IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 10

hii priti sis lovely update... dialogues were jus minblowing... waiting for the next one..

love
ritu

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Originally posted by: RSZR

hii priti sis lovely update... dialogues were jus minblowing... waiting for the next one..

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HII RITU DEAR THANX A LOT FOR UR COMMENTS SWEETY, I AM GLAD KI TUMNE WAQT NIKAL KAR COMMENT KIYA SWEETY, AND YES AGAIN ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS DEAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

THANX SHAINA DEAR.

Raj sahi nahi kar raha hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Ush badnami se darr kar Naina se dur jaa raha hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 HAAN SO TOH HAI.PAR RAJ IS REALLU WORRIED FOR NAINA.

I understand ke jaisa Navin ne kaha Raj yeh bardaast nahi kar sakta ke Naina par koi ungli bhi uthaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊DEFINITLY.

I loved the way Aalekh ne jaise Naina ko sambhala!!! 😛 😛 😛He is the best!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊YES HE IS DEAR.

Aalekh ne bilkul sahi kaha Naina se ke usse jaake bata dena chahiye Raj ko!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He even guessed the reason for Raj's behaviour!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 YES HE DID.

Abhimanyu went and tackled Raj!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Sahi pakda usne Raj ko!!!!

AUR KYA PAKDA HAI RIGHT.

Raj toh yaha se jana chahta hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Very bad!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒SAD NA

Abhimanyu ne sahi kaha ke dil ki baat dimaag se nahi sochi jaati!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊YES.

Kaun aaya waha pe??😕 😕 😕 😕I think it is Naina!!!😊 😊 😊 😊LET'S SEE.

I hope now they confess their love to each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊ME TOO.

WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

PART 5

Darwaza khulta hai aur naina saamne khadi rehti hai.

RAJ-naina..........i mean cadet singh.

ABHI-achcha raj toh ab hum chalte hain, magar humari baaton par gaur zaroor farmana.

Aur itna kehkar abhi raj ko hug karta hai.

RAJ-agar zindagi rahi toh phir milenge chauhan.

ABHI-humein nahin lagata ki iski zaroorat padegi.

RAJ-(chaunk kar)-kyun?

ABHI-kyunki..........

Itna kehkar abhi ek baar naina ki taraf dekhta hai.

ABHI-(smile karte hue)-samajhdaar ke liye ishaara hi kaafi hota hai.

Abhi ki baat sunkar raj ek baar naina ki taraf dekhta hai.

Aur itna kehkar abhi wahan se jaane lagata hai.

NAINA-good evening sir.

ABHI-(smile karte hue)-good evening naina.

Itna kehkar abhi wahan se chala jaata hai.

Ab raj aur naina ek doosre ko dekh rahein hain.

RAJ-kuch kaam tha cadet singh?

NAINA-jii sir who main aapse kuch kehna.........

Magar isse pehle ki naina apni baat poori karti ki uski nazar raj ke suitcase aur samaan par padti hai.

NAINA-(chaunk kar)-sir yeh sab…... aap kahin jaa rahein hain kya?

RAJ-(seriously)-haan, actually mera transfer ho gaya hai delhi mein, aur waise bhi yahan par main jis mission par aaya tha who bhi toh poora ho chuka hai.

NAINA-sir aap wapas kab lautenge?

RAJ-wapas, tumne shayad thik se suna nahin maine jo kaha, mera transfer ho chuka hai naina, ab main kabhie wapas nahin aayunga.

NAINA-(with tears in her eyes)-kya?

Aur phir khud ko samhaalte hue, aur apne aansoon ko chupate hue.

NAINA-toh sir aapki flight kitne baje ki hai?

Raj chaunk kar naina ki taraf dekhta hai.

NAINA-aapko toh nikalna bhi hoga na, layiye main aapki help kar deti hoon packing karne mein.

Aur itna kehkar naina raj ka saara samaan pack karne mein jut jaati hai.

Naina ki baat sunkar raj ek dum shock ho jaata hai, aur woh use dekhta hi rehta hai, phir apne mann mein sochta hai.

RAJ-(to himself)-maine itni badi baat keh di, lekin naina ko toh koi farak hi nahin pada, mujhe toh laga tha ki shayad woh….....magar lagta hai ki mere hone na hone se naina ko zara sa bhi farak nahin padta hai,varana who is tarah se normally behave nahin karti, who mujhse zaroor..........khair koi baat nahin, ab main shayad chain se jaa sakunga.

