dinner ka plan bana liya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Aur uske liye use kiya apna purana funda use kiya aur Neelu ko pataya!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - it works all the time

Naina wants Navin to help but he is busy!!!😒 😒 😒 😒Really Navin is no help at all!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - hes kind of like the villain here

Naina khud apni family ko backward bol rahi hai magar jab Raj bol raha tha tab toh naraz ho rahi thi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab she is allowed and he isnt

Neelu yeh kaam kitni asani se kar deti hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - bohat experience hai

Raj jab Naina ko lene Neelu ke ghar aaya toh Neelu is pulling his leg so much aur roses bhi le liya Raj se!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - she just loves doing it 😆😆😆

Raj is right ke ke uski aur Aalekh ki bilkul sahi jodi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Neelu ne finally Naina ko roses de diye aur usse neeche bhej hi diya!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep dono ek hee jese ke hai

Naina is looking sooo beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Her dress is just too good!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Raj ki toh nazar hi nahi hat rahi hai ush par se!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - ab apni Nain hai hee aisa ke wo her cheez me khubsurat hee lagti hai

Raj ko wakai laga woh galat ghar mein aagaya hai!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj kitna romantically Naina ki tareef karta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 - ab Raj taareef karaha hai to ose wow to hona hee parega

Raj ne yeh sach jhoot ki baat karni shuru ki!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Nautanki kahin ka!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆And then he said that he wants to kiss then and there!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - oskee nautanki khatam ho hee nahi sakti

Aur phir Raj ne jab Naina ke dress ki tareef karni shuru ki!!!!!😛 😛 😛My God Raj kitna naughty ho gaya hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - hogaya??????/ my dear wo pehlese hee aisa tha 😃

Naina ne chup karwaya toh Raj bol raha hai ke log dekh rahe hai aur uske izzat par daka dalegi kya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - nahi sudrega

No wonder Naina naraz ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He is just impossible!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Ab gaana gaake Naina ko mana raha hai aur Naina maan bhi gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ab Raj ka charm work to hog hee

The song is very nice and excellent for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thanks

Ab Naina khud Raj ko tang kar rahi hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊It is so romantic and magical!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - it sure is

Kitna pyaar karta hai Raj Naina se!!!😍 😍 😍 😍Usne itna saara arrangement kiya woh bhi sab Naina ke pasand ka!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - sach me bohat pyaar karta hai

They were so lost in each other ke the waiter had to cough in order to bring them back from their dreamland!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehe that was funny

Raj ne Naina ki wahi diary wapas di with all her pages carefully secured!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊I really love him for that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he is a sweetheart

He said ke yeh diary uska sahara thi jab Naina uske paas nahi thi aur ussi ke zariye woh zinda reh paya hai Naina ke bagair!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he seems to become better and better

Naina has realized it now that Raj is the perfect guy for her aur usse zyada pyaar usse koi nahi kar sakta!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ - is me koi shak nahi

Navin aur Ritu ko waha dekh kar Naina was really shocked and the way she told Raj not to look behind him was really very funny!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hmmm she had no other choice but to react that way

Raj is right ke isse poore shaher mein yehi restaurant mila tha kya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Aur Neelu aur Aalekh bhi wahi aa gaye!!!! Just great!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - bechaare ka maza jo kharaab hogaya

Sabko yehi jagah mila tha aane ke liye!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Raj itna gusse mein tha ke usne Navin ka gussa Neelu par nikal diya!!!! - kabhi kabhi wo bole deta hai jo mann me hota hai without thinking

Naina ne accha kiya ke she sent Raj to apologize to Aalekh and Neelu!!!! 😊 😊 😊 - she knew Raj didnt really mean it and shud do the right thing

Magar Navin se chupne ke chakkar mein Raj crashed with someone aur Navin ne usse dekh liya!!!! - aasmaan se gira or khajoor me atka

Ab Neelu ko Naina aur Raj ko Aalekh ke saath baithna pada!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭How romantic!!!! What a date!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Sab chaupat hogaya!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - as always bechaare yeh log

Raj aur Aalekh he toh jhagadna shuru kar diya and they dipped each other's head in the salad!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆It was really funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - both are kids and im glad u had a ball

