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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-4

[The Next morning Balwant was reading the newspaper while sitting at the garden in front of the B3 house. A servant was cleaning up the other side of the garden. An elderly man came there...]

"sastiya-kaal Balwant Singhji"

B: aare...Yashpal Singhji...sastiya-kaal...aiyeh...baithiyeh...aur sab kuch thik hain na?

[The man sat on another chair...]

Y: Baas rab di meher hain...Balwantji...

B: Aare sunoh...Yaspalji ke liye chaye leke ao...kehiye Yaspalji...kaise ana huwa...

Y: Who darasal maineh sunah hain ke Baldev puttar aya huwa hain baas usi se kuch kaam tha...

B: Haan kaal hi aya hain Baldev...aacha kiye jo ap aaj hi chale aye, nahi toh uska koyi thik nahi rehta, muskil se mahine main ek baar ghar ata hain aur phir kabhi 2 toh kabhi 3 din ke baad chala jata hain...kabhi kabhi toh yekin nahi hota Yaspalji key eh mera wohi beta hain yeha koye aur...[The servant return with a tray and placed a cup to tea and a plate of snacks on the table]...lijiye...chaye lijiye...aacha suno...zara Baldev ko bulao...aur sunaiyeh keya haal chal hain...

Y: Baas chal raha hain...meri dono betiyoon ko beha diya maineh...rab ki meherwani se dono damad sarkari officers hain...dono ke hi kuch pustainy jaidad hain...kisi cheez ki koye kamee nahi...khus hain dono.

B: Dua karta hoon who log humesha aise hi khoos rahe...ab Yaspalji...har Maa-Baap yehi sapna dekhta hain ke uske bachee khoos rahe...lekin rab ne sayad...[Baldev arrived there]

Bal: Paye lagoon tauji...

Y: Jeeta rahe puttar...kitne dino ke baad dekh raha hoon tujhe...tere papaji keh rahe they ke tu toh ghar pe tikta hi nahi...

Bal: Ab keya karoon tauji...mera kaam hi kuch aisa hain...ek bar project suru huwa toh baas jab tak who khatam nahi kota...ghar-war choriye, kabhi kabhi toh nahane khan eke bhi foorsat nahi hoti...

Y: Rab kare tu aur bhi tarakki kar...darasaal puttar main tere paas hi aya tha...juthe yaad hain...who bari sark ke upar mera ek zameen hain...wahi Ajit Singhji ke zameen ke bagal main...main who zameen bechna chahta hoon...

Bal: bechna chahte hain! Par kiun tauji...woh zameen to acchi khaasi fasal deti hain har saal...

Y: Aab nahi puttar...pichle to saloon se us zameen peh fasal nahi huwi...maine mitti ki jaanch bhi karwaya...sab kehte hain who zameen aab Banzar baan chuki hain...

Bal: Par tuji...main keya karoonga us zammen ka!

Y: Puttar tu toh kitne saare jagah peh bari bari bazarain bana chukka hain...pehle bhi to tu humare pind main waisa bazaar banana chah ta tha ...toh main keh raha tha...ke us zameen par...[Baldev got lost in his thoughts]...Baldev puttar...

Bal: Haan...haan tauji...

Y: Puttar jo keemat tujhe thik lage ...wohi de dena...

Bal: Aare nahi nahi tauji...aisy baat nahi hain...jahan bhi maineh Mall banaya hain...Zammen ke malik ko Sarkar ke hisaab se jitney paise milne chahiye uske dugne paise diye hain maineh...aap ko bhi utne hi paise milenge...lekin tauji aap toh gante hain na...3 saal pelhe kitna bara bakhera khara huwa tha...ab agar phir se koye bakhera khara huwa...tauji... maineh jaha kahin bhi mall banaya hain...pindwaloon ki marzi se banaya hain...pata hain pindwale abahi bhi manege ke nahi.

Y: Bura maat manana puttar...us waqt sthiti kuch alag thi...woh zameen Panchayet ki thi...aur mainu yaad hain sirf 10 votes se chunab hara tha tu...puttar koye yeh nahi kehta ke tu galat tha...lekin aab toh who masla sulajh chukka hain na...aab agar tune meri zammen khareed liya toh who teri apni zameen hogi...

