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...Jammy... thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update ❤️ So touching..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing beautiful update!veeba gets united.loved it to the core!👏👏👏👏
Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Nice update :) Do continue... it's an interesting story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for this very late update friends, got stuck in the office.

Part-12

[After a while Baldev broke the hug.]

B: Ab mainu nikalna hoga Veera...

V: Tu wapas kab ayeega...

B: Pata nahi...inhaan ka kaam Arora Saab sambhal lenge...Khanna main naya project suru kar raha hoon, toh baas uski tiayaari karni hain...

V: keya tu mainu kabhi maaf nahi karega?

B: maafi ki baat kahan se aagayee? Galti hum do no se hi huwi thi...agar baat maafi ki hain fir toh mainu bhi tujh se maafi mangni chahiye...

V: Baldev ab to saari batain saaf ho chuki hain na, halat bhi badal chuke hain...toh phir kiun ja raha hain...?

B: Kuch nahi badla hain Veera...aur iska ehsaas tujhe bohot jald hi ho gayega...jis din se maineh apne kaam ko apna dharam mana hain, mainu kamyabi mili hain...aur ab mera kaam hi meri zindegi ban chuki hain...

V: aur hum log kuch nahi tere liye?

B: hum dono humesha se hi bohot alag they Veera, humari soch aaj bhi alag hain...

V: phir bhi hum dodno neh ek dusre se pyaar kiya hain...beha kiya hain...

B: Lekin ek dusre ka saath nahi nibha paye...aur sayad ehi humari kismat hain Veera...

V: sirf itna batade kaise katoongi main yeh zindegi tere bina...maineh toh tere bina jeena sikha hi nahi Baldev...kaise paloongi main Sonu ko...keya jawab dungi ek din jab who poonchega beeji mere papaji koun hain?...kiun who humse nahi milte...

B: kehna...us ke Papaji uske janm se pehle hi guzar chuke they...maineh sab intezaam kar rakha hain...agle mahine se har mahine tujhe 50000 rupayee milenge... Sheru ki parwarish main koyee kami nahi rahegi...

V:[tears over powered her voice]...kiun Baldev...kiun?...kiun Pati ke hote huwe bhi ek beba ki tarah jeena hoga mujhe?...kiun baap ke hote huwe bhi ek anath(orphan) ki tarah jina hoga mere bacche ko...kiun itni bari saza de raha hain mujhe...

B: Waqt ke saath saath tujhe yeh samajh main aa jayegi Veera ke issi main sab ki balai hain...main ek accha beta, yaha ek accha Pati toh nahi ban saka, nahi kabhi ek accha baap yeha ek accha insaan ban paoonga...

V: lekin kiun kar raha hain tu aisa...?

B: Iska jawab bhi ek din waqt hi tujhe dega...jis tarah se yeh 3 saal beet gaye, waise hi baki ki zindegi bhi beet jayegi...mainu deri ho rahi hain...main nikal raha hoon...apna dhyaan rakhna...

V: Baldev...Baldeeev...[he didn't looked back, Veera knelt down to the ground with Balveer in her arms and started crying like a baby...once more Balveer started to wipe her tears]

[One month later...a stage was setup in front of a large building. The stage was Very well decorated. Many people were sitting in the audience. Baldev was dressed in a Silver Gray colour suit and was addressing the audience. Mr Modi, Mr Aroa, Veera and some other elderly people were sitting at the stage, Gunjan, Ratan, Chaiji and Balwant were sitting on the front row of the audience]

B: Saastiya-kaal ji...kehte hain insaan ko humesha sapna dekhna chahiye...kiun ki who sapne hi hummeh zinda rakhte hain, un sapno ko pura karne main hi hum apni zindegi bita dete hain...aaj se 3 saal pehle maine bhi ek sapna dekha tha, apne pind main ek Mall banane ka, kiun ki mainu lagta tha usse pind ke logo ki arthik sithi main sudhaar aayegi, pind ka Viksah hoga...aaj 3 saal baad mera who sapna pura huwa. Main aabhari hoon ap sab ka, agar 3 saal pehle hi mera sapna pura ho gata toh sayad main us mukaam peh kabhi nahi pauch pata jaha aaj hoon. Sayad kabhi apne kaam ko apna dharam, apni zindagi nahi samjh ta. Main tehe dil se aap saab ka aur khaas karke Peeteampura ke Sarpanch Veeraji ka dhanyabad karta hoon aaj is Mall ke udghatan par aane ke liye...aane wala waqt hi aap sab ko bayaega is se aap saab ka faida huwa yeha nahi...ab main Preetampura ke Sarpanch Veeraji se darkhast karta hoon ke who us parde ko utha kar is Mall ka udghatan kare...

