IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29.

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swati

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Posted: 17 years ago

#161

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#162

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CANT B DESCRIBED IN WORDS...........M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS.......⭐️⭐️⭐️

WAT N BEAUTIFUL WAY TO NARRATE D EMOTIONS N BEAUTIFUL LINES BY U......

IT WAS SHORT N VERY SWEET FIC BY U........

TOOO GOOD👏

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aarthi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#163

excelent,lovely fantastic,super,wonderful,mavellous n fabulous,

itz realy gud n i'm at loss of words,

awesummmmmmmmmmmm,

Aarthi

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Riti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#164

Kya kahun,kuch nahin hai mere pass,par sab tujhe emotional comments denge hi par ek baat yaar tune Urdu ka istemal bahat kiya hai jo ki mujhe thoda kam samajh me aya.

par aur kuch keh nahin sakti .sach mere liye sab kuch tham gaya ye puri kaynat bhi tham gayi.love u yaaaaaaarrrr.aj kuch kaha nahi jayega .bas.riti.

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 17 years ago

#165

HI Priti Howz life???????U know when i read this last part it was so natural n gud dat i felt dat a person shud love some1 atleast once to feel this magic..U ran exeptiopnal writer u already know dis fact so coming on the update it was brilliant..U r so gud in writing such pure hindi n Urdu it takes me somtime to uderstand the tatal sentence..It seems kisi professional shayar ne likah hai..N last ki lines tumahri thi.....They were so perfect n mindblowing..Just loved the way propose each other n point 1857 is just soo romantic..even the ambience was so gud..Everything seems to touch your soul n move u....Its gud dat Raj realize dat he is incomplete without Naina... Just loved it..Overall it was really outstanding

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#166

Preeti nice awesome and mai kya kahoo pata nahi. 😃 i am speechless this time. 👏 Well done.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago

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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 17 years ago

#167

damn cool
the whole fiction was awesome

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RITU

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Posted: 17 years ago

#168

hiii sis aaj tho comment kare bina nahi reh paayi.....kal mera exam hai but iss part ko padhkar dil ruk nahi paaya😛... agar aaj aap mere saamne hote naa tho main aapko gale se laga leti🤗... this part was jus awesome............ i jus praise u for this part👏👏... sirf iske liye hi nahi sabhi parts ke liya.👏.... itne achi script.. i was jus suprised.. aap bahut acha likhte ho⭐️.. had soft to u.. the dialogues were jus mindblowing..
mujhe aisa laga ki aaj aapne apne dil saari baatein iss part mein likh di.... ek baat kahu iss part ko maine apne comp mein save kar diya hai....
u r the best👍🏼... thankss for this lovely ff... aakhir raj-naina ka milan ho hi gaya.. iss dil ko ek sukoon mil gaya...😊i am vry vry vry happy...

lots lots lots of love
ritu😊

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#169

that was so beautiful just awesome

thanku for such a lovely fic

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sana

@sanabmw

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Posted: 17 years ago

#170

hii priti..

h r u ?

hmm to FF ka end ho gaya 😭😭end accha kiya tumne but mujhe ek pro hai ..tumne FF k end part main RN ki lines bahot kam rakhi thi i mean background main voice jayada thi unke dailogs kam the jo mujhe accha nahin laga,yaha RN k dil ki feelings kam nazar aayi agar tum unke dailog jayada rakhati to aur jayada accha hota😊😊

but yeh tumhaara writing style hai yeh bhi accha hai😊aur end main naveen ka part bahot accha tha aur raj ka naina ko end main kahena k woh usse pyaar karata hai sab best tha..bahot accha FF tha yeh 👏very nice dear....tum bahot accha likhati ho....hamesha aisehi likhati rahena...aur tumhaari last ki lines bahot acchi thi.😳

lots of love

sana😛

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