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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -...mohini...-
Baldev Veera's BF ☺️ ☺️
Mast tha yeh Bidzie...🤗
I dont know how they'll show this track in the show...but this one was so damn cute...😳
Aur likh...something more intense and passionate...☺️

I know Mohini tht we won't have such scene, but sochne mein tax thodi na lagta hai yaar 😳
Thanks btw 🤗 I am so eager to watch Baldev's love realization track And yep next time, an intense OS... super pakka 😛

@Everyone- Thanks a lot! Means so much to me :)

Edited by -MohanKiMeera- - 11 years ago

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

MKM...awesome update bud!!!

I really loved your take on this...so fun! I am looking forward to thee next intese update!

Awesome👏

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Very cute OS...VeeBa's concern for each other was so nice...
aww i wish for such scenes in the show too
are you gonna continue the story further?
Thank you for PM😳

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Thank you Sparkle, Sunny and IshqShava...Glad you loved it! :D

Edited by -MohanKiMeera- - 11 years ago

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Kehkelungi

@Poohjabear

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Bidzieee this is awesome !!! Actually I loved it even more than the first one 👏 The first scene where Ballu comes to know that Veera doesnot love him and he cries was heartbreaking man ! I dont want Ballu to cry ever !! God ! 😭 And then the next line was so Baldeva "Acha hua na ki woh mainu pyaar nahi karti, dil toh nahi tootega na uss bechari ka. Theek hi hua." Awww ! My poor Ballu !

Veera thinking about Ballu and going to meet him in the hospital .. Yay ! 😳 I wanted her to realize his feelings for him .. Hope show me bhi kuch aise hi ho ..❤️

And the next scene where VeeBa become 'DOST' .. Hayye .. Such a cute emotional scene !
Kaun inko bataye ye dost nahi usse zyada hai ek dusre ke liye ! ☺️

And the last line was just PERFECT - "Aye soch raha hu ki Baldev Singh sudhar kaise gaya..." 🤗

Bidzie I loved the OS and its super to see that you have understood the characters so well ! I could actually imagine their convos .. 👍🏼

Now, Looking forward to your next OS .. 😳 Keep writing !!

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

@Smita- Since Baldev cannot cry willingly, I tried making him cry without him realizing it :P Thanks btw...Glad you loved it much more than the 1st one... Will try to come up with more :)

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Ahaaan..pehle toh mere taraf se Ek zorrr ki jhappi lele meri jaan...haaye pata hai..my heart was craving 4 a scene lyk dis...n u made it true...thanks a ton dear..4 gvng us such a cute n sweet os...

"Mainu ki paagalpan ka keedha lag gaya hai? Acha hua na ki woh mainu pyaar nahi karti, dil toh nahi tootega na uss bechari ka. Theek hi hua."

Aaww..how cute... luvd d way u made it a point dat baldev in his worst condition also is thinking of her heart break..

"Baldeva..." her voice was shaken and eyes glittered with tear.

Felt a tug at my heart at d moment I read it..ur writing..ur explanation made me feel this..the unknown pain of their hearts wen they r away 4m each odr was very well written..

"Tu bas aise hi khush reh...aur kuch nahi chahie mainu..."
It reminded me of
"paagal mein khud nu banaanda rava
Tu hasdee rave ...main hasaanda rava"

Cute n sweet friendship...n beautiful os..
Tfs dear waitin 4 more wrkz lyk dis 4m u

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Thanks Tasrin. So guys, thanks all for your appreciations. Means a lot! And I guess I am all set for another OS, perhaps an intense one. Yep I am definitely on a roll - thanks to VeeBa!

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Ishq Bulaava, Jaane Kab Aave...

Lying on the front of the jeep, Baldev numbly stared at the sky and deeply sighed. He felt his heart heavy and an urge to cry his heart out. It had been a month since Veera did not talk to him. She was ignoring him the moment she realized that he had feelings for her.

"Baldeva, tujhse mainu koi shikaayat nahi hai. Mainu pata hai ki tu dikhaaye ya naa dikhaaye, dil ka acha banda hai. Par mere zindagi vich yeh pyaar-vyaar ki koi jagaah nahi hai yaar. Mainu sirf krishi vidyalaya pe dhyaan dena hai abhi. Iss vaaste behetar yehi hoga ki hum dono ab ek dusre se gal naa kare. Mainu nahi acha lagega agar mere vaaste tainu koi pareshaani ho, koi taqleef ho kyunki tu isse kuch behetar deserve karta hai. Main woh nahi hu, Baldeva."

