DIL DEWANA (A FAN FICTION) - Page 5

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i think i becoming a diwani of ur "DIL DEEWANA" fan fiction 😃 .........so plz write the next part also soon.....intezaar karwake hume aur na tarsaao.... 😭

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Hello friends how r u hope u all liked my previous part of fan fic here v go now:

Recap: Shefali comes 2 meet Arjun in office.

Now Arjun did not know about Shefali that she was in the cabin Arjun's chair was in the direction of wall Shefali came and just putted her hands around Arjun's neck. Arjun was alarmed

A[shocked]: what the hell is going on????????

S: hi sweet heart!

A: kya hai ?? office main toh kaam karne du!

S: tum jab se aaye ho mujhse millea hi nahi !! Kya hoa mujhe se koi galti [mistake] ho gaee??

A: Shefali plz let me work…

S: aaj koi kaam nahi ! chalo mere saath!!

A: mujh ko yeh file study kar ke dad ko dani hai !!!!!!!!

S: Arjun tum bhi issi umar main kaam kai problem main pas gae ho!! Yeh file Suraj study kar le gaa na tum plz mere saath chalo!!

A: dad ka order hai plz let me go!

S: ooooooooh! Uncle se mai baat kar leiti hon!!

A: what???????woh nahi mane gae

S: he willlllllll!!!

A: lets see…………….

Then arjun & Shefali go 2 Mansen's cabin Shefali knocks

M: come in !!!

S: hello uncle!

M: ooh Shefali my child come in !! tum ko ijazat ki kya zarorat hai !! come on in

Then Arjun comes in 2

M: Arjun tum??????? ok son have u studied the file ????

A: woh dad……..

Shefali interrupts

S: uncle nahi study kiii !

M: why not???

S: uncle actually mai Arjun se itne din baaad miliee hon toh socha keh uss ke saath lunch kar lon !! so maine soccha aap se pouch lon!! ………..what do u say uncle???????

M: well Shefali that's a very good idea!

Arjun becomes shocked

A[shocked and confused]: good idea !!!!!!!!!! dad but woh file………………????????

M: oohhh donot worry give that file 2 Suraj !!

A: whatttt????

S: uncle u r soooooooooo sweet!!!!

Then Shefali hugs Mansen

M: I love u 2 my jaan!

Arjun was very very very much angrrrrrry he was bursting in flames

S: come on Arjun lets go!!!!!!

A: Shefali tum chalo mai aata hon

S: ok………….come soon

When Shefali left the cabin Arjun in deep anger asked Mansen:

A: dad aap toh har kaam perfect dekhna chahite hain toh phir yeh…………?

M: Arjun plz u go and enjoy!!!!!1

A: dad jab mujhe ko Bhumika kai saath jana that toh aap koh gusaa kyon aa geya???????

M: Arjun…… Bhumika aur Shefali main farq hai!!

A: kya farq dad??? Shefali bhi aap kai dost ki beti hai aur Bhumika bhi…….. so why soo much difference

M: arjunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn! {in anger}

A: abhi aap kaam per itna bardha[big] lecture de rahe thii aur abh………………???? Dad I have never understand u!

M: Arjun plz calm down……just go and enjoy….!

Arjun was so much angry that he was just making different kind of noises but he calmed down in a few seconds

Now lets go 2 the Goenka house:

Bhumika is in her room, standing in front of the mirror and thinking about the picnic's cute incidents then shruti came in:

S: Bhumi dii!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhumi was kind of afraid

B: shruti tum bhi na!!

S: dii guess what ??????hum kahan ja rahen hain??

B: kahan???

S: 4 lunch!!!

B: where???

S: water fall motel…….

B: lakin mai nahi jana cheti!!!!!

S: kyon???

B: buss mera dil nahi charaha?? Hum shaam koh Arjun kai saath jaaen gae! OK!

S: something fishy is going on! aap Arjun bhaiyya ki wajha se nahi ja rahi?? Am I right???

B: nahi toh ?????

S: Arjun bhaiyya ki wajha se ………I know !!

B: plzzzzzz…..

S: phir …phir… give reason !!

B: tum bhi na …….. OK baba chalet hain mai dus minute mai taar ho kar aati hon!!

S: that's good!

Now unfortunately Shefali and Arjun also went 2 the same motel. Shefali is starring Arjun very badly and Arjun is looking here and there

A: stop it !!

S: stop what??

A: starring …….. I hate this kind of things

S: but I love ……………………

Then the waiter interrupts

W: greetings sir & my lady!

A :thanx god u r here warna mai toh mar hi jata…….

S: what????????

A: order ddddu!! [ uuf yeh Shefali bhi]

S: chicken corn soup………and u Arjun??

A: Thai soup

Then Bhumi and shruti enter the motel

S: Bhumi di wahan bete hain

B:OK!

There is little and sweet music

B: nice place??

Then waiter comes

W: can I help u???

