My VeeBa Stories Gallery |Realizations Part 2, Page 52 [16/07]

Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Loved it 👏👏 plz pm me when you have updated

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Aaaw..its jus beautiful,so sweet of baldevaa...an another side of baldeva..which we virtually see in d show..through his antiques...

"Sachchi, wada kar, royega nahi kabhi, mere vaaste. Main hu na tere naal." she paused and heaved a sigh. "Unke vaaste khush reh jo tainu... pyaar karte hai."

Aaw dats so touchy..emotional line Yaar..n d last Lyn...ohoo sherni hint pe.. hint diye jaa rahihai ..aur sher hai ki samjhta hi nahi...well written..I felt d pain of baldev ...actually I wanna see d same in d show..Tfs...waitin 4 d nxt part...as u said I won't miss it ..

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Beautiful!!! It was like watching a scene,where I could only imagine VeeBa...Would love to watch a scene in the show too!!!

thanks a lot for the PM!!! Write more and more! 🤗

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

This story was simply beautiful..😃 even during the time of his own misery, Ballu was concerned about Veera's safety...
just loved the OS👏
you are an amazing writer...👍🏼
Thanks for PM😳 looking forward to the next part...😊

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malini

@malini96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

wowiiieee

looking forward to next update

plzzz pm me na

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Wow this was awesome bud. I hate to go to sleep before it was completed last night...(seriously I was so tired I thought someone deleted my post and it turned out I had posted somewhere else..LOL)

This was fantastic, and there'll be a part 2?! I cannot wait...looking forward to it like nobody's business:)

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Beautiful OS!! Aww!!

Please PM meh next time!!

Anyways continue soon!!

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Thanks a lot guys fr so much appreciations... Feels so nice! 🤗

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

u have turned a small idea to wonderful creation,'n belive me when i say this this is AWESOME...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏,do pm me the nxt part

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BeautyFooL

@BeautyFooL

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Hey Bidzie, beautiful OS..
I like the way u describe d scene.. You depict Baldev's emotional side beautifully..
I can really imagine it happening bfr my eyes..
You are a good writter.. Keep it up.. Thanks fr PM..

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