IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 19

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was so beautiful just awesome

thanku for such a lovely fic

HII PRERNA THANKY SO MUCH LOVELY COMMENTS AND UR APPRECIATION, I AM REALLY TOUCHED. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: sanabmw

hii priti..

h r u ?

hmm to FF ka end ho gaya 😭😭end accha kiya tumne but mujhe ek pro hai ..tumne FF k end part main RN ki lines bahot kam rakhi thi i mean background main voice jayada thi unke dailogs kam the jo mujhe accha nahin laga,yaha RN k dil ki feelings kam nazar aayi agar tum unke dailog jayada rakhati to aur jayada accha hota😊😊

but yeh tumhaara writing style hai yeh bhi accha hai😊aur end main naveen ka part bahot accha tha aur raj ka naina ko end main kahena k woh usse pyaar karata hai sab best tha..bahot accha FF tha yeh 👏very nice dear....tum bahot accha likhati ho....hamesha aisehi likhati rahena...aur tumhaari last ki lines bahot acchi thi.😳

lots of love

sana😛

HII SANA DEAR, THANKY SO MUCH FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS, HOPE UR FINE SWEETY, I AM ALSO FINE DEAR, WELL DEAR ACTUALLY MUJHE LAGA KI AGAR RAJ AUR NAINA KI DIL KI BAATEIN UNKI ZUBAAN SE NAHIN BALKI UNKI NAZRON SE KAHIN JAAYE TOH AUR BHI ZYAADA ACHCHA LAGEGA,KYUNKI MUJHE LAGTA HAI KI KABHIE-KABHIE, KUCH FEELINGS AUR EMOTIONS KO SHABDON MEIN DHAALNE KI ZAROORTA NAHIN PADTI HAI, UNHE TOH BAS DIL SE MEHSUS KARNE KI ZAROORTA PADTI HAI, BAS ISILIYE MAINE LAST MEIN UNKI LINES ZYAADA NAHIN DAALI, I HOPE U WILL UNDERSTAND DEAR, BUT TUMHE NAVEEN, AUR RAJ KA NAINA KO PROPOSE KARNE KA STYLE PASAND AAYA THANX DEAR, I AM REALLY GLAD, AUR TUMHE MERA LIKHNE KA TAREEKA BHI PASAND AAYA THANX SWEETY, AND TUMHE LAST KI LINES BHI ACHCHI LAGI THANX. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: srojaleen

HIIIIII PRITI DEAR! tumhara msg. milte hi maine tumhara FF padhna start kar diya tha. lekin comment kya bhejoon, yahi sochte sochte late ho gayi. actually tumhara yeh whole story comment ka nahin, balki dher sari compliments k layak hai dear. I think tumhe aapni khud k hindi novels likhna suru kar dena chahiye. matlab itne acche se tum ne RN k feelings HINDI main express kiya hai k........JUST MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh to koi professional writer hi kar sakta hai dear. Ab ud par aati hoon.... mujhe laga jab tum yeh ud likh rahi thi , tum ne aapne ears main ear phones lagaya hoga. jiska ek connection RAJ k dil k pas aur dushra connection NAINA k dil k pas tha . tabhi to tum un k dil k dhadkanon k awaz ko itni aachi tarah se describe karpayi..... UR STORY IS JUST UNFORGETTABLE.----priya

HII PRIYA HOPE UR FINE SWEETY,AND THANKY SO MUCH FOR UR SUCH LOVELY COMMENTS SWEETY, I AM RELLY TOUCHED MY DEAR, TUMNE TOH MERI AUR MERE FF KI ITNI ZYAADA TAAREEF KAR DI HAI KI, AB MAIN TUM SE AUR KYA KAHUN, MUJHE TOH KUCH BHI SAMAJH MEIN HI NAHIN AA RAHA HAI DEAR, BAS THANX......THANX.........THANX.........HI KAHUNGI SWEETY, AUR MERE FF KO UNFORGETTABLE BANANE KE LIYE BHI THANX A LOT DEAR.AUR ITNE SAARI LOVELY COMPLIMENTS KE LIYE BHI THANX HI KAHUNGI SWEETY. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello!!Priti!!!

Hope u are fine dear!!!!

hmmmm....the update was simply out of this world.......,truly mind blowing

in the true sense of the term👏

Superb portrayal of emotions and inner turmoils dear...⭐️⭐️

I am speechless.....Main kya kahoon mujhe nahin pata!!!!!!

It was absolutely brilliant...

Dear thanks a lot for such beautiful ff on RN....⭐️👍🏼

Hope u continue to write so well and may your style flourish even more

with the passage of time....

God bless u sweetheart.

Take care..

lots of love and best wishes...

Riya.😊

HII RIYA THANKY SO MUCH FOR UR SUCH LOVELY COMMENTS, AND SO MUCH OF APPRECIATION, I AM RELLY VERY GLAD AND TOUCHED SWEETY, AND THANX A LOT FOR UR WISHES TOO DEAR, I AM REALLY TOUCHED DEAR, AND U ALSO LIKED MY WRITING STYLE TOO, THANKY SO MUCH, AUR KYA KAHUN MAIN BHI, KUCH SAMAJH MEIN NAHIN AA RAHA HAI DEAR, BAS THANX.......THANX...........THANX HI KAHUNGI SWEETY. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Hii Priti,
ur update is comes to an end .😭😭 but am happy that finally they IZHAAR.😃
i luved the lines which decribing their situation althogh i missed RN convo. am expected much convo betn. RN.😕 but lagta hai RN itne khoye hua the ek dusre mein ki baat bhi nahi kar paye 😆😆😆

RAJ-(apne mann mein)-apni chahat ke dam par, apni saanson ko tham kar baithein hain,tere daaman par koi aanch na aaye, isi liye hum angaron par lete hain..........

