Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 29

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

today,i'll give a short reply arwa......i'm kinda short of words.....or i should say i'm speechless.........i must say tum apne readers ki requirements ko purnrupi attention deti ho........heehehe..😆..i remember in the last reply 4 lost,i had mentioned sumthing regarding dis.......usme nahi toh isme sahi.....wat matters is that dey are together or i should say TOTALLY together.....hehehehehehe... - thanks and yes i have to keep my readers in mind as a writer is successful onyl by them.

.😉.......it was amazing and brilliantly written........r u an author or sumthing.......u had loads of literary sense in the update............vivid yet decent description..........heheehehehe..... - heheheh I nwish i wud have been an author but not yet. I've only done a degree in creative writing so u can say the first step is there. I'm glad uve apprciated my style of writing.

😃........not to forget the sholay scene definitely in a comic sense.....hahahahaha.......see naina ne movie ki heroine ki entry ki........RUKJAO RAJVEER.........hehehehe.... - yeh one of my readers gave me the idea.

had loads of fun in reading the update......u rock,gal......now that rajveer is taken i don't mind falling for alekh...he is so cute....however agle update mein shayad he will also be taken by neelu.......off...........readers just have ur loyalty........hehehehe.........😃 - hmmm yeh Raj was already taken but im afraid to tell u that Aalekh has also been taken before by Neelu so sadly no chance there either. ehehehehheh

Originally posted by: mystified

I am thinking hard abt wat to write and how to comment…really not getting the correct terms…u always leave me in a daze…nevertheless it was a awesome update dear….u write very well which I am sure u'd know by now😉…but this was a really really nice part👏👏👏…. - Thanks a lot for the appreciation

The start of this update was a nailbiting experience he he…was filled with complete excitement….i am more of a fan of ladai jhagda, masti and action sequences 😆😆😆so I really liked the first part he he - its gud to see that some people are not afteronly one thing. I'm glad u liked it.

and when u described rakhi and sameera hugging him...i was like 'wat!!! o come on ...no...not again...' 😡🤢glad u din make it cliched rootna manana again😉😆... - yeh i wanted to finish this chapter now so had to resolve everything and not leaving things out

Only one thing I am not able to accept is that how come naina agreed to give her up so suddenly…not that I am unhappy about it but still, she has endured lots isn't it…so shuldn't they wait for a while or something…y this haste…I am sure u have a purpose of putting it in there and I am waiting to hear that😳… - hmmm i can see where ur coming from and believe me i too am not with this idea but then they both have been in lvoe with each other for a long time and now after some hardships when they were together she didnt want to loose him again so she took the step further. They've been through the first step already and i guess now they just wanted to shower each other with love. Let me just tell u that tthere act was only pure love and nothing else.

So is this the end of huda and archie…I truly hope so…I am just doubtful coz u put that bit there abt naina's apprehensions and all that's y😕… - yep it is coz the fic is going to end

So wats next…is it marriage?😉 I guess so…after all the ups and downs they better get married and that too soon….how about twin marriages one for aalekh neelu and the other for raj naina…..hmmmm see how fast I work he he😉😆… - well yeh obviuosly that shall follow and i guess it wud be a fun ride again

And ya don tell me u r not that romantic😉…coz after reading this part no one is gonna believe you ha ha….mesmerizing presentation😳☺️….. - u'll be surprised how i wrote this part.

Gud work dear…keep it up….waiting eagerly for the next one😳…. - thanks a lot once again

Originally posted by: varshita

my god not only hot but the hottest update.

Raj aur Alekh ka plan full proof tha aur result bhi aisa hua ki ab Naina aur Raj ek ho gaye fir se aur saari confusions kahtam ho gayi dono ki.

Naina ne Raj k pyaar par bharosa kar k apne aap ko poori tarah Raj ko saup diya nice yaar.

update soon.

Originally posted by: mystified

hey thanks arwa for this explanation😊....

hmmm i can see where ur coming from and believe me i too am not with this idea but then they both have been in lvoe with each other for a long time and now after some hardships when they were together she didnt want to loose him again so she took the step further. They've been through the first step already and i guess now they just wanted to shower each other with love. Let me just tell u that tthere act was only pure love and nothing else.

i really had the same idea when i read it but just wanted to ask u...u know from a writer's perspective as to what provoked u to write this...am really glad that u replied and that too a convincing reply....hope u don think i am too inquisitive😳....

Part 16

Rajveer turned on his left side and sprang his arm out and was surprised to find it empty. He opened his eyes still half a sleep and saw that Naina was missing. He sat up.

Rajveer: Naina! Naina!

He stopped when he saw her emerging from out of the bathroom wearing only a shirt which came to her waist displaying her gorgeous sexy legs making him goggle over them.

Naina possessed the most incredibly sexy legs Rajveer had ever seen, trim ankles, sleek calves, shapely knees and firm thighs, which the shirt did little to hide.

She saw what he was doing and became a bit conscious and began pulling the lapels of the shirt down trying to hide her exposed skin.

