veeba os-bhul na koi humse ho jaye last part updated on pg 4(completed - Page 4

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

kya baat... ur maarna tha na rajvir ko... mza hi aa gya

Originally posted by: pri_tanha

Very nice update. I wish Baldev beats the crap out of rajveer in the show as well.

Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

wow... awesome amazing lovely update
loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: cutemukta

Awesome ending.. rajveer deserved more beatings..

Nice..

Originally posted by: Nikki36

So happy to read that baldev beat the crap out of rajveer!!!

Hope we get to see that on the show

Originally posted by: Dina98210

Beautifully written! I love how you expressed their love in the cottage. Hope to see you write more on veeba and add lots of sizzling romance like you did in this one! Well done '!

Originally posted by: jammygal19

Nice update!!

Baldev beating Rajveer was a treat to read 😃

loved baldev saving veera.They made luv.somehow I used 2 feel that VeeBa premarital physical closeness may be shown in d show as well.u described that scene beautifully.Rajveer stooped so low that he tried 2 rape veera.glad that baldev saved him n beat him 2 pulp.Last scene n dialogue were beautiful