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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Great os, ca n actually see this happeni g, very much like their characters

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesum dear..its simple,sweet ,cute, aur u brought some sher-sherni moments...n ur writing showed their love in their gaaliyan also...lovd ur writing..xpcting more lyk this 4m u..Tfs..

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awww...damn cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

It's sooo VeeBa-ish!!!!!!! 😃😆

Plz Plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

very nice os veeba r like that only and want to c like this moments in show also

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deepika padukone

@filtered_chaos

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Oyye hoyye so finally you wrote an OS Bidzie...😳
Love you for such a cute and VeeBalicious piece of writing...🤗
Exactly...this is exactly how I want them to be after they both fall for each other...just the way they are...no change at all...banterings and fightings like these between them shld always continue afterall they cant live without their usual nok-jhok...
Aisa nahi ki pyaar ho gaya toh kuch jyada hi soft ban jaye...this is perfect!
Aur likh na...okk...😉

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Divya

@Fr0zen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awesome post yaar...😃 😃 👏 👏

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -...mohini...-
Oyye hoyye so finally you wrote an OS Bidzie...😳
Love you for such a cute and VeeBalicious piece of writing...🤗
Exactly...this is exactly how I want them to be after they both fall for each other...just the way they are...no change at all...banterings and fightings like these between them shld always continue afterall they cant live without their usual nok-jhok...
Aisa nahi ki pyaar ho gaya toh kuch jyada hi soft ban jaye...this is perfect!
Aur likh na...okk...😉

I ws nervous bt chal achi lagi tujhe ... thank you 🤗

@Divya: Thanks a ton!

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@sonu-monu

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hello dear <3!!
after such long time i see your work ...!!

beautifully written.. this is what i want to see in serial nw
hayee Am enjoying reading this OS ..,amazing dialogue gives life to your OS !!!

Very well written !!!
Keep it up !!

i know you are very great writer ..nw i hope see soon ur an other talent too .. Vm's :D

want veeba vm !!!

PS : i still have ur M/M Tera hi bas hona chaahoon vm in my cell "D !!

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BeautyFooL

@BeautyFooL

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hi.. Its really lovely OS.. Really enjoyed the way you have woven Baldev into confession.. I really wish to see something just like this in the coming track of VeeBa.. *Finger crossed*..

I m fond of 'Frenemies turned lover' stories & characters.. That's the reason why I got attracted to ths couple in notime.. Such character's hatred turned into curiosity & confusion..which later turns into fondness ... eventually leads to attraction and than to liking.. which finally results in love and passion.. A perfect jorney..

Absolutely loved the way u depicted confession part in a bit 'Hat kay' style.. It has love+romance+spice+Baldev's signature attitude.. Which made it a beautiful read.. And dialogues are just perfect..

Thanks for sharing it..Indeed a nice piece if writting..

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