Naina: Aise kya dekhrahe ho?

Rajveer: You look so damn hot. Wese yeh shirt hai kiskee?

Naina: (came and sat on the bed) Tumhaaree...Mere kapre sookh rahe hai to maine tumhaare pehenliye. I found it in your wardrobe. (she was still feeling shy and was trying to cover herself up)

Rajveer: hmmm...(with a mischievous glint) ab mujhe yeh waapis chaheeye (went to fiddle with her buttons)

Naina: (snapped his hand away) Mere kapre sookh jaaenge tub de dungi

Rajveer: Nahi mujhe abhi chaheeye

He forced himself on her and she tried escaping him and couldn't help laughing as he was tickling her to the core. Then finally he had her pinned down onto the bed under him.

He made her aware that he was lying propped between her splayed knees and the bottom of the shirt had wifled up around her waist. She blushed furiously and tried to push it down but he got there first.

Rajveer: Me tumhaaree madad kardeta hu

He gripped the lower edges of the shirt and reared upwards ripping them violently apart, scattering buttons in all directions leaving Naina quivering with delicious shock and quite forgetting her physical discomfort.

A bead of moisture trickled from her temple, down her creamy cheek, onto her full lip. She licked it away with the tip of her pink tongue, sending a flash of heat straight to his groin.

She felt as if she was burning up under his fiery inspection, limbs too heavy with molten desire to rise in defense of her modesty, fascinated by the ragged rise and fall of his deep chest and his flat abdomen. This song began playing in her head as the sensual play continued.

Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi
Tera nashila badhan

Baahon ne chora nahi
Aakhen to kholi magar
Sapna wo tora nahi
Haan wahi, woh wahi
Saason pe rakha huwa tere hootho pe
sapna abhi hai wahi

Raat ka nasha abhi
Aakh se gaya nahi

He threaded his fingers around the back of her head and slanted his open mouth fiercely across hers flooding her with the rich taste and scent of aroused male, inciting her to new levels of excitement with low throaty sounds of carnal hunger.

Tere bina bhi kabhi
Tujhse machal leti hu
Karvat badalti hu
Sapna badal leti hu

Naina just buried herself in the textures of his turbulent loving, the prickly roughness of his jaw, the silkiness of his tongue, the oiled sweep of his muscles and the feathery stroke of his hair.

Tera khayaal aaye to
Balkhaake pal jaata hai
Paani ke chaadar tale
mera dum jal jaata hai

She was seduced, invaded, conquered and won in that first instant of possession. It was painful but it was a sweet, savage, soul - satisfying pain that she sought again and again, the liquid heat of her body quickly adjusting to his daunting size, accepting him, welcoming him, drawing him deeper with tiny rhythmic convulsions of muscle which resonated in every nerve and cell of her being.

Ha wahi, woh wahi
Saason pe rakha huwa tere hootho ka
sapna abhi hai wahi

Raat ka nasha abhi
aakh se gaya nahi

His face was tight, his expression tense with concentration, his hazel eyes intent on reading the unspoken signals that told him of her intoxicating enthusiasm for his every move.

Tere gale milne ke
Mausam bade hote hai
Janmon ka vaada koi
Yeh gham bade chote hai

Her hands slipped on his perspiration - slick shoulders and she anchored herself by wrapping her arms around him, splaying her fingers over the thrilling bunch and flex of his long back, trying to relieve the pressure on her back by twining her supple legs around his plunging hips.

Lambhi see ek raat ho
Lamba sa ek din mile
Bas itna sa jeena ho
Milan kee ghari jab mile

Now he had her completely and took her till the peaks of pleasure making her moan and groan out with pleasure. It ended with a final climatic eruption.

Ha wahi, woh wahi
Saason pe rakha huwa tere hoto ka
sapna abhi hai wahi

Raat ka nasha abhi
Aakh se gaya nahi
Raat ka nasha abhi
Aakh se gaya nahi

She was left bursting into raw tears, sobbing into his heaving chest.

At first he didn't realise anything as he lay back catching onto his breath but when he felt the warm tears on his bare chest he lifted his head and saw her with her head buried in the centre of his chest as if she was trying to hide her guilt ridden face. He thought about it and then he moved her aside and sat up with a jolt.

Rajveer: Hey Bhagwaan yeh hamne kya kardiya....(pretending to feel really bad) Ek baar nahi do baar...Naina tumne mujhe kahi ka nahi chora (he dramatically put his hand over his forehead)

She sat up covering herself with the bed sheet and was even more upset but then when she saw he was laughing so she got really annoyed and began smacking him all over the place.

Rajveer: Are...Naina bus bhi karo...(laughing in between) Come on hey (finally he took her in his arms and comforted her as he knew what she must be going through) Me jaanta hu Naina is waqt tum kis duvidha se guzar rahee ho. Yakeen maano hum dono ne aisa koi qadam nahi uthaaya jo paap ho. Ham dono ek dusre se beinteha mohaabat karte hai or yeh osee mohabbat ka hissa tha or kuch nahi.

