Khamoshi----A Veeba SS part-14 updated - Page 4

that was super se upar wala update... luved veera n gunjun rocked

Loving this story ❤️ Liked gunjan standing up against Ranvi!

[7days later, Temporary camps were set up at the site for the workers. All necessary machinaries like the concrete compilation machine and two huge soundless generators were also setup on the site. Many people were seen roaming around the site. Baldev was sitting in his temporaty office at the construction site, a man was sitting on the other side of the large centre table chair. There was a blue print of the new construction site lying on the table. ]

Man: Jiasa apne kaha tha maineh sab ko inhaan bula liya hain Baldevji. Humare sabhi team members inhaan hain. Kaal se inhaan kaam suru hogayega. Maineh sabhi engineers ko bulaya hain, who log baas aate hi honge...[4 more men entered the office wearing the blue(Veera's favourite colour) uniform of his company and yellow helmets. The greeted Baldev by saying "Good Afternoon Sir"]...lijiye sab aa gaye

B: Aare aap logo se kitni baar kaha hain ke mujhe sir, maat bulaya kijiye...agar kuch kehna hi hain to mujhe Praaji kahiye...[all of them said "Ji Praji"] maineh aap logo ko inhaan ka pura work flow discuss karne keliye bulaya hain. Mianeh kabhi aap logo ko khood se alag nahi samjha hain. Aaj tak hum sab ne milkar kam karte aaye hain aura gee bhi karenge...yeh mera "DREAM PROJECT" hain...aur main yeh chahta hoon aap sab bhi ise apna dream project hi samjhe. Aaj tak jis mehnat, lagan, sacchayi aur imandaari ke saath hum sab kam karte aaye hain...inhaan hummeh uski dugni mehnat aur lagan ke saath kam karni hogi...aur is liye maineh humare puri team ko inhaan laga diya...aap Charon humare team ke sabse senior engineer hain...is project ki kamyabi...yah nakamyabi sabse ziyada app logo par nirbhar karta hain...yeh project hum sirf 1 mahine main pura karenge...[every one looked shocked]

Eng1: par praji yeh kaise hoga...itna bara project...isse khatam hone main to kamse kam 4 mahine lagenge...

B: [with his trademark smile] sahi kaha aap ne...is project ko pure hone main kamse kam 4 mahina lagenge...

Eng2: To phir Praji...yeh 1 mahine main...

B: kiun ki inhaan raat-din, 24 gahnte kaam hoga...[the engineers looked at each other...they seemed lost]...humari poori team ko 4 group main baati jayegi...aur aap 4 jaan...ek ek group ke incharge honge...harek group 2 gahte ki shift main kaam karegi...jab ek group khana khayega, toh dusra group kaam karega...is tarah se harek group ko 2 ghanta kaam karne ke baad 6 ghanta rest milega...lekin ek minute ke liye bhi kaam nahi rukega...

Eng3: Par praji...itni jaldi bhi keya hain?

B: App bhool gaye Engineer saab...Khanna main bhi hummeh project pura karna hain...aap saab ki dekh bhaal ke liye...2 Doctor humesha site peh maujood rahenge...aur khana banana ke liye humesha ki tarah catering ka team bhi rahega...

Eng4: Maaf karna Praji...par aaj tak kabhi bhi aap ne itni jaldi nahi ki...

B: kiun ki aaj tak maineh aisa project kiya hi nahi...aap log ghabraiyee maat...jis tarah se maineh plan kiya hain aap logo ko koyee taqlif nahi hogi...[he pointed to the man sitting on the other side of the table...] Saabji ihaan ap saab ke sath site peh rahenge...yeh humara pehla project hoga...jab main ap logo ke saath site peh nahi rahoonga...[he picked up the blue print from the table]...sabse pehle is plan ka aur 4 copies bana lijiye...aap 4 jan ke paas ek ek copy hogi aur Master copy inhaan us board peh laga rahega...aaj raat hi aap log aapna apna group bana lenge aue apne group ka Schedule bhi... kal subha suraj nikal ne ke saath saath humare kaam ki suruwat hogi...

