Khamoshi----A Veeba SS part-14 updated - Page 6

Great update, love their interaction and baldev conveys why he can't go through the heartbreak of getting back together and being the bottom of her priorities again really well.

Don't leave it so long between updates

Update soon 😊

Part-14 [Final Part]

[That evening SS house. Chaiji, Balveer and Ratan were sitting on a charpai at one corner of the hall. Ranvi and Veera were standing at the centre of the hall]

R: Yeh tu keya keh rahi hain Veera? Tu us Baldev ke pass wapas jana chahti hain...kiun?

V: kiun ke who mera pati hain veerji...

R: kahi tujhe aisa to nahi lag raha hain ke hum log Sonu ki parwarish aache se nahi kar payenge...Veera..Sonu ki parwarish mai koye kami nahi rahegi...hum neh kabhi Sonu aur Gunvi ko alag nahi samjha hain...aur nahi kabhi samjhenge...

V: mera beta anath nahi hain Veerji...pal pal tarap ta hain who apne baap ke liye...main aur khood garz nahi ho sakti veerji...

R: tu phir se galti karne ja rahi hain Veera...hum sab ki marzi ke khilaaf ja kar tune Baldev se beha kiya tha...dekh liya na keya anjam huwa uska...ek din ke liye bhi khoos nahi reh payee tu...aur us ke rehte Sonu na kabhi ek achha insaan ban payega aur nahi kabhi khoos reh payega...

V: Sahi kaha apne Veerji...main phir se galti karne ja rahi hoon...pehli galti main neh usdin ki thi jab maineh aankhen band kar ke yeh man liya tha ke Baldev ne aap ko daroo ke case main phasaya tha, kiun ki aap humare saadi ke khilaaf they...us Rajveer ne chahe job hi kaha ho aap khood jante they ke godaam ka chabi bejee ke kamre ki almari me rehti hain aur Baldev bhale hi humare ghar main ata jata ho aaj tak kabhi usne bejee ke kamre main kadam tak nahi rakha...dusri galti maneh us din ki thi jab maineh yeh man liya tha ke Baldev gusse main aa kar Nihal chachu ka khoon kar sakta hain...veerji main beeje aur Nihal chachu ko milana chahti thi...aur har pal Baldev ne mera saath diya tha...Nihal chachu ki izzat karta tha who...aap ka dil janta tha veerji ke aap ne sirf Baldev ko us godam se bahar aate huwe dekha tha, Nihal chachu ka khoon karte huwe nahi...phir bhi aap uske khilaaf gawahi dene ke liye taiwaar ho gaye aur maineh yeh maan liya ke mere veerji kabhi galat nahi ho sakte...Veerji Baldev ko police station main janwar ki taah peeta gaya tha, bijli ke ghatke diye gaye they...kuch had tak uska dimaki santoolan bigar diya gaya tha...lekin phir bhi usne mera saath nahi chora...jab who thik ho gaya toh khoos they hum log...itna dard jhelne ke baad baas apni zindegi suru hi kiye they ke main neh tisri galti ki...jab maineh yeh maan liya ke Sarpanch ban ne ke baad Baldev kind ki nahi apna faida dekhega aur uske rokne ke liye mujhe uske khilaaf chunab main khara hona chahiye...jab ki sachhayee yeh hain ke who sirf apna kind ka faida soch ta hain...chowthi galti maineh tab ki thi jab maineh divorce paper pe sign kiya aur yeh faisla liya ke koye Baldev ko nahi batayega ke main Maa banne wali hoon...jaha itne galtiyan ki hain ...waha ek galti aur sahi Veerji...

R: toh keya aaj tu mujhe kasoorwar maan rahi hain?

V: Nahi Veerji, Galti meri hain...main hi sahi aur galat ke beech fark na kar saaki...baas aap sab se ek hi binti hain...kal subha Baldev mujhe aur Sonu ko lene ayeega, please koye aisa kuch maat kijiye ga ke phir se koyee naya siyappa khara ho gaye...[she went inside the house...]

R: Beeji, chiaji...yeh Veera keya keh gayee?...maineh apni beti ki tarh paala hain use aur keya mainu itna bhi haq nahi ke main uska bhala bura soch saku?

Ratan: koyee galat nahi hain Ranvee...Veera bari ho chuki hain...lekin tera mann kabhi is baat ko man nahi paya...tu aaj bhi use woh choti si Veera samjhta hain...dekh puttar mann na mann Baldev ko pehchan ne main hum sab se galti huwi hain...aur chunab se pehle dono such main khoos they...who log to kahi ghoom ne bhi jaane wale they...agar Veera apne ghar wapas gana chahti hain toh hummeh uska saath dena chahiye...

R: Beeji is ghar main pali bari hain who, keya yeh uska apna ghar nahi hain?

C: chota chand...beha ke baad sasural hi kudiyoon ka apna ghar hota hain puttar...aur eh baat tu kabhi nahi samjhe ga...kisi kuri ke liye pati ke bina gina ke hota hain who hum janta hain puttar...aur phir ek din Sonu bara hoga...ek na ek din sacchayee uske samne aa hi gyegi...tab keya jawab denge hum use...puttar us din who sab se ziyada apne beeji ko kosega...use nafrat karega...nahi puutar...hummeh chichri ko rokna nahi chahiye...