S: yes plz bring me club sandwiches………. Bhumi dii aap kya le gi??????

B: kya lon ????? help me shruti kya accha hai?????? [she reads] italian soup, corn soup, thai soup…..

Then shruti says

S: di Thai soup is Arjun bhaiya's fav !!!

B: toh mai yahi loongi

W: yes mam ur order will be here in 20 mins

S; no problem!!!!

B: yahan ka music aur atmosphere buhat accha hai

S: meri, Suraj aur Arjun bhaiyya ki yeh fav place hai!

B: how sweet sub ki pasand ek hii hai

Then Bhumi looks around……… she sees Arjun with Shefali . Bhumi is realy shocked as she never met Shefali before and she became very sad and was about 2 cry but she controlled shruti did not knew about it ……

Arjun is eating his soup then Shefali says

S: Arjun what a beautiful song !!!........lets go and dance…

A: no plz I donot have the mood

Bhumi could not hear what they were talking she was only watching silently

Shefali really insisted so Arjun had 2 say "YES"

Shefali came close 2 Arjun and the started dancing Shefali demanded slow and close dance as 4 Arjun he was not interested………………………………..

When they started dancing Bhumi started crying as she usually does in the drama ……..then shruti saw

S; Bhumi dii kya hoa?? Tell me?

Then she looked around she was shocked 2 see Arjun with Shefali

S: OMGGGGGGGGGGGG!!bhumi dii I can explain !!

Then Bhumi ran and Arjun saw it:

A: Bhavriiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!! Bhavriiiiiiiiiiii!

Then he ran 2 shruti . shruti explained every thing 2 Arjun. Arjun became worried

A: ohhhhhh no kahan chali ge?? I have 2 find her

Then Arjun ran after Bhumi

Shefali: Arjun stoooooooop!shruti Arjun kahan ja raha hai???

Shruti: its all because of u !!![ in gr8 anger]

Shefali[worried]: what???

Now bhumi is going by the side of road and Arjun is in his car Arjun became very worried and Bhumi was crying while going Arjun spotted bhumi on road he stopped the car

A: bhavri car mai betto

B: nahi tum jaoo !!

A: bhavri plz ……………

But Bhumi did not agree. He then holded bhumi's hand & took her 2 the car he made Bhumi sit in the car

Now Arjun driving:

A: bhavri !!! yeh kya baccho wali harqt hai …tum iss anjan sheher mai kho sakti thi yeh phir kuch aur ho sakta tha !

B: tum ko mere kya parwa?!!!

A: yeh kya bakwas hai …….janti ho mai kitna parishan[worried] tha … lakin tum ko kya !!!?

B: plz ….. tum gari roko !

A: kyon?........issa kya hogaya jo tum mujhse baat nahi karna chiti

Bhumi is still crying and Arjun is really worried

A: tum ek dance dekh kar roone lagi…….what a childish behaviour! Tum ko andaza hai tum khoo sakti thi yah tumhara accident ho sakta tha……..what happened 2 u????????

B: mujhe nahi pata tum ko uss larki kai saath dekh kar mujhe buhat baichani hoi……aur……………….

A: aur tum ne yeh bawakofon wali harqt ki….now I will tell u…

Bhumi started 2 wipe her tears and Arjun drove the car faster …….

B; Arjun aab tum kyon car teez[fast] chala rahei ho?

A: abb mujhe ko gusaa aaraha hai

B: nahi nahi I am sorry !!!!!!!! maf kar do

Then Arjun stopped the car……………………

To be continued soon

Hope u all like it

Plz Post comments !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cheers

Sidra

wow......... too good sidra 👏
improving day by day ..huh 😉 waise there was alrdy no scope of improvement 😉 😉 😉
n i love ur avatar

really superb....one 👏 plzzzzzz continue soon 😃 😃

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Hi friends I am updating my fan fic here v go now:

Recap:Bhumi saw Shefali with Arjun and Bhumi became angry……Arjun stopped the car…………..

Now the story starts:

Bhumi: Arjun yeh hum kahan aa gae hain????????

Arjun: aage aage dekho hota hai kya..

B: mai kuch sumji nahi!?

Then Arjun opened the door and got out of the car then he went 2 bhumi's side and opened the door……

B: Arjun tum kya kar rahe ho????

A: just wait & watch!!!!!!!!

Arjun forwarded his hand towards Bhumi

A: plzz……..

B: what!!!!!!!!

Then he took Bhumi out of the car then Bhumi stood at her place where she was standing then Arjun went back 2 the car and started the audio player & he raised the volume of the music ……..

The place where Arjun took Bhumi was kind of non commercial area so there were no people and there was only silence………

Now our hero became kind of romantic he went near Bhumi

A: plzzzzzzzzz…….honor me!!![his hand was toward Bhumi]

B: Arjun tum pagal ho gae ho!

A: thanx tum ne mujh ko pagal toh kaha…

Then the music started & the song is

"it's a beautiful day …tu mere saath hai"

A: lets dance !!

