veeba os-bhul na koi humse ho jaye last part updated on pg 4(completed

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veeba os-koi bhul na humse ho jaye -part 1

"movie will start anytime."simran spoke up to baldev.baldev did not want to go.
but bansuri insisted him to take simran for watching movie in nearby pind kirtanpura. he was annoyed but he could not back off.after all he had said yes for marrying
simran.
ranvi,gunjan,veera also came kirtanpura for getting seeds & fertizer for polyhouse.ranvi had invited rajveer to come along.he wanted veera to spend time with rajveer so that they both could know more about each other.for ranvi rajveer was ideal guy for veera.since her break up with baldev ,her mind was not stable.she was acting too vulnererable these days.ranvi wanted her to forget baldev & move in life.
hence he planned to take rajveer along with them to kirtanpura.

"lets watch a movie"ranvi announced.

"but veerji..now its time to return to pritampura"

"oh! veerakadi,since we completed shopping.so why should not we enjoy?lets go for movie"ranvi insisted.

gunjan also supported him"yes,we must.i saw poster of bang bang movie.it will be great to watch.lets go"
rajveer "veeraji,i also have not watched a movie from long time."
ranvi:"common veerakadi,we will enjoy "
when they reached cinema hall,ranvi said to rajveer
'rajveerji you and veera go inside and take tickets for all.i need to call
my show sponsor.gunjan will stay here with me.we will come inside after few minutes"
ranvi signalled gunjan to stay along.
"but veerji,we will go together"veera insisted.
"no ..veera,its already show time.movie will be missed."ranvi said to her.
she entered cinema hall along with rajveer.they bought ticket & sat in
movie hall waiting for movie to start.still there was no trace of ranvi & gunjan.

"ranvii..why did you lie?"gunjan asked him
"i want veera to spend time with rajveer alone.so i purposely made excuse.
let us enjoy natural beauty of kirtanpura."ranvi replied while driving the car.
"but why are you trusting that guy blindly?i find him fishy."gunjan said.
"you are not liking him because he is going to replace baldev place in life of veera" ranvi spoke in cold voice.
"its not like that.veerji alredy getting engaged to simran soon.so why i will complain about rajveer?"
"pliz i dont want to discuss about baldev.lets concentrate on our lives.we will spend good time here"ranvi said with romantic expression.

in movie hall veera & rajveer sat in required seats.
"veerji & gunjan bhabi still has not come.i need to go outside to look for them."
veera said in worried tone.
"dont worry veera ji ,i go &check for them" rajveer insisted her not to leave.
he went outside.
veera heard someone voice"baldevji our seats must be in that row"
veera looked at the direction of sound & watched baldev & simran finding their seats in hall.she unconsciously hid her face.her heart clenched with pain.it was intolerable for her to watch baldev with another girl.but now she could not do anything.baldev had refused to accept her again.they found their seats & got seated.rajver enteredhall & approached veera.baldev saw him & veera.her seat & row was positioned after 2 rows in font of baldev seat row.baldev blood boiled but he controlled himself.
simran was trying hard to get cozy with him.

"rajveerji wat happened?where are veerji & gunjan bhabi?"

"they are still busy in talking with sponsor personnels.they may take more time.so ranvi has told me to seat inside & enjoy movie.they will come as soon as their problem solved"

"i am not feeling comfortable here.i want to go outside"
veera said & tried to get up.

"but veeraji..."rajveer tried to stop her.suddenly his eye moved on baldev seated on backside row.he was avoiding to look at them.rajveer understood reason behind her uncomfortability.
he did not want to miss the golden opportunity to get close to her.

so he pretended to be sad"veera ji after a long time i really want to enjoy movie.since i was alone so i never went to movie hall.watching alone is not fun.
but i now feel i have family in you,ranvi,ratan chachi,chaji.pliz dont leave."

he requested.veera sat & remained silent.rajveer sat in adjacent seat to her.baldev was trying hard to avoid them but unconsciously his whole attention was on her.movie started but neither veera nor baldev was enjoying.simran was giggling.rajveer was trying to talk while watching but her attention was on baldev.

suddenly they heard noise.a feud broke out outside cinema hall.a staff came inside & asked everyone to remain calm.screening was stopped.everyone got scared.
baldev called billa ,who along with jaggi had taken jeep to kirtanpura garage for repairig the engine.baldev asked them to come soon.hall staff stopped audience to leave & asked them stay in hall.veera called ranvi & told him everything.ranvi got worried & drove fast towards cinema hall.he was far away.

baldev hold simran hand & assured her.his eyes searched for veera who was staring at them from a distance.he was relieved to see her ok.rajveer was calling police for help.
staff started evacuating crowd one by one through backdoor.almost all were local so they left.billa called baldev & inform him about their presence at backdoor area.
baldev took simran outside to place where billa& jaggi were waiting for them.
he told simran to seat in jeep.suddenly they heard big noise coming inside from
cinema hall building.baldev caught a running staff personal & asked him
"what happened?"
"mobsters have entered.leave this place as soon as possible"
jaggi started jeep & asked baldev to seat.but baldev became scared & worried about veera.he told them to leave & run inside.
rajveer observed deterioting situation.he escaped outside instead of searching for veera.
baldev saw him.he caught his collars & asked about her.
"i dont know"rajveer screamed & pushed him aside.



