Khamoshi----A Veeba SS part-14 updated - Page 3

OMG this is a MINDBLOWING update!!! I'm so close to tears.. Baldev ke dil me itna dukh bhara hua hai 😭 So glad he told Ranvi that Ranvi isn't the one who raised Veera.. Dekha jaye to Ranvi ki koi aukaat nai hai Baldev pe ghusse hone ki.. He has no right to khamakha go against Baldev... Kash just kash esa show me bhi hota.. The emotional yet strong side of Baldev ❤️ 💔

[The next morning around 9 a.m., Baldev was talking over the phone, while sitting in the front yard of his house. A young guy was watering the plants nearby]

B: Haan, yehi to muskil hain, ghar se dur rehta hoon toh lagta hain kab ghar jaunga...aur jab ghar aata hoon toh...sab kuch itna soon soona sa lagta hain keya batau...meri bahen Gunjan agar hoti hain toh uski beti ke saath khel kar thora samay beet jata hain...nahi toh bohot bore lagta hain...[Veera arrived there and stood behind Baldev]...haan main bhi ehi soch raha hoon...lekin Papaji phir se udaas ho gayenge...bolenge ke tu ne toh kaha tha ek mahina rukega...aab phir se 4-5 dino ke baad hi ja raha hain...aab keya baton Saab...unke ankhon main ek ajeeb sa dard dikhta hain mainu...kuch kar bhi to nahi sakta...aacha aap ne sab ko khabar kar diya hain na...Project suru hone se ek hafta pehle sab ko wapas aa jana hain...chaliye saab ab main rakhta hoon...dekhta hoon..thori der ghoom aata hoon...bohot samay ho gaya mujhe apne hi gaon ko aache se dekhe huwe apne dosto se mile huwe...chaliye Saab bye...[he hung up the phone]...aare raju soon na main tora bahar jaa raha hoon..Papaji pooche to kehna dopeher ko aa jaunga...[he turned around and became still like a statue, after seeing Veera, this is the first time they have come face to face after 3 years...they kept looking at each other, few tears escaped their eyes...after a while Baldev recovered]...aareh Sarpanchji aap inhaan?...agar koye zaroori kaam tha toh mujhe bula liya hota...aapne kiun taqlif ki...

V: [She was dumbstuck after Baldev called her Sarpanchji, deep in her heart she had a feeling Baldev will at least call her by her name..]...mera ek naam bhi hain Baldev...

B: Naam toh harek insaan ka hota hain Sarpanchji...par aap ko toh pura pind Sarpanchji bulata hoga...aur muje laga isse aap ko khoosi hoti hogi...jaha tak maine suna hain aap ke Sarpanch banne ke piche ek bohot bara kahani hain...is liye aap ko toh khoos hona chahiye ke maineh aap so aap ke audhe se bulaya...[Veera didn't answer anything, a look of sheer disbelief said everything to Baldev]...aare Raju..Sarpanchji ke liye chaiye lana...baithiye Sarpanchji...kahiye keya seva kar sakta hoon main aap ki...

V: Sukriya Baldev...main ghar se nasta karke nikli hoon...chaye ki koye zarorat nahi...

B: Yeh keya baat huwi Sarpanchji...aare kabhi hummeh bhi mauka dijiye aap ke seva karne ki...waise bhi hum pind main ziyada rehte nahi...kahiye kaise aana huwa...

V: Baldev...main tujh se larne, ghagar ne yaha bahesh karne nahi aaye hoon, apne pind ke waste, apne pindwasi on ke liye ek request karne aayee hoon...

B: Aare mere to bhag hi khool gaye...Preetampura se Sarpanch ...aaj mere pass aye hain...arzi lekar..

V: keya tu sidhi muh baat nahi kar sakta...

B: Ab Sarpanchji...mere baat karne ka toh ehi tarika hain...agar aap ko bura laga toh...saach main main kuch nahi kar sakta...khair...kahiye keya request hain aap ki...