Naina: Me jaantee hu Raj per phir bhi ek ajeeb sa darr lagraha hai. Kya yeh dunya hamare is rishte ko pavitra samjhegee

Rajveer: Mujhe dunya kee koi parwa nahi hai. I only care about you (gave her a soft peck on her head) Jab tak ham or hamara pyaar ek saath hai ab dunya kee koi taakat hame juda nahi karsaktee

Naina: I love you Raj

Rajveer: I love you too.

They sat like that for sometime feeling each other's proximity to the most when Naina's gaze fell onto the wall clock opposite her and she shrieked.

Naina: Oh My God! Nau baj gaye!

Rajveer: To kya huwa Naina, it's okay.

Naina: I can't believe ke itnee dair hogayee. Come on get up Raj

she got up immediately tugging onto the bed sheet and scrambling towards the bathroom again.

Rajveer: (still feeling lazy and lying around) offo tum khamakha tension lerahee ho. Ab agar tum hamesha itnee hot lagogi to koun kambakht waqt pe apna dhyaan rakhega

Naina: mere yaha ghabrahat se paseene chute rahe hai, or tumhe mazaak suj raha hai. Get up Rajveer!

Rajveer: (reluctantly got up and tried to calm her down) dekho khamkha me itna pareshaan mat ho. Pata nahi me apne aap ko roke kyu nahi paaya aaj bhi, aisa lagta tha jaise ke koi dore hai jo mujhe tumse bandhe rakhna chahtee hai. Khair, jo huwa so huwa. Ab ghar chalte hai, or dekhte hai ke situation kya hai.

Naina: I can't believe you're so cool about it. Pata nahi bhaiya ko kya jawaab dungee. Ab chalo jaldi utho.

She tried walking ahead but he held her hand back and pulled her back onto the bed on top of him.

Naina: Yeh kya karahai ho Raj, is waqt bhi tumhe badmaashi sujh rahee hai. Choro mujhe.

Rajveer: nahi chorunga (held her tighter) itnee muddato ke baad mere shikanje me aayee ho or tum chahtee ho ke me tumhe aise hee choredu

Naina: Jaantee thi ke tum besharam or badmaash ho per ab zaalim bhi ho wo bhi pata chalgaya (continues to struggle out of his grip)

Rajveer: meree jaan ab tumhe zulm sehne kee aadat daalnee paregee

Naina: please choro na Rajveer

Rajveer: Haii kitnee pyaari lagtee hai aise. Phirse kaho na

Naina: Ek shart pe, paas aao (gestures him to come closer)

He smirks and lifts his head towards her hoping to get what he wants but Naina just kept getting closer and closer and then bit on his ear lobe making him wince in pain and releasing her. She giggled like a kid and ran towards the bathroom before he could catch her.

Rajveer: Bachke kaha jaaogee ek baar bahar to niklo phir dekhta hu.

Naina just laughed and then began washing up. Then when she went to take a bath she realised she forgot her towel and bit her lower lip as now she would have to go outside and Rajveer will get a chance again. Then she thought that she'll tell him from the door instead.

Naina: Raj can you please pass me the towel, I forgot

Rajveer: de to sakta hu Naina lekin nahi dunga

Naina: Raj please aise tang mat karo. Towel doooo na

He took the towel and went and stood by the bathroom door with a naughty grin.

Rajveer: agar tumhe towel chaaheeye to phir baahar aake lena parega

Naina: Baahar? Offo Rajveer maine aadhe kapre uthaardiye hai please dona

Rajveer: to acha hai na isiliye to baahar bulaaraha hu. Chalo jaldi karo, agar towel chaaheeye to phir baahar aake lelo simple.

Naina: ek number ke besharam ho tum.

He just laughed as he loved teasing her. She opened up the lock and then the door slightly with the intention to snatch the towel from his hand but his grip on it was too strong and when she did pull the towel he also forced himself inside.

Naina: Raj! yeh kya karahai ho?

Rajveer: tumhe towel deraha hu (held her in his arms really tight whilst she struggled)

Naina: Chalo choro mujhe. Rajveer please aise tang mat karo or baahar jao mujhe nahana hai

Rajveer: mujhe bhi nahana hai

Naina: ha to pehle mujhe nahane do oske baad tum chalejaaana

Rajveer: nahi mujhe abhi nahana hai

Naina: theek hai to phir mujhe choro or tum naha lo

Rajveer: tumhe jaane kee kya zaroorat hai, dono saath me hee nahate hai

Naina: Besharam, bilkul nahi chalo choro mujhe

Rajveer: ab kal raat ke baad mujhse kesee sharam? chalo choro nakhre dikhaana warna tum jaanti ho mujhe, jo karna hai karke rehta hu

He pulled her even closer and used force. She saw how serious he was and began getting nervous. She knew he was in a mischievous mood and will take advantage but she knew how to tease him very well.