Bal: Tauji aap mainu ek-do din ka waqt dijiye...main aap ko soch ke batata hoon...darasaal agle mahine se maineh Khanna pe apna project suru karne ka soch rakha tha...ab aap ko zameen ki daam deni hogi...phir do-do project ek saath chalana, unhe pura karna is main bohot saare paise lagenge...dekhna hoga utne paise mere paas hain ki nahi...main ek do din baad aap se milta hoon tauji.

Y: change puttar...ab meri dono betiyaan to bihayee gayee...main toh soch raha hoon baaki ke zammen bhi dhire dhire tere Papaji ko bech doon...aab aur nahi hota khetiwari...

Bal: Thik hain tauji...aap papaji se batain ki jiye...mainu thora kaam hain... Main chata hoon...sastiya-kaal tauji

Y: sastiya-kaal puttar.

[Baldev went inside the house, Balwant and Yaspal kept chatting]

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Part-5

[ 4 days later SS house, Veera and Yaspal were sitting face to face on the centre table, Ranvee was sitting on another chair nearby]

V: Tauji, maafi chahti hoon, waise toh mainu app ke ghar aana chahiye tha par, Panchayet main kaam itne hain ke main nahi aa saki, aur aap ko inhaan ana para.

Y: koye nahi puttar, Sarpanch ko kaafi saari zimmedariyaan hote hain...aur isi bahane na jaane kitne saaloon baad main Sampooran Singhji ke ghar aya...tu bata puttar koye zaroori kaam tha ki?

V: Who tauji aaj main highway ke taraf gayee thi toh maineh dekha ke aap ke zameen par ek board laga huwa hain aur us main likha hain ke wohaan koye Mall banegi...neeche Construction Company ka naam bhi tha...

Y: Haan puttar, maineh mitti ki jaanch karwaya hain, who zameen aab banzar ho chooki hain, is liye maineh who zameen Baldev ko bech diya.[Veera was dumbstruck by his words]

R: aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain tauji...panchayet ko bataye bina aap zammen kaise bech sakte hain...woh bhi Baldev ko!...

Y: Ranvee is waqt kind k eek wasi apne Sarpanch se baat kar raha hain, aur tujhe beech main bolne ka koye haq nahi...

R: keya matlab hai aap ka...Veera bahen hain meri...

Y: Veera koyee bacchi nahi hain...pind ki Sarpanch hain who...aur yeh tera ghar ka mamla nahi hain Ranvee...Panchayet ka mamla hain...[he seemed livid with Ranvee]

V: Tauji ek minute...Please saant ho gayeh...darasaal tauji main ek zameen dhoond rahi thi...pind ke kishano ke liye ek Cold Storage banana chahti hoon main...aap toh jante hain humare kheto main har saal kitne aache fasal hote hain leking kayee saree anag saar ke barbad ho jate hain.. kiun ki humare paas unhe sahi se rakhne ka koyee intezaam nahi hain...saab se nazdik jo Cold Storeage hain woh bhi 30 kilo meter door saher main hain...aur is ke karan harr saal humare kishano ka nooksaan hota hain...

Y: Irada to tera bohot hi nek hain puttar par key tune is bare main Pancho se baat ki hain?

V: Nahi tauji, who darasal itne dino se main college ke kaam ko lekar busy hi...

Y: Ab tu hi bata...mainu ya kisi aur ko kaise pata chalega ke tu keya soch rahi hain...

V: Sahi kaha aapne tauji...lekin aap ne ek dam se zammen bech diya...

Y: aab dekh puttar...mujh main aab khti karne ki takat nahi rahi...mere dono daamad sarkari mulazim hain, who toh kabhi inhaan ayenge nahi kheti karne...upar se who zameen banzar ban chuki thi...mainu pata chala ke Baldev ghar aya huwa hain...toh main use baat karne chala gaya...

V: keya kaha aapne ?...Baldev ghar aya huwa hain?

Y: Haan 4-5 din pehle aya hain, Balwantji keh rahe they ke who jab ghar aata hain 2-3 din se ziyada rookta nahi...main is mauke ko gawana nahi chahta tha puttar...tu ek baar use baat kiun nahi karti? Maineh kaafi saloon baad Baldev se mila, use baat ki...bohot badla badla sa laga mujhe Baldev, kaafi saant aur samajhdar ho gaya hain who...[Veera was lost in her thoughts]...Veera puttar...tu soon rahi hain na?

V: Ji...ji haaan tauji...

R: Usse kiun baat karna hain...apne swarth, apne faidey ke ilwaha kabhi kuch dikha hain use...aap bhi uski tareef is liye ka rahe hain, kiun ki usne aap ki zameen khareedi hain...