[All of them said "Ji Praji" and the 4 engineers left]

Man: Baldevji...aaj tak aapne har project ke site peh 24 ghante raha hain...ek taraf aap yeh keh rahe hain yeh aap ka dream project hain...aur duste taraf aap aaj raat hi jaa rahe hain...mujhe kuch samajh main nahi aa raha hain...

B:[smilingly]...aare Saabji...aap ke rehte huwe mujhe inhaan rook neh ki keya zarorat hain?...pichle 2 saal main apne bhi toh mere saath harek din site peh bitaya hain...mujhe biswas hain ke .inhaan ka kaam aap bohot aache se sambhal loge...

Man: aap sab se kehte hain ke koyee aap ko Sir na kahe...aur aap mujhe Saabji kehte hain...

B: Mujhe bohot aacha lagta hain jab koyi mujhe Praji kehta hain...aur aap ko Saabji kehna bhi mujhe aacha lagta hain...aacha kuch kagaz hain jo main aap ko deke jata hoon...aap ko zarorat paregi [he turned around and opened a file cabinet, right then Veera arrived at the door. Both Baldev and the other man were facing backwards to her]

Man: Pichle do saal se lag bhag har din...maineh aap ke sath bitaya hain...lekin aaj tak aap ko samjh nahi paya...Jab Preetampura main higher Secondary School ban rahi thi tab aap ko pata chala ke Panchayet ke paas paisa kamm par raha hain, tab ap ne mere hathon Panchayet Bhawan ke letter box main 2 Lakh rupayee dalwa diya...Phir jab inhaan College banne ki baat huwi toh aap ne mujhe in logo ka financer bana diya aur khood college ke liye poore paise diye...Baldevji yeh aap ka gaon hain toh phir jab is ke liye aap kooch aacha karte hain toh samne kiun nahi aate?...[ Veera came running in to the room, the moment she saw the man's face she was jaw dropped]

V: Arora Saab!!! Abhi aap ne jo kaha keya who sab saach hain?

[Mr. Arora looked helplessly at her ...Baldev turned around and he was furious on her...]

B: kis ki izazat se ander ayee app...

V: Bataiyeh na Arora saab, abhi aap ne jo kaha keya who such hain...

B: Aap isi waqt chale jaiyeh...nahi to mujhe...

V: [with teary eyes and folding her hand]...main aap ke age hath jor ti hoon Arora saab, ...rab ji ke waste bataiyeh na keya aap ne jo kaha who such hain...[Mr. Arora looked helplessly at Baldev...he turned around and punched the wall]

A: Mujhe maaf karna Baldevji...aab aur koyi chara nahi...haan Veeraji...yeh saach hain...main Rishikesh Arora...pichle 2 saal se Baldevji ke company main Manager ka naukri karta hoon...aaj tak aap ki jitni bhi madat ki hain who maineh nahi...Baldevji neh ki hain...college ke udghatan main jo maineh kaha tha...who bhi Baldevji ne hi mujhe likh kar diya tha...

[Tears started to pour down her chicks, she held the table for support and covered her mouth with her plam...Mr. Arora was shocked...]

A: Veeraji keya huwa...aap ro kiun rahi hain...Baldevji neh to sirf aap ki madat ki hain...[Baldev was standing by the wall while his head rested on the wall]...Baldevji...[Baldev turned around. He had tears at the corner of his eyes]

B: yeh rahi is cabinet ki chabi...is main harek kagaz hain jiski aap ko zaroorat hogi...aap ek bar jaake check kar lijiye...sab kooch thik hain ki nahi...

A: Ji...[He took the keys from him and left the room, Veera was still in a shock...]

B: kiun ayi hain aap inhaan...[he tried his best to maintain a strong voice...but in vain]

V: Baldeeev...tune...

B: kiun aayee hain aap inhaan Sarpanchji...