The girls can't even stop it and just had to watch it!!!😛 😛 😛 😛They are right the boys can really become immature sometimes!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 - thats something boys can never come out of

Navin ne ab Naina aur Neelu aur phir Raj aur Aalekh ko invite kiya to have a family dinner!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Bechare!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - hehehe yeh to hona hee tha

Raj and Aalekh must have looked stupid sitting there with salad in their hairs!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - im sure it wud have been a sight to see

At least Raj got to sit next to Naina!!!! 😊 😊 😊Thats one good thing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Well this is the best in this situation I guess!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - i guess alls well if ended well

Yeh Huda yahan bhi aagaya!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Usne phir apni bakwas shuru kardi!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒How dare he try to touch Naina!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - shaitaan kab kaha aajeye pata nahi chalta

He is really sick!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Raj ne bahut accha kiya jo usse punch kiya!!!! 😊 😊 😊Now both are fighting and there is no stopping them!!!! - ose dekhe Raj ka khoon ugalta hai

Poor Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔She is feeling awful that this was happening because of her and she couldn't see Rajveer in pain!!!! - of course kyu ke ab osko dard hota

All of them were arrested and taken to the police station!!!😔 😔 😔 😔This is the limit!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Their romantic evening was thoroughly ruined!!!! It just can't get any worse!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - true it couldnt. everything got ruined

The police station scene reminded me of Dill Mill Gayye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes it was inspired by that

Huda toh abhi bhi Raj ko challenge kar raha hai aur police station na hota toh they would have certainly finished their feud!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - fo sure Raj would have killed him

The police officer appeared more of a clown and Aalekh's turning the fan which blew away the police officer's wig was just too funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - it sure was and im glad u found it funny

No wonder everyone started laughing!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣The police officer is polite with the girls but rude with the guys!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - its natural

Raj ne kaha uski galti hai magar Naina ne sahi kaha ke sab ush Huda ne shuru kiya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - she knows her raj ab koi galati nahi karsakta

Naina ne kaha ke woh Raj ke saath hai yehi uske liye bohat hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - perfect dialgoue to pacify him

Aalekh bicchoo dekhke kaise chilane laga aur koodne laga!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆It was funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - cud see how u had a ball

Sam bailed them all out!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She is a lifesaver!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Warna pata nahi Raj ke dad ko pata chalta toh kya hota??😔 😔 😔 😔 - she always comes at the right time

Bahar nikalne ke baad Raj Naina ko legaya waha se!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Usse woh date pe lejake hi rahega!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Abhi toh raat baaki hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - ha raat baaki hai or baat bhi baaki hai

I wonder where he is taking her and what the night has in store for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ull soom find out my dear

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 20

Naina: Oh ajnabi, mere ajnabi
Oh ajnabi, mere ajnabi

She lay next to him under the starry sky on the beach. Light wind was blowing in between them making her snuggle into him

Naina: Oh ajnabi, mere ajnabi
Oh ajnabi, mere ajnabi

Naajaane aaye tum kahase
Itna pyaar laaye tum kahase
Naajaane aaye tum kahase
Itna pyaar laaye tum kahase

Rajveer buried his head in the curve of her neck and laid soft kisses up and down on the side of it.

Naina: Yeh raat bhi, hai saji saji
Oh ajnabi, mere ajnabi

She pushed him back and stood up and then began walking backwards. She saw the hunger in his eyes and knew exactly what his intentions were so she increased her pace and before she knew it she began running. He chased her around and finally he caught her by the waist and lifted her up.

Naina: Dilwaale dekho phir mile hai

Rajveer: Mile hai

Naina: Jaane kaha hum chale hai

Rajveer: chale hai

Naina: Nazro se nazre milee hai
Hotho se hoth sile hai

They rolled on the sand still locked in each other's arms

Naina: Aaaah dilwaale dekho phir mile hai
Jaane kaha hum chale hai
Nazro se nazre milee hai
Hotho se hoth sile hai

She was underneath him and he again continued playing his seduction game

Naina: Ek aag see, he dabee dabee
Oh ajnabi, mere ajnabi

Rajveer soon stopped and then lifted her up in his arms and carried her up to a place under the rocks. The waves could be heard crashing agaisnt the rocks making it peaceful and the perfect spot for them to spend some intimate moments. He laid her down on the soft bed of sand and then lay down next to her playing with her hair and carressing her exposed skin.