Y: Agar tujhe ratti bahr bhi insaano ki parakh hoti na Ranvee, to tu kabhi Baldev ke khilaaf ek labz bhi nahi bolta...woh Thanedaar...tera dost than a who...Veera ka hath use saupna chahta the na tu...keya huwa...woh khood ek katil nikla...aur Baldev begunah sabit huwa...Balwant Singji ne humesha tere pariwar ki madat ki...apne bte se ziyada tujhe pyaar diya...par tune keya kiya...Kartar Singh ke paas zameen girwi rakhne chala tha...aur agar Nihal Singhji nahi hote toh apne zameen gawa bhi deta tu...insaano ki koye parakh hain tujhe...

R: Yaspal Singhji...aap apne had main rehkar baat kijiye...

Y: [standing up from the chair] Sab se pehle to tu khood had main rehna sikh Ranvee...tere gharwale dab jate hong tujh se...par main yeha doosre pindwale nahi...saab ne dekha hain tere faisle kaise bhari parte tere pariwar ko...lekin humesha rab ne tenu bacha liya...

V: Tauji...please saanth hojayeeh...Veerji aap please ander jaiyeh...mujhe tauji se baat karne dijiye...

[Ranvee went inside the house...]

Y: Dekh puttar...ab mere haath main toh kooch raha nahi...zameen ab Baldev ki hain...tu ek baar use baat karke dekh sakti hain...mera bhai rehta hain Phagwara main...woh keh rhaha tha Baldev ne unke pind ke barri srak ke upar ek Bara sa Bazar banya hain...pure pind waloon ki marzi se bani hain who..kisi ke upar koye dabab nahi dala gaya...Baldev bhi toh humare pind ka hi beta hain...keya pata kind ke bahai ke liye maan jayee.

V: Who nahi manega tauji...3 saal pehle bhi who pind pe Mall banana chahta tha...ab zameen uski hain..koye use rok bhi nahi sakta...Sarpanch hone ke naate main use baat zarror karoongi...lekin mujhe koyee umeed nahi...kaash maineh Cold Storage wali baat pehle hi saab ke saamne rakhi hoti...toh sayad...

Y: Bura matt man na Veera puttar, tune Pind main high School banaya, college banaya, lekin puttar tere in kausiso ko fall dene main samay lagega...pindwasioon ke aarthik sthiti main sudhar nahi aye, 12th paas karne ke baad bhi kisi bte neh apne ghar ka zimmedari utha kar apne bureh baap ko rahat nahi de paya...siksha zarrori hain puttar...lekin para likha insaan bhi jab tak kuch kamata nahi, sab use nikamma hi samjh te hain...mera bahi keh raha tha unke pind main Mall bane ke baad unha ke logo ki aarthik sthiti main bohot sudhaar ayay hain...Mall itni bhi buri cheez nahi hain puttar...

V: Main Mall ke khilaaf nahi thi tauji...agar who koyee aur zameen peh banti toh main uske khilaaf nahi jaati...

Y: Ab dekh puttar...ab job hi kar sakta hain...Baldev hi kar sakta hain...aacha main chlta hoon puttar...saastiya-kaal

V: sastiya-kaal tauji...[Yaspal left, Ranvee came out...]

R: Maineh ssab suna hain Veera...koye zaroorat nahi tujhe Baldev se milne ki...tu Panchayet ke samne yeh Cold Storage ka pastawbh rakh...aaj nahi to 2 saal baad zameen mil jayegi...

V: Aur 2 saal tak humare kishano ka nooksaan hoti rahe...

R: Tu use nahi milegi Veera...

V: Veerji maineh pind ke khatir Sarpanch ka chunaab lara tha...pind ke liye mere zimmedariyoon se main kabhi piche nai hati hoon, aur aaj bhi nahi hattongi...meri zaati zindegi kabhi mere kaam ke beech nahi ayegi...main Baldev se zaroor miloongi.