Naina: theek hai chalo, pehle choro mujhe

he obliged and just as soon as he did it she ran for the door but he was too quick for her and he blocked her way. she squealed and went to the other side of the bathroom away from him. He kept advancing towards her. She kept warning him to stay away. He wasn't going to listen and eventually both of them ended up in the tub, drenched in water.

Rajveer: dekha aakhir maine apni baat manwaahee lee na.

Naina: bohat ziddee ho tum

Rajveer: so to hu.

Then his gaze fell on the wet bed sheet she still had on which now clung onto her body making it nearly see through and he couldn't miss how aroused she was right then. He moved closer to her in the tub with the heat rising by the second but at the end moment she escaped from underneath him and he fell face first into the tub. She showed her thumb and quickly rushed out of the bathroom before he can get anywhere near her.

Gehlot: Come on Raj, you're twice the age younger than me or me tumse aage bhaag raha hu. Come on buck up!

Rajveer frowned and tried picking up his feet but he was already out of breath and was getting a stitch in his lower abdomen. However he did catch up with Gehlot more like dragging himself along.

Gehlot: Yeh saare muscles kya sirf dikhaane ke liye khare kiye hai...Come on show me what you're made of.

Gehlot went off ahead of him and now Rajveer was completely out of it. He bent down on his knees.

Rajveer: I know what he's trying to do.....aise dheere dheere mujhe tore na chahte hai....Come on Rajveer you can do it.

He stood up and tried to take the next step but he stumbled and before he could stop he fell onto the ground right into the muddy puddle. His face was all smeared in mud and he became a laughing stock of a few children passing by. He lifted his head and glared at them and attempted to get up but slipped again and the children laughed more.

Then a hand got extended out to him and he took it with embarrassment as it was no one else but his dad.

Rajveer: Thanks dad....(he coughed and limped over to the nearest bench and sat down relaxing his over tired muscles. Perhaps he shouldn't have done too much exercise last night and then this morning was no different.)

Gehlot: Puree raat ghar se bahaar rahoge to aisa hee hoga my son

Rajveer bit his lip and looked up at his dad with a guilt ridden face. He tried to cover up but it didn't work this time.

Gehlot: Dekho Raj me tumhaara baap hu or mujhse koi baat nahi chuptee. (he sat down next to him and put his arm around his shoulder and gave him a slight squeeze making him wince out with pain as Naina's nail marks were still quite fresh on his back and the neck.) To kya me pooch sakta hu ke wo koun thee jiske saath aap puree raat the?

Rajveer: Ummm Dad...nahi aisee koi baat...I mean...(his face went red and he was finding it hard to talk to his dad)

Gehlot: Dekho Raj me tumhaara baap hu, koi dushman nahi. Tum mujhe iske baare me pehle bata dete to abhi tak tumhaaree osse shaadi bhi hojaatee

Rajveer: (leaped off the bench with excitement) Sach me Dad? Wow phir to aap abhi chalo Naina ke ghar rishta lekar...

Gehlot: Acha? per abhi to tum kehrahe the ke koi nahi or phir ab shaadi kee baat aayee to that se kuud pare

Rajveer: (bit his tongue) Wo dad actually...wo kya hai ke...

Gehlot: (laughed and stood up) to baat yaha tak pohoch gayee hai. Well jo bhi hai I'm happy kyu ke mera beta khush hai. To phir batao kab chalna hai shagun leke?

Rajveer: (hugged his father) I love you Dad!

Gehlot: Theek hai theek hai ab chalo yeh daur pura karna hai

Rajveer: Oh dad come on.......(gave him a helpless look but Gehlot didn't listen and made him run around the whole park once. By the time he finished he just collapsed onto the ground hilariously)

Naina and Neelu were returning back home and Neelu had called Navin and told him that Naina was with her last night as it had become too late for her to go back home. She couldn't inform either. Navin was really serious and ordered them to come home immediately. Naina became tensed and began biting her nails to the core as to what was she to face when getting home.

When they reached she was in for a surprise as there were other people there to greet her. She ran inside and hugged them with excitement.

Naina: Mommmmmmmmm!!!!!! Daddddddddd!!!!!!!!! What a pleasant surprise. Aap log kab aaye?

Mira: hum to aaj subhe hee aayee or socha ke tum dono ko surprise denge per tune to hame hee surprise de diya. Puree raat ghar se…

Naina: Ma agar mujhe pata hota ke aap log aane waale hai to forum daur ke chalee aatee. Oh Mom I'm so happy to see you

Naina hugged Mira fiercely and Mira was equally surprised to see her over the moon. The glow on her face certainly said something and she smiled and decided to talk with her later about it.

Then Naina went and gave Navin soft blows for making her tensed for no reason. In a way she was glad that her parents had come now as now everything was perfect, just the way it should have been in her life.

Next day

Naina is in a shopping mall with Navin and Ritu browsing around as if she is searching for someone. She is looking at the hanging clothes but is more interested in looking at the entrance of the shop.

