IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 18

HIIIIII PRITI DEAR! tumhara msg. milte hi maine tumhara FF padhna start kar diya tha. lekin comment kya bhejoon, yahi sochte sochte late ho gayi. actually tumhara yeh whole story comment ka nahin, balki dher sari compliments k layak hai dear. I think tumhe aapni khud k hindi novels likhna suru kar dena chahiye. matlab itne acche se tum ne RN k feelings HINDI main express kiya hai k........JUST MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh to koi professional writer hi kar sakta hai dear. Ab ud par aati hoon.... mujhe laga jab tum yeh ud likh rahi thi , tum ne aapne ears main ear phones lagaya hoga. jiska ek connection RAJ k dil k pas aur dushra connection NAINA k dil k pas tha . tabhi to tum un k dil k dhadkanon k awaz ko itni aachi tarah se describe karpayi..... UR STORY IS JUST UNFORGETTABLE.----priya

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CANT B DESCRIBED IN WORDS...........M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS.......⭐️⭐️⭐️

WAT N BEAUTIFUL WAY TO NARRATE D EMOTIONS N BEAUTIFUL LINES BY U......

IT WAS SHORT N VERY SWEET FIC BY U........

TOOO GOOD👏

Originally posted by: aarsow

excelent,lovely fantastic,super,wonderful,mavellous n fabulous,

itz realy gud n i'm at loss of words,

awesummmmmmmmmmmm,



Aarthi

Originally posted by: rlrl

Kya kahun,kuch nahin hai mere pass,par sab tujhe emotional comments denge hi par ek baat yaar tune Urdu ka istemal bahat kiya hai jo ki mujhe thoda kam samajh me aya.

par aur kuch keh nahin sakti .sach mere liye sab kuch tham gaya ye puri kaynat bhi tham gayi.love u yaaaaaaarrrr.aj kuch kaha nahi jayega .bas.riti.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

HI Priti Howz life???????U know when i read this last part it was so natural n gud dat i felt dat a person shud love some1 atleast once to feel this magic..U ran exeptiopnal writer u already know dis fact so coming on the update it was brilliant..U r so gud in writing such pure hindi n Urdu it takes me somtime to uderstand the tatal sentence..It seems kisi professional shayar ne likah hai..N last ki lines tumahri thi.....They were so perfect n mindblowing..Just loved the way propose each other n point 1857 is just soo romantic..even the ambience was so gud..Everything seems to touch your soul n move u....Its gud dat Raj realize dat he is incomplete without Naina... Just loved it..Overall it was really outstanding

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Preeti nice awesome and mai kya kahoo pata nahi. 😃 i am speechless this time. 👏 Well done.

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
the whole fiction was awesome

Originally posted by: RSZR

hiii sis aaj tho comment kare bina nahi reh paayi.....kal mera exam hai but iss part ko padhkar dil ruk nahi paaya😛... agar aaj aap mere saamne hote naa tho main aapko gale se laga leti🤗... this part was jus awesome............ i jus praise u for this part👏👏... sirf iske liye hi nahi sabhi parts ke liya.👏.... itne achi script.. i was jus suprised.. ?aap bahut acha likhte ho⭐️.. had soft to u.. the dialogues were jus mindblowing.. ?
mujhe aisa laga ki aaj aapne apne dil saari baatein iss part mein likh di.... ek baat kahu iss part ko maine apne comp mein save kar diya hai....
u r the best👍🏼... thankss for this lovely ff... aakhir raj-naina ka milan ho hi gaya.. iss dil ko ek sukoon mil gaya...😊?i am vry vry vry happy...

????????????????????????????????????????????lots lots lots of love
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????ritu😊