DIL DEWANA (A FAN FICTION) - Page 2

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Hi guys now I will write the next part of my fan fic & thanx 4 those comments! Here we go now:

S: ajay papa yeh baat sun kar buhat kush hon gae.

Secretary: yes sir he sure will.

S: tum ga sakte ho!

Secretary :thank you sir !

When the secretary went out of the room then Mansen entered Suraj's cabin.

M: Suraj beta kasae ho ?

S: oh papa I am fine! Arjun kaesa hai I am sorry dad mai aa nahi saka actually who mai...

M: Suraj beta its ok ! waisae Arjun tum sae buhat naraz hai ga kar usko mana lo!

S: dad aap kaliae ek khush khabri[good news] hai.

M: woh kya?

S: dad humae humara dream project mil gaya.

M: kya ?

S: yes dad congratulations !

M: beta yeh sub tumhari mehnat ka natiga hai!

S: thanx dad!

M: well done my son [then they hug]

At the time someone knocks at the door

S: come in !

A man having long hair, having a file in one hand and with lots of arrogant and dark expressions enter the room [guys he is the son of devnatt the one and only YUVRAJ ]

Y; may I come in?

M: beta Yuvraj aao na .

S: kya baat hai yuv ?

Y: kuch nahi bus tunhe congratulate karna tha.

S: oh thanx !

Y: no need ! uncle suna hai keh Arjun aaya hai.

Y[in heart] :aagya mr London .dad toh Shefali koh uskae pechae hi laga dae gae.

M: Yuvraj kya soch rahe ho ????

Y: woh! woh! woh! uncle kuch nahi.

S: dad mujhae Arjun sae abhi milna hai mai aap ko ghar per milon ga.

M: ok beta.

S: bye yuv see u at home.

Y: Suraj Arjun ko meri taraf sae hi kehna.

S: ok yar

Then Suraj arrives at home, he enters the hall baisa and shakuntala are sitting over there.

S: maa Arjun kahan hai?

Shakuntala: beta woh apne room mia hai.

S: maa condition toh under control hai na keh nahi?

Shakuntala: beta, Arjun buhat gousay[angry] mae hai!

S: no worries maa mai usko mana lo ga.

Shakuntala: I hope so beta!

Then shruti enters

Shruti: bhaiya ! thank god u are here Arjun bhaiya aap sae naraz hain

S: I will handle him !

Shruti: good luck bhaiya !

Now Suraj is standing on the door of arjuns room, when he heard:

A: dekh loga mujhe lene airport nahi aaya, aur na hii ek phone kia keh pouch lon kai mera bahi kaisa hai lakin nahi, kasam kha rakhi hai keh aapne bahi sae nahi milo ga!

A: bus aane doo dekh longa. Mai uski band baga doo ga !

S [in soft voice]: Arjun !

A: oh aage aap ab yaad kesae aagae, mujh ko lanea airport nahi aa sake kaamaz kum ek phone hi kar detea magar nahi tum ko bahi ki fiqar thodea hai!

S: arrae yar sorry!

A: abh sorry maat kaho!

S: my sweet brother I am really really really sorry!

A: ok its alright !

Then they hug each other.

Now friend I am taking the story 2 the rural area . there is a beautiful village and its name is RAMPUR. There is a little cottage, very beautifully decorated, from the puja ghar the voice of a girl singing OM JAI JAGDESH is coming

Vasudev (VD): beta keshav !!! Puja kaliae aa jao!

A man of really cute appearance came down from the stairs[friends this is keshav vasudev's son]

K: gii baba mai aa gaya.

VD: beta aao puja main bethaen[sit]

A girl is doing the arti Vasudev and keshav came and sat in the puja.

A girl wearing red and maroon shalwar kamiz, with open hair, wearing bangles in both hands ,she has beautihul eye having puja thali in both hands and is extremely beautiful ,she then turns .[guys this is the heroine of the story(Bhumika)]

PRECAP: Entry of Shefali and Vasudev and Bhumika come 2 the Goenka House.

Guys I hope u will like it

Plz post comments !!!

Enjoy

Sidra.

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can't wait 4 next part 😉

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Hi guys I am posting the next part of my fan fic here we go now

Bhumi: babuji apni dawai [medicine] lagea ga!

VD:Bhumi beti kasi ho tum?

B: aap kae samnae hon.

In the same time keshav came in with a letter in his hands

K: Baba! Baba!

B: bhaiya kya hoa?

