IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 21

RESERVED.....................SORRY GUYS I HAD TO EDIT THIS PART.................DUE TO SOME REASON.................WILL POST IT LATER.................DO BARE WITH ME................

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!

The way you described Raj and Naina were looking at each other was just awesome!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is right ke yeh dard ka rista bhi ajeeb hai hotho se nahi magar nazron se sab kuch keh jata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj aur Naina ke dil ka haal bhi unke nazre saaf-saaf bayaan kar rahi hai bas kehne ki der hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina separated but they are still feeling each other's touch!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj toh Naina maine tumse kehte kehte chup ho jaata hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj Naina ke bagair ek pal bhi nahi jee sakta magar phir bhi apne jazbaaton ko dabakar rakha huya hai!!!!!

Even Naina can understand what Raj wants to say!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊But she cannot understand why he is holding it!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

When Raj asked Naina ke woh saree pehenkar chadayi kaise karegi toh usne kaha Raj ko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina said ke Raj ko uski zara bhi parwah nahi hai warna woh uske saath kabhi aisa nahi karta!!!!!

When Raj asked her Naina said woh apne aap se kyun nahi pucchta to which Raj got angry!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj aur Naina ke andar jo tufan chal raha hai you have described it brilliantly!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sahi kaha ke aaj unke in jazbaaton ke toofan ko behne se koi nahi rok sakta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj ne apne jazbaaton ko badi hi mushkil se sambhal kar rakha huya tha lekin ab ish toofan ko aane se koi nahi rok sakta khud khuda bhi nahi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kissed Naina's eyelids and Naina also wants to live this moment to the fullest!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was like a dream come true for Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj bhi usse bahut pyaar se nihaare jaa raha hai!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was sooo romantic and emotional!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Aisa lag raha tha mano jaise ki aaj barso ke lamne intezzar ke baad do premiyon ka milan ho raha ho!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj was about to kiss her when he separated and he is thinking ke woh kya karne jaa raha tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina ki bechaini aur Raj's turmoil was aptly described!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina slips and Raj holds her hand and then helps her in climbing!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

When they reached Point 1857 Raj did not leave her hand aur Naina ko Raj ka uske prati yeh lagaav bahut accha lag raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aaj ish jagah ki khubsoorati aur bhi zyada baad gayi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

The description of Point 1857 was beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Chalte chalte Raj aur Naina ka haath ek dusre se takrata hai aur unhe wahi khubsoorat ehsaas hota hai jo ki kuch der pehle in dono ne mehsus kiya tha aur na jaane kabse mehsus kar rahe hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Nahi Raj Naina se apne dil ki baat keh raha hai aur nahi Naina!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina is looking very beautiful in the pink saree magar sabse zyada yeh Raj ke pyaar ka asar hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj and Naina both are praying at the wishing pillar aur dono ke hi naam ek dusre ke mann mein gunj rahe hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin aaya hai and he is saying ke woh kaise khush ho sakta hai jab ki woh do insaan jinse woh sabse zyada pyaar karta hai woh khush nahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Navin ne Raj se kaha ke woh jaakar Naina se apne pyaar ka izhaar karde!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Undono ki mohabbat ko ek rishtey ke roop mein dekhkar Navin se zyada khushi aur kisi ko nahi hogi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin ne sahi kaha ke Raj aur Naina bas ek dusre ke liye hi bane hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin is the best brother and the best friend anyone could have!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Usne sahi waqt par aakar Raj ko samjhaya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina khaayi ki taraf jaa rahi thi and Raj ran towards her and held her hand!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Magar Naina toh rukhne ko taiyaar hi nahi hai and she is angry at Raj that he is going away and starts crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally Raj confessed his love for Naina and said ke woh usse ek pal bhi dur nahi reh sakta aur usse khona nahi chahta aur usse bahut pyaar karta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina stopped hearing this aru Raj ki taraf apna haath badakar kehti hai ke usse vaada kare ke woh usse kabhi chhodkar nahi jayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj uske hatheli par haath rakhkar kehta hai markar bhi nahi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Achanak Naina ka paon pahadi se phisalne lagta hai ki Raj uska haath tham leta hai and pulls her towards himself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Both are very close to each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiii!!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The scene and their feelings were described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Bijli ki ghagadahat ki awaz se Naina hugged Raj and he hugged her back!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Naina also confessed her love aur kehti hai ke woh bahut pyaar karti hai Raj se!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The proposal at Point 1857 was perfect!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It started raining!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj naughtily said ke lagta hai aaj mausam bhi unpe meherbaan hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina kitna sharma rahi hai magar Raj usse khud se dur nahi jaane de raha hai!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The descripton of Naina's beauty was mindblowing!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj kissed Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was very romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally Raj aur Naina mil gaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The lines were beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

The story was beautiful and a great journey throughout!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Just mindblowing!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was one if the best short stories ever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The lines and descriptions were beautiful and sheer poetry!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏I am speechless!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

It was very touching and steering!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊You are a great writer and a great poet!!!!!👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏

Tumne sahi kaha ke yeh kahani ka anth nahi baalki haseen shuruat hai!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: RSZR

Hiiiii sis very interesting promo..
but yeh raj ko kya hua...?? how dare he speaks to naina like this...
dimmag mein koi chemical locha ho gaya lagta hai...
plsssssssssss ud soon... pata tho chale baat kya hai,..

waitng,,
lots of love
ritu

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIII PRITI VERY INTERESTING PROMO WAITING FOR THE UD
JALDI SE KARO WAISE YE RAJ KO HUYA KYA HAIN NIANA NE AISA BHI KYA KAR DIYA ANYWAYS UD PADKE SAMAJ AA JAAYEHGA AB TOH KAL KA INTEZAR BHI NHAI HO RAHA HAIN..............
LOVE
DEEPA

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hey, I read ur FF just now. Its really beautiful. I'm glad dat u decided to continue further. The promo is interesting. I really wonder wat made Raj talk to Naina like this. I hope he was kidding her.

Anyways, w8ing 4 the next part of 2morrow.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow such a sweet part. Luved the sweet talks btwn Raj-Naina. I hope whoever has cum 4m behing is Raj only.

Anyways w8ing 4 next week's UD.