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part 2

baldev searched for veera everywhere.mobsters started smashing & destroying
things inside hall.two groups were fighting with ach other.
veera was left alone.she was scared.she hid herself inside washroom.suddenly
she heard someone steps.her heart was pounding crazily.she was worried about baldev.
suddenly her mobile rang.it was ranvi call.she tried to cut it .she saw a man standing infront of her holding a rod.veera started shiveing.she tried to run but man caught her hand & pushed her towards floor.he started moving toward her slowly staring at her with lustful eyes.
her whole body became numb.her mind stopped working.she cried for help.the moment man tried to touch,she closed her eyes & screamed. suddenly she heard that man painful screames.
she opened her eyes & watched baldev beating that man badly.her heart feel relieved to see him.
baldev intensely gazed at her & ask "are you ok?'
she nodded as yes.he hold her hand & helped her to get up.

"lets leave this place soon"he hold rod & took her outside.veera was feeling happy to hold his hands again.


"you still care for me.you still love me even i hurted you"her eyes turned teary.

they run in to streets of kirtanpura.veera got tired & fell on ground.she was
too exhausted to move.baldev saw her condition.he lifed her in to his arms & walked fast on road.they both had lost their phones.so they could not ask for help.

ranvi was stopped in midway by police.

ranvi yelled at them"let me go.my sister is waiting for me in movie hall.she is in danger"

"you cant go sir.administration has issued warning for public.riot broke near
movie hall so we cant allow you to go there & put your life in danger.
dont worry we will soon control the situation & safely retrieve your sister."
inspector tried to assure him.

but ranvi refused to listen & adamant to go. police forcefully stopped him.gunjan tried to make ranvi understand about present situation.police consfiscate their car.

baldev was walking at fast pace with veera in his arms.he saw deserted storage house.he took her inside one of the room & put her down on heap of straw.

he asked her"how are you now?"

veera replied"i am fine.you also take rest."she pointed him to seat adjacent to her.but he ignored & went outside to observe situation.she felt dejected at his cold response.baldev observed a dhaba on other side of road.he went there to find dhaba owner closing it.

"praji,can i get some food items & water bottle"


are you crazy?what are you doing here.all have closed their shop & went to their home"

"praji,i am not local.i am from pritampura.i came here for some work."

"oh!then till tommorrow morning you have to wait.i heard police has blocked all roadways.you cant return now."

dhaba owner gave baldev packed food items & water bottles.he paid & thanked him.

veera got worried about him inside storage room.she stood up.her legs were
hurt & aching becoz of pain.she saw baldev came inside holding the packet
filled with food items.



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part3


"we cant go anywhere till next morning"baldev said.veera was silent.
her heart was fluttering as she was alone with baldev.
baldev saw wounds on her legs.he took out medicine that he had purchased
from dhaba owner.he put medicine on her wounds.she was touched at his gentle gesture.
"why did you risk your life for me?"veera asked.

"no need to thank me.i saw you in danger,so helped as responsible man"he
replied coldly.
she was pinched by his words.they remained silent for long time.but from inside both were conflicted & fighting with their love & desire.
few hours passed in silence.day turned in to cold starry night.both were shiverig with cold.baldev arrangerd heap of dried woods & straws & made bonefire.
after fighting with her heart for long time,veera decided to confess.
"baldev.. "
baldev looked at her.
"i am sorry."
"no need to.."before baldev could complete his sentence,she hugged him tightly.

"i dont want to loose you..i love you ...i love u more than anyone."
she cried.her tears were making his shirt wet.his heart flinched.
soon he controlled & tried to push her away.but veera did not leave him.

"stop it!i cant trust you again"baldev yelled in harsh tone.

"pliz dont leave me baldev,i cant live without you"she begged.

baldev pushed her.she fell on floor & her wounds rubbed with rough surface.
she groaned with pain.her painful voice struck his heart.

he approached her & checked her wounds.she was crying continuously.
"i am sorry.dont cry,i will put medicine again "baldev looked worried.
he could not see her in pain.

"i am not crying for these small wounds.i regret for wounding your heart.
i know i have done unforgivable crime.punish me but dont leave me"veera grabbed his shoulders & put her head on it.baldev could not push her away.he could not ignore her anymore.
since his heart still belonged to her.

end of part 3

warning-part 4 has mature content & will be updated soon

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m waiting for the next part. ... this is good
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Love all three parts, waiting eagerly for the next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved all updates 😃 Nice plot!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story!! Loved all parts
update soon 😃
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

m waiting for the next part. ... this is good


thanks😆😃
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Originally posted by: janvi0513

Love all three parts, waiting eagerly for the next.


thanks dear😃
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Originally posted by: pri_tanha

Lovely updates!! Continue soon.

thanks buddy😃😃

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