K: Bhumi tum ganti nahi keh kya ho.

VD: beta kuch batoo bhi!

K: Baba hum nae his company mai kaam kalie apply kia tha uska letter aya hai.

VD: arrae wah beta!!

B: baba yeh sab kya ho raha hai?

VD: beta hum sab bekar bethe rahtae hai iss liae Dubai mai kaam kailea apply kia tha.

B: Dubai kaliae……

VD: Bhumi beti dekhna iss keabadd ramari sari problems hal ho gae gi mai tumhare liae buhat kush hon!

K: baba hum dono ko Dubai jana hoga takriban [about] ek sal kaile.

B: Baba agar app aur bhaiya Dubai chale gaega toh mera kya hoga?????

K: Oh! Baba hum ne iss kai bare main socha na tha

VD: beta tum ne nahi soch tha magar main e soch tha!

Keshav and Bhumi together: woh kya??????????

VD: Bhumi beta mera ek buhat acha dost Mumbai mia hai uska naam Mansen Goenka hai.

B: baba Mansen uncle toh buhat ammir hai na!

VD: beta woh chahe kitna hi ammir kyou na ho woh mera sab se accha dost hai.

K: gi baba aap nai belkul sahi fesala[decision] liya hai.

B: baba mai aap ka bager kasi zinda rahon gi.

VD: beta isse baat nahi karte!

K: Bhumi dekho hum sirf ek saal kailie hi toh ga rahe hai.tum apna khayal rakhna!

B: baba Mansen uncle ke bare mia kuch baatiya.

VD: beta Mansen mera sab sae accha aur purana dost hai humari dosti kabhi nahi tut sakti. Beta jab woh aur mai ek class mia saath saath thae toh Mansen ka itna bura waqt tha keh uskae pass apni kitabn[books] lanae kae bhi pessea nahi the lakin ab waqt badal chukka hai.

K: baba aap aur Mansen uncle alag kese hoea?

VD: keshav waqt issa tha keh Mansen ko apnea future ko kudh hi banana tha iss lia woh muje se alag ho kar sheaher[city] chala gaya. Shakuntala bhabi aur Mansen ki shadi gaun[village] main hoi. bhabi ji buhat acchi aur samaghdar hain.

Now Vasudev talks 2 bhumi:

VD: Bhumi beta jub tum choti thi aur tumhari maa ki moot [death] hoi thi toh bhabi ji nai tum ko 2 hafta [week] sambhala tha. Yeh bhabi ji ka tum per sab sa bardh[big] uubkar hai!

B: babuji mai aapke aur bhaiya kai bina nahi reh sakti

K: Bhumi be positive! Tum theek rahoo gie.

Now lets take the story 2 Goenka house:

Arjun: dad kahan hai?

Suraj: office! Aur kahan!

A: soch rahoon mai bhi office chala jaon.

S: Arjun yar r u ok?

A; why??

S: tumhare office jane ki baat buhat aggeb lagi!

A: very funny !

A[shouting]: maa mai office jar aha hon dad sa milnae.

At the same time a car stops at the Goenka house. from the car comes out a very pretty girl wearing black trouser and red shirt this girl is wearing shades and is twisting the car keys in her right hand. Guys this is non other then Shefali ,daughter of Devnatt.

Now friends shakuntala, baisa, shurit are in the hall.

Shefali: aunty ji aunty ji how r u ?

Shaku:beta theek hon tum kaisi ho?

Shruti: maa Arjun bhaiya kae aane ka sun ker theek hogae ho gi.

Shaku: shruti beta !!!

Shefali: it ok aunty.

Shefali: aunty Arjun kahan hai

Now shruti turns 2 baisa:

Shruti [whispering]: I told u na!!

Baisa then laughted

Now Arjun & Suraj came down 2 go office

Shefali : Arjun !!!!!!!!!!! my sweet Arjun!

Shefali: I missed u a lot!

Arjun: Shefali its ok now can u plz stop hugging me!

Suraj 2 Arjun

Suraj :yar Arjun aab tuh kaie gae gay eh miss Shefali tugh koh jane nahi dae ge!

Arjun: lets bet!

Suraj : what

Arjun: woh mujh ko janae dagi ya nahi !

Suraj: ok man!

Arjun: 1,2,3 go

Shefali: Arjun mai tum ko kahi nahi gane dou gi!

Arjun: Shefali I have 2 go!

Shefali: no no no no!