V: Baas kar Baldev...keya ek baar ke liye tu mujhe mere naam se bula nahi sakta...

B: kiun aayee hain aap inhaan

V: sirf yeh kehne aayi thi...ke tu jab chahe...jaha chale Balveer se mil sakta hain...

B: [Few tears escaped his eyes]..aap ko aisa kiun laga ke mujhe apne bte se milne ke liye aap ki izazat ki zaroorat hogi...Jaiyeh mujhe pata hain keya mera haq hain aur keya nahi..

Veera started to leave...she had no strength left in her body...every thing became dark infront of her eyes...after walking a few steps she stumbled to the ground near the door

Superb update!So,Veera finally gets to know the truth..

chutku update... pls continue soon

Jab tak o apne mahan veerji Ko khudse hamesha ke liye dur na karde,jab tak veera uske aur baldev ki jindagi ke is haal ke liye veerji ko doshi na maane,jab tak veerji ko uski galti ka ahesas na karade tab tak veera ke liye kabhi bura nahi lagega mujhe chahe tumhare os me ho ya fir show me ho.

btwn nice update,pls update soon. 😊 .

baldev rocked👏.cant wait for the next update😊

B: Veeeraaa...[he screamed out and ran upto her and took her in his laps]...veera, aankhey khol Veera...tu thik hain na?[She was subconciously mouning in pain. Baldev could notice a little swelling on her forehead. He put her down on the floor and ran upto the table to fetch the water bottle from there. He then took her on his laps again and spashed her face with some water. Veera gently opened her eyes..] tu thik hain na Veera? Leh ...pani leh...[Veera opened her mouth and Baldev helped her with water]...kitni kamzor par gayi hain tu...mainu pata hain na tu thik se khati hogi, nahi raat ko thik se soti hogi...keya zaroorat hain tujhe itne kaam karne ki...

Veera smiled at him and affectionately touched his chick

V: Baldev...abhi bhi tujhe itni fikar hain meri...[Baldev realized he has let his inner fellings come out. He tried to put her down on the floor and move away. Veera grabbed his shirt]...naahi Baldev...Please...main bohot thak gaye hoon Baldev...mainu shara dega?

[Baldev closed his eyes. His tears rolled down his chicks and fell on Veera's chick]

B: Tainu mere sahare ki keya zaroorat...itne saare log to hain tujhe sahara dene ke liye...

V: Pati nahi hain na meri...

B: keya farak parta hain...tujhe to sayad kabhi pati ki zaroorat bhi nahi thi...

V: mainu zaroorat hain Baldev...lekin sayad main kabhi use yeh samjha nahi payee ke uske bina main adhoori hoon...

B: phir kiun kiya tune aisa mere saath...aaj tak ek bte ko uske baap se door rakha hain tune...kiun kiya divorce paper pe sign...

V: Rabji ki kasam Baldev...divorce paper peh sign karte waqt mujhe bhi pata nahi tha ke main pregnant hoon...agar pata hota...

B: Aur humesha ki tarah tune yehi soch liya ke Baldevne to papers milte hi use court main jama kar diya hoga...[Veera looked at him bluntly]...jis pal mujhe who papers mile maineh unhe usi pal jala diya...in tin saloon main tujhe ek bar yeh nahi laga ke kiun aaj tk tere paas court se koyi chithi nahi aye, kiun ek baar bhi tujhe court peh hazir hone ke liye bola gaya?[Veera was dumbstuck for a while]

V: toh phir in tin saloon main kiun tune ek baar bhi mujhe phone tak nahi kiya...mere liye na sahi apne bte ke liye...

B: Zaroor karta...lekin teri yeh chiththi...[He picked out an old letter from his purse]...keya tha yeh?.."Baldev...maineh is divorce paper peh sign to kar diya...lekin agar maineh tuhse sachcha pyaar kiya hain...toh ek din tujhe mere pass wapas aana parega..."...keya matlab hain iska?...keya maineh tujh se sachcha pyaar nahi kiya tha?...mainen bhi apne aap se yehi kaha...agar maineh tujh se sachcha pyaar kiya hain toh ek din tujhe mere pass wapas ana hoga...intezaar karta raha...din hafte ban gaye, hafte mahine ban gaye aur 3 saal beet gayee...

