My VeeBa Stories Gallery |Realizations Part 2, Page 52 [16/07] - Page 5

Originally posted by: -...mohini...-

Awesome one Bidzie as usual... 👍🏼
Im dying to see an emotional Baldeva in the show...that too emotional coz of Veera...pata nahi kab milega 😭
Im such a sadist 😈
But honestly I do want to see a confession like this...intense, passionate & sweet all at the same time! 😳
And it wld be so awesome to see him struggling to say "I Love You" in his toota-phoota english to her...awww...🤗
Now wat next...shaadi ke baad wala OS ☺️

Originally posted by: -MohanKiMeera-

*hi5* 😆
I am a sadist as well, you know na how much I love painful scenes...Some male leads can cry so beautifully that my heart will start aching and Vishal is definitely one of them!
Thank you so much yaar! Glad you loved it! Waise were they in character in this OS? Especially Baldev's frustration was so him, right? Any other would just go and cry in front of his love :P
And yep next is perhaps SR OS :P

Originally posted by: ST0207

Bidzieee hayooo Rabba .. I was in VeeBa dreamland !! ☺️☺️ You write so well !! I am so impressed ! 👏
Thank you Smita 🤗

Emotional + Intense = Superhit OS !! Awww .. My Ballu ka emotional side dekhkar meko bada sad laga but I am happy usne apna pyaar aise hi nahi chhod diya ! He won her !! 👍🏼
Yep! Baldev Singh isn't like the other male leads who'd just cry and cry...He tried getting over her, but nahi hua so realized tht he loved her, and then gaya usko bolne

And Veera Ballu ko ignore maarne ki koshish ? Thats impossible .. Hehe .. Dekha pyaar ho hi gaya na ! Ballu hai hi itna cute and Hot !
Ignore toh karegi hi na cuz she wont be wanting to get into these stuff again and also to get Baldev move on from her...

Bidzie mast OS ! Me loves it ! Keep writing such awesome stuff !!!
Thank you dear 🤗

Originally posted by: -...mohini...-

they were perfectly in character Bidzie...jis din usko realise ho gaya that he loves her he will just go and vent out everything infront of her...he's not the one who'll hide his love...khullam khulla he'll declare it...I so want to see that!
And Vish will rock in such scenes 👍🏼
Mereko bhi rona aa jayega use dekhkar
Anyways eagerly bhaiting phor your SR wala OS ☺️

Originally posted by: princy48

"Ek mahine se koshish kar raha hu tainu apne dil aur dimaag se nikaalne ki par tu nikalti hi nahi hai. Ek mahine se Baldev Singh ek ladki de vaaste tadap raha hai. Woh Baldev Singh jo zindagi jeeta tha apni marzi aur khushi se, woh aaj tere bharose rehta hai. Yeh bharosa ki tere se mainu woh khushi milegi, woh khushi jo ek mahine se mainu mili hi nahi. Naa chahte huye bhi tainu pyaar kar baitha toh meri ki galti hai, Veera? Naa chahte huye bhi tainu apne zindagi vich nikaal nahi paa raha hu, kyun?

Aaawww...u killed it Yaar...I literally was visualizing it..wid xprsns n all...a gr8 depiction of feelings...

"Pyaar karti hai mainu?"...huff..my heart started racing...aur

"Saas rukwaane ke aur bhi bohot tarike hai waise
ohoo tho Ek do dikha bhi deti naaa(seriously I'm a besharam in case ballu n veeba)...anyways. jus luvd it dear..once again a sweet os..I jus can say
"le chal vaha(veeba land) mulk tera hai.
Jaahil zamaana dushman mera hai..."
Hahaha...in short ,waitin 4 more wrkz lyk this...Tfs
N one more thing...sunna(Mohan style)...verrry glad t know dat u r mohankimeera..I mean..kkk's fan...I'm also a Mohan bhatnagar fan dear...de talli...chal isi baat pe Ek baar haatth bajaa de(shake hands as per baldev's dictionary)...

Originally posted by: sunny303

Our Bidzie this was sooo freakin awesome!!!

Aww man I really loved this update...please keep writing I'm loving it. Also, please PM me when you update cuz I don't want to miss anything!

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Cute os...loving it.

Originally posted by: krock

Too gud 👍🏼