Naina: Pyaar ka mausam aata hai, aata hai ek baar
Dil diya jaate ek baar ek baar
Jawa jawa dil kee dharkhan me, koi samaa ta hai
Koi samaata hai, ek baar ek baar

She rolled over on top of him

Naina: Oh mujhe kya huwa, me urne lagee
Oh ajnabi, mere ajnabi

Her fingers slowly played around with the buttons of his shirt and she opened them one by one. Her seductive eyes played with his whilst he kept teasing her by biting his bottom lip. This time he was going to let her take the initiative and wait to see how she decides to have her way with him. The shirt was open and now she laid soft kisses over his bare chest making her way up until she reached his collar bone and then she continued under his neck reaching his chin and then he lost control and he pulled her by the hair against him and rolled over so she was underneath him and captured her lips into a deep throbbing kiss.

Just then it started to rain and he pulled apart. She sat up and absorbed it on her face and closed her eyes. She put her hands out as if inviting the water to come and embrace her. He sat there staruing at her as slowly she became drenched bit by bit. She opened her eyes to find him staring at her. His wet hair had fallen down onto his forehead giving him that sultry wet look, melting her insides. Now that they both were wet they were highly aware of each other's burnng bodies. He saw a trickle of water dripping down the side of her face onto her bare neck and shoulders and he had the sudden urge to go and suck it.

Rajveer: ajnabi tera dil churaane aaya hai
Ajnabi neende uraane aaya hai

He slipped off both the strands of her dress from her shoulders as he devoured the sweet taste of her exposed skin.

Rajveer: Lutne waala chain kaha paaehga
Lutne waala khud lutke jaaehga

Now his kisses became harsh and wild and pushed her back down against the sand and pulled her dress further down so he could get access to her jutted curves and once he held it in his palm his mouth dived on it suckling the tip with his tongue.

Rajveer: Haiiiiiiii jaayega kaha, jiye ga yaha
Marega yaha, yeh ajnabi, tera ajnabi, tera ajnabi

There was no control to him anymore and there was this scream inside her waiting to burst out with estatic pleasure. He was burning her up and taking her to the higher peaks. He couldn't stop and she didn't want him to stop. Her hands went inside his open shirt and her nails dug deep into his bare back as he pushed deeper and deeper.

He wanted her right then and there so he removed all the remaining barriers in between them leaving only skin to skin contact and now he looked into her blurry eyes breathing heavy and saw how equally hungry she was for him as he was so he waited no longer and took her lips into possession again as his fingers moved down her bare body. Now his hands held the greatest treasure ever in its palm caressing it up and down making her moan in his mouth. This passion was killing her and she wanted him to stop teasing her and give her the ultimate satisfaction she had been wating for.

It took a few minutes more and then there was the big throb she felt inside her and the world seemed to come to a stand still. Her hands clung onto his shoulders as he pushed deeper and deeper inside her making her scream out with uncontrollable pleasure.

The world around her was flying around in circles with each throb and then it stopped and she was on cloud nine fluttering lightly in the sky. He slowly and with ease slipped out again but didn't increase the distance between them and rested his head in the midriff of her mounds to give each other to catch up on their breaths and to put all their pieces together again.

Naina: Naajaane aaye tum kahase, itna pyaar laaye tum kahase

Fifteen minutes later'

Naina lay next to Rajveer wearing his shirt which apparently had become dry. It looked as if the rain had only happened to raise their passion because just when they climaxed the trickle began dispersing until it faded back into the air.

Naina: mujhe to yakeen nahi hota Raj ke aaj me yaha istarha tumhaare saath hu. I mean kisne socha tha ke tum meree zindagee me jo ek ajnabi banke aaye the ek din aaj meree zindagee banjaoge.

