IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 9

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was so good

but raj kahi sach main chala na jaaye

plz continue soon

HII PRERNA THANX A LOT FOR UR SWEET REPLIES DEAR, I AM GLAD.

DEKHEN KI RAJ KYA KARTA HAI?

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

PRITI.

Originally posted by: srojaleen

hi,i am new .waise aap k fic k bare main ek sher araz hai k..."dawa bhi kam na aaye, koi dua na lage,mere khuda kisi ko aap ke fic k aadat na lage😆" i am ur big fan.......a.c....... no somthing high.

HII SWEETY SABSE PEHLE TUMHARA TAHE DIL SE SWAGAT HAI IF AUR MERE FF PAR BHI DEAR, AB SHUKRIYA TUMHARE ITNE PYAARE-PYAARE COMMENTS KE LIYE DEAR, AUR IS ITNE KHUBSOORAT SHER KE LIYE BHI, YEH SHER PADH KAR TOH MAIN BHI TUMHARI FAN BAN GAYI HOON, THANX A LOT. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Priti,
such nice update dear!
i luved the convo. of Abhi n Raj. it just tooooo good.but u stoped at very intersting point so am waiting for next update.plzzzzzzzz do it asap.

HII NAMITA DEAR THANX A LOT FOR UR SWEET COMMENTS SWEETY, I AM GLAD DEAR.U LIKED THE WHOLE UD THANX DEAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

hey priti...h r u ?

Originally posted by: sanabmw

hey priti...h r u ?

sorry main late ho gayi but aajkal ramzaan hai na to time bahot kam milata hai...😭😭

but maine aaj hi UD read kiya aur sach bahot accha laga mujhe...😃

saare scenes bade acche se likhe hai tumne..😳😳

naina aur aalekh ka scene bahot accha tha aalekh ka naina ko samajhaana mujhe accha laga.😊

aur abhi aur raj ka scene bhi accha tha..dailog bahot acche aur real the👏superbbbb

vv nice UD dear....👏

lots of love

sana😛

HII SANA DEAR I AM FINE SWEETY, AND I HOPE THAT U R ALSO FINE TOO, IT'S OK DEAR DON'T SAY SORRY PLZZZ, TYOHAAR TOH SAAL MEIN EK HI BAAR AATA HAI, AUR HUMEIN USE PORE DIL SE MANANA HI CHAYIYE, KYUN SAHI KAHA NA MAINE, TUMHE UD PASAND AAYA, AUR AALEKH, NAINA, AUR RAJ-ABHI KE SCENES BHI ACHCHE LAGE, THANX A LOT SWEETY, I AM GLAD. WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

PRITI.

HI PRITI I LIKE UR FICTION I HAVE NEWLY JOINED HERE I AM A BIG FAN OF RAJEEV. I AM ALSO STARTING A NEW FF ON RAJEEV AND PRIYANKA i HOPE U WILL LIKE IT.

Hi!!Priti!!!

Originally posted by: khushuwhitcom

HI PRITI I LIKE UR FICTION I HAVE NEWLY JOINED HERE I AM A BIG FAN OF RAJEEV. I AM ALSO STARTING A NEW FF ON RAJEEV AND PRIYANKA i HOPE U WILL LIKE IT.

HII KHUSHBOO THANX A LOT FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS , I AM GLAD. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!Priti!!!

Sorry dear for the late reply.

The update is tooo good.Absolutely brilliant.

Par yeh Raj aisa kyun hai???😭😭

Why does he has to hurt Naina time and again???!!!!😭😭

I hope4 Naina is baar apni dil ki baat bol de😕😛

You are too good.

You are capable of portraying emotions very well

Continue soon dear.....

thanks for such a great update.

Take care.

love

Riya

HII RIYA DEAR THANX A LOT FOR UR SUCH LOVELY-LOVELY COMMENTS SWEETY, I AM REALLY TOUCHED, AND I WAS EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS TOO SWEETY, TUMHE MERA LIKHNE KA TAREEKA AUR EMOTIONS KA PORTRAYAL ACHCHA LAGA THANX DEAR, I AM GLAD, UR ALWAYS WELCOME SWEETY.AND TAKE CARE TOO. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

superb.cont soon....

HII VARSHA THANKY SO MUCH FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS DEAR, I AM GLAD. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.