Naina: (on the phone) Hello...ha kaha ho tum? kya? Me yahee hu...theek hai.

She puts the phone down and continues browsing.

Few minutes later Rajveer arrives at the mall and goes to the same shop Naina was at but he can't find her there. He keeps looking around but he still can't find her. Then as he steps out of the shop he spots her on the opposite side walking out with a handful of shopping bags.

Rajveer: Wow to madam saheba sach much yaha shopping karne aayee hai mujhse kehrahee thee ke me yaha bore horahee hu or me jaldi aao or yaha pe aaya to yeh... Abhi iskee khabar leta hu

He quickly walks in the direction he saw her going and keeps following from a distance. he couldn't stop admiring how beautiful she looked in a blue halter neck dress as it was the first time he saw her in that. Then he looses her because of his day dream so he keeps looking here and there. Then finally when he spots her he stops as he finds a man following her.

Navin: Are meree baat to suno Naina, I'm sorry kaha na

Naina: Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karnee.

Navin: Are sorry kaha na. Ritu tum hee samjhao ise

Ritu: Mujhe bhi tumse koi baat nahi karnee. Maine jab kaha tumhe aane ko to 100 bahane banaye lekin jab tumhaaree assistant ne bulaaya to forun chale aaye

Navin: Oho tum bhi baat ka batangar bana deti ho (he grabs her elbow) Please meree puree baat suno

Naina: (jerks her arm out of his grip) hame kuch nahi sunna Aap jaake aapkee Jenny se baat kijye

Both walk off and Navin continues pursuing them.

Rajveer sees the whole drama but he can't hear anything. he immediately flares his nostrils on seeing a stranger bothering his Naina so he rolls up his sleeves and moves into the direction behind Navin

Navin: Ritu! Naina please ruko...

Rajveer grabs his collar from behind making him stop and look over his shoulder. He was quite surprised

Rajveer:: Ek baar jab wo kehrahee hai ke ose akela chore do to samajh me nahi aata kya?

Navin: Dekhye yeh hamare aapas ka maamla hai, so stay out of it (he tries to move forward but Rajveer doesn't let go)

Rajveer: Yeh mera maamla hai Bari jaldi hai oske peeche jaane kee. apnee aukaat dekhi hai

Navin: Dekho batameezee kee hadd hotee hai. Tum khamakha beech me parahai ho. Ab choro mujhe.

Rajveer: Batamezee kee hadd to tumne paar kee hai Yu sare aam larkiyo ko chere te huwe sharam nahi aatee?

Navin: kya? Dekho wo meree honewaali biwi hai okay so just...

Rajveer: oho to itnee jaldi ose apni biwi bhi bana liya? Lagta hai bohat chaalu kisam ke ho tum. Jab police kee maar paregee na tab pata chalega.

Navin: Kise kya pata chalta hai wo to waqt hee bataehga. Pehle mujhe yeh batao ke tumhe kya farak parta hai me os larki ke peeche jao ke na jao.

Rajveer: Because she's my girl okay Ab tum samajh gaye ho to tumhaari bhalai isme hee hai ke yaha se seedhee tarhaase chale jao warna...

Navin: (now he was amused) warna kya karloge?

Rajveer: Oh you pushed the wrong button. Ab to lagta hai tumhe seekha na hee hoga.

He is just about to give him a blow on the face when...

Navin: Are dekho security guard aagaya

Rajveer turned around which gave Navin a chance to run out of there. Rajveer realised he fooled him so he chased after him.

Navin: (kept running until he crashed into someone) Oh Thank God Naina tum milgayee

Naina: yeh kya haalat banayi huwi hai aapne

Navin: are mat poocho pata nahi koun paagal milgaya...

Rajveer: (grabbed Navin's shirt again) Maine kaha tha na ke isse dhoore rehna

He didn't wait anymore and punched him in the eye throwing him on the floor.

people around stopped and stared at what happened. Both Naina and Ritu gasped as they were shocked.

Ritu: Navin! (she knelt next to him on the floor and sat him up) tum theek ho? (then she looks at Rajveer) Yeh kya horaha hai

Rajveer: Yeh aadmi tumhe chere raha tha or iskee parwa karahee ho?

Ritu: kya? Dekhye bhaisahab aap ko ghalat femee huwee hai, yeh mere mangetar hai

Rajveer: Mangetar?

Ritu: ha me aapko jaantee tak nahi to phir me kyu... (she gets diverted to Navin's moans

Navin: Dekho ab hamara peecha chora yeh naatak se…

Rajveer attempted to attack Navin again

Naina: Rajveer!

He stops and looks at a horrified Naina with her hands covering her face with shock.

Rajveer: acha huwa Naina tum aagayee?

Naina: yeh kya karahai ho tum?

Rajveer: is aadmi ko tumhe chere ne se roke raha hu...

Naina: (walking towards Navin) Yeh mere bare bhaiyaa hai inpe haath uthaane ka socha bhi kese?