As Baldev remembered her words, he had a lone tear rolling down from the corner of his eyes. "Tu gal nahi karti toh jyada taqleef hoti hai mainu. Tere bina mann nahi lagta kabootari." his voice was cranky and weak. For the first time ever, Baldev Singh was hating his existence. He felt broken and shattered.

"Ek mahine se aise hi jee raha hu. Ki hoya aisa ki mainu kuch achcha nahi lagta, koi khushi nahi hondi... Kis vaaste ro raha hu? Baldev Singh ro raha hai?" he asked himself, dumbstruck at his own vulnerable side. Closing his fist in frustration, he punched it on the jeep. "Ki ho raha hai mainu? Usko nikaal kyun nahi paata apne dil vich." he wondered. His voice was low and quite all the while.

He closed his eyes and instantly his memories with Veera flashed in his mind. An unconscious smile played on his face. Suddenly the restlessness in his heart came to a halt. His mind calmed as it was soothed by the golden memories of the days he had spend with her.

Opening his eyes in a jerk, he looked more annoyed at himself. "Jitna koshish kar rha hu uss kabootari ko dimaag se nikaalne ki, utna hi dimaag mein bas ghusti jaa rahi hai, ghusti jaa rahi hai. Bahar jaa na sherni, paas naa hote huye bhi mainu itni taqleef de rahi hai tu."

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Lost in thoughts, Veera was folding her clothes. "Ek mahina guzar gaya. Krishi vidhyalaya ka kaam ache se chal raha hai. Sab khush hai. Veerji bhi Gunjan didi ne naal khush hai. Par phir bhi kuch khaali sa lag raha hai." she sighed sadly and suddenly went down the memory lane and thought of her fights with Baldev, their first hug, his first gift and the way he was always there for her. She could not help but smile at his cuteness. The next moment, she was shocked when someone grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards himself harshly.

"Kaun---" Her question was interrupted by a sudden act of the man in front of her. He covered her mouth with his palm.

"Chup kar ekdum!" Baldev said to her in an authoritative voice. "Chal mere naal!" he dragged her outside the house.

"Baldev, chadh mainu. Kidhar leke jaa raha hai? Chadh!" Veera protested and struggled to get her hand free. But Baldev was not letting her go. He brought her in a cottage and left her hand in a jerk that caused her to lose her balance yet she managed to stand.

"Tu paagal toh nahi ho gaya? Dimaag kharab ho gaya tera. Kaha le aaya mainu itni raat ko? Bachpana kis vaaste kar raha hai?" Veera blasted at him for being so childish.

"Chup!" Baldev stepped closer to her and looked at her with teary eyes. His facial expression portrayed frustration and pain - a mixture of feeling that he had been carrying his heart for a damn month.

For the first time, Veera was scared of him. She was nervous. As she stepped back, Baldev stepped nearer and eventually pinned her against the wall. "Ek mahine se koshish kar raha hu tainu apne dil aur dimaag se nikaalne ki par tu nikalti hi nahi hai. Ek mahine se Baldev Singh ek ladki de vaaste tadap raha hai. Woh Baldev Singh jo zindagi jeeta tha apni marzi aur khushi se, woh aaj tere bharose rehta hai. Yeh bharosa ki tere se mainu woh khushi milegi, woh khushi jo ek mahine se mainu mili hi nahi. Naa chahte huye bhi tainu pyaar kar baitha toh meri ki galti hai, Veera? Naa chahte huye bhi tainu apne zindagi vich nikaal nahi paa raha hu, kyun? Bataa! Bataa mainu abhi!" Baldev vented all his anger and frustrated in a breath, leaving a speechless Veera.

She was at a loss of words since she had never seen him in such state. Her heart ached to see him like that. She felt as if something died inside herself as she was meeting a vulnerable side of Baldev which she never wanted. She simply wished and hoped for him to be happy and move on in life as she couldn't give him the happiness that he deserved. She had various other responsibilities on her shoulders - the responsibility of making her family happy. She could not distract herself from her goal of fulfilling her father's dream. She had absolutely no time for loving anyone and living life with him at the moment.

"Baldeva!tu--" Veera left her sentence in the middle since she did not know how to make him feel better. Instead she placed her hand on his shoulder as a gesture to console him. "Aise apni zindagi aise satyanash naa kario.. Khush reh aur mazaa le zindagi ki jaise pehele leta tha..." she was concerned for him.

"Kyun? Tainu kis vaaste farq padh raha hai? Main jaise bhi rahu, tainu ki?" Baldev approached closer and looked in her eyes. His voice softened and his expression turned passionate and loving.