Arjun: mujhe devnatt uncle se milna tha.

Shefali : why?

Arjun: u should know why!

Shefali becomes a little shy

Shefali: Ok theek hai!

Arjun: bye!

Shefali gives Arjun a flying kiss but Arjun ignores.

Now Arjun is gone and then Shefali talks 2 shruti

Shefali: shruti u think he loves me ?

Shruti: no defiantly no !

Shefali: u know woh dad se shadi ki baat karne gaya hai!

Shruti: what yeh tum se kis ne keh diya?

Shefali: I donot know about shadi but woh dad se milne gaya hai!

Shruti: no way Shefali yar Suraj bhaiya phele se Arjun bhaiya ko mere dad ke pas legane ka plan kar rehe thei.

Shefai [shocked]: what !!!!!!

Shruti: poor Shefali bhaiya made u a fool !! hahahahahaha

Now Arjun and Suraj together

Arjun: I told u I will win the bet!

Suraj: ok ok u win! Happy !

Arjun: very much !

Now friends Bhumi, keshav and Vasudev are coming 2 goenka house. Bhumika is now standing on the gate of Goenka house.

Precap: Vasudev & keshav go 2 Dubai.

Plsssssssss post soon the next part can't wait for Bhumi's entry and BTW all the parts are beautiful 👏

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plzzzzz post soon

Hi guys thanx 4 comments here is the next part of my fan fiction enjoy:

RECAP: Bhumika comes 2 Goenka house.

Bhumi: baba mujhe buhat darr lag raha hai!

Vasudev: Bhumi beta iss mae daarne ki kya baat hai! Mansen mera bachpan ka dost hai tumhe uss kae ghar koi problem nahi ho gi !

Keshav: baba Mansen uncle aab buhat bardhe [big] aadni ba chokae hain woh aap ko bhule na chokae hon.

VD:keshav issa kabhi nahi ho sakta. Mansen kae burae waqt mae main e uska saath diya tha aur usne mera who issa kabhi nahi kar sakta.

Then the watchman comes:

Watchman: aap ko kis sae milna hai??

VD: Mansen Goenka sae.

Watchman: aap yahan wait kigea mai dekh kar aata hon!

K: magar !!

Watchman: sir aap ko wait karna hoga !!!

VD: beta rukh jatee hain!

K: gii baba!

Bhumi is a little scared

K: Bhumi yar daarne ki koi baat nahi hai

B: bhaiya aap kailea yeh sab kehna asan hai magar…..

When Bhumi was talking 2 keshav watchman came

Watchman: sir mai nae aap ka shakuntala madam ko bataya hai woh aap ko andar bula rahi hain!

VD: shukriya [thanx]

Now when three of them enter the hall of Goenka house they are amazed by its beauty, suddenly baisa and shakuntala came from a room

Shakuntala: bhai sahib! Kasea hai aap [with a lot of happiness which shakuntala cannot explain] bhai sahib aap jantae nahii keh mai aap ko dekh kar kitni kush hon!

Baisa: beta Vasudev itnae salon bade tum ko dekh kar dil ko buhat sakon mila

S: bhai sahib aap…….

Suddenly keshav spoke from behind Vasudev

K: namaste aunty ji !!!

S: beta tum ……..

Now shakuntla 2 VD

S: bhai sahib yeh keshav hai na!

VD: gi babhi ji aap ka hi keshav hai yeh !

VD then forwards Bhumi and says

VD: babhi ji iss ko pehchana ?

S: yeh yeh Bhumika hai na!

VD: belkul sahi babhi yeh aap hi ki Bhumi hai

Then shakuntala gives Bhumi a tight hug then Bhumi hugs baisa,suddenly shruti comes in.

Shruti 2 VD

Shruti: namaste uncle!

VD: yeh ???

Shakuntala: bhai sahib yeh shruti hai

VD puts his hand on shruti's head and gives her blessings

Shruti: maa woh ladhki kyon hai?

Shakuntala: pehchano

Shruti: maa kahi yeh Bhumi di toh nahi

Bhumi: theek pehchana

Then they hug

Shruti: Bhumi di maa aap kae bare mae hamesha baat karti hain keh mere Bhumi isse hogi mere Bhumi wahse h gi, dekho aaj mai nae tum sae millia!

