veeba os-bhul na koi humse ho jaye last part updated on pg 4(completed - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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sure i will up😛date soon
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Originally posted by: jammygal19

Loved all updates 😃 Nice plot!!


thanks for liking my plot.😊😛
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Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

Nice story!! Loved all parts
update soon 😃

thanks for loving story😃😃😃
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part 4

baldev lifted her face.he wiped her tears gently.his gentle
touch caused burning sensation inside her body.he brushed
hair away from her face gently & stared in to her beautiful eyes.
there was silence.and they only stared at each other.
she was so close to him.she unconsciously touched baldev rough unshaven face.
.
her heart was beating faster.baldev glanced at her lips.
he immediately felt urge to kiss it.but he controlled himself
& looked away.he lifted her in arms & put gently on
bed of straws.he moved away from there.veera hugged
him from back out of sudden
"please stay like this for few minutes."veera pleaded.

he turned to veera & said"i think we should maintain distance"
he was nervous becouse of her closeness.he was fighting with his physical desire aroused byher close proximity.he tried to move away again but veera was not in mood to listen to him.


she put her arms around his neck & whispered in to his ears
"dont leave me" & rubbed her soft cheeks gently with his rough face.

she stared in to his eyes"i want to be with you forever."
her sincere words melted his heart.he saw tears brimming in her eyes &
streamed down her cheeks.he put lips on tear droplets trailed down her cheeks.

veera closed her eyes.she gripped his shoulders tightly to hold herself.
her heart was pounding,lips were quivering.she could feel her body shaking.
her heart yearned to feel his love.
baldev moved away his lips from her cheeks.he stare at her shy red face.she
smiled.she kissed his forehead.
suddenly baldev moved back.she got surprised.

"we must stop.i am loosing control"

veera walked close to him & hugged him.she started kissing his neck .
he moaned.she moved her head from his neck & pressed her lips against his.
baldev lost control.his eyes were burning with desire.his hands enfolded her
& held her close to him.he started kissing her.she gasped & closed her eyes.
her breath was deep & fast.she was happier than ever before.
she was in his arms and nothing else mattered anymore.

she unbuttoned his shirt.he unhooked her top.veera felt him tracing his fingers over her cheeks,then lips & continued over chin & down slowly along her neck.she felt a shiver run through her spine.his lips were like fire moving over her body& she could feel his hard manhood.her mind was blank,her body moves with a rythem of its own.her finger
run throgh his hair.
her body reacted to every kiss & caress.their breathing becoming little rapid.
she kissed his neck,shoulders then beautiful chest.veera arms winded around his neck,her bossom arched to his hard chest.his mouth engulfed her mouth,his tongue moved along her throat,breast,stomach evoking sensation of utter bliss.his body moved over her and entered her,she clinged to him & moaned with feeling of pleasure & pain together.

hours later,they were laying wrapped in each ther arm exhausted & content,a feeling of completeness & oneness surrounded them.



sun rays passed throgh windows to enter room & lightened faces of sleeping veera & baldev.veera opened her eyes.memory of last beautiful night still lingered on her mind & body.she looked at baldev.while sleeping,his face looked like beautiful innocent child.
she caressed his face & gently kissed his forehead.
she dressed up & started waking him up.
baldev woke up.

"baldev,we have to return pritampura as soon as possible as our family
must be worried."she said in concerned voice.
baldev kissed her & dressed up fast.

"veera its already 11.30.i wish i have phone,i would have called billa to bring
my jeep.now we dont have option so we should take first available bus to pritampura."
baldev said.


at kirtanpura police station
ranvi was seated on bench.he did not eat & drink since last day.he was worried about veera.gunjan was consoling him.balwant & bansuri also reached kirtanpura police station.they query about baldev.ranvi & gunjan got surprised to hear that baldev was also present in that hall & he was also missing.
suddenly ranvi saw rajveer entering the police station in police uniform.

ranvi ran in to him"rajveer ji where is my veerakadi"

rajveer:"i came here to inquire about her only.i am also worried about her"

"what do you mean?i trsuted you that you would protect her.how could you
left her?"ranvi yelled.

balwant & bansuri heard him shouting.

rajveer made sad face "ranvi,when mobsters entered hall we were separated.i searched for her everywhere but could not find her.i lost my phone too so could not call you.later a hall staff told me,he saw a man forcefully had taken girl outside with him.girl features resembled veera & man was..."


ranvi:"who was that man?i will kill him"ranvi shouted.

rajveer:'baldev...baldev took veera with him."

ranvi eyes got widened.gunjan,balwant & bansuri were shocked.

rajveer:"he took advantage of situation.he knew i would had retrieved veera safely fromthere.but may be he wanted to get revenge on you &her.so he forcefully took her out.
i wanted to search them outside but my duty came in way.local cops wanted me to help them so i had to stay there to control situation."

ranvi screamed in anger"BALDEVV...i will kill him if he hurt my veerkadi".


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update,

Oh god I can imagine ranvi screaming 'baaaldev'
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice and to much romantic update plz update final part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! hot update!☺️
Continue soon.
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Nice update
continue soon 😃
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Originally posted by: Nikki36

Nice update,

Oh god I can imagine ranvi screaming 'baaaldev'


oh yes its his patent style😃😃
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Originally posted by: cuteBiya

Nice and to much romantic update plz update final part soon

yes dear & hope you like it

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