...to be continued.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ranvi 😡 Glad that Yashpal gave him an earful 😈
Missed Baldev in the update 😔 Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
read all parts at a stretch.awesome! glad to see that someone gave an earful to ranvi. keep updating 😊
P.S. - i like ur visionary writings,actually its USP of ur write up.
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great going... awesome update... looking forward to the much awaited meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Very nice!! Just read all the parts.. And once again I hate Ranvi 😆 waiting for next part.. Update soon 😊
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Great updates.

love how you protray ranvi. And so glad that he gets put in his place by yashpal. If only there was someone with enough guts to do this o the show.

look forward to the next part, maybe you can add a bit where veera also tells ranvi a few home truths! Especially how he is partly responsible for her son growing up without his dad.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-6

[That night Veera was lying on her bed embrasing Balveer, her mind went back to an evening 3 years back. April 2015, SS house all members of the SS family were rejoicing at her victory in the Sarpanch election, chaiji fed her some sweets]

C: Toh humari chichri jeet gayee, apne maa-baap ke baad aab khood Sarpanch ke zimmedariyon ko sambhal ne ke liye taiyaar. Par ek gall mainu smajh main nahi aa raha hain ke tu itni baari kaab ho gayee chihri. [Veera smiled and hugged chaiji]

V: aareh chaiji main to abhi bhi aap ki choti si chichri hoon

Ratan: Raab kare tu humare pind ko itne aage le gay eke log Preetampura ka misaal dene laage.

Ran: Who to karegi hi Beeji, issi liye toh maineh isse samjhaya ke apne swarth se upar uth kar apne pind ke bare main soch na hi ek acche Sarpanch ki nishani hoti hain.

Ratan: wiase Baldev ko bhi bohot saare vote mile hain...matlab pind main bohot saare log hain jo use sahi samajh te hain...aur mainu bhi Baldev galat nahi lagta...kaash usne apne kaam ke liye dusra koye zammen doond liya hota...yah phir ek baari thande demmag se socha hota ke pind ko Mall se ziyada School ki zaroorat hain.

Ran: Haan Veera, maineh to socha bhi nahi tha ke Baldev ko itne saare votes milenge...aab Sarpanch ke roop main tera pehla zimmedari ehi hogi ke un sab logo ko apne taraf karna jinoh neh tujhe vote nahi diya hain

V: uski keya zaroorat hain Veerji...har insaan ka apna soch hota hain...main kon hoti hoon kisi ki soch ko badal ne wali...maineh yeh chunaab is liye lara kiun ki mujhe laga pind ki bhalayee school se ziyada hoga aur Mall se kaam...main bhi Baldev ke soch ko galat nahi maanti...dookh is baat ka hain ke who kabhi yeh samajh nahi paya ke main uske khiaaf nahi uske soch ke khilaaf lar rahi hoon.

Ch: are Gunjan puttar tu wohaan kiun khari hain?...aare puttar agar tere Veer ka haar huwa hain toh jeet to teri bhabi ki huwi hain na...humare in do pariwaro ke liye toh dono taraf se hi jeet hain...chahe humari beti jeeteh yah humara daamad...[Gunjan allowed her self a lifeless smile and walked up to Veera and shook hands with her]

G: Mubarak ho Veera, rab kare tu humare pind ko vikash ke aur le chale...[her face, her voice, her expressions every thing looked very lifeless]

V: keya baat hain bhabi...aap pareshaan lag rahi hain...

G: aisy koyee baat nahi hain Veera...

Ran: aare Veera, Gunjan chahe lakh chupane ki kousis kare, thora dookh toh use zaroor hoga apne Veer ke haarne ka...insaan chahe lakh kousis karle, lekin apne bhabhi ke mukable main apne veerse thora ziyada pyaar karta hi hain...

G: Bilkul waise hi na Ranvee, jaise tu apne jija se ziyada apne behen ko pyaar karta hain...

Ran: Aare tu toh bura maan gayee Gunjan, dekh yeh baat to tub hi maanegi na ke Baldev se ziyada Veera ka soch sahi hain...[She didn't answer anything, quietly walked away inside the house]

Ch: Ratan puttar...na jaane kiun aachanak se mera ji bhabra raha hain...aisa lag raha hain ke... Chichri, aab tu ghar ja...pata nahi waha keya haal ho rahi hogi...[Baldev entered the SS house]

B: saastiya-kaal Chaiji, saastiya-kaal Beeji...

Ch: aareh Baldev puttar...aa baith puttar...woh chichri baas nikal hi rahi thi...

B: koye nahi chaiji...aaj khoosi ka din hain...[he looked absolutely calm and his voice was full of satisfaction, he extended a box of sweets towards chaiji...]lijiye chaiji...mooh meetha kijiyeh...

[Chaiji looked amuzed she looked at the face of Ratan] CH: par puttar...