Rajveer:: Huh, bare bhaiyya? (he felt like burying himself down under ) per yeh... (refering to Ritu)

Naina: Yeh meree bhabhi hai. Gosh Raj tum aisee harkat Karoge maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha

Naina took hold of Navin and then all three of them began walking off leaving Rajveer standing there

Rajveer: (to himself) to wo Naina ka bhai hai or wo oskee bhabhi to phir wo Naina ko nahi chere raha tha? Mujhe kya pata tha. Oh God pehlee hee mulaaqaat me saale ke saamne pachka hogaya

Navin: Naina tum is larke...

Rajveer: Sunye, Hey buddy! please rukhye

Navin: Are yeh to peeche hee pargaya hai mujhe to lagta hai paagal hai. Chalo jaldi yahase

Naina: Bhaiyya ek...

Navin doesn't listen grabs both Naina and Ritu's hands and begins walking forward, Rajveer follows.

Rajveer: Ek minute please rukhye mujhe aapse baat karnee hai

Navin increased his speed . Naina kept trying to talk to him but he didn't listen as he was afraid for their safety.

Rajveer: Yeh to bara akroo nazar aaraha hai Phir bhi I've to continue. Hey buddy! Please rukhye

Naina: Bhaiyaa mujhe aapse baat karnee hai

Navin: Jo bhi hai wo ghar jaake karna, is waqt is paagal insaan se bachna hai hame

Naina: Bhaiyya osee ke baare me. Please ek baar sun to leejye

Navin still doesn't stop and carries on.

Naina: Bhaiya wo paagal nahi hai

Navin: tumhe kese pata? (looks over his shoulder) Are wo abhi tak peeche hee hai

Naina: Kyu ke bhaiyya me osse pyaar karti hu

Navin made an abrupt halt. It felt as if someone threw utensils from the 20th floor. He couldn't believe what he heard

Just then Rajveer just caught up but he didn't see where he was going and he stumbled against a flower pot which made him loose balance and fall in front. Navin saw Rajveer flying towards him and he was in a state of shock to react so he didn't even move and before any of them knew Rajveer and Navin both fell on the ground on top of each other.

Navin: Lagta hai aaj tumne mujhe maar daalde ne kee thaan lee hai

Rajveer: I'm sorry

Some time later...

Navin, Ritu, Naina and Rajveer are sat on a table in the food arena. Ritu is applying an ice pack on Navin's eye and head whilst Naina and Rajveer are sat across awfully nervous and afraid.

Navin: (looked at Rajveer) to tum meree behen se pyaar karte ho?

Rajveer: Ji...ji...wo aap...kee behen mujhse py...py...pyaar kartee hai

Navin: To iska matlab ke tum nahi karte?

Rajveer: Ji nahi (he jerked up) mera mat...matlab yeh hai ke me...me...me...

Navin got up and began moving onto Rajveer

Rajveer: (kept leaning back on his chair)Buddy...bhaiyaa…sir...wo darasal...aap...me...wo...s...s...sorry...me...

Navin grabbed Rajveer's shoulders and made him stand up. He still had a stern angry look whilst Rajveer was slightly trembling.

Navin: Relax man (he lessened his grip on him) Tum to aise darr rahe ho jese tumne bohat bara jurm karliya ho. are bhai pyaar kiya hai koi chori nahi ki.

Rajveer: To iska matlab aap ko koi aitraaz nahi?

Navin: Yeh to maine nahi kaha. tumhaare kuch imtehaanaat lene honge buddy oske baad yeh faisla hoga ke tum meri Naina ke laayak ho bhi ke nahi

Rajveer gulped and looked at Naina who was equally as nervous. She knew that her brother will approve of Rajveer because she loved him but still she hoped Rajveer didn't goof up as usual.

Navin: To tumhaara naam kya hai?

Rajveer: Ji R…R…Ra….Rajveer

Navin: kya? Bara hee unique naam hai R,R,R,Rajveer.

Rajveer:: R,R,R Rajveer nahi, sirf Rajveer.

Navin: Hmm... kuch kaam waam bhi karte ho ke bus yuhi logo ka peecha karte rehte ho?

Rajveer: Ji me wo...hmmm kya karta hu mein...wo (the very presence of Navin was making him intimidated and he became conscious) Ji me wo...

Navin: Yeh kya ji me wo, ji me wo laga rakha hai . Maine poocha koi kaam karte ho bhi ke nahi?

Rajveer: Ha kartoo hu na me wo...uh...me...

Navin: Iska matlab ke kuch nahi karte

Rajveer: Ji ha... nahi mera matlab hai ke abhi kuch nahi karta lekin bohat jald kuch karunga

Navin: Saaf, saaf batao

Rajveer: (took in a deep breath and then spoke in one breath) Ji abhi abhi main papa ke business me shaamil huwa hu or baat yeh hai ke me aapkee behen se bohat pyaar karta hu or shaadi karna chahta hu or me waada karta hu ke me ose hamesha khush rakhunga (then he intakes breath after seeing Navin's stern face)

There's silence for some time until Navin breaks the ice with his laugh The rest look upon him with amazement

Navin: bara hee kamaal ka namuna pasand kiya hai tumne Naina (he gets up) Khare ho.