V: Main apne pind main ek Cold Storage banana chahti hoon, haar saal bohot ssare aanaj sarke barbad ho jate hain...jisse humare kishano ki kaafi nooksaan hota hain...agar pind main Cold Storage hogi toh kishano ka nooksan hone se bach jayega..

B: Irada toh aap ka nek hain...par is main main keya kar sakta hoon?

V: Yaspal tauji se go zameen tune khareedi hain...agar tu unhe who wapas kar dega to Panchayet us zameen par cold storage bana sakegi...

B: Wah Sarpanchji...aaj ek baar phir se aap ne koyi bahana dhoond hi liya...mere project ko rokne ka...

V: Aisy baat nahi hain Baldev...main khood bhi hairaan hoon kiun har bar aisa hota hain...pichli baar bhi...[her words were cut short by Baldev]

B: Sarpanchji...ek baat batiyeh...humesha mujhse hi kiun apne sapnoka, apne armaano ka kurbaani maangi jaati hain...

V: Mujhe nahi pata kiun aisa hota hain...Please Baldev...apne pind ke khatir keya tu who zameen wapas kar sakta hain...

B: Ek baat batiyeh...Cold storage banane main toh bohot saara investment lagta hain...aur jitna mujhe Preetampura ke bare main pata hain...itne paise toh apke Panchayet ke pass hogi nahi...toh aap kaise banyengi use.

V: agar cold storage baani, toh Preetampura hi nahi aas pass ke sabhi gaon ko faida hoga...main un sabhi gaon ke Sarpancho ke saath baat karoongi...saare pindwale mil kar isse banayege...agar zaroorat pari toh main koyee financer dhoond ne ki kousis karoongi...

B: irada toh aap ka nek hain Sarpanchji...lekin keya hain na...main thehra baypaari...faida aur Nuksaan ke ilawa aur kooch samajh main nahi aati mujhe...aapke is Cold Storage se mujhe keya faida hoga?

V: Kuch nahi...lekin Baldev...tub hi toh isi pind ka beta hain na...ek kishan ka beta hain tu...please samajh ne ki kousis kar...

B: Galat kaha aapne Sarpanchji...main humesha se hi pind ka bura beta tha...saare pindwale, mere gharwale, sab ehi kehte they...isi liye toh jab maineh apne pind ke liye kooch karna chaha toh kisi ne mera saath nahi diya...mere khood ke Papaji bhi mere khilaaf chale gaye...

V: Tab ki baat aur thi Baldev...

B: Aur aab ki baat bhi aur hain...aab mujhe sirf apna faida aur nuksaan dikhta hain...baypari ban chooka hoon main...aur aap ke is Cold storage se mujhe koyi faida nahi hoga...is liye mujhe aap ka prastaw manzoor nahi...lekin ek rasta main aap ko bata sakta hoon agar aap ko thik lage...

V: Bol

B: agar aap ko who zameen chaiye, toh aap ki panchyet ko who zameen mujhse kahreed ni hogi, who bhi utne hi daam main...jitney main maineh use khareda hain...

V: Yeh baat tub hi janta hain Baldev ke Panchyet kabhi utni paisa nahi de payegi...

B: Phir main aap ki koyi madat nahi kar sakta Sarpanchji...is baar toh main Mall banake rahoonga...aur kam se kaam tin gunah munafa kamaunga...

V: Paise toh tune bohot kama liya hain Baldev...aur sayad aage bhi kamayega...lekin kabhi piche murk ke dekhna...paisa kamane ke chakkar main tune keya khoya hain...aur siwaye paiso ki aaj tere pass keya hain...

B: kahi na kahi who aap ki aur aap ke pariwar ki meherwani hain Sarpanchji...par purani baton ko uthane ka keya faida...jaiyeh Sarpanchji agar zammen chahiye toh 7 din ke andar paison ka intezaam karke mere pass aiyehga...mil jayegi aap ko zameen. Aur agar aap bura na mane toh mujhe kisi kaam se bahar jana hain toh...Sastiya-kaal.