B: Chaiji, meri biwi ki jeet huwi hain...toh keya main aap saab ka muh meetha nahi kara sakta...

[Every body was surprised at his attitude and calmness, Chaiji, Ratan and Ranvee, all took sweets from him very hesitantly, Baldev walked up to Veera..] tujhe toh main apne hath se khilayoonga...aare ghabra maat chaiji, beeji, yah Ranvee, koye bura nahi manege...[Veera hesitantly opened her mouth, Baldev fed sweet to her...] areh Gunjan, kitthey chali gayee tu...[Gunjan came out from the kitchen...]

G: Ji Veerji...

B: leh muh meetha kar...aare teri bhabi jeet gayee...[Gunjan too very hesitantly opened her mouth and Baldev fed sweet to her, he then handed over the box of sweet to her. Baldev picked out a long envelop from the pocket of his jacket and walked up to Veera...] Yeh tere liye Veera...[she took the envelop very hesitantly]

V:ke...ke...keya hain is main

B: aare khol ke dekh na...[he looked absolutely happy, Veera opened the envelop and pulled out some papers after opening the papers she looked at Baldev with sheer disbelief and fell on the sofa, every body was stunned...Ranvee ran upto her]

Ran: keya huwa Veera...[he took the papers from her, but since it was in English...he struggled to read it]...Baldev keya hain yeh...bol na Baldev...tu chup kiun hain?

B: apne bahen se hi poonch le...

CH: chichri...bol na keya likha hain in kazagoon main...

V:[tears started to dip down her chicks]..chaiji...yeh talak ke kagaz hain...Baldev mujh se talak mang ne aaya hain...

Ch: keya...yeh keya keh rahi hai tu...Baldev puttar keya yeh such hain...

Ratan: yeh kaisa mazak hain Baldev...keya ku kabhi bhi apne sararaton se baaz nahi ayega?

Ran: Haan Baldev...kiun paresaan kar rha hain sab ko...keh de key eh ek mazak hain...

B: Chaiji...yeh such hain...

CH: yeh keya keh raha hain tu...kiun chahiye tujhe talak...puttar is chunaw ke fall ko itna bhi dil se maat laga ke apna ghar hi toot jaye

B: Chaiji...main inhaan koye tamasa karne nahi aya hoon...nahi kisi se larne ya bahes karne...main thak chukka hoon Chaiji...ab is ristey ki bojh ko uthane ki takat nahi hain mujh main...

Ratan: Yeh tu keya keh raha hain puttar...pati-patni ka rista kabhi bojh nahi hota...rab ke waste saanth ho ga puttar...

B: Maineh soch samajh kar hi yeh faisla liya hain chachiji...Chaiji aap to hum sabse bari ho...duniya dekha hain aapne...aaj main aap se ek sawal poonchta hoon...agar ek pati sirf itna chahta ho ke uski patni uspe bharosa kare, aache bure har waqt hain uska saath de, aapne zindegi main usko utna ehmiyaat de jitna ke uska haq hain toh keya woh kuch galat chata hain?...

Ch: nahi puttar is main kuch galat nahi hain...par tu chichri ko galat samjh raha hain puttar...aare tum dono to kitna pyaar karte ho ek dusre se...apne pyaar ke khatir kitne intehaan paar kiye hain tum dono neh...saant ho ga puttar.

Ratan: dekh puttar is chunaw ke fall ko dil se maat laga...haar teri nahi huwi hain, baas tere soch ki huwi hain...aur itne saare logo neh vote diya hain tujhe...baas 10 votes se hi toh hara hain tu...koye tujhe galat nahi keh raha hain puttar, kaash pind main koye aur zameen mil jaati toh main khood Panchayet se darkawst karti ke School us zameen peh banyi jayeh...

Ran: Beeji ek minute...Baldev keya matlab hain insab ka...tu chunaw haar gaya bolke talak mang raha hain...Veera teri patni hain Baldev koye khilona nahi...keya uske man main koyee sapna nahi ho sakta...

B: Zaroor ho sakta hain...tujhe aur tere pariwar ko ehi lag raha hain na ke main chunab haar gaya bolke talak manng raha hoon...chal ehi sahi...sapne who hote hain Ranve jo insaan khood dekhta hain...jiske liye uske dil se awaz aati hain...tere Papaji neh bhi toh Krishai Vidyalay ka sapna dekha tha...unke juzar ne ke baad jab tum dono bahi-bahen unke us sapne ko pura karna chaha..toh keya maineh Veera ka saath nahi diya?...Veera neh sapna dekha tha...aapne Veerji ki kala ko poori duniya ke samne lane ki...keya tab maineh uska saath nahi diya?...beha ke baad kayi baari maineh Veera se pooncha ke agar abhi bhi uske mann main bilayet ja ke age parne ka sapna hain?...toh main use bhi poora karne main uska saath deta...lekin Sarpanch banne ka sapna uska nahi tha...agar hoti toh pichle saal hi who chunaw larti...main manta hoon tab maineh galt tarike se jeetna chaha tha...dhoke se tujhe chunab se bahar kiya tha...is liye mujhe us haar ki koyee gamm nahi thi...par is baar...Veera ke demaag main yeh baat kisi neh daala tha ke use mere khilaaf chunab larna chahiye...aur tu aachi tarah se ganta hain who kon hain...

Ran: Haan maine hi kaha tha Veera se, ke who chunaab lare...kiun ki humeh lagta hain teri soch sahi nahi hain Baldev...

B: yeh Zarrori toh nahi ke jo tujhe yah teri pariwar ko lage wohi humesa sahi ho?...agar Veera khood se ek baar bhi bolti Baldev main Sarpanch banna chahti hoon toh main zarroor sochta...lekin humesha ki tarah Veera ne wohi kiya jo uske Veerji ne use kaha...Ranvee main thak chukka hoon...humesha is ristey ki neeche dab kar thak chooka hoon main...

Ran: Baldev...Veera meri bahen hain...maine pala hain use...

B: Yehi tum dono bahi haben ki sab se bari galat faimy hain...keya kiya hain tune Ranvee, Veera ke liye roti banya, use doodh pilaya...par kaha se ayeh who doodh aur roti? [he pointed towards Ratan]...woh aurat...dinraat kheto main kaam karke, who kamake laati thi who doodh aur roti...aaj tu khood bhi toh ek pati hain na Ranvee aur kuch mahino main baap bhi banne wala hain...keya aaj bhi tujhe samjh main nahi aata kitna muskil tha Ratan chichi ke liye Veera ko apnana?...bata na mainu...kon si aurat apne pati ki nazayaz aulaad ko haasi khoosi apna leti hain?...waqt lagi...lekin akhir kar unho ne Veera ko apna liya...inhaan tak ki apne saadi ka jora diya tha unho neh Veera ko beha main pahen ne ke liye...lekin kiunki bachpan main who Veera ko apna nahi saaki...teri bahen ne tujhe raab maan liya...aur tub hi khood ko raab samajh ne laga.

R: Veera ko maineh apni bahen nahi...apne beti kit rah pala hain Baldev...mujhe biswas nahi ho raha hain...tere mann main itni karwahat bhara hain...

B: sacchayee hamesh karwi hi hoti hain Ranvee...rab ne mujhe bhi ek bahen diya hain...bhai bahen ka rista main bhi samajhta hoon...lekin tum dono bhai-bahen ka rista mere samajh ke bahar hain...humesha main khood se larta raha...hab wari yehi sooch ta rah ab ke barr Veera mujh ke bharosa karegi...aur har bar mujhe maiusi mili...ab aur takat nahi hain mujh main...khood se larne ki...main apne saath saath Veera ko bhi is risteh ki bojh se azaad karna chahta hoon...

V: Baldev is waqt tu gusse main hain...chal ghar chalte hain...

B: Agar tu chalna chahti hain toh main tujhe mana nahi karoonga...kiun ki main us ghar ka malik nahi hoon...lekin mera faisla nahi baladnewala...Veera jis diwaar ko tu aaj tak par nahi kar payee..apne puri zindegi main use par nahi kar payegi...

V: tu mujhe divorce ke liye maghboor nahi kar sakta Baldev

B: aur sayad koye mujhe majhboor nahi kar sakta...is saadi se jureh rehne ke liye...tu papers peh sign kare ya na kareh...aaj se humara rista khatam ho gaya Veera...

She felt something was moving near her chest. She noticed Balveer had woken up. She took the feeding bottle from the bed side table and fed him milk.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update.

I wish cvs would get baldev to say some of these things to open up the eyes of ss parivaar and their reality. Unfortunately this will never happen so reading ur story will have to be enough.

looking forward to the next bit.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Loved the update!
Baldev did right in asking for divorce..There is no point in taking forward their relation when Veera doesn't trust or respect him..

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