"Mainu koi farq nahi padhta." Veera stared in other direction in nervousness. Her heart started beating faster. She had goosebumps all over her skin and a chill ran down her spine as she could feel Baldev's breath on her face.

"Toh mere paas aane se tainu itni bechaini kyun ho rahi hai?" Baldev questioned her in a demanding manner yet so gentle.

"Baldev, ghar jaana hai mainu." Veera pushed him away and was about to leave when Baldev held her wrist. "Pyaar karti hai mainu?" he asked hopefully and innocently.

"Nahi!" Veera plainly answered in a shaky voice.

"Meri taraf dekhke bol, Veera." Baldev sternly ordered her.

"Jaane de mainu, Baldeva!" Veera requested while sobbing which did not go unnoticed by him. He gently brought her closer, so close that there was an inch distance between their faces, while Veera had her eyes shut off. Affectionately and caringly, he wiped off her tears with his fingers. Slowly he caressed her cheek. "Mar jaunga tere bina! Yeh pind da sher apni sherni ke bina adhura hai!"

Veera opened her eyes that depicted pure love for him. Unable to hold herself back anymore, she started crying her heart out. Baldev knew that all she wanted was his love at the moment. He cupped her face and kissed her forehead slowly and lovingly. Looking in her eyes, he smiled wide with teary eyes and instantly pulled her in a hug. Veera hugged him back, tight and squishy. "Iss ek mahine vich mainu samajh aaya ki tere bina toh meri koi zindagi hi nahi hai. Tere naal jhagda karte karte, dosti nibhaate nibhaate kab tainu apna dil de baithi pata hi nahi chala. Tere naal yeh duri banaake mainu pata chala ki tu meri zindagi vich vadda khaas jagaah rakhta hai. Veerji aur Beeji ke baad agar kisi pe bharosa kar paai hu main toh woh tu hai Baldeva!" she poured her heart out emotionally.

Baldev was overjoyed to know that she had so much love and faith for him. He was at a loss of words due to extreme happiness. All he could do was tightening his hug around her and grin broadly. Veera clutched his leather jacket and closed her eyes to feel this moment of a lifetime.

After quite a while, they broke their hug and immediately Veera exclaimed with a heavy sigh and a teasing expression, "Kitne zor se pakdega... Saas rok ditta meri, hayo rabba!"

Baldev smirked and twisting her right arm on her back, he pulled her near. Their eyes locked and created a firing environment. "Saas rukwaane ke aur bhi bohot tarike hai waise." he naughtily said.

"Besharam!" Veera exclaimed with wide eyes and moved away.

"Waise ek gal dasoon?" Baldev adorably asked.

"Ki?" Veera asked smilingly.

Baldev, with a loving smile and eyes full of affection and tenderness, said while struggling, "I... love... you..."

Veera flashed a happy, delightful smile. "I love you too, Baldeva!" she pulled his cheeks. "Sach mein bada cute hai tu!"

Baldev said with an adorable pride, "Pata hai mainu!" and the next moment, burst into laughter.

Veera laughed at his adorableness. Just a while later, she worriedly said, "Haye rabba! Thodi der mein subha ho jaaegi yaar, ghar pohochna hai usse pehele. Chal jaldi!" she was about to walk away when Baldev grabbed her wrist, bended it on her back again and pulled her towards himself that made her collide with his chest.

"Kab milegi?" he asked her softly.

"Shaam ko!" she replied shyly and closed her eyes during the moment she shared an intimacy with him. It was a completely new feeling for her that she enjoyed so much - a feeling that was nothing but heavenly and pure. Her heartbeats were rising rapidly. "Jaane de naa!" she pleaded helplessly, unable to control herself.

Baldev smiled slightly and freed her. "Aaja!" he led her outside of the cottage like a gentleman. Impressed, Veera walked beside him and holding his hand, she entwined their fingers. Baldev gazed at her and calmly and contently smiled.

Edited by -MohanKiMeera- - 11 years ago

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deepika padukone

@filtered_chaos

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Awesome one Bidzie as usual... 👍🏼
Im dying to see an emotional Baldeva in the show...that too emotional coz of Veera...pata nahi kab milega 😭
Im such a sadist 😈
But honestly I do want to see a confession like this...intense, passionate & sweet all at the same time! 😳
And it wld be so awesome to see him struggling to say "I Love You" in his toota-phoota english to her...awww...🤗
Now wat next...shaadi ke baad wala OS ☺️

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