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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 17 years ago

#101

Hiiii,
update is just toooooo good. it's so touchy.😭 n i mean it. the way Naina reacted it's touvh my heart, am waiting for next update on hope that point 1857 help's RN to confess thier feeling's.........😊

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 17 years ago

#102

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII HOPE U R ROCKING

UR UD IS MIND BLOWING, TOO GOOD ,AWSOOOOOOOME,

FANTASTIC,TOUCHING

REAL LRL KI YAAD DILADI RULA DIYA YAAR

AB AAGE KYA BOLU

I AM JUST SPEECHLESS

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UD

LOVE DEEP.

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jane

@george eliot

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Posted: 17 years ago

#103

hi dear,

sorry was busy with my own fic too much, and got a writer's block😆 so sorry for the late reply, ur update is absolutely amazing, brilliant description, tooo touching scenes, wonderful re-creation of emotions, i loved the way you portrayed both their minds, love's best when it's there and yet not confessed, that makes it sooooooooooo intense..........

keep updating, eager to read what happens next

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Riti

@-Reeti-

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#104

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Priti Dear Ud bahat achha tha ki kya kahun mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki iska aur ek part bhi hai .jo ki tum age jakar UD karogi hai na okkk par yaar itna emotional part kaise likhi ho mujhe bahat rona araha tha par royi nahin hehehe.😉 par han tum sach me bahat azyada emo part likhti ho.

Ab Raj -Naina point 1857 par kya karenge m sure un dono ka ek Hug scene to hoga hi undono me confession to hoga hi sach jaldi d karna okk jaldii se kardena .par yaar ye Raj kyun nahin bolta naina ko
bahat sochta hai ye Raj 😆 😆 😆

I hopw ki Next Ud me In dono ka confession hojayega jaldi se Ud karna okkk fasssttt.ok bye TC plzzzzz update Soon lots of love . Riti 😛

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swati

@sweta2005

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+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#105

aawesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

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sana

@sanabmw

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#106

hey priti.......

what a UD dear.....😃

raj naina ki baat se shock hota hai aur naina bechaari sad hai ..waise RN dono sad hai bas bol nahin rahe ..aur raj ki feelings tumne bade acche se batai hai mujhe bahot accha laga....aur abhi ki line k zarurat nahin padegi hmm sahi kaha usane...😊😊aur ab naina raj k saath point 1857 par jayegi i m sure waha se dono saath hi aayege..😳very nice UD dear....👏👏

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 17 years ago

#107

Hi!!Priti!!😊
Hope you are fine dear!!😛
What an update sweety!!!!!!👏👏👏
👏
So much of emotions😭....so much of pain embedded in the hearts of both these lovers...😭😭😭.
I am spellbound!!!👍🏼
I am sure ki yeh unki rishtey ka anth nehi hai.....😊

Waiting to see what happens on pt 1857!!!!!!😛
Continue soon!!!!
Take care.

love
Riya.