Rajveer gets up slightly afraid of what he is going to do and hesitates to go near. Navin grabs hold of him and gives him a hug. Then pulls out.

Navin: Naina mujhe tumhaaree yeh pasand... (drum roll) pasand hai.

Naina leaps with joy and hugs Ritu. Rajveer is overwhelmed

Navin: Ek baat yaad rakhna agar meree behen ko kabhi bhi rulaaya na to I'll kill you

Rajveer laughed out loud thinking Navin is joking again but when he sees his serious face he stops and gives him a sheepish look Then Navin bursts out laughing and pats Rajveer's back.

End of part.

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Raj toh Naina ko paas mein naa pakar usse dhoondh raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj Naina ko sirf shirt mein dekhke just went mad!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He was staring at her beautiful and sexy legs!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj bahut naughty hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Usko abhi uski shirt wapas chahiye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is really feeling concious and trying to cover herself up!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj and Naina are so romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The song is very nice and just perfect for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Well Raj ke saath bitaye huya raat ka nasha itni jaldi kaise jaa sakta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was very hot and passionate!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina is crying and trying to hide har guilt ridden face!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj ne kaha yeh humne kya kar diya ek baar nahi do baar aur Naina ne usse kahi ka nahi chhoda!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I loved this dialogue!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏He is just too much!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Ish situation mein bhi mazak kar raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

He said woh ek dusre se beintehaa mohabbat karte hai aur duniya ki koi takat unhe juda nahi kar sakti!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow kya dialogue mara!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He is right ke yeh usse mohabbat ka hissa hai and he does not care about the world!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj iske baad bhi keh raha hai ke Naina hamesha itni hot lagegi toh kaun waqt pe dhyan rakhega!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He is so naughty and funny!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Iske baad bhi Naina ko chhodne ka naam hi nahi le raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is right!!! 😊 😊 😊Woh besharm hai, badmaash hai aur zaalim bhi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊But I still love him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina jab chhodne ko kehti hai toh kehta hai kitni pyaari lagti hai aise!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He is in no hurry at all!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He is saying ab mere zulm sehne ki adat dalnee paregi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️But Naina also knew how to outwit him and ran off!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Towel dene ke bahane ab bathroom mein bhi ghus gaya aur Naina ke saath nahana bhi chahta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He got aroused again when they had fallen into the bathtub but Naina is cleverer than him aur akhir bhaag hi gayi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Neelu is shocked to hear that Naina spend the night with Rajveer at his flat!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Kaha yeh qadam uthane se pehle soch sakti thi!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Neelu toh trip pe Naina ko bahut bold hone ki advice deti thi ab kya huya usse??😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛

But then she understood ke yeh unka beintehaa pyaar tha and Naina and Raj really love each other a lot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

She agreed to help Naina out aur kaha ke hamesha uska saath degi!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Neelu is really a true friend!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj toh khushi khushi ghar aa raha tha ,agar Gehlot ne pakad liya aur puccha ke kaha se tasreef la rahe hai sahabzade!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj toh pakda gaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Too bad!!! This is just like a movie!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne kaha woh aa nahi raha hai balki jogging karne jaa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Gehlot ne kaha ke woh bhi saath aayenge!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Raj toh phas gaya!!!! Bechara!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Kapde bhi change karne nahi diye!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

This reminds me of Salman Khan and Anupam Kher in Jab Pyaar Kisise Hota hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj should have thought of a better excuse!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒He is tired and wants to sleep now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Poor Raj!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ke dad toh jogging pe uski acchi waat laga rahe hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj is just dragging himself along and thinking ke Gehlot usse todna chahte hai!!!!

Raj tried to take the next step but fell into and muddy puddle and became the laughing stock of the children!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Poor Raj!!!!

Raj ne kal raat bahut exercise kar li thi ke ab kuch bacha hi nahi!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Itni exercise ke baad toh koi bhi jog nahi kar sakta!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Ghehlot bhi sab samaj gaye ke raat bhar woh kisi ladki ke saath tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Gehlot put his arms around Raj's shoulder and made Raj wince out in pain because Naina's nail marks were still quite fresh!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj tried to hide but Gehlot said ke agar bata dete toh ab tak shaadi bhi ho jaati tab Raj kood pada apni jagah se!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Pehle toh bahut na na kar raha tha aur ab pakda gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Raj ko bahut jaldi hai shaadi ki!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Gehlot is the most understanding papa!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊And he agreed to the wedding without any chahos!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He knew that Raj had spent the night with a girl but he was cool about it!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Its so embarrasing but at least he is ready to get him married to the girl of his choice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is a gem!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Magar he still made Raj complete his round of the park!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina's mom and dad are back!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Mira is already suspecting something!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She is too clever!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ke chehre ka glow is really giving her away but aleast even Mira is happy!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Naina's parents had come and now everything in her life is perfect just as it should have been!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina shopping kum aur Raj ka inetzarr zyada kar rahi hai aur Raj soch raha hai ke woh sach much shopping kar rahi hai aur socha ke uski khabar lega!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is now admiring her in a blue halter neck dress!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina is really looking beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

