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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys I am starting a fan fic and I hope u all will like.

This story is different from the usual saarrthi story. OK here r the characters of my fan fic:

ARJUN GOENKA

MANSEN GOENKA (ARJUN'S FATHER)

SHAKUNTALA GOENKA (ARJUN'S MOTHER)

BAISA

DEVJI DADA

HEMRAJ GOENKA (MANSEN'S FATHER)

SIDDHART KAPOOR (A POOR FAMILY FRIEND OF SHAKUNTALA WHOM MANSEN DISLIKES)

MANSVI KAPOOR (SIDDHARAT'S DAUGHTER)

VASUDEV (MANSENS BEST FRIEND BEFORE HE WAS RICH)

BHUMIKA (VASUDEV'S DAUGHTER)

SURAJ GOENKA (ARJUN'S ELDER BRO)

KESHAV (BHUMIKA'S BRO)

DEVNATT (MANSEN'S GREEDY FRIEND)

YUVRAJ (DEVNATT'S ARROGANT SON)

SHEFALI (DEVNATT'S DAUGHTER)

SHRUTI GOENKA (ARJUN'S YOUNGER SIS)

Now then fan fiction starts :

Mansen is a very rich business man but in his worst era he was very poor he had a very best friend who was poor but he believed that mansen is his bro his name was Vasudev he was very kind and nice, about 21 yrs before mansen was poor and now he is very rich. Now the story begins:

In the Goenka house Mansen is come of the stairs and is talking to one of his secretary and is talking about business dealing

M: Ajay mujhe lgta hai kai hum is deal ko zarror hasil karin gae.

A: yes sir aap theek kah rahe hai

M: ok aab tum jaa sakte ho

A: ok sir I will be at office

In the same time shakuntala is coming from the kitchen towards the dinning table

S: bus business kai illawa koi kam bhi karlia karae

M: bus kaam buhat zyada hota hai ka time hi nahin milta

S: accha aab kanah kha ligiyae

When Mansen was eating breakfast at the time baisa comes

B: mansen tumhara babuji ko doctor kai pas lakar jana hai

M: oh maa mujhe yaad nahi raha .accha main DEVNATT sae kah dou ga kai babuji ko hospital lagae

S: arrae DEVNATT per itna yakin accha nahin

M: woh kyon?

S: bas mujhe aap ka who dost pasand nahin

M:aacha aab rehna do!

B: Arrae Mansen aaj toh tumhare ladlae ne bhi anah hai na!

M: gii baisa aap theek keh rahi hai mai aur shatuntala aaj ussa lannea jarahin hain.

Shruti comes from her room

Shruti :dad baiya ki flight aa gae hai mujhe abhi abhi unka phone aaya tha !

M:arrae shakuntala dekh kya rahi ho arrae chalo!

S: gii

B:tum loog usae lekar aao mai arrangements karti hao!

About half an hour later mansen and shakuntala arrived at the airport. A handsome, cute and very dashing man came through the entrance then:

M(shouting):ARJUN !!!!!!!!

A man turns, wearing shades and black shirt with jeans, having a laptop bag in his left hand and a mobile in the other one {this is our hero of the story Arjun Goenka (Karan Grover)}

PRECAP: Arjun meets his mom and dad.

Plz friends tell me whether u like it or not

Plz give comments!

cheers

Sidra 😊

Edited by sidroobaba25 - 19 years ago

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Mehakk.S thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes sidra it is very nice 👏 and plz continue soon ok
Mehak
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwww sounds good 👏
write soon sidra 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyi.. it looks nice.. do write more.. i'm waiting to read more... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice and too rocking
pls continue writing
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i luved it....arjun's entrance was fantastic 👏 ...continue soon 😉 and introduce suraj soon 😛 😳
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wow its gr888888888888 👏 👏 👏 esp. arjun's entry 😳 😳 whoooooooo i luved it, 😃 but can u plz write it in fan fict. section as barbie said, dat would be help to keep our fourm organized. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Continue yaar pls pls pls!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Fabulous idea.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys thanks 4 those wonderful comments! U people really encouraged me. Ok here is the next part:

A: Dad!!

M: Arjun! Beta kesae ho? [Mansen hugs Arjun]

A: Papa I am absolutely fine!

S: Arjun beta!

A: Maa! [He hugs shakuntala]

M: Aao beta ghar chalet hain.

A: Gii papa.

When Mansen & Arjun arrived at Goenka house they saw baisa carring a puja thali.

A: baisa [Arjun touching baisa's feet]

B: Mera pyara beta! Kisa hai tu ?

A: baisa mai theek hon aap kasi hain?

B: Arrae kasi nazar aa rahi hon?

A: baisa aap bhi na !

A; basia dadaji kahan hain?

B: beta who DEVNATT ka saath hospital gae hain.

A[a little worried]:kyon baisa ?

B: Arrae tum pareshan mat ho woh regular check up ka liea gae hain.

A: Oh!!!

M: yeh lo aagye!

D: Arjun beta!

A: dadaji aap kasea hain?

D: theek hon tum sunano London mai tumhari studies kasi chal rahi hain?

A: very fine dadaji!

And then DEVNATT enters the hall and saw Arjun and said in a very mysterious voice:

De:Beta Arjun kase ho ?sub theek hai na .

A: oh! Uncle mai theek hoin .Yuvraj aur Shefali kasae hain?

De:beta! Yuv toh kaam main buhat hi zayada busy hai. Aur Shefali toh har waqt tumhae yaad karti rahti hai.

Now Arjun talking 2 shakuntala:

A: maa Suraj kahan hai ?

S:beta Suraj bhi humare saath aa raha tha lakin ek important meeting ki wagha sea nahi aa saka.

B: Arjun tumahara papa ka toh Suraj sub sae pyara aur accha beta hai.

M: arrae baisa Arjun mera sub sae ladla hai per Suraj meri sub sae bardhe(big\huge) umeed hai. Mujhe lagta hai Suraj hi merae naam aur business koh agae laker gae ga.

S: arrae aap Suraj sae kitna pyar karte hain per Arjun toh aap ki jaan hai

M: shakutala mai office ga raha hon Suraj mera intazar kar raha hoga.

S: accha , lakin Suraj sae kahde geyae ga kah kanae pinae per bhi dehan de.

M: theek hai.

Mansen leaving the house at the same time shruti came

Shruti: papa u forgot ur mobile !

M: oh beta thanx ! love u beta bye

Shruti: bye dad!

At the office the secretary of Mansen is taking a file .he passes through the corridors and finally enters a cabine.

Secretary: Sir Congratulations we got the contract!

A voice appears from behind a chair

Yes I know congratulations 2 u 2 !

The chair turned and a very cute, handsome man wearing an off white suit having a file in his hand appeared [guys he is the 2nd hero of my fan fic Suraj Goenka (Rahil)]

PRECAP:

Arjun meets Suraj and the entry of our story heroine

HOPE U WILL LIKE IT ENJOY !

PLZ POST COMMENTS !

CHEERS,

SIDRA

Edited by sidroobaba25 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats really great sidra 👏
I am waiting 4 your next part so plzzzzzzzzzz post soon
I am dying 2 read it 😉

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