Now baisa says

B: arrae shakuntala Mansen koh toh bataoo keh uska bacpan ka dost aaya hai

Shaku: gi baisa woh aur devnatt ouper karae mae bathea hai aur unkae saath kuch aur loogh bhi hain mai abhi jate ho

VD: nahi nahi ! babhi ji mai kudh ja kar Mansen ko surprise karon ga

Shaku: jesi aap ki marzi

Then VD goes upstairs in a room Mansen is sitting with devnatt and some other people discussing business matters the a voice comes from behind the door

VD: Mansen babu !!!!!

Mansen 1^st gets up 2 hug his best friend then he sees the expressions on other people faces that a billionaire like Mansen Goenka has a cheap & middle class friend, Mansen stops himself but VD is so happy to see his best friend that he do not realizes the racial difference between him and Mansen, in deep happiness VD gives Mansen a tight hug and says

VD: aaj mere dost, tujhe koh dek kar mujhe ko inte kushi ho rahi hai keh mai bata nahi sakta

Mansen [in great hesitation says]: kaise ho tum Vasudev?

VD: arrae yar tujhe koh dekh kar bilkul theek ho chika

VD: excuse me mai Mansen sae ek baat karna chahon gaa

Then VD takes Mansen 2 the hall where everyone else like baisa, Bhumi etc were sitting Vasudev introduces his daughter [bhumi] & son [keshav 2 Mansen, Mansen feels a little shamed. VD then tells the whole situation 2 the family

VD: Mansen tum meri beti koh aapnae pas kuch mahino [months] keliae rakho gae ?

Mansen was about 2 say no but then shakuntala says

Shaku: kyon nahi bhai sahib! Hum aap ki beti ko aapni beti bana kar rakheen gai. Aap bay fiqur rahei !

Keshav: thank u aunty, thank u uncle aap humari behan ka khayal rakhnei iss sae badhi [big] baat kya hogi

VD: keshav humae chalna chahiye

Shaku: bhai sahab inti jaldi

VD: babhi bas Bhumi ko aap kai pas chodna [leave] tha aur meri aur keshav ki flight ka waqt hoa ga raa hai

Bhumi: baba apna khayal rkhyei ga aur medicine waqt per ligae ga aur…aur…

Then Bhumi starts crying then keshav comes 2 bhumi

K: Bhumi tum toh buhat hi kamzoor ho kuch mahino ki judai bardasat nahi kar sakte. Bhumi abh yeh hie tumhara pariwar hai aapna aur iss ghar ka khayal rakhna

Shaku: keshav tum iss ki fiqur mat karna

VD: babhj aap kae hotea hoai hume Bhumi ki koi fiqur nahi

Now VD 2 Mansen

VD: accha Mansen chalta hon aapna khayal rakhna

Then again VD hugs Mansen ut still Mansen has no interest .then VD and keshav leave Goenka house and go 2 airport and then Dubai .in Goenka house Mansen returns 2 his meeting then devnatt whispers near Mansen

Devnatt: woh kya samaghta hai keh ek business man woh bhi Mansen Goenka jisa usko apna dost maan lae issa kabhi nahi hoga

Then Mansen goes 2 a deep thought, on the other hand Bhumi is really upset then shruti come 2 talk 2 bhumi

Shruit: Bhumi di aap toh fozol ki tension lai rahi hain mai aap koh bharosa dilate honk eh aap ko iss ghar mae koi problem nahi hogi now plz cheer up!!

Then Bhumi gives a cute smile 2 shruti

Shaku: shruti abh usko aram bhi karnae du!

Shruti: ok maa just chill!

Shaku: Bhumi beta shruti tum koh tumhara room dekha de gei

Bhumi: gi aunty

Shaku: Bhumi mai tumhari maa jise hon iss liae aunty nahi maa kaho

Bhumi: jise aap ki marzi maa ji

Shriti: yeh hoi na baat !!!!

Shaku: shruti abh bhumi ko uska room dekha du

Shruti: jo hokam mere aakah!!

Shruti: Bhumi di aap ko mai iss ghar ka 2^nd coolest room dekhati hon jo keh aap hai!

Bhumi: accha ! 2^nd coolest toh 1^st coolest room kis ka hai?

Shruti: Arjun bhayai ka !

Bhumi: Arjun ??? yeh kon hai?

Shruti: Bhumi di jab woh aayea gae toh pata chalgae ga!

Then Bhumi goes 2 her room

Precap: Bhumika meets Arjun.

Friends plz do post ur comments about it !

With love,

Sidra 😊

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can't wait 4 next part so plzzzzzz write soon 😃