Rajveer: maine bhi nahi socha tha Naina ke aisa more kabhi meree zindagee me aayega ke mujhe bhi kisee larki se beinteha mohabbat hojaaehgee. Sach batao to mujhe yeh ehsaas tab se hogaya tha jab maine tumhe os tour pe pehle din dekha tha per tab me yeh ghalat femi me tha ke mujh jese larke ko kabhi pyaar ho hee nahi sakta. (Took her hand in his and kissed it) Thank you, Naina. For coming into my life and changing it for the better. Making me human again.

She was surprised when she felt her palm wet and looked up to him and saw his eyes moist. She took his face in her palms.

Naina: Oho to Mr. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ko rona bhi aata hai. I never knew he was such a softie from inside. (She gave a teasing laugh)

He just smiled back and went near her lips when his phone buzzed into his trouser pocket. He cursed it and decided to ignore it but it was constant and he had to take it.

Rajveer: Hello?

Navin: Rajveer tum or Naina kaha ho?

Rajveer: Look Navin wo'

Navin: Dekho Rajveer me jaanta hu ke ab tum dono kee shaadi honewaali hai per abhi bhi wo meree zimmedaari hai. Me nahi chahta ke kal ko koi uthkar Naina kee izzat pe ungli uthaa sakhe ke shaadi se pehle oska tumhaare saath aisa koi sambandh tha. Me jaanta hu ke tum is baat ka puri acchee tarhase khayaal rakhoge per phir bhi istarha aadhee aadhee raat ek saath ghoom na to wahi sab ko bataehga na. I hope you understand Rajveer.

Rajveer: (sighed and rolled his tongue in his cheek) don't worry Navin. Me Naina ko sahi salamat or ba izzat ghar waapis le aaonga

Navin: mujhe batao tum kaha ho me Naina ko lene aata hu

Rajveer: (bit restless and desperate) Nahi Navin its okay me ose choredunga

Navin: Maine kaha na Rajveer ke me aarahaa hu. Mujhe batao kaha ho. Dekho Rajveer agar tum ne koi ghalat kaam nahi kiya hai to tum mujhe jaga bata doge

Rajveer: theek hai. Ham dono Chowpatty beach pe hai.

Navin: theek hai me kuch hee dair me pohochta hu waha.

After he shut the phone he began thinking. Naina sat up immediately tensed.

Naina: Raj yeh kya kiya tumne? Agar bhaiyya ne hame is haalat me dekhliya to socha hai ke kya hoga. Wo tumhe zinda nahi chorenge

Rajveer: Jaanta hu. Naina you're very lucky ke tumhe itna pyaar karne waala parivaar mila hai. I think I violated all their trust or ab to kuch ho bhi nahi sakta

Naina: (rests her head on his shoulder) Nahi Raj, aisa kuch bhi nahi kyu ke tumne aisa koi qadam nahi uthaaya jo sirf tumhaaree galati hai. Maine tumhe kabhi roka nahi or tumne mere saath koi zabardasti nahi ki

Rajveer: Phir bhi mujhe apne aap ko roke na chaheeye tha aaj.

Naina: Wese yeh regrets waali line to meree honee chaheeye thee. (tries to lighten up the mood) dekho Raj me tumhe kisee bhi baat ke liye zimmedaar nahi theraatee. Hamare beech jo bhi huwa wo bus hamara pyaar tha. Ab yeh sab chora or chalo jaldi se tayaar hojao warna sach me bhaiyaa tumhe zinda nahi chorenge

Rajveer: (sly smile) wo to tab hoga my dear jab mujhe meree shirt waapis milegee

He goes to take it off her but she stops him and pushes him back and begins running away from him. Rajveer got up and began chasing her too both laughing out loud like teenagers. Little did they know that their charade was being watched by a group of rowdy boys who had arrived just a while ago. Half of them were drunk and seeing Rajveer and Naina playing around gave them live entertainment. They began hooting and whistling which made Naina stop and Rajveer also caught up with her. When he saw all of them he became stiff again and when he saw who was leading them his fists became tighter with fury.

The laughing made Naina really conscious and she quickly went and hid behind Rajveer to cover her semi naked self. Rajveer made sure she was protected and glared at all the men especially the obnoxious one sitting in the middle.