[He walked away leaving a shocked Veera behind]

Very nice update,pls update soon.
veera ko apne kiye ka thoda bhi pachtawa nahi waaa

Loved how baldev was addressing veera and his dont give a f attitude ( he is probably breaki g inside) but putting on an arrogant front, which would definitely piss veera off.

next update soon

[The same day, around 12'o clock. Baldev was sitting underneath the Machan of his viilege, memories of the moments he and Veera had spend there kept coming back to his mind and left him with teary eyes. Every now and then he kept wiping his tears. Sitting there he could see the newly build college building of his pind. His mind went back to a similar morning 3 years ago...]

B: Modi saab...ap ko toh pata hain...Preetampura main ab hum Mall nahi bana sakte...lekin mere pass ek zamin hain Amritsar main joh Amritsar-Chandigarh highway ke upar...keya aap meri madat korge wahan mall banana main...

[Mr. Modi checked out the details of the land from the papers Baldev had bought with him...]

M: Zameen toh aap ki kaafi bari hain Baldevji...aur highway ke upar bhi hain, location ke hissab se bhi aacha lag raha hain mujhe...I think agar is zameen peh hum mall banaye toh kaafi faideymand ho sakta hain...thik hain Baldevji...main aap ke is project ko finance karoonga...lekin mere do saart hain...pehla yeh ke jab tak yeh project pura nahi ho gata aap ko 24x7 site peh rehna parega...is project ko pura karne ke kiye jo bhi procedure hain who saab aap pura karenge...jaha se bhi permission lena hoga who aap hasil karnege, site main agar kabhi koyee problem huwi who aap ko sambhal na hoga, use solve karna hoga, chahe who labour problem ho, yeha koye legal issue, project ke pure hone tak main site peh nahi aunga...har hafte aap mere pass ayenge, pura report lekar...aur dusra yeh ke jab project pura ho gayega, use jobhi profit hogi who hum dono 50-50 share karenge, kiun ki zameen aap ki hain aur paisa main laga raha hoon...

B: Mainu manzoor hain Modi saab...aap ka bohot bohot sukriya...main app ke bharose ko kabhi tootne nahi dunga...

M: Jo plan hum neh Preetampura ke liye banaya tha wohi inhaan peh kaam aajayegi...aap aaj hi Amritsar chale jaiyeh...waha ke Municipal Authority se is paln ko approve karwaiyeh...unka permission jugar kijiye...main chahta hoon aap aaj se hi is project ke liye kaam suru karde...phil haal kuch din aap Amritsar main koyee choti-moti guest house hain rahenge, aur jab kaam suru ho gayega toh site peh rahenge...

B: Ji bilkool...par aaj raat mujhe gahar jana hoga...mujhe to anadaza bhi nahi tha ke aap mere madat karne ke liye mann jayenge...mere gharwalon ko batana hoga...mere pass dusreh kapre bhi nahi hain who bhi lana hoga...

M: Ji bilkool...aap aisa kijiye abhi Amritsar jaake kaam nipta ke ghar chale jaihe...aur phir Monday se puri tarah se kaam suru kijiye...

B: App ka bohot bohot sukriya Modi Saab...[He felt somebody touching his shoulder]...aare Jaggi-Billa...aja baith...na jane kitne dino ke baad mil rahe hain hum log...aur sunao...kaisa chal raha hain sab kuch...

J: praji...jinke sarr peh aap ka hath ho unka to sab kuch change hi chalna hain...sab kuch mast hain praji..

Bil: Haan praji...aapne toh humari life bana di...

B: Aare nahi...aisy koyee baat nahi...aare tum dono neh keya kuch kamm kiya hain mere liye...

J: Phir bhi praji...agar aap ne hummeh business ke liye paise nahi diye hote, toh sayad aaj bhi hum log bhella panti karte phirte...