NAINA-(apne mann mein)-jab mere dil ka dard, teri aankhon mein nazar aata hai, tab meri palkon mein bhi tera dard sama jaata hai, is dard ka rishta bhi ajeeb hai, hoton se nahin, magar nazron se sab kuch keh jaata hai..........

these line are simply superb dear. i just luved it.luv ur short ff. hope u start another one soon.
luv u n ur Fic n surely miss Izhaar.
in final u deserve this 👏
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Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIIIII PRITI HOPE U R COOL AND HAPPY DEAR

MERA EXAM CHAL RAHA HAI MAGER UD PADKE RUK NAHI SAKI

KYA KAHU TUMHE........TUMNE MUHJE RULA DIYA

I DONT NO KI TUM ITNA AACHA KAISE LIKTI HO

I WONT TO GIVE U SOMETHING🤗

UR FF WAS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME

SUPERB

TOOGOOD

FANTASTIC

ROCKING

U R A MIND BLOWING WRITER👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

TUMHE TOH LRL KA DIRECTOR HONA CHAHIYE THA😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

THIS IS A PERFECT ENDING OF THIS FF

PAR KAASH KI TUMARA FF SHORT NA HOTA DEAR😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

MAIN DUYA KARUGI KI TUM AAGE BHI AASE HI FF'S LIKTI RAHO SWEETY😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 👍🏼

WITH LOTS&LOTS OF LOVE

DEEP.

HII DEEP HOPE UR FINE SWEETY, AND THANKY SO-SO MUCH FOR UR SUCH LOVELY COMMENTS SWEETY, I AM REALLY GLAD AND TOUCHED, THAT U HAD TAKEN OUT TIME FROM UR BUSY SCEDULE OF EXAMINATION, AND COMMENTED ON MY FF, THANX A LOT DEAR, ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS DEAR, HOPE U COME OUT WITH FLYING COLOURS DEAR, AUR KYA KAHUN TUMSE MUJHE TOH KUCH BHI SAMAJH MEIN NAHIN AA RAHA HAI SWEETY, TUMNE MERI ITNI ZYAADA TAAREEF KAR DI HAI DEAR, BAS THANX........THANX..........THANX, HI KAHUNGI CUTIE. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hii Priti,
ur update is comes to an end .😭😭 but am happy that finally they IZHAAR.😃
i luved the lines which decribing their situation althogh i missed RN convo. am expected much convo betn. RN.😕 but lagta hai RN itne khoye hua the ek dusre mein ki baat bhi nahi kar paye 😆😆😆

RAJ-(apne mann mein)-apni chahat ke dam par, apni saanson ko tham kar baithein hain,tere daaman par koi aanch na aaye, isi liye hum angaron par lete hain..........

NAINA-(apne mann mein)-jab mere dil ka dard, teri aankhon mein nazar aata hai, tab meri palkon mein bhi tera dard sama jaata hai, is dard ka rishta bhi ajeeb hai, hoton se nahin, magar nazron se sab kuch keh jaata hai..........

these line are simply superb dear. i just luved it.luv ur short ff. hope u start another one soon.
luv u n ur Fic n surely miss Izhaar.
in final u deserve this 👏
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HII NAMITA DEAR, HOPE UR FINE SWEETY, THANX A LOT DEAR FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS, AND UR GR8 APPRECIATION TOO, I AM REALLY VERY GLAD, AND TOUCHED SWEETY, TUMNE MERI SACH MEIN BAHUT HI ZYAADA TAAREEF KAR DI HAI KI, MAIN TUMSE BAS THANX..THANX.......THANX, HI KAHUNGI, AUR MERE PAAS WORDS NAHIN HAIN KI MAIN KYA KAHUN YAAR, AUR TUMHE MERI LIKHI HUI LINES PASAND AAYI, I AM REALLY GLAD DEAR, YEH LINES MERI KHUD KI LIKHI HUI HAIN SWEETY, MUJHE POETRY LIKHNE KA BAHUT SHAUK HAI, AUR KYA KAHUN, AGAR TUMAHRI AISE HI BEST WISHES MERE SAATH RAHIN, TOH AUR BHI ACHCHE FF'S ZAROOR LIKHNE KI KOSHJISH KARUNGI DEAR, AND YES MAIN BHI IZHAAR KO BAHUT MISS KARUNGI SWEETY. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

hi Priti,

Originally posted by: george eliot

hi Priti,

I am speechless............seriously, i have no words to describe what u wrote.............i am chocked with emotions..........it was sooooooooooo beautiful, sheer poetry flowed from your pen.....absolutely touching and stirring...........i must say u are a fantabulous writer.............

i loved the end.............though it's sad taht it's over, yes all good things coem to an end..........i know that, but I WILL miss izhaar, i will miss it's emotions, i will miss it's beauty............

Thanks a lot for giving us such a piece of sheer beauty

THANX A LOT DEAR, FOR UR SUCH LOVELY COMMENTS, AND SO MUCH OF APPRECIATION,EVEN I AM ALSO SPEECHLESS DEAR, KI MAIN TUMSE AUR KYA KAHUN, BAS THANX...THANX...THANX HI KAHUNGI SWEETY, EVEN I WILL ALSO MISS IZHAAR A LOT SWEETY, BUT AS U HAVE ALREADY MENTIONED ABOVE, THAT ALL GOOD THINGS COME TO AN END, SO I TOTALLY AGREE WITH U DEAR, AND FOR ME THIS WAS THE PERFECT ENDING FOR IZHAAR.THANX ONCE AGAIN DEAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.