Huda: oh by all means kids carry on. Wese bhi aaj kal hame entertainment kee thoree kami hai to yaha pe to live chal raha hai

Rajveer: just shut up! Tujh jesa ghatiya insaan aisee hee gandi baate soch sakta hai. Hamare raaste se hath jaa Huda kyu ke is waqt me tere mooh nahi lagna chahta. Jail se to tu nikal gaya per mujhse bach nahi paaehga to is waqt chala jaa

Huda: acha (mocks him) kyu, ab kya huwa tujhe'(eyes Naina and her wearing Rajveer's shirt) oho to yeh baat hai. Friends hamare Mr. Rajveer hamare mooh nahi lagna chahte kyu ke wo to kesee or ke mooh hee lagna pasand karte hai.

All the boys began laughing shamelessly making Naina feel even more humiliated and Rajveer's anger was boiling. He went forward but Naina held him back.

Naina: nahi Raj, rehne do or chalo yahase

Both of them turned around and began walking away.

Huda: (mimicking Naina) Nahi Raj chalo yahase'(all of them continued laughing) haha jao yahase aakhir abhi bhi to raat baaki hai. I'm sure tum log apna program continue karoge. What say guys how about we go and see a live blue film? Oi Naina ham sab kee pyaas bhi to bhujaatee jaao'

That was it and Rajveer lost all control and he charged onto Huda pulling him and throwing him aggressively onto the ground. Then Huda looked up with anger at Rajveer then charged onto him like a vicious animal. Both got into a fight with Rajveer winning. That's when Huda's friends intervened and held onto Rajveer from behind and pulled him off Huda. Now they held him up whilst Huda stood up and advanced towards him and gave him a lot of punches. Naina screamed to let him go but all of them were just having fun. The guys started mistreating her too which enraged Rajveer even further and he kicked Huda with his feet and got rid of the two guys holding him up. Then he went and grabbed hold of Huda and gave decent blows to keep him under him.

Just then Rajveer felt a heavy jolt on the back of his head which stunned him and he held onto it. Naina came rushing from behind and managed to throw the guy with the wooden rod away and then she struggled with him. Huda managed to get out of Rajveer's grip and he stood up looking down at an injured Rajveer. Then he kicked him throwing him face down onto the ground and he just continued kicking him in the ribs non stop. Naina tried freeing herself from the other guy who was enjoying himself. Rajveer saw how she was distressed and it pierced his heart as he remembered his promise to Navin of how he would bring her back in one piece. There was this sudden adrenaline rush in his veins and he grabbed hold of Huda's foot and with force swung his hand up which threw Huda on his back. Then Rajveer got up and went straight to the guy holding Naina and took his hand off Naina and gave him a hard kick throwing the wind out of him and he was on the ground. Naina hugged him whilst letting out violent cries.

Naina: (looking behind with shock) RAJ!

He turned around and moved in time as Huda came attacking him. He let go of Naina and then he began fighting with Huda as he was really furious and wanted to end his existence right then and then.

Rajveer: maine tujhse pehle bhi kaha tha ke agar tune meree Naina kee taraf aakh uthaake bhi dekha to me tujhe zinda nahi chorunga. (he punched Huda who was now not in a postion to attack back. Blood was oozing out from all over his face but Rajveer was not satisfied) tujhe to ab me aisa sabak sikhaaoonga ke dubaara tu aisee harkat karne ke laayak hee nahi rahega

Naina saw how Rajveer's anger had turned dangerous and she had to stop it before something drastic happened. Then she remembered how Navin was coming there so she had to find a phone in order to tell him. She began searching in the sand desperately for Rajveer's phone as she saw it dropping during the struggle. Luckily she found and quickly dialed Navin's phone.

Navin: Hello?

Naina: bhaiyaa'.bhiayaa'

Navin: (becomes stiff by her cracking voice) Naina? Naina kya huwa? Aise ro kyu rahee hai?

Naina: bhaiyaa hum log yahape the or Huda or oske dosto ne aake hamper hamla kiya or ab Raj oske saath laraha hai. Bhaiyaa please jaldi aaye I'm really scared ke kahi koi kise kuch karna de. Please'.

Navin: Tu fikar mat kar me bus pohoch hee raha hu.

She shut the phone and then looked upon the men fighting worrying about what will happen. Then she went back to the spot and quickly grabbed her dress and changed back into it. She wanted to stop the fight but Rajveer was just too enraged to listen to anything. Now Huda had passed all limits and there was going to be nothing which could stop Rajveer from killing him.