B: Aare haan , kaisa chal raha hain tum dono ka karowar...

J: Rab di meher hain praji...sirf humare pind ke hi nahi, bal ki aas paas ke 5 pindo ke kishan mere dukaan se hi kheti ke liye khaad(fertilizer) kaharid te hain...

Bil: Aur mere motor parts ka karowar bhi daur raha hain praaji, ab agar kisi ko tractor ke, yah pump ke parts chahiye hota hain to saab mere dukaan peh aate hain...abhi haal hi main maineh bike ke parts aur khetiwari ke auzaar(instruments) bhi rakhna suru kiya hain.

B: Such main rab di meher hain...hum sabhi dosto ke karowar change tarah se chal raha hain...aur suna Jaggi...Disha ka keya haal chall hain...

J: who bhi change hain praji...khoosh hain apne sasural main...ab toh apne ankhon pe hi biswas nahi hota...meri who choti si bahen...aaj ek bte ki maa ban chuki hain...

B: Saach main?...kab huwa yeh?

J: Bass do mahine pehle...

B: Aur Billa...teri bahen Jasmeet ka keya hall hain...

Bil: Is saal 12^th ka exam degi praji...Papaji aur Beeji to piche hi par gaye they uska beha karwane ke liye, par maineh kaha nahi, abhi use parh ne do...jab rab di marzi hogi...beha apne aap ho jayega...

B: Aur tum dono beha karoge ki nahi...aare hum sab ek hi umar ke hain...to matlab kam se kamm 32 saal ke toh ho hi gaye...[both Jagii and Billa looked at the face of each other, this is one topic they didn't wanted to discuss with Baldev]...aare duniya main itne saare log beha karte hain...itne saare log khoos rahte hain to gabrate kiun ho? Sab ki kismet ek jaisy thori hi hoti hain...[they were struggling for words, suddently Baldev's mobile rang]...haan Gunjan bol...koyi zaroori kaam hain ki...aacha thik hain main ata hoon...[he hang up the phone]...aare Jaggi-Billa...mujhe jana hoga...Gunjan ko kuch kaam hain...main Saam ko tum logo se chaye ki tapri peh milta hoon...

[The same day around 1:00 p.m. Baldev met Gunjan near the Panchayet house with a little boy in her arms]

B: Haan Gunjan...bata keya kaam hain...aur tune mujhe inhaa kiun bulaya?...[before Gunjan could answer anything the little boy jumped to Baldev from her arms and hold his neck tightly and said "PAPAJI". Baldev was schocked, the embraced the boy tightly, his very touch was enough to unleash his tears and at the same time he felt as if he has found solace after a long time, tears started to pour down Gunjan's chicks as well]

G: Veerji...Balveer...

[Baldev cupped the face of Balveer, this the first time he had taken his son in his arms, this is the first time he has embraced him, earlier he had only seen him from a distance with any of the members of the SS family]

B: Mera puttar...mera Sheru...[He started crying like a baby...right then Veera came out from the Panchayet Bhawan]

V: Gunjan Bhabi...yeh keya kiya aap ne...[she ran up to Gunjan...]...mmm...mera matlab hain..aaj aap plate nahi layi...us chote se dhabbe main kaise khana khawoongi main?

[Baldev looked at her with extreme guilt...he tried to separate Balveer from himself, but he was hanging on to his neck tightly...somehow Baldev managed to separate Balveer from himself and handed him over to Gunjan...Veera too had tears in her eyes...Baldev walked away from there crying out loudly]

G: Veera...who ...veerji...