B: Arjun!! Tum???

A: tum ko issi baat per rona aaya keh mai Shefali kae saath dance kar raha that oh mai nai soucha keh aab tumhare saath dance kar lon!!!!!!!!!!

B: lakin

A: lakin waikin kuch nahi !!!

Then Bhumi became extremely shy ……….

Then they just danced …. Arjun gave a dashing smile as he is used 2.then this kind of thing went on 4 a long time. They were looking in each other eyes the magic was so strong that they did not even realized what time it was ….it was evening and the sun was setting then suddenly the phone rang it was in the car

Phone: ring ring

Arjun still staring at Bhumi………

Phone: ring ring……….

B: Arjun!!!!!!!!!?

A: hummmmmmmmmmm….

B: tumhara phone…baj raha hai!

A: yeh humare tumhare darmian phone kahan se aagea !!!!!!

Then Bhumi shouted …………..

B: Arjun………..

A: what ????what the hell!! Iss phone ki toh mai!!!

Then Arjun went Bhumi said 2 herself

B: pagal !

Arjun attended the phone he was quite angry

A: HELLO [he was bursting in anger] kon bol raha hai………[still angry and his voice was kind of loud]

IT WAS MANSEN….

M: tumhara baap……..

Arjun [shocked]: dad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh sorry !

M: Arjun yeh koi baat hoi tum ko time ka kuch andaza hai???

A: time????????

M: yes kahan ho tum mai office mai tumhara intazar karta raha tum toh lunch kalie gae thei lakin now it is almost time 4 dinner…………

A: sorry dad !! where r u ? I am coming!

M: aab koi zaroorat nahi hai by the way I am out on dinner with some of my friends I will be late! Tum ghar chale jana!

A: ok dad

Then Mansen disconnected the phone

B: Arjun kya hoa??

A: arrae bhavri kya nahi buhat kuch hoa….tum car mai baithoo

Then they came back 2 Goenka house

Baisa and shruti were talking then Arjun bhavri enter

Baisa: Arjun yeh aane ka time hai????

A: sorry !!!!!!!!!woh ………….

Baisa: bas bas!!

Shruti: bhaiya aap dono kahan thea

A: yeh aap ki Bhumi di ko gae thi ……..aur

Baisa: kya matlub????????

A: baisa who ek lambhi kahani hai !

S: aur Bhumi di kaisa raha trip??????????

Then Arjun said 2 himself

A: buhat romantic!!

Shruti :kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa?

A: nahi nahi kuch nahi…

Baisa : aur Bhumi tum ko Arjun nae iss sheher ki sair karyai hogi na!!!

Bhumi: woh baisa………[she looked 2wards Arjun]

Arjun was upset by this question

Then bhavri continued..

B: buhat accha !!!!!!!! Arjun nai mujh ko iss sheher ka kona kona dekhaya

A: han han baisa aap fiqur mat karye!!!

Baisa: Bhumi tum tayar ho gao aur kana kha lo

B: ji

After getting changed Bhumi went 2 the kitchen

Shaku is standing

S: beta tum aagae

B: ji

S: kaisa raha trip?

B: buhat accha

S: Bhumi beta zaraa yeh aalo toh kaat do

B: ji maa

Then Arjun came in

A: hi maaaa

S; aagea shetan

A: what??

S: kuch nahi

Then Arjun sat on the counter having an apple in his hand

A: maa Suraj kahan hai??

B: beta who mansvi kae saath boutique gaya hai!

A: waise maa aap ko nahi lagta hume Suraj aur mansvi kai bare mai kuch sochna chahia

S: beta mai toh Suraj ki shaadi jald se jald kar na cha hiti hon per tumhare papa ……….

A: maa dad bhi na har ulta kaam kar te hain!

B: Arjun!!!!!!!!!!

A: mai nae kuch galat toh nahi kaha!

S: Arjun tum bhi na!!!

A: what maa! isse kaam toh nahi chale ga

S: mai kaal tumhare papa se baat karon gi!

A: yeh hoi na baat!

Then shaku went out and Arjun said

A: yeh Suraj ki shaadi kaab ho gi aur meri bari kaab aae gi……….

Bhumi laughed………

Next morning

Mansen at the breakfast table he is reading the news paper then shaku came with breakfast

S: yeh ligea…….

M: thanx

S: woh aap sae baat karna chiti thi

M: bolo na!

S: Suraj aur mansvi ek dosare se pyar karte hain…….

2 be continued………..

Hope u all like it

Cheers

Sidra

good work
par thoda zyada likho itne se dil nahi bharta yaar

very very very very very nice sidra 👏
that was toooooooooooooooooooooo gooood & nbsp;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow... ab suraj aur manasvi ki shadi ki baat hogi !!!!!! but looks like this mansen will create prob...kharus 😡

wow!!!!!!!!!! 👏