It took Navin about ten more minutes until he reached there and he wasn't alone. He had been clever enough to go and inform the nearby police about the incident and since the commissioner there was a friend of his father's he immediately sent his officers with Navin. When they arrived they saw how both the boys were involved in this blood bath and quickly went and separated them. It was difficult to control Rajveer but they eventually managed and freed Huda out of his grip. Then they arrested Huda and took him away. Rajveer stood up weakly and then suddenly he lost balance and began dropping.

Naina: RAJ!

She sped towards him and sat on the ground and took his head in her lap crying out loud. He had become unconscious and she kept shaking him to bring him back but he didn't. Navin also came running towards them equally panicked.

Navin: Kya huwa Naina? Yeh'

Naina: bhaiyaa Raj ke sir pe in logo ne waar kiya tha to is liye shayad yeh behosh... Jaldi bhaiyaa hame ise hospital le jaana parega. Jaldi kijye (she couldn't stop her tears from flowing)

Navin: Don't worry Naina kuch nahi hoga Rajveer ko. (He bent down lower and picked Rajveer up and then carried him off towards his car and then they drove quickly to the nearest hospital)

All the while Naina held onto Rajveer's hand crying and praying that nothing happens to him. She couldn't believe how the events all turned out at the end of the night. Just a while ago they had spent one of the best moments of their lives and the next Rajveer was here lying in blood in her lap.

They reached the hospital soon and they rushed inside with Rajveer and the wardboys came rushing with a stretcher and began rushing him inside to the ER and the doctor. Navin and Naina were stopped midway by them and were told they would have to wait there. Naina was just too restless and went and sat down whilst Navin made sure she was alright.

Then he noticed the way her dress appeared a bit torn and many speculations came into his head. But then he saw that this was not the right time to get into all that so he took his jacket off and went and covered Naina up and sat down next to her. He put his arm around her shoulder and she leaned onto his shoulder still crying.

Rajveer's phone began buzzing and Navin took it from Naina and saw how Sameera was calling. He had to tell her everything and call her here with her dad.

Navin: hello?

Sameera: brother where are you? I mean its nearly two in the morning'

Navin: Sameera me Navin hu

Sameera: Oh. Per yeh phone tumhaare paas kese?

Navin: actually me hospital se baat karaha hu. Sameera tum or uncle yaha pe jaldi aajao

Sameera: (tensed) hospital? Kya huwa hai?

Navin: just come here as quickly as possible and I'll explain everything when you get here.

He told her which hospital they were at and then shut the phone and Sameera couldn't ask him further. She didn't waste anymore time and went and informed Gehlot about how Navin called them. He was equally tensed and immediately both of them drove towards the hospital.

When they got there Naina and Navin were still sat outside waiting. The doctor hadn't come back to inform them on Rajveer's condition. Sameera came rushing inside towards them and when she saw Naina sitting there crying she knew immediately that something had happened to Rajveer. Her heart began thumping fast with anxiety.

Sameera: Naina, kya huwa?

Naina: (stood up and hugged Sameera and began crying out loud again) oh Sam I'm so glad u came

Sameera: kya huwa hai, mujhe batao

Naina: (she was going to tell her the truth but then saw how Gehlot was also standing there so she had to be cautious) ham dono beach pe gaye the or waha Raj ka pair phisal gaya or wo sir ke bal pattharo pe girgaya. Bohat gehree chote aayee hai or (her voice cracked and she gulped) bohat khoon behgaya hai'

Sameera saw how Naina kept pausing before saying the next word so obviously she was thinking about what to say next. This was not the truth and she had to find out from her later. She also knew how she must be hiding it from her father too. Navin sat there wondering why Naina is lying and thought he would also ask her later. Right now the main thing was Rajveer and his recovery.

The doctor came out then and told him what happened. He said that thank God it was only a minor head injury and he required a few stitches. Due to the blood loss he became weak and passed out otherwise there is no serious internal injury. All of them let out a sigh of relief that everything was alright.

Naina: can we meet him?