[All the delegates moved down from the stage and Baldev handed over a remote control to Veera, she pressed the button and the curtain slowly started to raise, when it was completely rolled up every body was jaw dropped...a huge LED display board displayed "PREETAMPURA COLD STORAGE"]

V: Baldev...us board main toh Cold storage likha hain...tu ne toh kaha tha...

[Baldev replied with his trademark smile...]

Arora: Maaf karna Veeraji...maineh inhaan ka pura kaam dekha hain, humari poori team ko pehle din se hi pata tha inhaan Cold Storage ban rahi hain. Abhi beej boon ne ka samay aa gaya hain, is liye Baldevji chahte they fasal uthne se pehle hi yeh Cold Storage ban gaye...taki kishano ka nuksaan na ho...pure Punjab main sayad hi kahi itni bari aur itna modern Cold Storage hoga...

[Veera could not believe her own ears...she didn't knew what to do...she ran upto Baldev and hugged him. Every one was shocked by her behavior, after a while she broke the hug and ran up to the Podium]

V: saastiya-kaal. Is tarah stage peh aane ke liye maafi chahti hoon. Waise toh is is sabha ka ayojan Baldevji ne ki hain, lekin main aap saab se kooch kehna chahti hoon. Ittefaq ki baat hain ke aaj maine Sarpanch ki roop main 3 saal pura kiya. In 3 saalon main humare pind meh Higher Secondary School bani, College bani, jiska shrey aap sab ne mujhe diya...lekin yekin maniye...is shrey ka main itna sa bhi haqder nahi hoon...jab Higher Secondary School ban rahi thi, humare paas paise khatam ho gaye they..hum sab log paresaan they...ek din Panchyet Bhawan ke letter box main mujhe ek lifafa mili jis main 2 Lakh rupayee they...maineh pata karne ki kousish ki, ke kaha se aye who paise...par nahi pata kar payee...jab college ban ne ki baat huwi toh ek din aachanak...Arora Saab mile...college ka pura kharcha unhone uthaya...lekin who bhi sirf ek zariya they...ek insaan ne humesha parde ke piche se meri aur humare pind ki madat ki hain...woh insaan jise sab ne ek matlabi aur lalchi insaan samjha, jise humesha uske pind ka bura beta kaha jaya, jiski saath kabhi kisi ne nahi diya...uske khood ke pariwaar ne bhi nahi...lekin pind se door rehkar bhi us insaan neh apne pind ki madat ki use Vikash ke ur le gaya...woh insaan jinke bina main adhoori hoon, mera wajood adhoora hian...humara pind adhoora hain...woh koyee aur nahi...mere Pati Baldev Balwant Singh hain. Baldev...hum sab ne humesha se tuje galat samjha hain...aur sayad yeh maafi ki kabil bhi nahi...maineh Pind ki beti hone ka farz nibhana chaha tha...lekin ek patni ka dharam na nibha saki...humesha apne pariwar, apne pind ko tujh se aage rakha jab ki tera jagah sab se upar tha...ho sake to mainu maaf kar dena Baldev...

[She ran down from the stage and ran away]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update!It was truly worth the wait..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Lovely update.

veera's speech at the end was great.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
awesome it was... luved it... hope u will update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
wished veera was this much nice really! loved the update! baldev is so nice😊!
superb awesome wonderful update👏!cant wait to read the next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-13

[ Every body was stunned to silence by Veera's words. Baldev looked extremely embarrassed and guilty. Mr Modi and Mr. Arora walked up to him]

A: Baldevji...yeh Veeraji keya keh gayee...aap dono Pati Patni hain...?

M: Aaj mujhe smamajh main aya kiun apne ek pal main hi meri sari sart man liya tha...kiun har din har pal aap site peh rehte they...aisa keya huwa hain aap dono ke beech...

A: Maineh toh suna hai ke Veeraji ka ek beta bhi hain...iska matlab who aap ka bhi beta hain...toh phir...[Baldev didn't replied anything, he slowly walked up to an elderly man...]

B: Joginder Tauji...aap hum sab se bare hain...barso se aap humare pancho ke sadarsya rahe hain...humare pind ki seva ki hain...yeh kagazat rakh lijiye tauji...maine is Cold Storage ko Panchayet ke naam kar diya hain...[Joginder looked at him with teary eyes and put his hand on Baldev's head..]

J: Jeeta rahe puttar...tu ne toh...

B: Nahi tauji...mainu to hap sab log pind ka bura beta hi rehne do...Saastiya-kaal [he walked back to Mr. Modi and Mr. Arora]...Modi Saab, Arora Saab...maafi chahta hoon, aap log mere ghar aaye par main aap ka khatirdari na kar saka...Saastiya-kaal...[he then walked up to Gunjan...] agar tere gharwale izzazat de, toh kuch der ke liye ghar aa jana...

[He walked off slowly...looking up to the heavens...he didn't knew where he was going, but his feet look him to the Machan...he found Veera there...]

B: Yeh keya kiya tune Veera?, kiun humari zaaji zindegi ko is tarah sab ke samne le aayi...keya zaroorat thi yeh sab kehne ki...

V: Poora pind janta hain humari saadi toot chooki hain...sab tujhe galat mante hain...log yeh bhi kehte hain...kaisa baap hain jo ek baar apne bte ki taraf moor ke bhi nahi dekhta...kab tak bardast karti? Jab ki mujhe pata hain ke teri koyi galti nahi...

B: keya hasil kar liya tune...yeh sab kehke?

V: tune keya hasil kar liya Baldev, is tarah apne pind ka madat karke?

B: tere sapne humesha mere liye kimti they...aur humesha rahenge...

V: aur us sapne ka keya jo hum neh saath dekhe they...?

B: who sapna toh kab ka toot chukka hain Veera...

V: kiun Baldev? Kiun hum fir se ek nahi ho sakte? Kiun apni zindegi nahi ji sakte?...

B: kiun ki mainu darr lagta hain. Veera bari muskil se khood ko sambhala hain maineh...in 3 saloon main har din har pal khoon ke anshoo royee hani main neh...bari muskil se apne har armaan, har khoosi ko dabana sikha hain maineh, apne rooh ko maar kar ek zinda laash ki tarah ji raha hoon main...lekin janti hain kamm se kamm aaj meri zindegi main sakoon hain, kiun ki aaj mere paas na toh meri Maa hain, jo humesha sirf meri istamaal karti thi, nahi mere paas meri biwi hain jisne humesha mujh se pehle apne maikewalon ko chuna aur nahi mera beta hain jise pata bhi nahi ke main uska baap hoon...agar kuch hain toh who hain mere papaji, jo mahine bhar meri rah dekhte rehte hain...har din har pal us haveli main yaadon ke sahare jeete hain, aur main kamwaqt unhe ratti bhar ka khoosi nahi de sakta...aur hain meri bahen...bad kismati se mera wajood hi uski zindegi ka sabse bara uljhaan ban jaya...apne hi ghar me ek pardesi ki tarah rehti hain who...har din har pal apne maike aur sasural ke beech chakki ki dono taraf se pisti rehti hain who...veera main ne apne ghar ko toot te huwe dekha hain...lekin apne bahen ke ghar ko toot te huwe nahi dekh sakta main...

V: tu kab se aisey kayer aur boojdil ho gaya Baldev? Kab se aise sacchayi se door bhagne laga?

B: Aab aur takat nahi hain mujh main...phir se apne toote huwe wajood ko jor ne ki...

V: ek akhri baar mujh peh bharosa kar payega Baldev?

B: Aab aur himmat nahi hain mujh main ...

[Veera didn't say anything, she tightly hugged Baldev]

V: Humesha tu meri takat tha Baldev...aab main teri himmat banoogi...aaj phir se khoosiyaan humare darwaze peh aayi hain...ise khone nahi doongi...please mujhe ghar le chal...aab aur bardast nahi hota...

[Baldev didn't knew what to answer, he hugged her back tightly]

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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
haeee... such a superb update... loved it

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