This is the first time he saw her in that??😕 😕 😕 😕

Navin manane ki koshish kar raha hai par Naina aur Ritu toh uski baat hi nahi sun rahe hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Woh unke bulane pe nahi aaya magar Jenny ke bulane pe aa gaya!!!! Very bad!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ne socha ke Navin is stalking them and tried holding him and threatening him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛This is too funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj toh Navin ki ek baat bhi nahi sun raha hai aur yeh bhi keh diya ke Naina se dur rahe as she is his girl!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Navin bhi Raj ko ullu banake chala gaya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛Aur Naina ke paas bhagte bhagte gaya!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab Raj punched Navin and people are staring and Naina came just then and is horrified to see all this!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Bechara Raj!!!! Apne honewaale Brother-in-law ke saath aisi first meeting!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕Poor him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

When he knew the truth not a single proper word was coming out of his mouth!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How can he hit his brother-in-law!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ab Navin ko manane gaya toh Navin dono ko leke nikalne ke chakkar mein hai aur Naina ki baat hi nahi sun raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina told Navin she loved Raj and Navin was shocked and Raj then stumbled and fell just on top of Navin!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj is just so scared that he is stammering and Navin is just scaring him!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Poor Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ke saamne toh bahut badi badi baatein karta hai aur suke bhai ke saamne sitti pitti gum!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina knew Navin will approve Rajveer because she loved him but she is hoping that Raj does not goof up!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj apna naam bhi theek se nahi bol paa raha hai aur nahi kaam!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Phir Raj said everything in one breath and then Navin laughs and hugs him!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin has to give the dramatic pause!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin kehta hai agar uski behen ko kabhi bhi rulaya toh he will kill him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Raj laughed but then stopped seeing Navin's serious face and gave a sheepish look but then Navin also burst out laughing!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Navin bhi naa!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Khamokha Raj ko darata rehta hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

The meeting of Raj with his would be brother-in-law was hillarious and just awesome!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear Abhi online aayi n your update was waiting for me..

Update was just too hot n hilarious..😆Yeah i know hot n hilarious r poles apart but with your update anything is possible.. - thanks a lot for the appreciation. hehehe i think i do understand wat u mean

Ist part was gud .Raj is really very naughty n Naina is no less.She is n equal partner in all dis..I mean b4 marriage how can do all dis.But may b its love n only pure love..Raj was very funny when he said dis"

Hey Bhagwaan yeh hamne kya kardiya....(pretending to feel really bad) Ek baar nahi do baar...Naina tumne mujhe kahi ka nahi chora (he dramatically put his hand over his forehead) "

Raj is in no hurry n now he wants to take a bath with her..Kuch zyada hi romantic ho gaye hain dono. - yeh they did take this step out of pure love for each other. Yeh thanks for liking that part and having a ball.

Neelu is a real friend ...way she helps her in everything is really cute. - she sure is

Naina's parents have arrived n her mother has guessed something by seeing the glow on her face.(Dese mothers r really sharp in such matters).Raj's encounter with his father was very funny..Koi aur bahan nahin mila tha ....😉😉😉 - hmmm mothers always know what they're kids are up to. Beechaara Raj aakhir phas hee gaya

Itni exercise ke baad koi WWF ka wrestler bhi jog nahin kar sakta to bechara Raj kya cheez hai😆.he fell in the mud pool,n became the laughing stock for children.. - hehehehe I can see u got the joke there

Raj's father is no less even he knew dat his son has spend a nite with some1..How embarrasing.!!!!!😳. - yeh very embarassing

But thankfully he is not acting in a typical manner n is ready to get his son married with the girl of his choice...😛😛😛

raj is so very ecstatic. - well now everythign seems to be perfect so yeh he is feeling out of this world

Raj's first encounter with Navin was way too funny..How can he hit his only brother-in-law.That too thinking dat Navin is teasing his own sister n fiancee😆.ay to go Raj n when he came to know the truth how nervous he actually was..Not a single proper word was coming out from his mouth.

Naina ke samne to bahut badi badi baatein karte hain janab aur uske bahi ke samne sitti-pitti gum..Hota hai..Wow so next update will have loads of RN n they'll b busy preparing for their marriage..I hope they dont have to face any obstacles now.. - ab kya kare kabhi kabhi apne Raj kee bhi hawa tight hojaatee hai.

Thankfully they r getting married otherwise they have crossed every line in their relationship n for a girl like Naina it is indeed too much. - yes they'll get married soon as ab Raj rukhne waala nahi hai

Originally posted by: rituka7

awesome
too good
update soon...........