V: App ne kooch galat nahi kiya bahbi...Baldev baap hain Sonu ka...maineh hi khoodgarzi ki hain bhabi...ek baap aur ek bte ko ek doosre se door rakha...[she could hardly speak, as tears overpowered her voice, Gunjan put her hand on Veera's shoulder...] Gaanti hain bhabi...roj mujhe chirata tha Baldev...ke humare 14 bacche honge...jab raste pe challenge...toh log kagenge ke Pind ki Sher aur Sherni apne fauj ke saath ja rahe hain...[Balveer jumped to Veera's arms and started to wipe her tears, veera hugged him tightly]

Nice update.

it seems ranvi oncr again is behind thr unhappiness of veeba and persuading veera to keep her son away from baldev.

and a balbaggi scene ! Yeah

the update was mindblowing👏!ur story is completely is awesome! cant wait to read the next part😊!

Great update!

[That evening SS house. Chaiji and Ratan were sitting at differnet places in the hall. Ranvee and Gunjan were having a heated argument, because some villegers had informed Ranvee that they have seen Gunjan meeting Baldev, with Balveer]

R: Teri himmat kaise huwi Gunjan, Sonu ko use milane ki

G: who baap hain sonu ke

R: Baap hain?...is liye aaj tak eh bar bhi apne bte te taraf moorh ke bhi nahi dekha usne...

G: isse Sonu par unka haq kamm nahi ho gata...

R: uski taraf dari maat kar Gunjan...meri samjh main nahi aati tu rehti is ghar main hain, khati is ghar ka hain...aur tarfdari uski karti hain?

G: Beha kiya hain na tu mujh se? toh mainu khilana tera farz hain...aur koyi haram ki rotiyaan nahi torti hoon main...subha sham is ghar ko apna mehnat deti hoon main...[Veera entered the house and she was awestuck with what had been happening]

R: Gunjaaan[he tried to slap her, Gunjan hold her hand and pushed him away...]

G: Dubara yeh gurrat matt karna Ranvee...hath mera bhi uth sakta hain...

Ratan: Gunjan...keya kar rahi hain?...apne pati par hath uthayegi tu?

V: Bhabi...veerji...akhir baat keya hain?

G: Wah beeji...pati jab chahe apne patni par hath utha sakta hain ...lekin patni apna bachaw bhi nahi kar sakti...

Ratan: Galti teri hain Gunjan...kiun milne diya tune Baldev ko Sonu se...

V: Beeji ek minute...keya aab log is liye Gunjan bhabi peh chilla rahe hain ke unho ne sonu ko Baldev se milne diya?...[she looked completely shocked ...]...beeji Baldev baap hain uska...

Ratan: ek aisa baap jisne kabhi apne bte ki taraf murke bhi nahi dekha...

V: kanoonan uska haq hain beeji...aur main bhi wahan thi...aap log kiun is baat ka itna bara issue bana rahe ho...

R: keya tu bhi wahan thi?...tab tune roka kiun nahi Gunjan ko?

V: kiun ki main kanoon janti hoon Veerji...mainu koyee haq nahi hain Baldev ko apne bte se milne se rokne ki...

R: Isi liye maineh mana kiya tha Veera, ke tu use nahi milegi...phir se patti parha diya na usne tujhe...

V: aap ko logta hain Veerji koyi mujhe itni assani se patti parha sakta hain?

G: Meri samjh main yeh nahi aata ke akhir kab tak sacchayi se muh pher kar jeete rahenge aap sab log?..aap sab to Veera se pyaar karne ka daba karte hain na...keya lagta hain ap logo ko...baari khoos hain Veera?...ap logo ko yeh dikhta hain ke sab log Veera ki kitni tareef karte hain...lekin kisi ko yeh nahi dikhta kis tarah raat raat bhar Sonu ko seene sa laga kar roti rehti hain Veera...Holi, Diwali,Lohori..har tehowaar main jab pati-patni saath main khoosiyaan manate hain to kaise saab ke peeche khari rehti hain Veera...Bhisakhi ke mele main jab har maa-baap apne bachoo ko lekar khoosiyaan manate hain toh kaise Sonu o lekar edhar udhaar bhatakti rehti hain Veera...

V: Bhabi...please choop ho jao...