[The same evening B3 house. Baldev and Gunjan were sitting Gunjan's room]

G: Veerji ...aaj main bohot khoos hoon...aap aur Veera phir se ek ho rahe hain...aap ka ghar phir se bas gayega...is ghar main phir se khoosiyaan ayegi...

B: Lekin tere ghar ka keya Gunjan?... in 3 saloon main har din har pal chakki ke dono taraf se pisti aye hain tu... in 3 saloon main tu aur Ranvi ek dusre se bohot door ja chuke hain, na jaane yeh doori ab kaise khatam hogi...

G: aap paresaan na ho Veerji, jab Ranvi ko apne galti ki ehsaas go jayega tab humare beech bhi sab kuch thik ho gayegi...aur kon kehta hain main khoos nahi hoon?, veerji mainu sahi aur galat ki parakh hain, jab mainu pata hain ke main galat nahi hoon toh main kisi baat ko dil se lagati hi nahi...

B: Phir bhi Gunjan, mera ghar us din sahi se basega jab ter ghar main bhi khooshali hogi...tu ek minute baith main abhi aya...[he went out of the room and after a couple of minutes came back with a file] is file ko sambhal ke rakhna Gunjan...maineh Gunvi ke naam peh kooch paise rakhe hain...jab who 18 saal ki ho gayegi tab usse 20 Lakh rupayee milenge...pata nahi tab tak Papaji rahenge bhi yah nahi...yeh Papaji ke taraf se uske saadi ka tofa hain...jab tak who bari nahi ho gati...tu caretaker ki tarah in paisoon ka hifasaat karegi...

G: Par Veerji itne saare paise...

B: Mere liye Gunvi aur Sheru ke beech koye fark nahi hain Gunjan...tera pati toh kabhi mainu apne bhanji koyee tofa dene dega nahi...aur phir keya pata...kal ko karowar accha chale yeh bura...tab mainu yeh afsoos rahega ke main apne Gunvi ke liye kooch nahi kar saka...[Gunjan had tears in her eyes, she didn't answer anything, just hugged Baldev, who hugged her back, a little while later]...lagbhag 9 bag rahe hain Gunjan...ab tu ghar ja...

G: Haan Veerji, baas thore se kaam hain...use nipta loon...phir chali jaungi...

B: Nahi Gunjan...mainu pata hain tu keya karne wali hain...lekin main chahta hoon who karma Veera khood aa kar khole aur use bilkool usi haal main paye jaisa who chor ke gaye thi...

[The next moring Baldev brought Veera and Balveer to B3 house. Balwant was over the moon after seeing them. He started playing with Balveer. Baldev and Veera went to their room. It was in exactly the same condition as 3 years ago, even the blanket was lying scattered on the bed and Veera's nighty was also lying on the sofa]

V: Is kamre ko dekh kar aisa lagta hain jaise waqt aaj bhi wahi peh khara ho...kaas hum log waqt main piche ja sakte aur apne zindegise who 3 saal nikaal fek sakte.

B: un 3 saloon ko hum zaroor apne zindegi se nikal fekenge...par guzre waqt main piche ja kar nahi...zindegi main aage bar kar...[they shared an eye lock...both could see the enormous pain they have gone through in the other's eyes, they hugged each other tightly, both tried to say something only to find the other had put his/her palms on their mouth]

V: Kaas yeh waqt yehi rook jaye Baldev...ab mainu aur kuch nahi chahiye...

B: aise kaise?...abhi bhi kitne kaam baaki para hain...

V:matlab...

B: abhi dekh...humare pind main high school hain, college hain, kishano ke liye polyhouse aur cold storage hain...lekin pind ka vikash rukna nahi chahiye...maineh paper main para hain..videsh main who log barsaat ki paani ko talab main jama karke rakhte hain...agar kisi saal barish acchi nahi huwi toh bhi kishano ka nuksaan nahi hota...aise na jane aur kitne kaam baaki hain...

V: par aab main aur Sarpanch nahi rehna chahti...

B: kaisy baat kar rahi hain tu...pind ke khatir tujhe yeh zimmedari sambhal ni hogi...

V: Par Baldev...humari bhi toh ek zindegi hain...

B: Haan hain...main janta hoon tujhe beech beech main chutti chahiye hogi...tab Joginder tauji hain na who sambhal lenge...

V: mujhe kiun chutti chahiye hogi...

B:[coming very close to her]Oye...abhi toh sirf Sheru hi aya hain...13 abhi bhi baki hain...uske liye tenu chutti toh chahiye hogi na...

V: Baldev...tu...[she started to bit him on the chest, after a while Baldev hold her hand and they hugged each other. Although they never had 14 kids, but 1 year later Veera gave birth to a baby girl. Baldev named her Amrita (the name of Veera's biological mother). ]

awesome ending... kash mash k pass b kuch akal hoti... to esa kuch dekhne milta...

Nice update!Loved the happy ending..

Awesome story jeet!! 👍🏼 Full of emotions!! Beautifully written!!