V: ana chahti thi...us raat ke baad, doosre din hi ghar gayee thi main...lekin tu Amritsar ja chukka tha..Papaji...bata nahi sake ke tu kabb wapas ayega...main apne maike wapas chali gayee...phir pata chala...tu us raat ghar aya tha...lekin doosre hi din chala gaya...ek ajeeb si zid ne mujhe band liya Baldev...aur ek din maineh divorce paper peh sign bhi kar diya.

B: Modi Saab ne sart rakhi thi ke project ke pura hone tak mujhe 24 ghante site peh rehna parega. Us waqt na hi mere paas itni bari team thi, na hi itne saare paise, aur na hi main apne kamm ko itne aacche se samajh ta tha...ek saal baad jab ghar aya toh pata chala ke tu maa bann chuki hain...Gunjan ne kaha tune sab ko kasam di thi ke koyee mujh se nahi khega ke tu pregnant hian...kiun kiya tune aisa...

V: Pata nahi kab aur kaise itna khoodgarz ho gayee main...Beeji, Chaiji, Gunjan Bhabi sab ne kaha tha jaise hi Baldev ko pata chalega who baap banne wala hain, who daura chala ayega...lekin main nahi chahti thi ke tu kis dabab ke, yah kisi mazboori ke karan, yah phir mujh pe taras kha kar wapas aayee, chahti thi agar tu wapas aye to sirf aur sirf humamre pyaar ke liye wapas aayee. Lekin jab tujhe pata tha ke Sonu hum dono ka beta hain tab kiun nahi aya tu...

B: kaisey ata Veera? Ek taraf main tujh se gussa tha ke tune itni baari baat mujh se chupayee, aur dusre rataf main khood se gussa tha kiun diya maineh who divorce paper tujhe...jab tujhe meri sab se jiyada zaroorat thi tab main tere saath nahi tha... Toh kaise apne bte par baap hone ka haq jatata main? Maineh faisla kiya tha kabhi tere samne nahi auoonga, kabhi apne bte se nahi miloonga...pichle tin saloon main jab bhi ghar aya toh 2-3 din ke baad hi chala gaya...kabhi kisi se mila bhi nahi...Gunjan se thora bohot pata chalta tha tere aur Sheru ke bare main...lekin yeh bhi pata chalta tha kis tarah mere naam se bhi us ghar ko nafraat ho chuki thi...socha tha aisey hi mar mar ke bita dunga baki zindegi...lekin honi ko kuch aur hi manzoor thi...is baar mujhe ek mahina rookna para...mera mann lalchi ho gaya Veera...main baas ek barr apne bte se milna chahta tha...sirf ek baar usko gale lagana chahta tha...tu ghabra matt mainu kuch nahi chahiye...main toh aaj raat hi ja raha hoon...

V: hummeh ghar nahi le jayega Baldev?...aab aur bardast nahi hota...ab uar aise mar mar ke jiya nahi jata mujhse...aur nahi mujh me itni takat hain ke main zindegi bhar khood se larh sakoon...

[Baldev was struggling for words...suddenly Gunjan came there with Balveer]

G: Veerji...Veera...[she din't say anything more, just extended Balveer towards them, Baldev took Balveer in his arms and then gave him to Veera and hugged both of them]

Last two updates were great. Glad baldev was still helping his pind while away, now veera knows the truth I would love ranvi to find out all the help baldev has given to wipe that smugness off his face!.

Veeba reunion, nice to read veera telling baldev how much she needs him and was wrong. Not something that happens often.
looking forward to the next bit especially when ranvi finds out about these two, hope he gets a massive smack to the face.

m at loss of words... it was that beautiful