G: Chuphi toh rahi hoon Veera, pichle 3 saloon se choop rahi hoon...us din bhi choop thi jab Nana hone ke babojoot bhi, mere Papaji ko Gunvi ka Annaprasan karwane nahi diya gaya tha...us din bhi choop thi...jab raksha bandhan ke din mujhe apne Veerji ke milne nahi diya gaya...choop hi toh rahi hoon aaj tak...lekin aab nahi...

R: Galti ho gayee, bohot bari galti ho gayee mujh se, mujhe bhi usi din tujhe talak de dena chahiye tha jis din tere Veer neh meri bahen ka duniya ujaar diya tha...

G: Toh aaj dede na...kisne roka hain tujhe?...tere jaise pati hone se toh main ek beba ki zindagi guzarloon...aare tu key mujhe chorega?...aaj main tujhe chor ke jaati hoon ...yeh leh[she tried to tear off her Mangalsutra]

V: Bhhabii...[she hold her hand...once more ters overpowered her voice]...aisa kabhi sochna bhi maat bhabi...bohot dard hota hain jab yeh dhaga toot ta hain...jeeteji marr jata hain insaan...bhabi main neh apne zindegi ke saath samjhota kar liya hain...

G: Tu khood to aise marr marr ke ji legi Veera, par Sonu ka keya...ek din jab who poochega...beeji kon hain mera baap...kiun who hum se nahi milte...keya jawab degi tu...[Veera knelt down to the ground...Gunjan too knelt down to the ground and hold her shoulders]

V: main nahi janti bhabi...

R: roola diya na meri bahen ko...tum dono bhai haben humesha...ehi karte ho...Veera...to ghabra matt...main abhi wakil saab se baat karta hoon...hum log adalat main jayenge...aisa farnam nikalenge..ke Baldev kabhi Sonu ke sayee ko bhi nahi chu payega...

V: Baas Veerji...bass...aap ko pata bhi hain aap keya keh rahe hain...agar Baldev ko haq jatana hi hota toh who pehle hi kar sakta tha...Veerji aise mamlo main adalat bacche ki bhawisya ke bare main sochti hain...yeh dekhta hain ke kon bachhe ki parwarish aache se kar sakta hain...Baldev ki kamayee mujhe kaafi jiyada hain veerji...aur ho sakta hain adalat uske haq main faisla de...Veerji main apna ghar, apna pati sab kooch kho chooki hoon...ab mera beta hi mere jeene ka akhri sahara hain...main use khona nahi chahti...

R: aise kaisey adalat uske haq main faisla degi...ma ka haq humesa ziyada hota hain...

G: toh thik hain...main bhi jaati hoon adalat main...aur farmaan nikalwati hoon ke tu Gunvi ke saye ko bhi na chu paye...

R: tu meri tulna(comparison) us Baldev se kar rahi hain...jisne kabhi apne bte ke taraf moorh kar bhi nahi dekha...

V: Khood garzi maineh ki thi Veerji...maineh hi aap sab ko kasam di thi ke koye Baldev ko nahi baytayega mere pregnancy ke bare main...lekin key huwa...ek din use pata chal hi gaya na...usi tarah ek din...Sonu ko bhi pata chal jayega ke Baldev uska pita hain...Veerji sab kehte hain...insaan jhoot bol sakta hain, lekin uske ansoo jhoot nahi bolte...jis tarah sonu ko apne sine se laga kar ro raha tha Baldev...woh bhi pal pal tarpa hain apne bte ke liye...

R: tu kamzor matt par Veera...koyi tujhse Sonu ko chin nahi sakta...

V: Aur sayad koye chahta bhi nahi...veerji...aaj mujhe Baldev ke ankhoon main sacchayee dikhi hain...who kabhi mujh se mere bte ko nahi chinega...[Ranvee didn't knew what to answer, Gunjan took Veera inside the house]

pehli baar i loved veera soo much! awesome update.super se upper👏!cant wait to read the next update.