Aur yeh sab sochte-sochte raj ki palkein bhi nam ho jaati hain.

NAINA-sir aapki saari packing kar di hai maine, ab aapko yahan se jaane mein zara si bhi takleef nahin hogi, phir bhi aap ek baar check zaroor kar lijiyega ki, sab kuch thik hai ki nahin, kahin kuch chut na jaaye aapse, actually kabhie-kabhie, kuch kimti cheezein chut jaati hain pichein, aur jiske liye humein zindagi bhar pachtaana padta hai, kyunki ek baar jab hum aage bhad jaate hain, toh phir wapas piche lautna kaafi mushkil ho jaata hai, magar mujhe pata hai ki aapke saath aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga.

Naina ki baatein raj ke mann mein teer ki tarah chubh rahi hoti hain, magar phir bhi who zara sa bhi react nahin karta hai, aur apne dil ke dard ko apne dil hi mein chupa leta hai, halaki raj ke chehre se saaf-saaf pata chal raha hota hai ki, uski mann ki uljhanein kam hone ka naam hi nahin le rahi hoti hain, use dekh kar aisa lagta hai ki mano, woh apne dil aur dimag ke beech mein buri tarah se ulajh chuka hai, aur laakh koshishon k baad bhi is uljhan se bahar nahin nikal paa raha hai.

NAINA-sir…...kya hua? Any prob.

RAJ-(chaunk kar)-haan…...nahin koi prob. Nahin hai, bas kuch soch raha tha.

NAINA-kya sir?

RAJ-kuch khaas nahin, bas aise hi.

NAINA-ok sir toh ab main chalti hoon, warna aap tyayaar kaise honge, aur aapko nikalna bhi toh hai.

RAJ-(turant)-abhi thoda waqt hai mere nikalne mein, meri flight raat ke 10:00 baje ki hai.

NAINA-oh, ok sir toh phir batayiye ki aur koi help chahyiye aapko, kuch aur packing wagerah karne ke liye.

RAJ-nahin sabkuch toh pack ho chuka hai, ab kuch nahin bacha hai rakhne ke liye.

NAINA-ok sir toh phir main chalti hoon.

Aur naina jaise hi jaane ke liye turn karti hai ki raj use rokta hai.

RAJ-naina…

NAINA-jii sir…

RAJ-tum shayad kuch kehne aayi thi mujhse, aur ab bina kahe hi jaa rahi ho.

NAINA-koi khaas baat nahin thi sir, bas yuhin.

RAJ-batao na naina kya baat hai?

NAINA-maine kaha na sir ki aisi koi bhi baat nahin hai, main toh bas aise hi…

RAJ-aise hi kya naina?

NAINA-actually sir aaj mera point 1857, par jaane ka bahut mann kar raha tha,toh isiliye main aapke paas aayi thi, ki shayad aap bhi mere saath…magar mujhe nahin pata tha ki meri yeh khwaish adhuri hi reh jaayegi.

RAJ-tumhari khwaish zaroor poori hogi naina, see u at sharp 19:00 hrs.

NAINA-thanky sir.

Aur itna kehkar naina raj ke room se chali jaati hai.

Aur raj ek tak bas naina ko jaate hue dekhta hi rehta hai.

NAV-(at the background)-kya yeh raj aur naina ke is khubsoorat rishtey ka ant hai, ya phir......yeh toh mujhe bhi nahin pata.

END OF PART 5.PLZZZZZZZZZZZ DO COMMENT.

😭💔😭pata hai priti tumne mujhe rulaaya hai iss ud mein....sach mein main ro rahi hoon......iska matlab pata hai kya hai......ki mujhe tumhaara ud bhut pasand aaya aur mujhe pata hai ki next ud mein main bhut khush hone waaali hoon...............arre raj aur naina point1857 jo jaaa rahe hain.❤️.....ab jaldi se next ud karo warna zor se gussa karoongi...........hahahahahahaha.......just kidding......but seriously i just loved dis ud and i hv high hopes 4m d next........

simply awesome...............very very nicely described emotions

Raj is really getting on my nerves now..Why is he so sacrificing always n hurting the other person i'e Naina??????