veeba os-bhul na koi humse ho jaye last part updated on pg 4(completed - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri_tanha

Wow! hot update!☺️

Continue soon.

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Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

Nice update
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Originally posted by: cutemukta

Nice.. continue soon..

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thanks buddy,hope u like all parts😃😃😃
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part 5

bansuri started shouting"my son is innocent.its all veera mistake.
she must have forced & trapped him.she was stalking my naive son since many days. she could not tolerate him happily marrying another girl"

"enough bansuri ji!"balwant yelled at her & signalled her to shut up her mouth.


kirtanpura inspector suddenly approached them & said to rajveer

"the details you had given yesterday about boy & girl,that helped us a lot.
just now we got information that a dhaba owner has recognised the guy.
he has told that guy came to him to buy some items & eft.
most probably he was staying in a deserted storage house near that dhaba.
we are going there now"

ranvi"i will also go along with you all.i hope my veerakadi is safe"

rajveer said to inspector
"baldev is too violent.also he had forced veera to accompany him.we must not
directly enter storage house.firstly we must check & then arrest that guy otherwise he will get alert & can harm veera."
inspector got agree.

rajveer thought:"today is your last day baldev.i will shoot you before anyone
could reach or talk to you"

ranvi asked gunjan to stay along balwant & bansuri.bansuri was cursing continuosly everyone for plotting against baldev. balwant was confused,

inspector,2 constables,rajveer & ranvi reached near storage house.

"i will handle this operation alone."rajveer declared.

"but sir..."inspector stuttered.

"i know baldev very well.if we all enter together then he could do anything
dangerous to veera.now its about veera life.so i cant take any risk.i can handle
him very well.when i will signal you,then get ready for further action"
rajveer said.

ranvi "i will also go along with you"

rajveer"no ranvi pliz,i promise you that i will save veera at any cost even if i have to endanger my life.pliz trust me once.i will do my best.your presence may harm my plan to trap baldev"

ranvi nodded his head in agreement.
"i trust you rajveer.pliz bring back my veerakadi"

rajveer silently entered storage house.he heard sound of veera giggling from one of the room.he looked in to the room.he saw baldev teasing veera & kissing her.she was laughing at his actions.
this scene drove him crazy.

"BALDEVV..."he shouted.
both became startled.

"how dare you to touch my veera"he took out gun & pointed at them.
they both were shocked at sudden development.

"veera,how could you do this to me.i loved you so much but still you dare to
stick to this dog."rajveer screamed at her.
veera was dumbstruck at his confession.baldev heated up with anger.

"come to me veera.leave this dog & come to me.i will forgive you.i can satisfy all your need.i can kiss you better than him..."

baldev could not tolerate anymore & moved forward at fast pace.he striked at rajveer hand,gun fell on the floor.rajveer tried to kick him but baldev beat him by punching & kicking. veera head was blank.
rajveer fell on the floor.baldev continuously kicked his butt.suddenly rajveer observed gun at a little distance from him.
he crowled to it fast & picked it up.he turned around & shoot baldev.bullet pierced his right shoulder.veera was snapped out from her lost state,she saw baldev injured.
she screamed his name.rajveer tried to fire again but veera held his hand & diverted the direction.she pushed him hard so that gun was thrown out far.

rajveer grabbed her.
"you are mine..only mine.no one can snatch you from me.i will prove you now i am real man.i will give you such a pleasure that you will forget him"

ranvi & inspector heard sound of gun shot.they instantly ran towards storage house.

rajveer tried to kiss veera.she fought & pushed him but failed.he tored her top's sleeves.baldev was badly injured.but he got up & punched on face of rajveer.he pushed rajveer on floor & climbed on his top.baldev started punching him hard on face.rajveer retaliated by poking his fingers on his fresh wounds.baldev felt immense pain but continued to punch him.

meanwhile ranvi entered with cops.he saw baldev beating rajveer.
"BALDEV STOP ...leave him."ranvi shouted.

baldev paused on hearing this for a moment.he saw inspector & constables pointing gun at him.ranvi was shaking with anger.but next moment only he started beating rajveer again.cops approached them & dragged baldev away from rajveer.
suddenly ranvi heard painful voice of veera"v..veerji..."
he saw veera in bad state.he got shocked & angry.
he walked to her & hugged.
"veerakadi,dont worry your veer has come to rescue you.i will punish this animal whole life" he stared at baldev.

"you are misunderstanding again.baldev is not culprit.he saved me from this monster whom we all trusted blindly."veera pointed her finger towards rajveer.ranvi whole body became numb out of shock.

rajveer saw his end near so tried to snatch riffle from nearby constable.but cops overpowered him.

veera ran in to baldev who lost his consciousness.he had lost lots of blood.
veera shaked him continuosly screaming his name.

inspector arrested rajveer.ranvi & veera took baldev to hospital.
ranvi was ashamed & guilty.he cried & prayed to god continuosly for baldev.
veera hold baldev hand till he was taken in to operation theatre.
bansuri,balwant & gunjan also reached hospital.
bansuri started blaming veera for all troubles & his son condition.
but she had became deaf & dumb to whole world.her whole attention was on baldev.
"you promise me that you will never leave me.you have to fulfill it otherwise i will beat you,i will kill you"she murmered & cried.

after 4 hours,operation was completed successfully.

"patient will regain consciousness after few hours"doctor announced.


veera looked in to ICU & saw him sleeping peacefully.her tears were nonstop falling.
"go away from my son, you witch.you are too unauspicious for him"bansuri shouted.
she grabbed her hand & dragged her.
veera snapped her hand & spoke up
"i will not go away.i will never leave him either you object or my veerji."
ranvi bowed her head with shame.
suddenly a nurse came out"patient is getting conscious.he is continuously calling veera.whoever is veera,pliz come inside"

bansuri stared at her & said"go !my mad boy is calling you"

veera walked inside happily.

"v..veera are you ok"baldev asked her in worried shaking voice.
"as long as you are with me,no one can hurt me.nothing can disturb me.my
life,my soul ,my heart everything belong to you."veera held
& kissed his hands.

they looked at each other with pure love & smiled.now they were one.no one could seperate them.



THE END

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
So happy to read that baldev beat the crap out of rajveer!!!

Hope we get to see that on the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Beautifully written! I love how you expressed their love in the cottage. Hope to see you write more on veeba and add lots of sizzling romance like you did in this one! Well done '!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Nice update!!
Baldev beating Rajveer was a treat to read 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
kya baat... ur maarna tha na rajvir ko... mza hi aa gya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Very nice update. I wish Baldev beats the crap out of rajveer in the show as well.

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