Doctor: I'm afraid abhi wo behosh hai or oske hosh aane tak aap ko intezaar karna parega. If you want you can see him from outside.

Naina didn't wait and went along forward towards his room. She had to see with her own eyes that he was alright. She stopped out side the room doors and peeked inside and saw Rajveer lying on the bed unconscious with a bandaged head. Her anxiety settled down and tears of joy flowed out of her eyes.

Sameera: you know brother is really lucky to have you

Naina: (wipes her tears) lucky to me hu Sam ke mujhe Raj jesa pyaar karne waala mila. Ab oske bagair me jee nahi sakti

Sameera: jaanti hu. (she looked inside too and then looked back at Naina) me jaantee hu ke tumne mujhe jo bataya wo sab sach nahi tha. Naina batao mujhe ke kya huwa tha actually.

Naina told Sameera the whole story of how Huda came with his friends and began insulting them and Rajveer lost control and the rest was history. She exclaimed and couldn't believe that Huda could stoop so low.

Sameera: me jaantee hu ke brother ka ghussa bohat hee khatarnaak hai. Bachpan se wo aise hee hai. Jab ghussa onke sir tak chala jaata hai then he just becomes really dangerous and uncontroallable. He has hurt himself so many times because of this anger of his. Isiliye dad ne onkee boxing band karwaa dee thi. He couldn't let him man handle with himself anymore. Now I'm glad ke koi or aagaya hai onhe sambhaal ne ke liye kyu ke ab me thak chukee hu. (let out a short laugh and then hugged Naina) don't worry Naina ab sab kuch theek hojaaehga.

Then Sameera walked off and Naina stood there a while more to look at Rajveer.

Next day

Navin has managed to convince Naina to go back home with him as Rajveer would really be unconscious for atleast eight more hours or so. She had no choice and left with him. She couldn't sleep at all as obviously she was too tensed about Rajveer. Everytime she tried to close her eyes she saw his enraged face attacking Huda and then falling onto the ground. It was the first time she had seen his dangerous anger and she made a decision that she had to do something about it.

In the morning she got a call from Sameera telling her that Rajveer has gained consciousness and sounded quite tensed. Naina didn't get good vibes and she became worried.

Naina: is everything okay Sam? Tum aise kyu kehrahee ho

Sameera: baat hee kuch aisee hai. Tum bus jaldi aajao phir batati hu

Naina didn't wait anymore and rushed out not even bothering to change her clothes. She didn't have time to think about all that. She rushed out to the car and drove off to the hospital. All the time, her heart racing with anxiety yet once again that what could have happend and why was Sameera hiding it from her.

When she reached she literally ran out inside the hospital and rushed over to Rajveer's room and found Alekh and Neelu there too wth Sameera. She just went to them with the anxiety killing her.

Naina: Sam kya huwa hai? Raj theek to hai na?

Sameera: (shook her head in disagreement and just put her hand over her face) nothing seems to be alright. Doctors ne kaha tha kal ke koi internal injury nahi hai per jab ose hosh aaya to'

Naina: to? To kya?

Sameera: to yeh ke osne sab kee taraf ajeebse dekha or'ab kya batao Naina bohat hee buri khabar hai

Naina: (grabs hold of Sameera's shoulders and turns her towards her) dekho Sam mujhe or mat daroa or saaf saaf batao ke kya huwa hai

Alekh came to Naina and put his hand over her shoulder

Alekh: Naina Sameera yeh kehna chahtee hai ke ab wo hamara Raj nahi raha.

Naina: kya matlab? (gives him a quizzical look) tum sab milke yu paheli kyu bhujaarahe ho?

Sameera: Naina tum khud andar jaake dekhlo

Naina became even more tensed as she knew something was definitely wrong. She opened the door of the room hesistantly with her heart racing. She couldn't understand what she was to expect.

When she went and stood next to Rajveer she saw he had his eyes closed. With a hesitant hand she put it lightly on his shoulder which woke him up. He had this confused look on his face and Naina was also confused by it.

Naina: kese ho Raj?

Rajveer: me? (weak voice) aap koun hai?

Naina: (It was as if a lighting bolt hit her when she heard that) Raj me Naina. Yeh kya kehrahe ho tum?

End of part.

Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago