DIL DEWANA (A FAN FICTION) - Page 3

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wowwwwwwwwww sidra 👏 its really greattttttttttttt 👏 👏
can't wait 4 next part so plzzzzzz write soon 😃
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Sidro it's tooooooo good.Continue soon. 👏
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Sorry friends I m a little late 2 post my fan fic :

Here is the next part of my fan fic "Dil dewana" enjoy!!!

Recap: Bhumi comes 2 Goenka house.

Episode#5

Now Bhumika is the room crying and missing her dad & brother shaku come:

Shaku: beta Bhumi tum abh tak ro rahi ho !

Bhumi: maaji kya karon baba ki buhat yaad aarahi hai

S: beta abhi to sirf ek din howa hai aur tum abh hi rorahi ho.bhumi tum ko kya iss ghar main koi problem hai?

B: nahi maaji!

S: toh phir?

B: maaji abh mai aap koh kasae samjhaon!

S: beta mai kuch samujhna chahiti tum kush raha karo

B:maaji jesa aap chahen

S: Bhumi aao kana ka lo!

B:gii

Now friends the fan fic hero 1 and hero 2 I mean that Arjun and Suraj come 2 home. They enter the home and baisa and shruti are sitting in the hall

A: baisa ! hi

S:namaste baisa!

Baisa: jete raho tum dona!

Shruti: hello my sweet brothers !

Arjun and Suraj 2 gether:

A & S: hiiii

Shruti: bhaiya aap dono jantee hai kai Vasudev uncle aaye thae

A: kyun Vasudev uncle ???

Suraj: kahin papa kai dost Vasudev toh nahi!

Shruti: good guess bhaiya

Suraj: kahan hai who ?

Shruti: bhaiya who toh Dubai chalae gaee magar aapni beti Bhumika koh yahan chordh gae

Atjun: Bhumika?? I have heard this name some where kahan kahan?

Shruti:bhaiya Bhumi now remember!

A:ooh ! maa har waqt eh naam leti rehti hai na

Suraj: right

Now Suraj and Arjun go to their room. Arjun and suraj's rooms are in different direction. now Arjun passes from bhumis room and then comes inside. bhumi is standing in the window she was a little sad;

A: helloo?!?!

Bhumi then turns guys our hero is just amazed 2 see the beautiful Bhumi and was just staring and staring and staring. His eyes just could not move from bhumi's face he was just crazy about her now Bhumi sees the person who was very handsome she was also amazed 2 see Arjun then suddenly Bhumi said:

B: namaste!!

Then Arjun forward his hand 2 shake hand but Bhumi did namaste like joining the 2 hands now Arjun is still forwards his land and says:

A: haath mila ligea ghabraeye mat yeh haatn mai hamesha kailiae nahi pakhro gaa

Bhumi feels a little shy the she also shakes hand

Arjun gives a dashing kind of look Bhumi and Bhumi gives a cute smile now shruti comes

Shruti: oh ho yahan kya horahai? Aap log toh kudh hi introduce ho gaye

A: yar shruti tum nai bataya nahi keh humarea ghar itni kubsoorat larki aae hai

S: oooooooooh!

Bhmui then starts 2 be a little frank now Bhumi says:

B: shruti tum nai nahi bataya tha keh tumhare Arjun bhayiya itnae acchae hain

A; who toh mai hon hie by the way thanks

S: oh hello mai bhi yahan hon meri koi tariff nahi kare ga kya?

B: arrae tum toh sab sae pyari ho

A; yeh tum nai kya kaha boot koh pyara kaha!

S: bhaiya I will kill u ?

Bhumi then laughs. Then Suraj come

Suraj: yeh kya horaha hai?

Arjun & Shruti stop

Suraj: namaste bhumika mai Suraj hon

bhumi: namaste Suraj ji !

Suraj: mai

Then Arjun interrupts

A: hum bate hai! Yeh hai Suraj Goenka humare big brother aur humare dad kae sab sae pyare

Suraj: Arjun

Then shaku comes

Shaku: arrae tum log yahn ho Bhumi yeh Arjun hai aur Arjun yeh …………

A: maa hum nae milea hai hai bhavri ji sae

Bhumi[kind of alarmed]: bhavri kyun?

A: maa abh bhavri koh bhavri nahi kahane gae toh kya kahane gae

B: maa Arjun koh dekhyea na !

Shaku: tum loga ki abhi sae laraee shurro ho gae hai !

A: maa I am just teasing her!

Shaku: chalo kahna ka loo

All 4 Arjun, Bhumi , Suraj & Shruti say together : ok [in a loud voice]

Precap: Bhumi Arjun go out

Guys hope u enjoy this part please post comments about it

Love

Sidra

Edited by sidroobaba25 - 19 years ago
..priya.. thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwww sidra 👏
write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its greatttttttttttt 👏 sidra and post the next part soon
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wow.. that was very very very nice.. 👏
read all the episodes together now... its really extremly good.. waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue story i am waiting for the next part

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